Gallery of One-Shots : True friendship [mayur] 136 - Page 31

Originally posted by: KrazyRiya

Awesum one shot dear !! Mahak, you are just fantastic dear !! You have described it so beautifully !! 👏<br><br>I really loved the Nupur's POV....... she was absolutely right !!! 😆 😆 😆 <br>😆<br>But....ya it was really very difficult for me to accept and digest such a lusty/greedy character of Mayank !! <br><br>I feel really very sad for Nupur and for all the girls who have to through such a phase at some point in their lives !! 😭<br><br>I loved your lines : there is a difference between love and lust.....and lust
is not love....and the person who just wants ur
body can never become your
soulmate !!<br><br>they are so true !!! there's a huge difference between LOVE and LUST !! There is a very thin line between love and lust......and when someone crosses this line of respect , passion, desires, honesty and LOVE........it becomes LUST !! <br><br><br>

thanks.......

thanks u so much for such an appreciation........

thanks for agreeing with my point of view.......

i know......

even i couldn't make myself show this......

how can mayank ever do this???????

but i had to.......

i had no other choice.....

i too feel very sad for the girls........

thanks for loving these lines.........

thanks......

even i loved ur lines.........

thanks........

Originally posted by: Sunshine Girl

Hey mahak rili nice os.........it is such a gr8 topic coz many of our youth there doesnt kno the difference btw love nd lust........it feels so disgusting if its b4 marriage i mean that's ma point of view no offence...........thnx so much 4 showing that......i rili want ppl out there 2 kno wat true love is.......coz nowadays there is hardly any true lover!!!!<br>

thanks.......

thanks for thinkng that this was a grt topic........

nahi....

it does feel disgusting that before marriage people do this......

thanks u for loving it.....

i too think so......

but i dont believe in love......

thanks........

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

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<TD class=BBquote>Originally posted by Divya_kaldivya

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Mahak meri jaan... tujhe sharmane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... aur waise bhi tune itne achche tarike se likha hai.. iss sachayi ko itne khoobsurati se likha hai..... I am really proud of you...and believe me... I understand this totally and can fully sense it.... and where there is love, lust cannot exist..... Mayank was under the influence of alcohol... i don't think it was lust.... He loved her truly and he was so mesmerized by her beauty that he was not in a state to control himself... I will not call this act as Lust... it was just that he wanted to show his passion to his Lady Love.. tht does not mean that I agree for such acts before marriage... I am totally against them.... But then he did realize his mistake... </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Anyway, Awesome OS Mahak.. kitni taarif karoon yaar teri...👏</FONT>

</TD></TR></TBODY></TABLE>aapne bahut achi baat kahi hai......

thanks......

mayank alcohol ke nashe mein tha......i agree.......

but what if he does the same thing with some other girl??????

he shouldn't have crossed his limits when nupur was not ready to do so.......

i hate these acts before marriage.....

he realised his mistake,.,.......i agree.......

but what if he had done that mistake with some other girl?

what would nupur do then?????

but thanks.......

thanks for loving my os........

thank u.........
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<DIV-new2><FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">abhi itna benefit of doubt toh Mayu ko milni chahiye ke woh nashe ke haalat mein bhi kisi aur ke saath aisa nahin karega..... kyun ki woh aur sab jaante hain ki woh sirf Nupur ka hai.... Agar usne aisi harqat ki.. toh Nupur ko usse apni zindagi se ukhaad kar bahar phekna chahiye.. And such acts are not just driven by lust, it is totally driven by the love the couple has for each other, the passion and understanding they have for each other and above all the need and desire to be with each other... toh isme permission ki baat aati hi nahin hai.. har cheez hum jo bhi karte hain hamesha negativity se hi start hoti hai par aage badhte badhte uski positive cheezein dikhti hai.. I am not telling Nupur was wrong, I very much support Nupz's decision of not consenting especially in a state where Mayu is drunk.... Again, such things are very personal and depend on the individuals opinion.</FONT></DIV>

nahi.........

wahi to baat hai........

yeh mayank mjht ka nahi.....yeh mayank real life ka hai........

