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Posted: 15 years ago
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~One month later~


Niki: *admires the boquet of flowers the delivery man just brought in and reads the card* Congrats on passing ur exam....-A well wisher.....*smiles*



Niki: Thanks for the flowers.
Abhi: *innocently*...what flowers?
Niki: *grins*...the boquet of flowers that u of course didn't send me.
Abhi: *smirks* Ah...that one...well then Niki you're very welcome for the flowers that I of course didn't send u.



Niki:
*thinking to herself and remembering her moments with Abhi*...he's not really my type....much to harsh...and doesn't know how to relax and have a good time...sigh....but I'd be lying if I said he wasn't good looking *blushes* more than good looking...*smiles dreamily* and he can be really sweet when he wants to be....



******

Armaan: Okay everyone the only way Part C will work is if we all work together. If u see any opportunity don't waste it! We have to convince Dr. Modi. Best of luck, everyone. Just remember, BE SUBTLE!



Lovely:
Oh Dr. Modiji, such a handsome guy like u and ur not doing anything on the weekend?!
Abhi: I like to have time to myself to relax....
Lovely: But u should have someone to relax with! I know...Dr. Nikitaji is free! Go ask her to spend the day with u!
Abhi: *splutters in surprise and turns bright red before hurrying away*
Lovely: *calls after him* And be sure to wear ur blue unbuttoned shirt on your date! It will make Dr. Nikitaji happy!!! ....*dreamy sigh*...I hope he decides to stop by here first...It would make me happy to see him in it too...


Umar Bhai: Trust me Doctor saab. I should know! I almost lost my beloved wife because I was too nervous to approach her. Staring and smiling doesn't help much...u must let her know ur interested by taking her out! That's the only way she'll know ur serious....
Abhi: *listens with interest before realizing what he's doing* Yes that's all good and well but i'm not interested in anyone....
Umar Bhai: *smiles knowingly* so then u weren't staring at Dr. Nikitaji just a few minutes ago just like u have been for the past few weeks...
Abhi: *reddens and hurries away*



Abhi: *muttering*...am I really that obvious....I mean I don't feel anything for her! She's just another intern! Just like Armaan and Riddhima and the others!
Voice in head: of course she is...which is why u only sent a boquet of roses to Niki and not to the others when they also cleared their exams....
Abhi: *curses himself* okay so maybe she is a bit more than just another intern....but only a friend!
Voice in head: Uh-huh...because u go around flirting with all ur friends...and staring for hours at them...and wishing u could hold them....and-
Abhi: Alright! Alright! So maybe I might have some feelings for her....maybe. But I can't ask her out! I don't know how?! And what if she says no!



Armaan:
U have got to be kidding me! He struts around the hospital ordering all of us around but can't even figure out how to simply ask a girl out!



Armaan:
We've got a problem...someone has got to go and tell the fool how to go about asking a girl out...
Rahul/Atul: WHAT?!



Atul:
*astonished* U think I should teach Dr. Modi?!
Anjali: Of course. *looks smug* Its simple....just tell him what to say and u r the master poet. U'll know exactly what to tell him!



Atul:
So u see, its really simple. U just walk up to her confidently, never show her ur nervous! And then ask her simply if she'd like to go out for dinner. Ask sweetly...be romantic...recite a poem....fall on ur knees and beg her until she agrees!
Abhi: *listens in rapture while nodding his head*


Dr. Shubankar:
Ooh looks like he's finally going to ask her! ...Dang it, I can't here anything!


Abhi: *stutters* Well...um...uh...we could go eat out at that new restaurant down the street...I mean if u want...to celebrate! I mean u passed and all...but...uh...I mean I guess u'd probably want to celebrate with ur friends but-



Niki: *stunned* just to make it clear...did u just ask me out?
Abhi: *embarrased* um...yeah...I mean only if u want to-


Niki: *cuts Abhi off with a cute smile* I'd love to go with u.



Niki: *smiling dreamily* He asked me out...
Abhi: *smug and extremely pleased* She said yes!


Shubankar: U should have seen it Armaan...couldn't hear a word...but it was all in their eyes...
Armaan: Just spit it out! Did he ask her?! Did she say yes?!



*******

Atul: U should have seen me Armaan...I snuck the recorder u gave me into Niki's bag so quietly she never noticed a thing! It was awesome! I mean Its really too bad we couldn't go and spy on them at the restaurant but Rahul was right...they might notice. And with the recorder we'll know what they talked about!
Armaan: *worried* I have a bad feeling I forgot something important...



*******

*awkward silence*

Abhi: So...
Niki: Yeah...
Abhi: *takes a deep breath* Thanks.
Niki: *surprised* For?
Abhi: For agreeing to come.



Abhi:
*smiles* u look very beautiful today....not that u don't usually look gorgeous....
Niki: *stunned blushes* U think I'm gorgeous...*smiles shyly*
Abhi: *smiles cockily* well there are times when-
Niki: *glares* shut up before u ruin the moment.
Abhi: *chuckles in amusement*
Niki: *rolls her eyes and tries to hold back a smile*


Patil:
Dr. Modi! Dr. Nikita!
Abhi: Health Inspecter Patil! How r u?
Niki: What r u doing here, Sir?
Patil: Oh I m here for a meeting....and the two of u? *smiles* Date?
Abhi/Niki: *smile and blush*


Patil: Well well, so Armaan's plan worked after all....U know I honestly didn't think he'd be able to pull it off, not even with the help of the whole Sanjeevani staff...*shakes his head in amused disbelief*
Abhi: *confused*....Plan?

