Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4 - Page 50

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooome....

superb.....
fab........
loved it.......
thanx for the pm.......

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome........................

Originally posted by: prerna1

nice part
plz continue soon and plz update Mere Saathi soon

Thanks...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi 😊

so finally u got time to up this fic😊😊😉😉😉😉
good😊
now coming to the up
it is as usuall a treat to the up😃
rajveer naina along with their other fellows got graduated😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
and its time party 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
so they went to camp for enjoying😊😊😊😊😊😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
and situation there is really nice every one is telling stroies😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 but yaar yeh ritu plz throw her out😡😡😡 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡hamesha raj se bas chippak ke rahete haai🤢
humare naina kitne upset ho gaye by seeing ritu and raj close 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
aur huda is moke ka chokka maarne se baaz nahin aaya 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
woh aabhie bhi naina ke picche paara haai 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
but good that naina ne usse koi importance nahin diya 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
par yeh huda usne raj ko trap kar diya 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
haaiiiiii my poor raj was screaming for help 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭but thank god came there😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
she supported and comforted him so nicely 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
and they started cheerishing their older days 😊😛😛😳
plz cont soon and pm me

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Mana i am not happy with u, i mean for update.
I know you are busy but after a long time it was really a short one na?
How can u?

I need longer update.

But coming to the update, lovely one.

Raj and Naina both are still confuse about their feelings and i hate this Huda when he tries to come between them.

Y he always tries to chance maaro type? And Huda's sister Ritu i mean in nature she is just the same as he is.

Because of these stupid people now Raj is in trouble and when Naina was crying for him Huda came there from nowhere.

He always use these stupid tricks and i hate him even more but his this trick was useful for RN as they are now with each other because of Raj's foolishness, all thanks to his brain.

He was really scared in dark but Naina was there with him to encourage him and now he was feeling relaxed. They were recalling their golden days.

Aieeeeee hieeeee Raj was going to kiss her, and he hugged her too. Yaar kar lene diya hota na, i don't know when these silly people will realize their love?

So sleeping beauties i mean Raj n Naina in each others arms, now what Huda? I wish when Raj will be out of that pit he will kick the nose of Huda and his Hudagiri.

Pls yaar this time update soon, fast & long.

Originally posted by: RiddhiB

nice part..
everybody's happy but Naina, for she's in a big fix...
let's see who will she choose..i want it to be Rajveer.I guess I know it will be Rajveer.."RN Jodi made in HEaven"..hehe..so what if it's not her first love..at least it is first true lasting love..
cont.soon

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

I am wondering if I read it right!! U R GONNA END THIS FIC!!! 😲😲 RAJJJJJJJJJJ.....😭....main abhi Raj ko complain karungi....huh!! 😭😭 MYYY RAAAAAAAAAAJJJJJJJJJJ....😭

I so hate you for this....but I still love my Raj...isliye ye comment uske liye....u to dont talk to me....huh!! Valentines pe fic start karte hai....end nahi....🤢

Achha now Raj....coming to the update....u were as usual marvelous!! 😳 Ur eyes do light up when u smile....but dude...look around...ur girl is going gaga over that....😉😉 Love you for jerking away Ritu's hand from u....and rushing behind ur Nain....😳😳

Wo Huda to sabse bada jerk hai....idiot...tumhari Naina se baat kar raha tha....aur to aur...tumhe gadde me gira diya....😡😡...but then....tum to sweetest ho...isliye God ne tumhari help ki...and jaise taise Naina ko tumhare sath bhej diya...in the gadda!! I wud give the credit to u as well...for pulling her in...😳😆😉

And wah....tum to bachpan se smart ho...Chand ek Ball hai...Grab it!! 🤣 Best of u in the part....love you for this spl smartness of urs...😉
And ur phobia wid darkness....proved to be fruitful for u...though I was very worried for u....😳😳

Loved the way u two drifted off to sleep...while talking!! 😳😳

Ab me w8ing for 12th.....tum wapas jo aaoge....😳...love you always sweetie....😳😳

Thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

heyy caught up with your two rn fics sirf tum & mere saathi i read these two in one go and they are fantastic and hope u will cotinue with that..................

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Hi MAna....


Itna chotu sa update....ab to ji me aa raha hai ki comment bhi chotu sa hi dun.....hunh..... par.............................par......................... par.................. awesome update dear.....and the scene between Raj and Naina in the pit was awesome.....👏 👏 👏

When will naina realize ki wo Raj se pyaar karti hai.......😕

I wish ki mai Huda ka khun kar paati😡..........sheer pain in the neck.....humesha RN ki love story me villian ka kaam karta hai....😡huh.....😡

Ab madam jaldi se 12th ko update kar do....badi meherbaani hogi aapki....😉

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

its like the circle of life......reaching the same point where it all started.....


am sad that the story is ending......
but am glad that r-n relation would finally be mending.....
there would be happiness
and there would be love...
plz do tell me....
nxt update karogi kab???

wow, it was rhyming......

eagerly waiting for the nxt update....

Thanks...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

amazing updt dear.....

