Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#511

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Raj didn't stop her as for him her happiness is the most important!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It is great to see that Naina's parents have forgiven Raj!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

So Naina's dad does wish that it wasn't a drama and I must say he has a great taste in choosing a son-in-law!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda tried his best to stop Raj from hugging Naina but Naina hugged him and she realized once again what she is going to lose now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Raj loved Naina very much and he believed in his love!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

He knew that if it is true then she would come back to him and he would always wait for her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thankfully now Naina is realizing how shallow Huda is!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is so shocked to read Raj's diary and realized Raj had loved her from so long ago!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Stupid girl never realized how much Raj loved her all these years!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Finally she came to her senses and realized who she loves!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj doesn't want to sing as he is very sad but Naveen and Aalekh reminded him about his goal and his promise!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj thought about Naina and sang from his heart while everything inside him was crying!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The song is very nice and just perfect for the competition!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

You couldn't have chosen a better song as in Jhankar Beats also they had sung this song in the same situation at the end!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Finally Naina dumped Huda and came back to Raj!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj was shocked and happy to see Naina in front of him and he hugged her never to let her go!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Naveen, Aalekh and Abhi were so happy for them!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Their reunion backstage was indeed funny!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

As expected Naina's parents were very happy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Finally Naina said that Raj is her first and last love and said the dialogue of the story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 👏 👏 👏 👏

As expected Raj won Jhankaar, after all hero kabhi harta hai kya aur woh bhi end mein!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj is indeed too naughty and actually gave credit to her lucky charm instead of Naina!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Finally Raj and Naina got married and their wedding was a lavish affair!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

But in the storeroom??😛 😛 😛 😛Indeed Raj is crazy!!!!! Jahan mile thhe pehli baar wahi shaadi ki!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's threat to Raj is very cute aur jaa bhi sakti hai since her maaika is next door!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

It is great to see their happy married life!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Even after marriage the two of them have not changed!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Both still enjoy fighting with each other as much as they enjoy romancing!!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

After two years of marriage, Naina was fighting with him for not loving her as he has not fought with her for a while now!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

And their romance after their fight is just too good!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj and Naina were shocked when their son Nischay complained about a girl!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

It is as if history is repeating itself!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I thought it is time for the happy ending magar nahi picture abhi baaki hai mere dost!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

A new pair Rashi and Nischay, aka RN are following in their footsteps!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It was a perfect ending to this special love story!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It was a very cute love story and it was very special as it was so simple and touching!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Edited by Shaina_b - 12 years ago

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#512

Lovely end to lovely FF 👏👏👏.......... good to see a happy ending 😃😃..........so for nain proof o love is fight with Raj 😆😆😆............ so wishing they keep on fighting 😆😆😆.......
their son 😆😆😆...... bilkul raj pe gaya hai 😆😆😆😆.........

njoyed the FF throughout 😃😃.......... will wait 4 new 1 soon 😛😛....& also the updates for ongoing ones 😛😛😛

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Riddhi

@RiddhiB

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#513

haha..loved the part..i wish it wasn't the last though. Loved the dialogues!!
"Kahani khatam nahi huyi....Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost......"

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#514

Hi Mana

Perfect ending for this cute love story.👏👏👏 It was indeed special coz it was so simple yet so touching.😊

Raj came to meet Naina for the last time but he cudn't say bye to her..He believed in his love and he knew that if its true then it wud surely b his..He wud alwayd wait for her..😊

Naina was so shocked to read his diary..stupid girl!! cudn't she read it before boarding the plane anyways she finally came to her senses soon😆😆

Raj was so dissapointed when she didn't came in the concert but he didn't let his friends down..He sang from his heart while everything inside him was crying..That song is one of my very favourites..I love it like anything😊

and just like that Naina was infront of him and he was so happy to see her there and he hugged her to him to never let her go..😊 Alekh,Naveen and Abhi were so happy for them..😃

After 2 years of marriage Raj was same and Naina was fighting with him for not loving her..😆😆 I never knew that one has to fight to show their love but I completely agree with Naina..😆😉

Naina and Raj were so shocked when their son complained abt a girl..it was as if pasr was repeating itself..😊

Bye

Edited by suhana.dixit - 14 years ago

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#515

WOW Mana..Luv u for such an awesome story

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#516

So here comes my opinion for the last update of the fic.

Good ending. 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Raj and Naina are inseparable and finally Naina realized after reading his dairy that how much he loves her and till when he loves her.😍 😍 😍 He wanted just to save her from falling fan but unfortunately her hair chopped off in that incident and she begun to hate him. 😔 😔 😔

But now when Huda tried his best that Naina couldn't hug Raj she hugged her and she realized once again that what is she going to loose now. It's Raj's Jhankaar's competition day and his lucky charm is not with him. 😔 😔 😔

Naina gave him her wishes but still Raj's sadness is not making him sing a song. But Naveen and Alekh reminded him about his Goal and made him ready to sing but his tears and pain was clearly visible in the song while singing. 😭 😭 😭

But naina finally realized that to whom she loves and who loves her whole heartily.😊 😊 😊 And she is back to her love when Raj has never imagined that she would be back to him ever. 🥱 🥱 🥱 And he was in deep sorrow to think that she has left with Huda. 😭 😭 😭

It was beautiful last part darling 👏 👏 👏 and loved the way u used title "Sirf Tum Humesha". 😳 😳 😳

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#517

perfect ending yaar...koi compln nahi...!!! matlab thoda sa hai...par ab jab fic khatam ho hi chuka hai toh compln kar ke faida bhi kya hai...

mere liye toh yeh fic hamesha spl rahega yaar...

