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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing updt dear.....

Rn were too good
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Posted: 14 years ago

koun si gali tujhe dun bata....??? ek toh itna late ud...upar se khatam karne ki dhamki...aur phir itna chota sa ud...!!! ise tu ud kahti hai...is se toh bade mere sms hote hain jo main roz tere ko bhejti hun...!!! seriously tera koi na koi bandobast karna padega...

abhimanyu ek scary story suna raha tha...chalo achha hai...jaisa voh dikhta hai usi hisab se story sunayega na...ha ha ha...
naina...gussa kyoun ho gayi...agar ritu ne raj ko pakda toh...!!! matlab dil me kya hai...kuch toh kahe...
khair jungle ki taraf walk pe jane ka idea bilkul sahi tha naina ka...!!! aur raj ka us ke piche bhagna bhi aur ritu ka voh gusse se haseen chehra...bhi sab achha tha...!!! par is Huda ki himmat kaise hui naina ko NAIN bulane ki...yeh sirf raj bulata hai...!!! naina ko use ek punch marna chahiye tha...
kambakhat...ek toh NAIN kah kar bulaya...aur upar se raj ke naam se bhadka kar apna ullu sidha karna chahta hai...!!!
par writer hai na raj ke sath...!!! huda ne use trap kiya toh kya...raj ko bachane naina bhi aayi...!!! par mujhe na sab se jyada achha laga...voh scene...jab raj dara hua tha...aur use laga ke naina wapas nahi aayegi...aur use us ne apni taraf khinch liya...n den voh hug wala scene...aur phir naina ko ankehn bandh karte hue dekh kar...jahan abhi thodi der pahle raj ko dar lag raha tha...usi jagah voh naina ko kiss karne ja raha tha...ha ha ha...lovely scene yaaar...bada maza aaya padhne me...
aaj tak toh maine suna tha ke chaand-mama hota hai...aaj raj ki wajah se pata chal gaya ke voh ball hota hai...ha ha ha...
aur dono bataon hi baton me ek dushre ki bahon me so gaye...!!! par stupid...tu kahan so gayi...ud toh tujhe 12th ko karna tha na...!!! ya phir tune aaj tak calender change hi nahi kiya...!!! thik hai 12th ko nahi toh 13th ko ya 14th ko kar deti...!!! par kahan 12th aur kahan 22 aur abhi tak tere darshan nahi hai...!!!

ud jaldi se karti hai ke uncle se teri sikayat karun...

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Posted: 14 years ago
pls continue soon with the next part waiting for it...........😊
Edited by shreyamathur_18 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

PART TWELVE:

It was morning when Huda woke up.

He went over to Naina's tent but she wasn't there.

He patted Ritu on the shoulder.

"Hey Ritu !Utho !! Kya ghode bech ke so rahi ho?? Do you know where Naina is?"

Ritu rolled her eyes.

"That girl hasn't been back all night and neither was Rajveer. She must have...."


Huda left before she could finish talking.

"Ahh!" she screamed because no one ever listened to her.

Huda called the others so they can help look for Naina but he had the feeling she was with Rajveer.

He took them to the place where Rajveer had fell.

Sure enough, there they both were.

Naina was sleeping comfortably in Rajveer's arms.

Huda was mad.

"Naina !! Rajveer !!!!"

The yell woke up Naina and Raj.

They glanced up to see what it was.

Raj stood up.

"Hey you guys, help us out!"

Abhimanyu started laughing as he pulled Rajveer up.

Then he leaned over to help Naina up.

" Tum theek ho Nain?" , he asked.

She nodded.

"Ooo...so, Veeru??? mahashay aap....."

" Arey Veeru nahi Abhi....RAJ...ab yeh bandar sirf RAJ ke jaap se chalta hai!!! ", Aalekh teased.

" Shut up Aalekh!!", Raj said.

" Why Shut up??? ", Naveen asked , " Rajveerji ....what were you and Miss Naina doing down there all night?"

Everyone else except Huda laughed.

"Shut up, Naveen ! Hum galati se gir gaye ! And anyways, romance ke liye main aisi horrible jagah nahi chununga...isse better jagah pata hai mujhe. let's go home," Rajveer said to the others.

It was evening by the time Raj and Naina got home.

He was exhausted so he took a shower and headed straight for bed.

He looked over at Naina's room, who was exactly across from his. Her lights were out so she must be asleep.

Raj sat down on his desk and began writing in his diary.

He had kept one ever since he was ten and he wrote in it whenever something came up. When he finished his entry, he turned off his lights and went to sleep too.

But he and Naina didnt know that Huda had turned up at Naina's house to talk with her parents.....

It was eleven at night when Raj woke up.

