Sirf Tum...hamesha...(RN)pt.13&Epilogue,pg.75(14/4 - Page 51

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PART THIRTEEN :

" Veeru !! yeh tune kya kiya? Roka kyun nahi raha usse?" , Naveen asked.

" Nahi Naveen...for me her happiness is important. Par maine abhi bhi umeed nahi chodi hai...I know, woh zaroor lautegi!"

" Veeru, woh kal jaa rahi hai!" , Aalekh said.

" I know....aur kal 'Jhankaar' bhi hai....Meri kismat ka faisla kal ho hi jaayega!"

NEXT DAY, AFTERNOON....

Raj entered Naina's house.

Huda was angry to see him there, but kept quiet as he didnt want to compromise his impression in front of her parents.

Raj came in front of her parents, with his head downcast.

" Uncle...Aunty, I'm Sorry. I know maine bahot badi galati ki hai...I'm really very sorry..I shouldn't have played with your emotions....But, believe me...I'm..."

" Bass Rajveer!", Naina's dad placed his hand on his shoulder, " Naina hamein sab bata chuki hai...Ki tum uski sirf madad kar rahe the...Tumhara ismein koi galat iraada nahi tha."

He looked at her dad gratefully.

" Aur beta, bachpan ki shaitaniyon ko aur Naina ko pareshaan karne keliye bhi maine tumhe maaf kardiya! ", Naina's mom said smiling at him, " Kyunki dosti mein sabkuch chalta hai....aur tum toh Naina ke sabse achche dost ho...Jo uski help karne keliye iss hadd tak ja sakta hai..."

Huda looked at them in shock...

He thought they would give Rajveer a solid bashing and here her parents are showering all their love on him!

" Par kaash...It wasnt a drama...", Her dad started to say and stopped abruptly.

Naina at once looked at her dad, but he looked away.

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Raj then went towards Naina.

" So NAIN ???", he asked smiling, while a tear escaped his eye.

" HEY !!! ", she yelled, " DONOT CALL ME NAIN !!!"

And they started laughing, though tears rolled out from their eyes.

" Can I....Can I hug you? One last time?" , he asked.

" BACK OFF RAJVEER !", Huda lost his patience.

Naina looked at huda, not knowing what to say.

Raj got his answer and he turned, but Naina had caught his hand tightly.

He turned to face her and she hugged him tightly.

" I'll miss you Raj....I'll really miss you a lot.", she was sobbing.

He patted her head and ruffled her hair.

" I'll miss you too, Nain."

and then whispered in her ears....

" Nain, aaj 'Jhankaar' hai....Venue is municipal ground, just besides Airport. I'll wait for you ! I know, tum zaroor aaogi ! Coz...mera mere Pyaar pe yakeen hai....I love you !! And I'll always Love you."

" Naina, I guess hum late ho rahe hai !" , Huda said.

Raj and Naina separated, when Naina held his hand again.

He looked at her in surprise.

" Lucky charm liye bagair hi jaoge? Aaj 'Jhankaar' hai na??", she asked and tied her band on his hand, " Dekhna tum hi jeetoge!"

" Jeetne ki chah nahi bachi.."

" Tumhe yeh comp jeetna hoga....Mere liye...please?"

" I'll try..." , he managed to say and left the place.

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"Boarding Flight Number 637! All passengers please come aboard at this time."

Naina looked out the window of her aeroplane seat, looking at city for the last time.

Huda sat down next to her. He held her hand and gave her a little smile.

"Don't worry sweetie. It'll be okay just as long as we're together."

Naina gave him a weak smile and nodded.

Huda looked at her carefully.

"You sure are pretty today. Remember back then when you were so much like a guy?I mean I couldn't believe that I had dated you back then."

Naina was taken aback.

'Does look always have to matter?' she thought.

She sighed and didn't listen to Huda as he continued talking.

She pulled out of her handbag the book she took from Rajveer.

She didn't know exactly what it was except that it had Raj's name on it.

She opened it up.

'Oh my gosh! I took his Diary!'