raj akhir baar mila naina se...par use BYE nahi bola...!!! use kahin na kahin is baat ka yakeen tha ke naina wapas aayegi hai na...??? vaise kahete hain...'true love always comes back'...!!! chahe kitni bhi raat ho...door ander se bandh ho...chain laga ho...ya kuch bhi ho...true love aa kar darwaza knock toh karega hi...aur surprise bhi karega...hai na...ha ha ha...

naina ka dimag hamare DDPA ke membs se bhi jyada kharab hai yaar...!!! dairy pahle nahi padh sakti thi kya...!!! khair dair aaye...durust aaye...

kya sahi entry mari hai us ne...gane ke bich me hi...vaise mera fav song hai yeh...but Kishore Kumar wala...remix nahi...

ok..ab eplg par aate hain...

shadi hui bhi toh kahan...store room me...??? kya sahi jagah chuni hai raj ne...!!! jahan pahli mulakat hui phir mukka-laat hui...vohin shadi kari us ne...ha ha ha...

aur shadi ke 2 saal baad kya ho raha hai in dono ke bich me...!!! naina ro rahi thi...kyoun ke raj us se ab jhagda nahi karta...???hadh hai yaar...ek baat bata Mana...yeh toh hum dono jante hain ke hum dono Kumbh ke mele ke bichde hue behn hain...par hamari aur ek behn Naina ki rup me hai kya...??? mujhe yaad nahi aa raha hai ke hum 2 bhen the ya 3...ha ha ha...

naina aur raj surprised the...par main nahi hun...kyoun ke beta hai raj ka...toh kuch us ki tarah ka bhi toh banega hi na...

ab yeh kya tha...

"Kahani khatam nahi huyi...Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost..."ha ha ha...

loved d whole part...loved d fic...n love you darl...

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#518

Hey Mana,

What can I say except that you have given the perfect ending to this special story.

Raj naina se milne toh atta hai par bina kuch kahe wahan se chala jata hai. all he wanted was for naina to come to the concert.

He loves naina very much and believes that if live is true than it will come back to him.

It is very painful for him to see naina board the plane, it just breaks his heart. He agrees to go to the concert as he did not want to let his friends down. He covers his pain and sorrow in his singing.

Naina is shocked to read his diary..stupid girl never realised how much Raj loved her all these years.

Par koi baat nahi...der aaye durust aaye. Finally she dumps Huda and comes back to Raj. He is overjoyed to see her there in front of him. Abhi and Naveen are happy for RN.

EVen after marriage..the two of them have not changed. Both still enjoy fighting with wach other as much as they enjoy romancing.

They are both socked to hear their son speak about some girl..it felt as if history was repeating itself.

Thanks for sharing this story with all of us.

Take care

Nisha

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#519

Part 12

"Romance ke liye better jagah pata hai" 😃😃😉 😆...After all Raj is smart enough to find better places than a pit where some jerk like Huda pushes him...😡 And darn...that good-for-nothing tool had the guts to go back to Naina's house...😡...*cursing him to the fullest*...😡😡😡

Now coming to Raj...I somehow liked that tiny Raj-Mom scene...it was basically nothing in this eventful part...but still I was kinda touched..😳

And then...RN scene to best tha hi..😳...the way Raj said it all...achha chalo...the way YOU wrote it all..😆😆...that was just fab!! 👏👏 And yeah...I was not smiling at all...while reading all that...coz I cud feel that scene...😉 so I wud say...that was a beautiful job done by u...👏👏

And the diary missing thing...cool...😉 (after all I hav already read the last part😆)

Waise iss part me meri sui Raj ke dialogues par hi atki hai...it has to be my most fav portion of this entire fic...just wonderful Mana!! 👏⭐️⭐️⭐️

Love, (For Raj only...huh...U r ending this fic ...so no love for u)
Sumi. 😳

Edited by Sumi_162710 - 14 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#520

Raj *sigh*...😳😳 I am gonna miss you sweetie!! 😍😳

Now coming to the 'last' part...of this one of the fav fics of mine......I started reading this part on a sad note (mera mood bhi kharab tha...jo ki Raj ko padhte hi thik ho gaya😆)...sad becoz...its ending!! Ab itna pyara tha Raj...ki kya kahu!! 😍

Oops...guess I shud cum out of Raj land now...😆...the last part was done beautifully!! 😃 Book ke naam pe diary...😉😉 now thats the best thing!! 😆 I say...everyone shud maintain a diary...kyunki diary ek aisi cheez hai jo most crucial moments ko suljha sakti hai...😉😉

So finally Raj ki diary ne apna kaam kar diya...and so did the lucky charm...😆 Raj won!! 😳😳 I loved the fact that Raj gave credit to the band...😳...see...usse bejaan cheezon ki bhi fikr hai......and u say...he was lil neg?? 😲😲 Huh...my Raj is always the bessshhhttt. 😎 👍🏼

Ok ok...I wont divert anymore...I wud say...I liked Naina's dhamki...😉😉...and that last RN scene...wid the fight...😆...

Ohh...pata nahi kyun...main achhese likh nahi paa rahi hu...but I had a gud feel all thruout...😳 and well...life is a circle...so it repeats itself...wid new characters!! 😉😉 So picture to abhi baki hi hai...😉...I sooo liked the end or beginning watever u say...😆😆😳

And as for this fic, u knw I love it...baar baar repeat kyun karu?? And coming to Raj...its always HIM...hamesha!! 😉😳😆 'Thanks' nahi kahungi...but I do love you for letting me fall in love wid this cutieee Raj...😃😃

Luv,
Sumi. 😳

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