Patil: Yeah...they must have told u about their Project SMN....*chuckles* its been really amusing watching everyone running around behind ur backs and trying to hook the two of u up these past few months...I have to say I've had the most fun coming to do the monthly checks on Sanjeevani lately what with the Project Secure Modi for Niki.
Abhi/Niki: *stare at Patil in stunned silence*
Patil: *doesn't notice* Well I'm glad their plan worked. U two look good together. Enjoy ur night! *waves and walks off*


******

Armaan: OH NO! I forgot to put batteries in the recorder before I gave it to Atul!
Shubankar: That's not good....



*******

Niki: *yells* I can't believe u! All this time u've just been using my friends to get to me, nevermind how u convinced them!


Abhi: *grabs her in anger* ME?! I believe the project was called Secure Modi for Niki! Obviously its u that somehow convinced ur friends and the rest of Sanjeevani to make a fool out of me by making me fall for u!



Niki: *snaps* Why the heck would I use myself to make a fool out of u?! I have better taste then that! And I have better taste in men as well! Ur the last guy on Earth that I'd ever even consider!
Abhi: *hurt and angry* Yeah well ur not my dream girl either! I don't know what spell ur friends put on me to make me lapse in my better judgement and even consider a foolish girl like u!

Niki: *stunned and hurt* U know what....its a good thing there was never anything between us then. Because if there was then right now we'd be through.


Niki: *pushes Abhi to the side and storms away*
Abhi: *glares after her cursing under his breath*


*******

Armaan: *whines* why isn't she picking up. She has to be back from her date by now....I want to know what happened!
Atul: She might have already gone to bed, Armaan. We'll just find out when we see her in the morning...



*********


Edited by Erutan99 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
Ok that was very long..but i have to say i love it so much..
and the pics made it better..it was so enjoyable to read..had so much funn while reading it..
i miss them so much actuly...
tanks alot lvy..
mhmhmm
Posted: 15 years ago
#93
omg i feel like killing Patil!
it was all good n then he showed up!
anyways continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94
thanks for the pm , loved the update! I hope Nikki and Abhimanyu make up soon!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#95
Ivvyyyyyyyy!! 🤗
Finally another update!! 😃😃 Awesome job!! 👏👏👏
Loved the first part:
Niki: Thanks for the flowers.
Abhi: *innocently*...what flowers?
Niki: *grins*...the boquet of flowers that u of course didn't send me.
Abhi: *smirks* Ah...that one...well then Niki you're very welcome for the flowers that I of course didn't send u.


They r sooo cute.... love Abhi's smirk! 😃
LOL at Sister Lovely and Umar Bhai being 'subtle'!!! 😆😆😆
Loved Lovely's line:
Lovely: *calls after him* And be sure to wear ur blue unbuttoned shirt on your date! It will make Dr. Nikitaji happy!!! ....*dreamy sigh*...I hope he decides to stop by here first...It would make me happy to see him in it too...
LOL at Armaan listening 2 Abhi talkin 2 his inner voice!!! 😆😆 Armaan so sly and Abhi is so cute! 👍🏼
Atul's advice on how 2 ask her out!! 🤣 The best part is fall on ur knees and beg!!! 🤣🤣
And Abhi looks really interested and as if he's concentrating on Atul's every word!!! 🤣🤣
Niki: *smiling dreamily* He asked me out...
Abhi: *smug and extremely pleased* She said yes!
Awwwww... how cute they look... especially Abhi... completely lost in a dream!!! 😃
And Shubhankar.... 🤣 miss seeing him.. glad he can still b seen in ur series! 😃
Awww man! Y did this Patil have 2 ruin it??? 🤢🤢🤢 Altho i do much prefer ur Patil 2 the DMG 1!!! 🤢🤢
And AN argued! 😭 Can't wait for next part... hope AN make up in secret and keep it from the others who will think the hate each other! 😃
Awesome update.... all the caps matched perfectly.... 👏
Plz update quick!!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#96
Ivy!!!!
I am finally done reading this!
I and I have to tell you.............I love it! I wonder where you get these caps from! They fit so perfectly!
In the latest part, its so funny when Lovely tells Abhi to wear his UB shirt! Even I wouldnt mind him stopping by on his way. Lmao!
I really love the way you are taking this forward! It has everything. Romance, friendship(which I really miss!), silly fights, and everything which reminds me of season 1. basically, our lovely interns! lol
Pleaseeee continue soon! I really wanna read more and more of this!
Cheers,
Sakshi :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#97
Hey Ivy,
Loved your update. liked the way you changed the Patil scene and fitted it into your story. great imagination.
I can't wait to see what happens next. Nikki is going to be mad at armaan. Abhi is going to be even more mad. I dont' know how you will bring AN together without the gangs help, but please do it soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#98
Hey Ives.....loved the update!!!!🤣....Atul giving Modi advice....fall on ur knees n beg is hilarious!!!! n Patil....grrrrr.....good they fought though...will be fun 2 see them make up!!! Update fassssssssstttttt!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99
Nahi! Ivy, no misunderstandings! We get enough of that in the show!

I want more comedy on the parts of the interns. :) And more Atul. You write him so well!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome ivy...
I love how you made patil from that creepy guy to someone who bust out armaan's friends... lets see now how AN and friends gang deal with this.. update soon :)

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