Gallery of One-Shots : True friendship [mayur] 136 - Page 30

Awesum one shot dear !! Mahak, you are just fantastic dear !! You have described it so beautifully !! 👏

I really loved the Nupur's POV....... she was absolutely right !!! 😆 😆 😆
😆
But....ya it was really very difficult for me to accept and digest such a lusty/greedy character of Mayank !!

I feel really very sad for Nupur and for all the girls who have to through such a phase at some point in their lives !! 😭

I loved your lines : there is a difference between love and lust.....and lust is not love....and the person who just wants ur body can never become your soulmate !!

they are so true !!! there's a huge difference between LOVE and LUST !! There is a very thin line between love and lust......and when someone crosses this line of respect , passion, desires, honesty and LOVE........it becomes LUST !!

Originally posted by: samira-08

<FONT color=#330033>sorry mahak 4 the common it's nice update lovvvvvllllllllllllly my dear thank u so muchhhhhhhhhhhhh</FONT>

thanks......

thanks for liking it........

thanks........

Originally posted by: maria_awan

hi dear loved it ist right there is a diff betwenn love and lust

thanks......

thanks for understanding the difference between them..........

thanks......for loving this one shot........

thanks.........

Originally posted by: wind453

awesome update
loved it to the core
you r a fabulous writer
the way you described difference between love and lust was great
i agree there is difference between love and lust
thanx for the pm
and do write more

thanks......

thanks for loving it to the core........

i am glad that u think that i am a good writer......

thanks for understanding what i was trying to show.........

thanks for agreeing to it.........

its my pleasure pming you........

i will write more soon............

thanks.....

Hi Mahak,

Originally posted by: sameera_12

<div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Hey,</font><br><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">It was really Good One Shot!!!!!!</font><br><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">I Loved Nupur's point of view...she was absolutely right...</font><br><div align="center"><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">I feel the concept is really great </font><font size="4"><font color="#009900" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">"there is a difference between love and
lust.....and lust is not love....and the person who just wants ur body
can never become ur soulmate.....</font></font><font size="4"><font color="#009900">"</font></font> <font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">i totally agree</font>.....<br></div><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Do right more one shots!!!!</font><br><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Thanks for the pm.</font><br></a><br><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Love,</font><br><font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Sameera😊</font><br></div>

thanks........

thanks for thinking that she was right........

that's what my point of view is.....

thanks for loving my concept.......

and thanks u soooooo much for agreeing to my lines,.......

i will write more one shots.......

thanks.........

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Mahak,

Firstly its written nicely.. i liked reading it dear.

I think love and lust are not opposites... its just lust is a small part in the love process.... wanting to have physical intimancy and mostly men wanting to enjoy that is very very common.. I agree with what Nupur felt.. btu i could somewhere give a chance for the fact that he was under alcohol influence.. but personally i hate alcohol so may be the only thought or he drinking makes me feel aghhhhh... anyways.. i think most women who love their men give them a line their boyfriend can and cannot cross... touchign kissing and actually in most casees if under any influence of feelign the want to make love it does happen that u realseit s too late when u made love ...

I guess its not alwyas wrongful on the part of any one partner to be wantign phycsial contact its a normal thing.. but yup its always expected that girl should counter and know whats not to be crossed as they land in pregnancy not the guy.. so what Nupur did was right.. but Mayank can be given another chance... Lust is ntohgin to be felt shameful to event hink off.. any couple in love may many times even imagine to be makign love and later blush abt their thought be it girl or boy.. boys tend to take a chance of gettign that sooner while girls are matured enoguh to know what when isnt right.. and they surely have more control over their emotions than the men...lol...

i am glad atlast i read ur work and had enough tiem to reply it with my whole heart.. U r quite young mahak dear.. still ur thoughts and ur values hold in stories is far mature and I love that fact.. abotu romance.. romantic u are..adn am sure ur stories define the romance u love to see acorss on screen too.... it was lovely.. the mtoions depicted was sooo cute.. be it a mere touch pullign her.. sayign those lines..and Nupur felgin for him and later gettign a hold of what she cant allow though she loves him.. it was sweet...

good work mahak.. keep it up dear...

luv n hugs ur way..

