MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 prt
hope sayank have good powers
update next prt sooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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part 4

Next day..subah subah nupur k ghar phone bajta hai....nupur phone pick karti hai)
N : hello..
C : gud morning nupur mayank bol rha hu
N : Gud morning..tumne subah subah gud morning kehne k liye call kiya hai kya 😡😡
M : sabko apne jaisa samjha hai kya.....😡 😡
N : to fir kis khushi me phone kiya hai
M : Haan wo aaj college me traditional day hai.. to tum log traditional dress me aana...wo kal shukla sir ne tumhare class se jane k baad bataya tha...aur mujhe pta hai k tum logo ne notice board to dekhne ki zarurat samjhi nhi hogi
N : by god mayank.....yeh baat tum mujhe kal nhi bta sakte the.... ab kya hoga
M : hona kya hai..aaj traditional day hai aur tum logo ko notice board chk karna chahiye tha naa.. ek to tumhe time se bta dia
N : mayank isse tum time se batana keh rhe ho...iss se achcha hota agar tum college me batate....
M : ok fine... thik hai.. soch lo tumhe mera call nhi aaya jab tum log college pahuchoge tab bta dunga.. thanx kehna to dur......yahaan tum mujhe baate suna rhi ho.... Bye college me milte hai..... agar tumhari marzi ho to
(aur mayank phone cut kar deta hai)
N to herself : ajeeb ladka hai bina baat sune hi phone rakh dia.. Oh no..gunjan ko batana padega..... warna gaye kaam se.......

For traditional day mayank wears blue sherwani with white embroidery & samrat wears golden sherwani with pink emboridery
college me mayank aur samrat
M : aaj to sach me din hi bura hai, pehle nupur ko call karke btaya k aaj traditional day hai college me... usne thanx to kaha nhi aur upper se 4 baatein suna di.. yeh bhi nhi pucha k number kaha se mila.. aur ab ye girls har ek second me koi na koi ladki aati aur puchti hai main kaisi lag rhi hu 😡 😡.. Jaise khud k bare me kuch pta hi nhi hai inn logo ko
S : cool down dude... waise sath me girls hum logo ko compliments bhi de ke jaa rhi hai k hum bahut achche lag rhe hai...
M :😡 😡 compliment??? wo mujhe comments ki trah lag rhe hai... Main jaa rha hu....
S : kahaan??????? aur kyun
M : music room me.... aaj traditional day hai to girls make up karne me busy hai to music room me koi nhi hoga..aur mujhe kisi ko ye nhi kehna hoga k tum bahut achchi lag rhi ho...😡 😡.. main jaa rha hu
(manyank music room me chala jaata hai.. aur samrat wahi girls k sath corridor me time spend kar rha hota hai..tabhi nupur aur gunjan aate hai)
Traditional day k liye nupur ne white saree pehni hai jisme blue colour ka work ho rkha hai, aur gunjan ne pink saree jisme golden work hua hai)
N to G : tujhe yaad hai naa..tujhe samrat k sath reh kar dekhna hai k uske pass ye powers aayi kahaan se
G : haan... aur tumhe bhi to mayank ko dekhna hai.. Mujhe to samrat nazar aa gya pr mayank kahaan hai...........
N : samrat se hi puchte hai chal.......
(dono samrat k pass pahuch jate hai)
S : Hi girls... Kaisi ho tum log
N : Hi samrat.. Hume kya hona hai, hum to bilkul thik hai.. pr tum kuch zyada thik ho ladkiyo k sath
S : haan wo to hai.. pr mujhe lga tumhari mayank se subah baat huyi thi to puch lu tumhara haal kaisa hai.. gussa utra ya nhi
N : by god.. Yeh mayank kahaan hai.. kam se usse sorry to bol du... bekar me hi uss pr gussa kar dia.. pta nhi bechare ne kahaan se number lekar call kiya hoga...
S : hmm wo music room me hai... jao
(nupur jaane lagti hai pr samrat usse piche se awaz lagta hai)
S : hey nupur........
N : kya hua samrat
S : kuch aur nhi puchna kya???????
N : kya????
S : kuch nhi tum jao.......
(nupur wahaan se jaane lagti hai..aur sath me gunjan bhi.. to samrat gunjan ko rok leta hai)
S : Gunjan tum to puch lo...
G : kya??? puchna hai
S : ye bhi main batau kya?????
G : jab tak tum btaoge nhi to kaise pta chalega
S : ok fine.. yahi puch lo k main kaisi lag rhi hu??? subah se itni sari ladkiyo ko bta chuka hu
G : Kya??????
S : achcha thik hai to yahi bta do main kaisa lag rha hu......
G : Tum hamesha hi achche lagte ho.. aaj bas traditional dress me ho to zyada achche lag rhe ho
S : to ab main batau... tum hamesha ki tarah lag rhi hu.......
G : matlab ???? Main achchi nhi lag rhi hu
S : ye kisne kaha k tum achchi nhi lag rhi ho..tum hamesha hi itni achchi lagti ho k ye kehna muskil hai k kab zyada achchi lagti ho....