She closed the diary instantly. Her curiosity got the best of her. She opened it up.

The Diary was held in place by something.

She took it out and saw the it was a little bundle strand of hair tied together by an ivory ribbon.

She realized it was her hair and the ribbon was the same one Raj took from her when he pulled on her pigtails when they were small kids.

Tears fell down her face as she held onto her hair.

'Raj...you had loved me so long ago? Tum ...tum tabse mujhse pyaar karte the?'

She began reading his entries.

September 13th

Too close. I can't believe it. It had all happened so fast that I didn't have time to think. I would have lost Naina if I hadn't seen that fan falling.

If it did fall and kill Naina...then....what would have become of me?

She'll be gone forever, leaving me in this cruel and lonely world.

You would have thought that I would have told her that I loved her right then because I came so close to losing her.

But..... I didn't.

When I pushed her out of the way in time, I also chopped off her beautiful long hair.

I know it was her prized possession.

I said something really stupid and now she hates me forever.

Why must I always hurt the one I love the most?

Naina paused in shock. After all these years, she had blamed Raj for cutting off her hair when all he did was risk his own life to save hers. More tears rolled down her face as she continued reading.

February 14

Ha Ha! Hey, today I was teasing Naina in the cafeteria again. She was so mad.

She hated it when I called her Macho Man.

Is it my fault she looks so much like a guy?

Hmm...but underneath all that she was the still the same Naina that I love.

MY NAIN !!!

It's so hard telling her how I feel coz every time we talk, we end up arguing or dissing each other about something.

It's Valentine's Day today and I don't even have the guts to give her the dozen roses I have right here.

I hope she's not out with some other guy though...

Naina let out a little laugh. She couldn't believe Raj would write something like that. She flipped the book all the way to the last entry.

July 7

I love camping. Yesterday I was out camping with everyone and the most important of all, NAIN.

That stupid jerk, donkey Huda made me fall into a pit but like always, Naina was there for me.

I don't know what to do without her.

We talked about our past together and of course, she reminded me of how I tortured her.

Underneath the moonlight, she looked so pretty.

I began to realize that my childhood happiness was all because of her.

She didn't laugh at me when she found out my fear.

And you know what? Since Nain was down in that dark hole with me I'm not afraid of the dark anymore.

But I'm still afraid to admit to Nain that I love her. What if she rejects me? All I know is that I can't live without her....

Naina shut the Diary. Her mind started rolling fast.....

She looked over at Huda, who was sleeping.

Then she realized it.

All her tears and happiness were all because of Raj.

He was the only one who was able to make her laugh or cry.

She knew right then she couldn't leave......

"Flight 637 is prepared for take-off."

Raj watched the plane for Flight 637 take off.

He was standing at the fence.

Aalekh put his comforting hand over him, " Chal Veeru...woh ja chuki hai....'Jhankaar ' hamari raah dekh raha hai."

He turned back and hug him tightly.

" Mujhe nahi gaana....I dont want to sing...I dont want any thing."

" Veeru, you've promised her, you remember?" , Naveen said patting him, " Come on ! Tumhara pyaar itna kamzor hai kya, ki tum apna promise bhi poora na karsako?"

He walked away form the fence when the plane was no longer seen.

Tears fell down his cheeks as he started to head towards the grounds.

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'It's over.' , Rajveer told himself as he climbed the stage.

Public was screaming on the top of their lungs for him, but nothing matter to him...

He was there, just to fulfill his promise.

Aalekh gave him a thumbs up !

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He closed his eyes and Naina's smiling face came in front of his eyes.

Tu Jo Hai To Sab Kuch Hai Na Koi Kami Hai

Hume Tum Se Pyaar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante

Magar Jee Nahin Sakte Tumhare Bina

There was a thunderous applause and the crowd went wild with appreciation...

Raj opened his eyes, Aalekh gave him a reassuring smile and he too smiled back thinking about his Nain.....

Hume Tum Se Pyaar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante

Magar Jee Nahin Sakte Tumhare Bina

"Toh kya hua agar woh mujhse pyaar nahi karti? Main toh usse karta hoon na?", he thought.

