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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

<font color="#0000cc">ok mahak i really really want to read this os but u said its not advisable for ppl under 16, so shud i read it or not? lol<br></font>



you can if u like some of romantic stuff.......
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Posted: 15 years ago

WOW................romantic and soooooooo much romantic

mahak even though i'm older then u i can never get myself to write romantic parts

it just feels weird

but this ONe ShoT is amzing hun

luved it

do write moree

-sanam=

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Posted: 15 years ago
hey darlin....

wow... umm.... .....ermm..... umm...

well.... i agree with you a 120% to go to such a physical relationship before marriage... is wrong in my perspective...but this is my belief....

i agree with everythin u showed nupur do cuz that was the rightt choice she made... she took a stand and i loved her for this....

great os.... cuz it had a msg dere.... good one mahak!

love lots

xxxx

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PheliNazar

WOW................romantic and soooooooo much romantic

mahak even though i'm older then u i can never get myself to write romantic parts

it just feels weird

but this ONe ShoT is amzing hun

luved it

do write moree

-sanam=






u don't even know how i wrote this!!!!!!!!!

i am red!!!!!!

i felt like killing myself for killing my shame.......

for the first time in my life.........

i did this!!!!!!!!!

i hate myself!!!!!!!

i do!!!!

but had to show romance......

or else....

the message would not have been communicated.........

it feels not only weird but also killing.......

thanks......

i am happy that u loved it........

thanks...........
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

<font color="#9900ff">hey darlin....<br><br>wow... umm.... .....ermm..... umm...<br><br>well.... i agree with you a 120% to go to such a physical relationship before marriage... is wrong in my perspective...but this is my belief....<br><br>i agree with everythin u showed nupur do cuz that was the rightt choice she made... she took a stand and i loved her for this.... <br><br>great os.... cuz it had a msg dere.... good one mahak!<br><br>love lots<br><br>xxxx</font><br>





thanks......

i too hate this thing........

why before marriage they had to do this??????

that means u love my opinion........

thanks.......

i am very happy that u could get that message.......

thanks............
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur






thanks.....

mayank is like that.......

he doesn't love her........

or else he should have control over his feelings........

so what if he was drunk?????

does that mean that he could do anything??????

what if he does the same thing with another girl while he was drunk.....

what will nupur do then?????????

aha I understand now bc maybe i didnt.........read the part before this part................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ArTiToTheEnd


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<FONT color=#996666 size=3 face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">aha I understand now bc maybe i didnt.........read the part before this part................</FONT>



plz pardon!
i am not getting what u r trying to say.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mahak meri jaan... tujhe sharmane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... aur waise bhi tune itne achche tarike se likha hai.. iss sachayi ko itne khoobsurati se likha hai..... I am really proud of you...and believe me... I understand this totally and can fully sense it.... and where there is love, lust cannot exist..... Mayank was under the influence of alcohol... i don't think it was lust.... He loved her truly and he was so mesmerized by her beauty that he was not in a state to control himself... I will not call this act as Lust... it was just that he wanted to show his passion to his Lady Love.. tht does not mean that I agree for such acts before marriage... I am totally against them.... But then he did realize his mistake...
Anyway, Awesome OS Mahak.. kitni taarif karoon yaar teri...👏
Posted: 15 years ago
mahak its a beautiful os!
i felt bad that they broke off their engagement, but honestly it was well deserved
he shudn't have forced her like that!
its a good thing mayank wudn't really do that!
loved the os
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Mahak meri jaan... tujhe sharmane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai... aur waise bhi tune itne achche tarike se likha hai.. iss sachayi ko itne khoobsurati se likha hai..... I am really proud of you...and believe me... I understand this totally and can fully sense it.... and where there is love, lust cannot exist..... Mayank was under the influence of alcohol... i don't think it was lust.... He loved her truly and he was so mesmerized by her beauty that he was not in a state to control himself... I will not call this act as Lust... it was just that he wanted to show his passion to his Lady Love.. tht does not mean that I agree for such acts before marriage... I am totally against them.... But then he did realize his mistake... </FONT>

<FONT color=#ff00ff size=3 face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Anyway, Awesome OS Mahak.. kitni taarif karoon yaar teri...👏</FONT>






aapne bahut achi baat kahi hai......

thanks......

mayank alcohol ke nashe mein tha......i agree.......

but what if he does the same thing with some other girl??????

he shouldn't have crossed his limits when nupur was not ready to do so.......

i hate these acts before marriage.....

he realised his mistake,.,.......i agree.......

but what if he had done that mistake with some other girl?

what would nupur do then?????

but thanks.......

thanks for loving my os........

thank u.........

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