AR One Shot! - Our First Night! -

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...anshu...

@...anshu...

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#41

hey tiya
thanx for d pm

d sentiment of d one shot was so true so pure i loved it
i esp liked d last scene where armaan pecks on her lips nd she keeps her head on his chest . dat moment was so full of trust, dats wat a relationship of love is all abt

anshu

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@debby_11

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#42

wow....a superb one shot
it was really touching
very nice
thanx 4 d pm
write more
would love to read it

love
debadrita

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#43

hey i read it.......
it was very beautiful.........
very nice..........
this is what i wanted to read.........
i love pure love........
and this was it........
so pure........
so serene.......
love can never be physical only.......
it is what u showed.......
loved it simply.......
love u for pm me.......
thanks for the pm
and plz next time u write any os.....
pm me too.....

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jeni

@jeniluvmayur

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#44

i thouroughly enjoyed reading your one shot...do write more...

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karansprincess

@karansprincess

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#45

IT WAS JUST VERY VERY VERY CUTE.......SIMPLY AMAZING........!!!!!!!!!

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#46

hey tiya...this is sri..
wow!!loved u r one shot..its just so sweet and simple...
very nice...AR povs were shown very nicely...
their first night filled with unconditional love ...
looking forward for u r next FF..
do send me a Pm if possible..
good wishes..
have a great day...
sri:-)

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maanu

@maanu

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#47

hi tiya.......

very sweet and full of innosence.......

the words convey lots of innosense in ur writing.....

ahhhhh ... loved it.........

do write more.........

thanks for the pm

bye

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aarora

@aarora

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#48

wow..amazing shot sweety..loved it..beautifully written..AR's feelings n emotions portrayed beautifully..waiting for more to come..
but really thought u ll write a FF soon..hope u do so..
thanks for PM..

love ya..