Hume Tum Se Pyaar Kitna

Aalekh gave him a pat on his shoulder...

Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante

Abhi gave him a small salute...

Magar Jee Nahin Sakte Tumhare Bina

He looked at her band..and kissed it...

Tu Hi Dil Hai Tu Hi Jaan Bhi Hai

He walked little bit ahead...

Tu Khushi Hai Aasra Bhi Hai

He opened his arms wide and looked skywards....

Teri Chaahat Zindagi Hai

He blew a kiss skywards...where she was in the plane...

Tu Mohabbat Tu Aashiqui Hai Tu Aashiqui Hai

The crowd was simply roaring !!

Raj was playing the guitar madly....his fingers were bleeding, but he didnt care...

Huda's face came in front of his eyes and his expressions hardened...

Tumhe Koi Aur Dekhe To Jalta Hai Dil

Badi Mushkilo Se Phir Sambhalta Hai Dil

Kya Kya Jatan Karte Hai Tumhe Kya Pata

He walked upto Aalekh and Abhi and swayed with them...

Yeh Dil Bekaraar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante

Magar Jee Nahi Sakte Tumhare Bina

A girl tried to hold his hand while he bent over the ramp towards his fans...

He playfully pulled out his hand...

Hume Tum Se Pyaar Kitna....

He was reminded of how he pulled Naina up on the ramp that day.

He began playing the same tune, as tears rolled down his cheeks, in a hope that wherever she is she would hear it and come back running to him .

Aalekh , Abhi and Naveen too turned teary looking at their friend.

Suddenly, Naveen saw someone pushing through the crowd.

He wiped his tears and rushed forward to get the person.

Raj who was playing guitar with eyes still closed.

He had thought, he can survive without Naina, thinking about her happiness and well being....But it was impossible for him...

'If we were meant to be together, then Naina will show up right now.', he thought and sang...

Suna Gum Judai Ka Uthate Hai Log

Jaane Zindagi Kaise Bitate Hai Log

Aalekh and Abhi too saw Naveen with that person.....

They couldnt believe their eyes and didnt know how to react.

They looked at Raj, who was still unaware...

Din Bhi Yaha To Lage Baras Ke Saman

Suddenly Naveen pushed Naina up the ramp.

Raj was shocked to see her there!

Euphoria, ecstatic, happy, excited....these words couldnt describe his state then...

He had stopped singing long back and hugged her tightly and spun her around.

Aalekh and Abhi hi-fived.....They cared a damn about winning 'Jhankaar'...

All that mattered was Raj and Naina were together...

But how could the people who loved him, let Raj lose?

They took over the song, everyone singing together...

Hume Intezar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante

Magar Jee Nahi Sakte Tumhare Bina

Hume Tum Se Pyaar Kitna Yeh Hum Nahi Jaante

Magar Jee Nahi Sakte Tumhare Bina

While Raj and Naina leaned their foreheads together, crying and laughing at the same time....

There was a thunderous applause as they all went back stage.

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" Nain...tum yaha..kaise....I mean...matlab...", He didnt know how to say.

" Aalekh, kaisa ajeeb ladka hai yaar?", Naina said, " Jab jaa rahi thi, tab rukne ke liye keh raha tha, ab waapis aayi hoon toh aane ki wajah pooch raha hai..."

" NO...No...", he said hurriedly, " I didnt mean that!"

Aalekh, Abhi and Naveen began laughing at him.

" Tum sab log yaha kya kar rahe ho? Dekh nahi sakte do beechde premi mile hai! Chalo...phooto yahase.."

" OHKKKK !!!", they said and left laughing.

He looked at Naina.

"I don't get it! Your plane left already! I mean how?", he asked.

Naina smiled, " Don't worry !! Parachute leke nahi koodi hoon! I got off the plane before it took off. Maa Baba bhi bahot khush the. "

He smiled and pulled her closer by waist, " Hmmmm...But I thought you want to spend the rest of your life with someone you fell in love with first?"