It was dark out but he couldn't sleep anymore so headed downstairs to look for something to eat. His mom was in the kitchen.


"Hi maa!! Aap abhi bhi kitchen mein?"


"Hi Veeru", She walked over to kiss him on the forehead, " Mera bachcha bhookha soya ho, toh main aur kaha ho sakti hoon?"

Raj smiled.

" How was camping?"

"It was fun."

He sat down at the table with his mom.

" WOW !!! CHINESE !!! ", he exclaimed and then began smiling looking at the noddles, as it reminded him of what Naina called his hairs...

She touched his hair and let out a sigh.

"What's wrong maa?", He began eating his noodles.

" Kuch nahi beta... It's just that you're all grown up...Ab pata nahi...."

"Don't worry maa! " , he fed her some noodles, " Aap jaanti hai na aapka Veeru aapko chodke nahi jaayega, aur I promise, jaha bhi jaaunga aapko saath leke jaaunga ! Fir Papa akele rahenge aur tab woh samjhenge ki hum unhe kitna miss karte hai!"

" Chup badmaash !!" ,His mom smiled, "I know...but Can you believe it? You and Naina...dono saath saath bade huye.... and in just two more days it will be the last time you'll ever see each other."

Rajveer choked on his food.

"What?"

"Oh didn't you know? Naina came over an hour ago and made those noodles for you. She told me she's leaving for the U.S. with her boyfriend in just 2 more days."

"Boyfriend?!"

"Yes. A boy from your class. I think his name is Huda. He came to their place in the evening and talked with their parents...I saw Naina crying, I guess her parents scold her or something. That boy wants to do further studies in US and even her parents want to take her with them...so...."

Rajveer stopped eating.

'So Naina is going to go back to Huda.', he clenched his fist , ' Aur jo kuch bhi inn 2 weeks mein hua, woh ab bhi uskeliye ek drama hi hai....'

His mom looked at his unfinished food.

"Kya hua beta??"

Rajveer shook his head, "Nothing... I'm full. I think I'll go to my room."

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Rajveer went in the garden. He saw grandpa sitting on the other side of compound wall. He climbed the wall and went upto him.

" Daadu...yeh sab kya hai? Main yeh kya sun raha hoon?"

He looked up. Rajveer saw tears in his eyes.

" Daadu? Aap ro rahe ho?"

" Yeh hote kaun hai meri bachchi ko mujhse dur lejane waale? Aur tum Veer? Kya woh sab sirf natak tha?"

" NAHI." , he said firmly and Grandpa looked at him.

" Kya matlab?"

" Pehle aap mujhe jo hua, woh sab kuch batao."

" Aaj shaam woh donkey Huda aaya tha...", grandpa said and Raj chuckled.

" Phir?"

" Woh aaya aur usne bataya ki kaise tum hi woh neighbour ho jiske baaremein Naina ne unse kaha tha, kaise tum aur Naina dono drama kar rahe the aur Naina usse pehle pyaar karti thi. Isse mera beta aur bahu dono Naina par bhadak gaye aur kaha ki woh usse US lejayenge. Aur woh idiot bola ki woh 2 days ke baad job ke liye US jaa raha hai aur Naina ko bhi apne saath le jaayega. Phir pata nahi kyun, Naina bhi maan gayi."

Raj was silent.

" Veer, kuch karo.Agar tum Naina se pyaar karte ho, toh roko usse."

" Naina kaha hai?"

" Apne room mein..."

" Hmm...."

Rajveer leaned over his bedroom window.

He saw Naina coming in the balcony.

Just then she glanced over and saw Raj watching her.

" What??" , she asked.

"Can you come over?", Raj asked.

Naina looked at him.

'He looks so sad.', she thought.

She nodded. "Okay."

Rajveer pulled her across from her house and into his room.

She sat down and started to look around.

She never had been in Raj's room before but he was always in hers.

"Well what do you want to talk about?"

Raj looked at her with sadness in his eyes, "Umm...is it true you're going to the U.S. in two days?"

"Oh you heard about it already?", she asked looking away.

"Why didn't you tell me?"

"Why do you care anyways?"

Rajveer got mad.

"Why do you always assume that if there's something involving you that I don't care?"

Raj started to front her as she backed up into a corner. She was shocked. She never saw Raj this mad before.

"Because you never seemed to care before.", she said in low voice.

Raj grabbed her wrists and pinned her to the wall.

"Well you know what? I DO care.", He began to let her go, "It's just that you don't care about me enough to realize it."

He sat down on his bed and hid his face in his palms.

Naina sat down next to him.

"Raj...what's wrong?"

"Nothing."

"Please tell me."