On the other hand..
(music room me mayank piano bajane ki practice kar rha hai,, pr har baar wo bich me hi ruk jaata hai, usse lag rha hai k kahi kuch missing hai, uss se proper sur nhi lag rhe hai.. suddenly wo nupur k bare me sochne lagta hai aur wo piano play karne k sath gaane bhi lagta hai

Tu hawa hai, fiza hai, zameen ki nahin
Tu ghata hai to phir kyoon barasti nahin
Udti rehti hai tu panchhiyon ki tarah
Aa mere aashiyaane mein aa - 2
Fiza, Fiza, Fiza, hey Fiza


(mayank piano play kar rha hai, aur gaana bhi gaa rha aur sath me nupur k bare me soch bhi rha hai k nupur kaisi ladki hai jisme ragging me I love u bolne ki jagah hath kat lia.. aur wo kuch alag hai..tabhi to usse basket ball khelta dekh princi k mann me girls team ka khayal aaya..suddenly mayank realise k abhi bhi piano ko bajate whqt sur thik nhi lag rhe hai..wo 2- 3 baar try karta hai..pr sur sahi nhi lagte.. tabhi nupur enter karti hai.. wo mayank k bigade huye piano k sur ko sahi se baja kar batati hai.. mayank nupur ko piano seat de deta hai aur ishare se usse gaane k liye kehta hai.. )

Main hawa hoon, kahin bhi theherti nahin
Ruk bhi jaaoon kahin par to rehti nahin
Maine tinke uthaaye hue hain paron par
Aashiyaana nahin hai mera

(nupur apne bare me soch rhi hai k usse kisi bhi tarah se wo 5 powers ek sath karni hai, aur ye kitna zaruri hai.. nupur yeh bhi soch rhi hai agar samrat aur mayank un powers ka hissa hai to bhi ek power dhudni hai..dusri taraf mayank nupur ko iss tarah piano bajate dekh hairaan hai, aur nupur ko saree me dekh kar to usse lag rha hai k nupur sach me kafi sunder hai..)

Ghane ek ped se mujhe
Jhoka koi leke aaya hai
Sukhe ek patte ki tarah
Hawa ne har taraf udaaya hai

(nupur yahi soch rhi hai k uska aam logo k bich me rehne ka maksad kya hai.. aur agar wo un 5 powers ko nhi dhud payi to kya hoga.. usse kisi bhi haal me un 5 powers ko ek sath karna hi hoga..yahi sochte sochte achanak nupur piano play karna band kar deti hai..mayank surprised ho jata hai wo nupur k hath piano pr fir se play karne k liye rakhta hai aur piano ki kuch keys ko wo khud play karta hai aur song ko khud continue karta hai)

Aa na aa
Hey, aa na aa ek dafa is zameen se uthe
Paaon rakhe hawa par zara sa ude
(mayank k expression hai nupur k liye k agar kahi wo kuch bhi glat karti hai.. to mayank uss glat ko sahi karne me help karega..aur nupur dobra se piano play karne lgti hai)

Chal chale hum jahan koi rasta na ho
(nupur mayank ko dekh kar smile karti hai aur usse ishare se thanx bhi kehti hai aur yeh bhi puchti hai k ab wo piano sahi play kar rhi hai ya nhi.)

Koi rehta na ho, koi basta na ho
(mayank nupur ko ishare se batata hai k wo kafi achcha play kar rhi hai.. aur mayank 😉 also..)

