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Alia Bakhi

@Calvin-N-Hobbes

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#281

hiiee.. cudd u plzz takee out sum tymm ndd readd my ff..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1313035/when-shakespear-fell-in-love-sajan-ff-part-1-pg-3

love

alia <3

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#282

Originally posted by Divya_kaldivya

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Mahak meri jaan... tujhe sharmane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... aur waise bhi tune itne achche tarike se likha hai.. iss sachayi ko itne khoobsurati se likha hai..... I am really proud of you...and believe me... I understand this totally and can fully sense it.... and where there is love, lust cannot exist..... Mayank was under the influence of alcohol... i don't think it was lust.... He loved her truly and he was so mesmerized by her beauty that he was not in a state to control himself... I will not call this act as Lust... it was just that he wanted to show his passion to his Lady Love.. tht does not mean that I agree for such acts before marriage... I am totally against them.... But then he did realize his mistake... </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Anyway, Awesome OS Mahak.. kitni taarif karoon yaar teri...👏</FONT>

aapne bahut achi baat kahi hai......

thanks......

mayank alcohol ke nashe mein tha......i agree.......

but what if he does the same thing with some other girl??????

he shouldn't have crossed his limits when nupur was not ready to do so.......

i hate these acts before marriage.....

he realised his mistake,.,.......i agree.......

but what if he had done that mistake with some other girl?

what would nupur do then?????

but thanks.......

thanks for loving my os........

thank u.........

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Aisha

@theaisha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#283

OMG! Loved everything!!

Mahak u rock !!

Love n lust!! Great idea!!

Loved Mayurr romance!!

Mayu was drunk!! He didn't feel that he hurt Nup!!

I'll loved ur idea!!

Keep rocks!!

Aisho .

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Rabi

@rose.mn

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#284

Hey mahak very well written dear
wat nupur did was absloutely right.........
n wat mayank did was wrong totallt wrong........wat if he was drunk....

well i actually dont believe in love............i mean i dont know wat love is actually.....
but this physical relation is wrong before marriage
i m absloutely agree with you.......
wat u have done in this os was right
though i dont believe in love bt still i know that there is difference btwn love n lust............
i mean if anyone loves someone then he should respect one's feelings......n being physical like this is wrong.........
well i don't know wat else to say..........i will say just that i m 100% agree with you.......

actually Mahak i dont know why but i by reading ur different os.......n wat i think abt you......i feel that u r like me
i also think abt the things as you do..........
actually you don't know abt me...........even i dont know abt you personally.......bt still i feel like this.......

anyways this os was awesum........you have written it very well
do cont soon with ur other os also
love you
Rabi

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#285

Hey I had no idea it is aditi's birthday, i guess i am late oopsie, belatd happy birthday aditi.

Mahak, well it was a blushing part indeed hehe; but it very well portrayed and written. This is a very sensitive topic and a lot of people bound by their traditional values don't believe in a physical relationship before marriage and I certainly respect both point of views. I am so sure Mayank would have too only if he wasn't drunk.

But Mayank loves her so much and this was just a way of expressing it to her for him. I hope Mayank is able to clarify and they both get married soon, very very well written Mahak.

Keep it up!

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-Aicha-

@-Aicha-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#286

Hey Mehak! :D You ALWAYS have amazing One shots..and here goes another one! It's a very critical topic, cuz everyone has their own views, but I'm on this with Nupur..The best dialouge has to be this one:

Nupur- mayank aur log kya karte hain isse mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai...par main yeh sab nahi karoongi.....and that's final...i too love u....par yeh love nahi lust hai.....tum mujhe paana chahte ho......yeh koi bhi pyaar dikhaane ka tareeka nahi hai....its mere lust....done for pleasure....please mayank...main yeh sab nahi karna chahti hoon....please try to understand....

I completely agree with you! Seriously..even tho i'm 15..I know ppl who have had "that" IN MY AGE and im like..wow guys, are you planning to ruin your life already?! Seriously..I mean, i dont get it..Life risking..ugggggh. I feel DISGUSTED sometimes, cuz i mean, at a young age, uggh.
But yeah, I agree with you! :D

Great One-shot! :D Well done!

Sneha!

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Ally

@.PINK.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#287

OMG Mahi

sach mein I love this OS sooooooooooooooo much

I don't even have wordzzzz to describe

sach mein

yeh itna achi tarah se writeen hua hai

that i am totally speechless!

Wow Mayur engaged?

and then

Mayank drunk and then all that scene....

superb!

and at the end where she hangs up the phone

I think she did the right thing!

mein bhi asa hi karti

and Adi happy b-day once again

and again

I love this

to the core

want to read more and more

but I think that there is no part two na?

But anywayzzzz loved it!

actualy love it

lol

Mahak do make a OS soon

-Lina-

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samira

@-Samira-

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#288

sorry mahak 4 the common it's nice update lovvvvvllllllllllllly my dear thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhhhh

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maria

@maria_awan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#289

hi dear loved it ist right there is a diff betwenn love and lust

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wind453

@wind453

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#290

awesome update
loved it to the core
you r a fabulous writer
the way you described difference between love and lust was great
i agree there is difference between love and lust
thanx for the pm
and do write more