MAYUR FF - Five - THE POWER PT 16UPDATED PG NO. 28

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

PART 1-

AWESOME CONCEPT....... loved the gunur and sayank bonding........

nupur is very brave....... that was the best part........
samrat is flirty as usual.......
mayank and dream girl intersting.......
gunjan is so sweet........

add me to your pm list........

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#72

part 2-

love your update......
feel in love with it........
awesome yaar.......
mayur playing basketball was awesome........

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

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part 3-

your ff took a fantastic turn......... awesome yaar.......
totally different....... love thier powers

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

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part 4-

awesome song........
four powers are with mayank, nupur, samrat and gunjan.......
wonder who has the fifth power...........

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#75

part 5-

i am getting goosebumbs.......
awesome yaar........

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#76

part 6-

nupur's powers- future seeing (wow)
gunjan's powers- mind reading (intersting)
samrat's powers- understanding animals and birds (cool)
mayank's powers- ???? (want to know)
5 th person- wondering who it is.......

love the suspense in your ff.........
plzz pm me when you update

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shafia Akhtar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#77

wowow i really love 5and 6 part plzz contuied soon

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#78

Heyyyy anu
Really an amazing update
So nupur can see future
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for the pm

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Annu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#79

PART 7

(Mayank aur nupur kuch hi pal me wahaan pahuch jate hai jahaan gunjan aur samrat hai... wahaan gunjan undono ko dekh kar kuch kam surprised hoti hai pr samrat bahut zyada surprised hota hai aur mayank bhi k wo itni jaldi wahaan kaise pahuch gaya)

G to N : tum log yahaan kaise???? mera matlab hai kyun
N : wo baad me batayenge.. abhi hume logo ko bachana hoga....aur khud ko bhi...
G : kyun kya hua.. tumne fir se kuch dekha kya.. aur mayank tumhare sath?????????
N : haan.. maine dekha.. yahaan aas pass hi kahi bomb blasting ki planning ki gyi hai.. wo bomb aas pass hi honge.. hume kuch to karna padega
S to N : ye tum kya keh rhi ho aur tumhe kaise pta.....
M : haan nupur mujhe bhi kuch samjh nhi aa rha hai
G : tum log baad me samjhna... abhi hume wo bomb destroy karne honge aur uske sath bhi hume yahaan se nikalna hoga.
N : haan samrat bahut se logo ki jaan khatre me hai
S : pr hum kya kar skte hai
N : bas apne upper vishwas rakho aur hum pr bhi.. bas itna socho k agar tumhe kisi ki jaan bachane k liye kuch karna ho to kya kar skte ho..
M to S : samrat yeh sab hum baad me samjhenge... kyunki yahaan tak mera aana bhi bada ajeeb hai.. pehle jo nupur keh rhi hai wo dekhte hai...
(charo mil kar apni power use karne ki koshish karte hai..nupur aur gunjan ko apni powers pr full confidance hai to woh bombs ki location dekh pate hai... bombs ki location pta chalne k baad )

N : bombs to mil gye.. ab isse samunder ki gehrai me dalna hoga taki aam logo ko kabhi ye naa pta chale k yahaan kabhi bomb bhi tha
M : haan magar kaise??????
N : tum isse chod do.. main aur gunjan yeh kaam kar lenge.. abhi tum logo apni powers pr confidance nhi hai ...
M : pr hume tum pr confidance hai..isliye yeh kaam hum karenge
S : yes nupur... tum pr aur gunjan pr pura believe hai hume aur baki swal baad me
G : pr yeh kaam karte hi tum dono sidha ghar k bare me sochna to tum ghar k ander honge...
S : agar hum iss whqt pura dhyan laga kar samundar ki gehrai k bare me sochnege to kya hum wahaan honge
N : haan.. agar tumhe yeh kaam karna hai to aise hi karna hoga...pr uske turant baad ghar k bare me sochna aur wo bhi hamare naa ki apne
S : jo hukum
(gunjan aur nupur apni powers use karke ghar pahuch jati hai.. mayank aur samrat apni powers pr to nhi pr nupur aur gunjan ki powers pr full trust karke jaise hi wo samundar k bare me sochte hai to khud ko pani k ander mehsus karte hai..wo dono un bombs ko wahi chod dete hai aur ghar k bare me soch kar nupur k ghar pahuch jate hai)

Nupur k Ghar Per

S : Nupur pls ab hume bataogi woh sab kya tha iss baar yeh spna nhi tha
G : samrat wo kabhi sapna tha hi nhi.. tumhe jo lagta tha k yeh sapna hai wo itni speed me hota tha k tumhe lagta tha k wo spna hai.. pr aisa kuch nhi tha
N : haan aur hamesha wo ajeeb se log un incidents k baad tumhe nazar aate the.. wo bhi sach hai
M : matlab???
N : himalaya k gufao me ek aashram hua karta tha.. jahaan kali shaktiya ander aa bhi nhi skti thi.. pr wahi k ek shishey ne aashram k guru k sath dokha kiya aur uss shishey ko aashram ki suraksha sopi gyi thi.. wo kali saktiyo k sath mil gya aur usne aashram ki suraksha rekha kamjor kar di jis se kali shaktiyo aashram me aa sake.. pr whqt rehte huye aashram k guru ji ko yeh baat pta chal gyi guru k pass itna whqt nhi tha k wo aashram ki surksha rekha majbut kar ske pr unke pass bahut si powers thi to unhone apni sari powers ko panch hisso me devide karke ek hissa apne pass rakha... baki k char hisso ko unhone apni saktiyo se alag alag dishao me bhej dia.. uske baad guruji apni skatiyo k bina itne kamjor ho gye k aashram ki suraksha nhi kar paye...

M : pr tum yeh sab kaise janti ho
G : kyunki jo power aashram me reh gyi thi wo nupur hai.. mujhe bhi tumhari tarah hairani huyi thi yeh sab jaan ke. Pr mujhe ab pura yakeen hai.. aur mujhe pta hai k baki ki 4 powers me se main ek hu
S : tum kehna chahti ho..k ek power nupur huyi, ek tum aur baki ki 3 powers me se mayank aur main baki ki 2 powers hai
N : haan.. aur yahi sach hai warna tum iss ghar k ander kabhi nhi hote
S : kyun??? tumhare ghar me aane k paise lagte hai kya
G : Nhi... yeh aashram k ab jo guru ji hai unka suraksha kavach hai yahaan.. koi bhi kali shakti isse nhi bhed skti...
M : isliye tum log kisi ko bhi ghar nhi bulati...
N : haan yahi wajah hai....
S : pr hum sab ye baatein kaise maan le
G : samrat tumhe aaj nhi to kal yeh sari baatein man ni padengi
M : pr kyun trust kare hum log tum dono pr.. kali sakti?? guru ji.. aashram?????? sab bada ajeeb hai

(tabhi wahaan achanak se aashram k guruji aa jate hai, jinhe dekh kar nupur aur gunjan unhe pranam karte hai)
GG: baki k jawab tum dono mujh se lo
M : ab aap kaun hai......

TO BE CONT....

PART 8 PG 14

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 15 years ago

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#80

awesome update.........

glad you finally updated........

the four powers are clear...........

wonder wat's the fifth power........ i mean who.......

also plzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon

Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago

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