Kehte hai aankhon mein milti hai aisi jaga
(jise dekh kar nupur surprise ho jati hai pr baad me smile pass karti hai)


Fiza, Fiza
(mayank bhi nupur ko dekh kar smile karta hai )

Main hawa hoon, kahin bhi theherti nahin
Ruk bhi jaaoon kahin par to rehti nahin
Maine tinke uthaaye hue hain paron par
Aashiyaana nahin hai mera

(iss baar nupur bina kisi galti k piano play karti hai... aur ishare me mayank se mayank se puchti hai kaisa lga.. mayank usse ishare se excellent kehta hai)

Tum mile to kyoon laga mujhe
Khud se mulaaqaat ho gayi
Kuch bhi to kaha nahin magar
Zindagi se baat ho gayi
(nupur mayank k bare me sochne lgti hai k kyun mayank se pichle din bina kuch jane bhi kali shaktiyo se unhe bachane ki koshish ki.. aur subah bhi pta nhi kahaan se mayank ne number lekar usse call kiya tha k aaj traditional day hai.. wo aisa kyun hai.. nupur yahi soch rhi hoti hai aur mayank ko dekh rhi hoti hai k mayank nupur se ishare me puchta hai kya hua.. to nupur sir hila kar mana kar deti hai kuch nhi..aur piano play karti hai...)

Aa na aa
Hey, aa na aa saat baithe zara der to
Haath thaame rahe aur kuch na kahe

(mayank jo nupur se kafi dur khada tha.. wo nupur ko aise pareshan dekh kar uske ekdum pass pahuch jata hai.. aur usse piano play karne se rokta hai aur sath wali chair pr baith jaata hai, apne dono hatho se uska ek hath pakad leta hai..aur aakhon se swal karta hai k sab thik to hai naa..)

Chhooke dekhe to aankhon ki khaamoshiyaan
(nupur apna hath chuda kar wahaan se khadi ho jati hai aur kuch kadam chalti hai aur ye line gati hai)

Kitni chup chaap hoti hai sargoshiyaan
(mayank thoda sa hairaan hai aur pareshan bhi k kahi usne kuch galat to nhi kiya.. pr wo song pura finish karna chahta hai isliye wo yeh lines gaata hai.. aur wo ye bhi dekhna chahta hai k nupur aage song complete karegi bhi yaa nhi)

Sunte hai aankhon mein hoti hai aisi sada
(Nupur ko lagta hai k syad usne sahi react nhi kiya isliye wo palat kar dekhti hai to mayank wahi chair pr baitha sir jhukaye. To nupur mayank k pass wali chair pr baith kar piano play karne lagti hai aur mayank song ko aage complete karne lagta hai..)

Fiza, Fiza
Tu hawa hai, fiza hai, zameen ki nahin
Tu ghata hai to phir kyoon barasti nahin
Udti rehti hai tu panchhiyon ki tarah
Aa mere aashiyaane mein aa

(nupur piano play kar rhi hai, aur mayank gaa rha hai.. mayank ko lagta hai k syad sach me usne aisa kuch nhi kiya jis se nupur ko kuch bura lge.. aur agar aisa kiya bhi hai to nupur ne uski baat ka bura nhi mana hai... tab mayank nupur se ishare me piano ko khud bajane k liye kehta hai to nupur wahaan se uth jaati hai)

Main hawa hoon, kahin bhi theherti nahin
Ruk bhi jaaoon kahin par to rehti nahin
Maine tinke uthaaye hue hain paron par
Aashiyaana nahin hai mera

(mayank piano play kar rha hai..nupur wahaan se uth kar mayank k samne aur pinao k piche jaa kar khadi hai.. wo piano ki wood pr apni fingers chalati hai.. aur nupur ko aisa karte dekh mayank ko bada achcha lagta hai.. mayank ko aisa lagta hai k jaise nupur kafi khus hoti hai piano baja kar.........)

to be cont......................



hey requested to u all pls do comment.........

PART 5 PG-9

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
Great update.................loved the first part..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Hi Annu,
very very good update.
loved it.
keep it up.
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
hey Anu di!!
awesum upd8 yaar...
i luvd it!
pls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. =)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
heyyy annu
awsome awsome update
just loved the piono portion too much
n the song was also good
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
lovely updare dear.I loved it.U wrote very well dear.continue soon dear and thanks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
gr8 prt
update next prt soooooooooon plezz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
a very well written part
loved it
thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was fantastic
and thanx for pm

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