Naina gazed at the face of the person she knew she wanted to see every day.

She leaned over to kiss him.

Then she whispered," Mera pehla aur aakhri pyaar tum ho... SIRF TUM...HAMESHA."


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Edited by Revolutionbreez - 14 years ago
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EPILOGUE :

Raj won 'Jhankaar'....

When he was asked to speak, he gave all his credit to......

No Not Naina....but her lucky charm, wrist band !!!

Which earned him loads of smacks from his Nain...

Naina and Raj got engaged the very next day, as Raj wanted her to be bethrotted to him as soon as possible. And their family members gave in.

The marraige date was 4 months later, when her parents and his Dad could manage to come there.

Do you want to know the Venue?????

It was the STOREROOM !!! Yeah....the same storeroom, where they both met for the first time !!

It was one of the Raj's crazy ideas, ofcourse !

He and Naina argued a lot over it and like always, she had to give in.

The face of the store room was completely changed and their wedding was one of the Lavish weddings the city had ever seen....

Naina's parents decided to shift to India and they now stay in her neighbourhood along with the Grandpa....

This gives Naina an advantage to threaten Raj every now and then when they argue that, "Main maaike chali jaungi...."( samajh gaye na?!)

Raj took over the chairmanship of Shekhawat Industries as his dad retired and decided to devote all his time to his wife and family.

Naina , though helped him with the business, but mostly enjoyed the role of home maker as she was pampered and adored a lot by her in laws.

Raj always used to yell that.... It's him, who has to do all the work and It's her who gets all the love, comfort and adoration.

To which Naina replies, Those are the sins he committed since childhood by torturing her, which he had to pay off now !!

At which he hugs her tightly and shower her with all his love, which according to him, he is repaying along with the interest...

Though he wants to concentrate completely on business, it's due to his Nain and her constant nagging that he has released his third music album this year, for which he got the prestigious R.D.Burman award recently.

Two years later....

It's pretty late when Raj entered his house.

" Oh God ! Aaj toh bahot late hogaya! Pata nahi Nain kya haal karegi mera !! Waise peechle 1 mahine se usse ek baar bhi nahi lada...toh aaj daant khane ke chances kam hai! Ek galti toh koi bhi maaf kar deta hai yaar !"

He entered his room muttering this.....

But was shocked to see Naina lying on the bed, crying.

He rushed forward...

" Nain, kya hua? kisine kuch kaha kya? Tum theek toh ho? Kya hua jaan?"

" Hato...durr raho mujhse...tum mujhse ab pyaar nahi karte na?" , she cried.

" WHAT???", he was shocked.

" Haan...I know very well...You don't Love me anymore...", she began crying bitterly.

" Yeh...yeh kya keh rahi ho jaan? I Love you...I love you a lot ! Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho?"

" Kaise soch sakti hoon? Sabkuch dikh raha hai!"

" Kya dikh raha hai???"

"Tumne...tumne...peechle ek mahine mein ek baar bhi mujhse ladai nahi ki...naahi kisi baat par argue kiya....!!! You don't love me anymore !!! ", she sobbed hard.

Raj stared at her with wide eyes...

" BASSS !!! ", he shouted, " Main thaka haara ghar aaya hoon...aur yaha meri seva karne ke bajaye tum apna gala phaad rahi ho!"

" SEVA !!! Seva my foot !!! Tumhe kya lagta hai, tum din bhar kaam karte ho, toh main kya aaram karti hoon?"

" Nahi...karti ho na tum kaam! Main jo kamake laata hoon, woh shopping pe kharch karti ho !"

" Oh really ! Janab ko breakfast bhi mere haath ka chahiye.....Driver lunch leke office aaye, toh aapse khana hazam nahi hota, woh bhi mujhe hi karna hota hai....Shekhawat Industries ka Finance section...ahmmm....i guess woh bhi main hi sambhal ti hoon...Aur..."

" Haan haan pata hai, Ab ginane ki zaroorat nahi hai!", he said.

They looked at each other for a second and burst out laughing.

