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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#21

Hey Tiya,

It was too sweet and romantic.😊

I just loved the silent love, their understanding.😊

I really want that they should live such a beautiful life.😍

Well job Tiya👏

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amruta04

@amruta04

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#22

hey tiya

it was very nice one shot

u should write more

thanks for the pm.

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Swaminathan

@swamii92

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#23

amazing one shot ........write more.....pm me if u do so

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#24

hey tiya..this was damn sweet..

Ridz did'nt want to really have her suhaag raat...lol that happens..n she was totally scared that Armaan will make a wrong move..hw cute..

Armaan tested her..n did scare her a bit..but then he backed off later..and just did sweet gestures..hw sweet..

He understood her feelings without having to say anything..tats awesome..i conveyed the same tyn thru one of mah RM one-shots ;)..lol..

i loved the way he just comforted her and did'nt make any wrong move, something she did'nt want..

thnx 4 d PM

do write more

-aish

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#25

hey Tiya lovey shot.....loved hw u expressed her emotions.......very cute n adorable......do write more........thnx for the PM......

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ammygurl

@ammygurl

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#26

Awww....This one was soo cute Tiya...
I mean...when i first opened your topic..I just realised that this could be something vulgar...Or Mods would be about to close the topic..😛
But it was soo cute...So emotional and personal...That is exactly how a girl feels after her marriage. ( my sis told me...) hhaha....
I loved how Armaan controlled his emotions...:) And riddhima fell in love with him all over again...
Please do write more one shots like this...
Take care
Ananya

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ritu

@janu1610

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#27

Tiya tune mera jiya le liya.lovely one shot .

i don't think u have need to b nervous .u have extra ordinary skills to write so keep going.

Where we love is home, home that our feet may leave, but not our hearts.

love

ritu

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Alisha

@shininggal2008

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#28

Jaan 🤗

i know i know... mai late hu. trust me maine tumhara yeh shot usi waqt padh liya tha when u pm'ed me par had to run for a get-together party so comment nahi kar payi... u mad at me ??? ( but i love u 😳)

okay the shot was mind-blowing. tum jittna bhi lekhyo mai hamesa tumahri FF ya Shot's ki fan rahungi. n again u proved it right through this shot. aur sabse badhi baat kya thi tume pata hai ? wo thi ki tumne yeh shot mere encouragement se likha hai. n u dont now how happy i was when i reveiced ur *urgent* PM... 😆😆😆 n ya it was really urgent lol. me in cloud 9😃😉 but ya as always fabulous n lovely. aur last mai itna hi kahungi ki yese hi hamesa surprise dete rehna. I LOVE U ITNA SARAAA !!!

~Alsha~

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#29

Hey Tiya,
The one shot was amazing, I loved it.
You penned it really well.
All the emotions you showed were so realistic.
I loved every bit of it, as usual, Armaan and Ridhima were awesome, as well as their first night ;) :).
Keep it up the great work and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

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Lee Min Ho

@gujunpyo

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#30

haha ,i had read this one before ur pm...!!!

i was apprehensive when i read the name..i hate those vulgar adult stuff..but maannn this was sooooo cute...i rerally loved how u described the bride's feelings..lovely,really...:))