hum log jab bhi koi ff padhte hain.....

to hum usmein jitne bhi characters hote hain unhe show se relate karte hain..........

aur main yeh kabhi bhi nahi chahti hoon.......

tabhi aap dekhiyega......

ki meri koi bhi kahani.......wether its my ff......ss.....or any os......

kabhi bhi main same chahracterstics nahi leti hoon........

they have to be different!!!!!!!!

that's why mayank here couldn't be given another chance........

di i agree with u.......

permission isiliye chahiye kyunki in sab harkaton ke baad........

uske after-effect ladki ko jhelne padhte hain.......eg pregnancy.......

to phir permission to chahiye hi na??????

agar use yeh sab nahi chahiye toh????????

hmmmmmm........

i agree........

its just an individual's point of view.........

but thanks di for putting forth ur views..........

Originally posted by: Karan.P.Rocks

OMG! Loved everything!!

Mahak u rock !!

Love n lust!! Great idea!!

Loved Mayurr romance!!

Mayu was drunk!! He didn't feel that he hurt Nup!!

I'll loved ur idea!!

Keep rocks!!

Aisho .

thanks.......

thanks yaar........

oh! so u loved their romance??? 😉

thanks.....

i know but he shouldn't have done that when she was reluctant....

thanks for loving my idea.......

i will write a better one shot........

thanks..........

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi mahak,<br>how r u??????<br>

i am fine.....
tu kaisi hai?
yaar aditi kahan hai?

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey I had no idea it is aditi's birthday, i guess i am late oopsie, belatd happy birthday aditi.

Mahak, well it was a blushing part indeed hehe; but itvery well portrayed and written. This is a very sensitive topic and a lot of people bound by their traditional values don't believe in a physical relationship before marriage and I certainly respect both point of views. I am so sure Mayank would have too only if he wasn't drunk.

But Mayank loves her so much and this was just a way of expressing it to her for him. I hope Mayank is able to clarify and they both get married soon, very very well written Mahak.

Keep it up!

thanks....

i too blushed.....

thanks for respecting my point of view.........

thanks.........

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

i am fine.....
tu kaisi hai?
yaar aditi kahan hai?

me too fine.
hey mahak aj aditi ki exam tha.
usne mujhe kafi din pehle bataya tha ki exam k liye usse kahi jana hai.
i wish the exam was good.

Originally posted by: fariaa70

<br>me too fine.<br>hey mahak aj aditi ki exam tha.<br>usne mujhe kafi din pehle bataya tha ki exam k liye usse kahi jana hai.<br>i wish the exam was good.<br>

oh! to yeh baat hai.....yaar yeh os uska birthday gift tha......ab agar usne hi ise nai padha hai toh phir iska kya fayda? 😭

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

oh! to yeh baat hai.....yaar yeh os uska birthday gift tha......ab agar usne hi ise nai padha hai toh phir iska kya fayda? 😭

to kya hua.
thoda late jarur hogaya.
but i m very much sure after reading it she will b more happy.
Tune jo itna accha shot likha.
mein tujhse bahut badi hoo lekin mujhe bju itna akal nehi hai. jeise tujhe hai.
u r such a weet heart
meine 1bar kaha tha na mujhe bahut kuch sikhna hai tujhse.
And i really lmean it

Originally posted by: fariaa70

<br>to kya hua.<br>thoda late jarur hogaya.<br>but i m very much sure after reading it she will b more happy.<br>Tune jo itna accha shot likha.<br>mein tujhse bahut badi hoo lekin mujhe bju itna akal nehi hai. jeise tujhe hai.<br>u r such a weet heart<br>meine 1bar kaha tha na mujhe bahut kuch sikhna hai tujhse.<br>And i really lmean it<br><br>

how sweet of u to say that!
i will always help u whenever u need me.....
yaar but seriously........
i am waiting for her comments.......
pata hai maine ek naya one shot likh liya hai......
par main use post tabhi karoongi jab mujhe aditi ke comments mil jaayenge.....
i am really waiting.........
aur tujhe bahut akal hai.....
i loved ur one shot more than mine..........