Raj hugged her tightly, " My duffer, idiot, sweet, innocent Nain !! Ab toh yakeen hogaya na, ki main tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon?"

" Yeah...hogaya ! And I love you too."

He dropped with her on the bed and was switching the lamp off when,

" Kya kar rahe ho?"

" Come on Nain ! After two years of marraige, you still want me to tell you the theory?"

" Shut up !!"

10 years later....

" Mamma !! Mammaa !!!"

" Yes Nischi beta !" , Naina came into the hall.

Raj was reading a newspaper sitting on the couch.

Nischay, Raj and Naina's 8 yrs old son, was fuming in anger.

" What happened Nischay, tum itna gusse mein kyun ho?" , Raj asked.

" Woh stupid, idiot, duffer, ugly girl !!! "

Naina and Raj frowned.

" Girl? Who?" , Naina asked.

" That Rashi....ek number ki rotlu hai !I don't know....I Just hate her !! "

" Par beta usne aisa kya kardiya?" ,Raj asked.

" Usne kuch nahi kiya. Maine hi usse dhakka maara !", he informed and ran to his room.

While Raj and Naina looked at each other in Shock !!!!

Kahani khatam nahi huyi....Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost......

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Edited by Revolutionbreez - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Heylo guys!

This time I wont say ki , 'I hope aapko Sirf Tum...hamesha padhkar maza aaya ho...' etc.etc...

Coz i Know ki aapko bahoot maza aaya hai....reason, Kyunki maine khud isse likhte huye bahoooooooot bahhhhooooooooooot enjoy kiya....

Potryaing Raj a lil negative in the beginning was a big risk...but the moment i read angry comments for Raj's deeds in those respective parts ( Though every comment ended with something meaning I STILL LOVE RAJ 😆😆) , i felt like my job's done !!

I personally loved Raj in this and i'm glad that you all too !

Believe me, I personally dont want this fic to end...but isse aur kheech ke lamba karke main iska mazaa kirkira nahi karna chahti...

I want you guys to remember this as 'Short and Sweet'...

Coz...though i shouldnt discriminate, but this fic is my favourite babyyy ! Coz in this i could maintain the innocence of their characters...no mission...no betrayals...n a lil rona dhona( bilkul little tha haan ismein !😆)

I won't thank my friends and dear readers kyunki woh mere APNE hai...aur apno se kaisi formality? haina?

But kya kare? Angrezo nein koi aur word banaya hi nahi hai appreciate karne keliye....

Issliye many many thanks to all my readers and friends who've been strongly with me, throughout this journey.....

luv u all !

Ciao'

mana...😃😃

Edited by Revolutionbreez - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part and a lovely ending.........
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesoooooome.
Superb.
Fab.
Loved it.
Thanx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome epilogue . loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi
the up is really good
so naina is going with huda and raj is really upset for this
raj came to meet naina's parents to say sorry for his lie but naina's parents welcomed him with smile this thing made huda angry he is trying to move raj aside from naina's life but destiny is decided naian came to raj and raj won the jhannkar beats they are married now and the most surprising thing is that they dont fight now
i mean they who used to fight with every lil matter thay dont fight
but the raj made possble by fighting again i love it
anyways they have a son who is coincedenly following their foot steps
plz cont soon with another such beautiful and interesting story like this
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow awesome ff
loved it completely
and epilogue and last part was just amazing
plz update ur other ff too
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Posted: 14 years ago
Manaaaaaaaaaa....Love you for this fic......yeh meri bhi favourite thi....umm abhi bhi hai....for exactly the same reasons...its fun and very less dramatic......ad ke yeh khatam ho gayi but happy ke this is not going to be incomplete....which I have doubts for MS...usse bhi jaldi update kar......


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Posted: 14 years ago
hello!
finally update is done with the last part😭😭😭
i'm going to miss this fic😭😭😭 as it was very nice and perfect without rona dhona and all😃
epilogue is perfect like this fic👏👏👏
i just wanna ask u that ms will also come to the epilogue also or not😆😆😆
till then byeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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