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Posted: 15 years ago
#11
Hi Tiya!
How R U!
I wish u r gud
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woah dear
its really a nice one hats of to u and i think its best oneso sweetly written emotiontouching one Tiya its rocking oneand thanks for the pm

"It hangs around my feet for everyone to listen sound,
A symbol of your love, you gave to me.
It is a golden Payal from you, a token,
A promise of love, can never be broken.
Its music makes me believe that you're with me,
It creates a sound of music & arose so many emotions,
My body and my soul can feel it & move with music,
A gift extremely special, given from my lover,
It remember just how much you love me."

"One plus one equals two you see,
But somehow it's different with you and me,
When we're together we share one mind,
I'm only complete when you are near,
To loose you someday is my biggest fear...
You listened to my problems
In a kind and caring way,
I trust u with my secrets,
That no one has been known,
I trust you with my feelings,
I may be smiling today,
Thank you....."


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Nidha
Edited by nidha1983 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
This was heavenly Tiya, I simply loved it, This was so much different compared to all the other "1st nights" i read . 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
grt shot really good
tnx for thepm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14
hey Tiya! that was lovely!! good work!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
Reserved.. 😳

Edited:

Yo! It was really cute and nice... different from what other 'first night' fics are.. :)) Really Nice.. :D

Thanks for the PM
Edited by -Armaan- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16
hey baby...
it was simply amhazn yr....superb...mind blowing !!!!!!!
u hv turned 2 a complete professional writer yr !!
luved it 2 d core..
bt m bit "J"...i mean i was alwayz ur insiparation yr....lolzzzzzzzz
kidn... gr8 wrk !!!! thnx 2 alisha 2
god bless u baby...
muwaah
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17
Hey Tiya ...
dat waz one fabulous piece of work ...
Simply marvelous ....
U described the emotions so beautifully ....

👏
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Hmmmm ...chori pakdi gayi ...
Ab aap humse nahi bach sakti ...😛
Now next thing u hav to do is cum 2 GT & update the GV FF ...
We r w8ing 4 u ...u r gonna do the next part ..!! 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Tiya............
an awesome one shot...
like it soooo much...
lots of love
prinnia
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very sweet and cute one shot tiya! i really liked it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
hayy Tiya ...... i see u have a lot of experience with first nights and LOVE .. so whats the catch bhind this fantastic one shot

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