Bhoomi

oh my god!!!!!!!!!

this is you!!!!!!!!!

i can't believe!!!!!

someone plzzzzzzzz pinch me!!!!!!!

plzzzzzzzzzz..........

my favourite writer!!!!!!!!!!!!

my favourite writer has commented on my work!!!!!!!!!

this is like a dream come true!!!!!!!!!

and u liked it!!!!!!!

thanks a lot for it!!!!!!!

i agree with u........

he drank alcohol........

i know........

but why????

when he cant control himself then why to drink??????

wahi toh!!!!!!

its the girl who has to suffer its after effect and not the boy..........

u agreed with nupur??????

that means u agreed to my point of view!!!!

help me someone!!!!!!

do pinch me before i faint...........

she didnt gave mayank a second chance because a person who can try to do make out with her under the effect of alcohol can also do that with some other girl........

he even said that if she doesn't let him do that to her then he wouldn't marry her......

which was wrong........

thanks di for replying.........

it means a lot to me........

ya i am quiet young but i have a mature thinking.......

thanks for loving that fact......

😳 i am not romantic but i had to show romance to spread that message.....

vaise to be truthful.......

i hate romance......atleast before marriage........

i never watch any romantic scene........

neither do i belive in love........

God knows why i write only love stories........

this is the thing i am even confused........

thanks di.......

thanks for liking it........

i will try to keep up at ur expectations........

love and hugs ur way too........

Mahak

Originally posted by: Calvin-N-Hobbes

hiiee.. cudd u plzz takee out sum tymm ndd readd my ff..

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1313035/when-shakespear-fell-in-love-sajan-ff-part-1-pg-3

love

alia <3

ya sure i will do read ur work........

but can u tell me how did u liked my work?????

Originally posted by: armaankideewani

Hey Mehak! :D You ALWAYS have amazing One shots..and here goes another one! It's a very critical topic, cuz everyone has their own views, but I'm on this with Nupur..The best dialouge has to be this one:

Nupur- mayank aur log kya karte hain isse mujhe koi farak nahi padta hai...par main yeh sab nahi karoongi.....and that's final...i too love u....par yeh love nahi lust hai.....tum mujhe paana chahte ho......yeh koi bhi pyaar dikhaane ka tareeka nahi hai....its mere lust....done for pleasure....please mayank...main yeh sab nahi karna chahti hoon....please try to understand....

I completely agree with you! Seriously..even tho i'm 15..I know ppl who have had "that" IN MY AGE and im like..wow guys, are you planning to ruin your life already?! Seriously..I mean, i dont get it..Life risking..ugggggh. I feel DISGUSTED sometimes, cuz i mean, at a young age, uggh.
But yeah, I agree with you! :D

Great One-shot! :D Well done!

Sneha!

hey sneha......

thanks.......

i am glad that u always find my one shots to be good......

ya.....

even i thought twice or thrice before writing this........

thanks for agreeing with me.......

thanks for liking this dialouge........

thanks for agreeing with me.......

i am 16 yrs old.........

wahi toh!!!!!

wy do people ruin their life?????

thanks.........

Originally posted by: rkmnkp

OMG Mahi

sach mein I love this OS sooooooooooooooo much

I don't even have wordzzzz to describe

it

sach mein

yeh itna achi tarah se writeen hua hai

that i am totally speechless!

Wow Mayur engaged?

and then

Mayank drunk and then all that scene....

superb!

and at the end where she hangs up the phone

I think she did the right thing!

mein bhi asa hi karti

and Adi happy b-day once again

and again

I love this

OS

to the core

want to read more and more

but I think that there is no part two na?

But anywayzzzz loved it!

actualy love it

lol

Mahak do make a OS soon

-Lina-

thanks yaar..........

lina tujhe yeh pasand aaya.......

i am sooooooooo happy for that........

thanks yaar..........

now i am very happy.......

thanks...........

wahi toh!

woh ek aise insaan se kaise shaadi kar sakti thi jise uski emotions ki parvah bhi nahi thi???????

thanks.......

dekh na maine yeh os aditi ke liye likha hai.......

and she isn't online.......

thanks for loving this os to the core........

love u.....

i will write on more soon......

thanks......