Raj looked at Naina. His mind kept telling him that this will be the last time he will ever see her.

'It's now or never.'

Raj took a deep breath and told her exactly how he felt.

"I love you."

Naina stood up in shock.

"What?!"

Raj stood up with her, "I love you."

Naina couldn't believe her ears.

"Wait...do you know what you're saying?"

He nodded his head, "Yes and I do mean it. I love you Nain...I love you...."

She moved away from him.

" Nahi....tum toh mujhse nafrat karte ho na?"

Rajveer was enraged.

" Haan...!!! HAAN I HATE YOU !!! ", he shouted, " Nafrat karta hoon main tumse....kyunki tum woh aaina ho, jismein main khudko dekh paaya hoon. Kyunki tumhari aankho main mujhe apni sachchai nazar aati hai, apni kamzori nazar aati hai.....woh insaan nazar aata hai, jo sabke beech hokar bhi bilkul akela hai...Woh insaan nazar aata hai, jo upar se jitna chahe khush rehne ki koshish kare par andar apne aansu chupata hai...."

Naina was listening with tears in her eyes...

" Issiliye....", Raj's voice calmed a bit , " issiliye main tumse nafrat karta hoon. Nafrat karta hoon tumse kyunki tumne har uss ehsaas ko jagaya hai, jinse main door bhagta tha.....kyunki ek nafrat hi hai jo hamesha mere saath rahi hai...pyaar kya hai? Maa ke pyaar ke alawa maine yeh kabhi nahi jaana....maine dhoodhne ki bhi koshish ki. Apne aas paas, apno ke beech...lekin nahi mila. Mere Papa ko mere liye waqt nahi hai, jinpar dost samajhkar bharosa kiya woh iss hadd tak girgaye ki main, jo uswaqt ek masoom bachcha tha, apni jaan se haath dho baithta......."

Naina was reminded of their childhood, while he was trapped in their storeroom.

Tears were daring to fall off her eyes.

He gripped her shoulders, " Main Nafrat se jiya hoon, nafrat keliye jiya hoon, aur nafrat tak jiya hoon. Aur issiliye main tumse nafrat karta hoon. "

Naina was clenching her fists to curb the emotions she was facing.

He tenderly touched her cheek...

" Parr...main apni Nafrat se Pyaar karta hoon.....bahot Pyaar...."

Naina closed her eyes, leaning into the touch.

" Main bhi pyaar karna chahta hoon....Apni dil ki sunna chahta hoon...jeena chahta hoon....I Love you Nain, I love you a lot."

Suddenly she came back to senses.

"Do you know what you're saying? I'm going to leave for US in just two more days with Huda......My parents they have....I'm planning to be with Huda forever."

She looked at Raj as he held her hand tightly.

Naina backed up again and then she began to cry bitterly.

Raj tried to move near her to comfort her but she pushed him away.

"No! After all this time you say that you love me? Ab bata rahe ho mujhe? Jab sabkuch khatam hogaya?? "

He looked at her sadly.

Naina looked at him through her tears, "I'm sorry Raj. Tum jaante ho, ki I always wanted to spent all my life with my first love....and..."

Raj looked at her back.

"But do you really love him?" , he asked.

She paused. She thought about it and couldn't find the answer herself.

So she didn't answer and looked away.

Raj thought that was the answer.

"It's okay.....Pyaar mein koi shart nahi hoti...Aur phir pyaar hamesha paana hi toh nahi hota na?? "

Naina looked at him....

Tears were streaming his face as he spoke," Aur mere liye tumhari khushi sabse important hai. Main bass tumhe khush dekhna chahta hoon. Be it with me or...."

He couldnt complete.

" Tum bahot yaad aaogi Nain..." , he said finally and hugged her hard and began crying.

" Raj...", she was choked.

He separated from her and wiped his tears.

He tenderly cupped her face and kissed her on the forehead.

"Goodbye Nain....and all the best for your life...Tumhe duniya ki saari khushiyaan mile."

Naina looked at him as he walked away.

"Raj...Ruko!!."

He felt hope go through him. "Yes?"

"Is it okay if I take something of yours as a memory?"

That flicker of hope instantly died. He bowed his head down.

"Go ahead. Take anything you want."

Then he left his room and Naina left too.

Raj didn't know it but his DIARY was gone......

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DONE !!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys!!!
A bigggggggggggggggg sorrrrrrryyyy for being superrrlate...but kya karu...I hardly get time to come online these days due to other commitments...
I decided to update first and thought i'll reply to comments after that,considering you guys wont mind...
Just to remind this was second last update of this fic...
This fic will be ending in the next update...
Awaiting your comments and silent readers....do hit the like button if you like the update....
luv,
mana 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Doc...is Huda koi bandobast karr yaar...dimag kharab kar ke rakha hai is ne...!!! meri halat toh thodi si kharab hai...varna main is ki achhi BAND bajati...