Rn were too good
😳

Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

koun si gali tujhe dun bata....??? ek toh itna late ud...upar se khatam karne ki dhamki...aur phir itna chota sa ud...!!! ise tu ud kahti hai...is se toh bade mere sms hote hain jo main roz tere ko bhejti hun...!!! seriously tera koi na koi bandobast karna padega...

abhimanyu ek scary story suna raha tha...chalo achha hai...jaisa voh dikhta hai usi hisab se story sunayega na...ha ha ha...
naina...gussa kyoun ho gayi...agar ritu ne raj ko pakda toh...!!! matlab dil me kya hai...kuch toh kahe...
khair jungle ki taraf walk pe jane ka idea bilkul sahi tha naina ka...!!! aur raj ka us ke piche bhagna bhi aur ritu ka voh gusse se haseen chehra...bhi sab achha tha...!!! par is Huda ki himmat kaise hui naina ko NAIN bulane ki...yeh sirf raj bulata hai...!!! naina ko use ek punch marna chahiye tha...
kambakhat...ek toh NAIN kah kar bulaya...aur upar se raj ke naam se bhadka kar apna ullu sidha karna chahta hai...!!!
par writer hai na raj ke sath...!!! huda ne use trap kiya toh kya...raj ko bachane naina bhi aayi...!!! par mujhe na sab se jyada achha laga...voh scene...jab raj dara hua tha...aur use laga ke naina wapas nahi aayegi...aur use us ne apni taraf khinch liya...n den voh hug wala scene...aur phir naina ko ankehn bandh karte hue dekh kar...jahan abhi thodi der pahle raj ko dar lag raha tha...usi jagah voh naina ko kiss karne ja raha tha...ha ha ha...lovely scene yaaar...bada maza aaya padhne me...
aaj tak toh maine suna tha ke chaand-mama hota hai...aaj raj ki wajah se pata chal gaya ke voh ball hota hai...ha ha ha...
aur dono bataon hi baton me ek dushre ki bahon me so gaye...!!! par stupid...tu kahan so gayi...ud toh tujhe 12th ko karna tha na...!!! ya phir tune aaj tak calender change hi nahi kiya...!!! thik hai 12th ko nahi toh 13th ko ya 14th ko kar deti...!!! par kahan 12th aur kahan 22 aur abhi tak tere darshan nahi hai...!!!

ud jaldi se karti hai ke uncle se teri sikayat karun...

thanks
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Mana

I wanna kill this Huda..why did he spoiled everything ???😡😡😡
Raj was so shocked to know that Naina is leaving for US with Huda..
He was so hurt and so was Naina's dadu..
Naina was so surprised when Raj confessed his feelings for her..She cudn't believe that Raj loves her..
Why didn't she confess her feelings for him..he was so hurt.I hope she gets to know the depth of Raj's feelings for her from his diary.
Next part wud be the end of this fiction and I hope it will b a happy ending for both Raj and Naina.😊
continue soon
Bye

Originally posted by: prerna1

great part
waiting for Naina's confession
plz continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

hi

the up is good
so raj aur naian dono pure raat us muddy place mein guzare
and all bcoz of that huda
aur yeh huda wapios aane ke bad naina ke parents ko bhi mana liye unke sath us jaane ke liye
ab naina aaapne parents ke saath us jaa rahe haai is baat se jitna naina ke dadu dukhi haai utthna he dukhi raj bhi haai
raj finaaly confessed his love for naina
par ab kya naina toh jaa rahe haai dekhte hai kya hota haai aage
plz cotn soon adn pm me

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesoooooooome...

superb.
wonderful....
fab...
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm...

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome part. loved it.
update soon

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

am crying

update soooon...
raj is a sweetheart:(

THANKS....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -purnima-

lovely update 😃😃............. 👏👏👏...............

good to see u back 😃😃............ pyaari sherni was abt advt ur missing report 😆😆😆.........

as 4 part it was awesome 👏👏👏.......... Raj confessing 😳 😳............
hope they get together in end (dats the next part ) 😭😭...........will miss Raj 😭😭😭...........

continue soon 😃😃

Originally posted by: aamirkhanfan

awesome update..................................

Originally posted by: RiddhiB

gr8 parts..
loved all of dem..
and specially this part really touched me..
dying to read the next part..
do cont.

Originally posted by: shreyamathur_18

very nice update...👏👏

continue soon........

Thanks....
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: nainaahsingh

good part

love it soooooooooooooooo much
please cont soon dieying to read the next part

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Huda has spoiled everything. Why did he have to open his big mouth in front on Naina's parents. And how could they have believe what Huda said. And why is naina quietly accepting everything?

Raj is shocked to hear that naina is leaving for US and that too with huda. He feels hurt to see how upset all of this has made his Dadu. He does not want to lose his nain and so decides to talk with her.

Naina is surprised to hear that Raj has always loved her. She had never realized that Raj had such deep feelings for her. Why is she still willing to go with Huda after hearing Raj's confession? He was soo hurt'he could not stop his tears. Despite everything all he wants is Naina's happiness be it with someone else also.

Hope Naina realizes Raj's true love when she would read his diary,

Waiting to see both RN together'continue soon

Originally posted by: golu_1677

superb part
pls cont soon

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey Mana what is this yaar?

You know u shocked me.............


You are going to finish this fic in next update why? It's shocking yaar.

I think may be you are too busy because of that.

Coming to the update good one but it made me unhappy because i hate Huda and his deeds. He is the most irritating person.


When he dumped Naina than he thought she would be back to him very soon but good that she did not and went to Rajveer instead.


Now he is feeling jealous and in his jealousy he did this and now i hate him from the core of my heart. But what is Naina thinking that she loves Huda?


Is she sure? Finally Raj confessed when he came to know that someone is going to snatch away his love from him but thank god he confessed.


I love all his emotions he shared about his feelings with Naina. Naina was mirror of his soul and i think she is confused about her love for Raj.


She brought his dairy with her as a gift of Raj what will happen when Raj will come to know that?
😲 😲 😲
😲

Waiting for next part soon but sad too that it's going to finish. 😭 😭 😭

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