Raj kitna dukhi hai ke naina US ja rahi hai...aur voh bhi us gadhe HUDA ke sath...!!! us ke dadu bhi kitne dukhi the...
par sach kahun toh main jyada dukhi thi...aree naina ja rahi thi isiliye nai re...!!! fic khatam honewali thi...is baat ka ghum tha...
naina kafi surprised thi na...raj ne jab use apni feelings batayi...voh toh yakeen nahi karr pa rahi thi...!!! par mujhe tujh par yakeen tha na ke tu meri tarah dream seq nahi rakhegi...ha ha ha...
ab madam bhi apne feeling bata deti...par nahi...!!! khair koi baat nahi...DEAR DAIRY...toh hai na...
cont soon nahi kahungi...kyoun ke main already last part padh chuki hun...ha ha ha...
Edited by Sweet-Lioness - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Hi Mana

I wanna kill this Huda..why did he spoiled everything ???😡😡😡
Raj was so shocked to know that Naina is leaving for US with Huda..
He was so hurt and so was Naina's dadu..
Naina was so surprised when Raj confessed his feelings for her..She cudn't believe that Raj loves her..
Why didn't she confess her feelings for him..he was so hurt.I hope she gets to know the depth of Raj's feelings for her from his diary.
Next part wud be the end of this fiction and I hope it will b a happy ending for both Raj and Naina.😊
continue soon
Bye
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part
waiting for Naina's confession
plz continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Huda ki shakal dekhne layak thi when he found out Naina had been with Raj the whole night!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ritu ki baat toh Huda bhi nahi sunta!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

Huda took the others to look for them and he took them to the pit and as expected both were there!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is teasing Rajveer about his name given by Naina!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naveen and the others are teasing them about what they were doing down there all night!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj ne accha jawab diya ke woh dono galati se gir gaye thhe aur usse romance ke liye isse better jagah pata hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Toh Raj diary bhi rakhta hai and he wrote in it and fell asleep!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

I will kill this Huda and he is the most irritating person ever aur ab woh Naina ke parents se milne aa gaya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Noodles khaate waqt bhi Raj ko Naina ki yaad aati hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is so shocked to hear that Naina is leaving for US in two days and that too with Huda!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Huda had opened his big mouth in front of Naina's parents!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina iske baad bhi aake had made noodles for Raj!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj feels hurt and thinks that it was all a drama for Naina!!!!!

Naina's grandpa is crying kyunki Naina unse dur jaa rahi hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Grandpa ne Huda ko sahi pehchana that he is a donkey!!!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Huda has spoiled everything!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡How can Naina's parents believe what Huda said??😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

And why is Naina quietly accepting everything??😔 😔 😔 😔

When Huda dumped Naina, he thought she would come back to him very soon but she did not and went to Raj instead!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Now he is jealous and in his jealous state he did this and I just hate him!!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Grandpa told Raj to do something and if he loves her to stop her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He does not want to lose his Nain and so calls her over to talk with her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved it when Raj pinned Naina to the wall and said he does care about her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina was so surprised when Raj said he loves her and had always loved her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj's confession of his love was beautiful and his words were very touching!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

It reminded me a bit of Pratham's confession during the stage play in Kutumb 2!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina has tears in her eyes as she had never realized that Raj had such deep feelings for her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

Finally Raj confessed when he came to know that someone is going to snatch his love away from him and thank God for that!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Why is Naina still willing to go with Huda after hearing Raj's confession??😕 😕 😕 😕

What is Naina thinking that Huda is her first love??

She is still confused about her love for Raj!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj was sooo hurt that he couldn't stop his tears but he said ke pyaar mein koi shart nahi hoti!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Despite everything all he wants is Naina's happiness be it with him or someone else!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

It was so sad when Raj hugged her and wished her happiness for the rest of her life!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Naina took Raj's diary with her as his gift!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

I hope she realizes Raj's true love and the depth of his feelings for her from his diary!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the up is good
so raj aur naian dono pure raat us muddy place mein guzare
and all bcoz of that huda
aur yeh huda wapios aane ke bad naina ke parents ko bhi mana liye unke sath us jaane ke liye
ab naina aaapne parents ke saath us jaa rahe haai is baat se jitna naina ke dadu dukhi haai utthna he dukhi raj bhi haai
raj finaaly confessed his love for naina
par ab kya naina toh jaa rahe haai dekhte hai kya hota haai aage
plz cotn soon adn pm me

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