~The Rishta Series-AN captions story~complete - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
Nice Nice....so the project SNM is really getting results...I loved Abhi flirting with Nikki....n they getting close....do update sooooooooon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72
awesome update Ivy..
You put those wonderful AN moments together so beautifully... The way someone keeps peeping or discussing how they planned it and worked was amazing.. it made it more beautiful... Cant wait to find out whats part C.. And the conclusion of this update Abhi thinking being watched.. perfect way to close the update...

Update next one sooon now.. and dont test our patience... :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
*gleeful shock (just like Atul's)* He's flirting with her! (And no, that's not twirling, Rahul 😆)

My favourite caps and captions from this part have to be the two in the car. Love how you changed it to her trying to get him to smile, and razzing about Sr. Lovely's flirting. Good stuff 😆

The twist here is that the interns are behind instrumenting every interaction between AN though, and it made me think of how whatever happened on the show could be explained that way too! 😆 Nicely done, Ives. The plugging out of lights and supply closet ones were especially genius (:

Last cap, LOL...ya think? 😆

Fantastic part! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
@Radz-thanks! Well I wasn't originally going to have the two try to fool around with the interns but that is an interesting idea...hmmm....

@hiyadagr-thanks!!!

@Fahi-thanks so much for rushing back when u found I updated! makes me feel special! I'm glad u enjoyed the whispering scene! I was thinking of the game telephone when I wrote it! Plan B was setting AN up so that they start falling for each other which as u can see was a success! And I loved the Abhi flirting with Niki part too! I usually search for most of the caps...when I need specific ones though that don't match with the scene I'm writing I go and make my own...but most r ones that I found...as for the last cap...honestly it wasn't meant as anything more than Abhi and Niki both being suspicious....they will find out but I don't know exactly how yet...I guess we'll see....

@Shanti-thanks so much!

@Honey-thanks! Glad u enjoyed it!

@Priyanka-thanks! I'm glad u enjoyed it so much! and I'm sure u'll like Plan C though this next part won't have such a happy ending....

@Fatima-Thanks so much! I'm glad u enjoyed it so much!!! And u mentioned most of my favorite parts too!!! And yup I'm glad u saw the last cap as just an observation of paranoia and not some deep hidden foreshadowing like everyone else! If I had known that people would start making guesses about what would happen b/c of that last cap I would have left it out!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
ROFL! all I'm going to say... errr... do? oh whatever! I'll say it here and do it physically if it satisfies you.

*after 30 seconds*

there! I rolled! and laughed. happy? lol.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
Hey Ivy!
Aw! 😳 😍 I love this! Before, I used to associate this clip with the words "Get out!" - but Ivy, you have created your own little story so well that I will think of this! 😊 Great job in turning a bitter-sweet memory into your own (flirtatious 😉) one! 😆


Guppo: I think they're flirting....
Wardboy: *turns to Umar Bhai and whispers* they're flirting...
Umar Bhai: Huh? They're firting???
Nurse: *turns to wardboy behind her* Errr? They're firting?
Wardboy: *puzzled whispers to patient behind him* They're hurting!
Patient: *confused* Hurling? No, no u must have misunderstood...*turns to Rahul* They're twirling!
Rahul: *blinks in confusion* Twirling?! What do u mean they're twirling?

This reminds me of cartoons like Scooby-Doo (YAY 😃) - just how they are arranged and the dialogue. Agree with Fahi - 😆 @ Chinese whispers


Niki: *slowly pulls away and looks up into Abhi's eyes*
Abhi: *softly* u okay?
Niki: *just as softly* yeah....

😳


Abhi: What's wrong, Niki? U've been fidgeting around all day.
Niki: Nothing...I'm just worried about the exams coming up...What if I don't pass? what if I have to repeat my internship?!
Abhi: *smiles reassuringly and slowly raises a hand to brush back Niki's hair and whispers* U'll pass...ur a better doctor then u realize...

This scene fits in really well. Abhi can see that Nikki is disturbed and Nikki is letting her guard down - she trusts Abhi enough to confide in him. I love how he instills this confidence in her.
😲 @ last line - hope complications don't arise! If they find out then they will be too stubborn to admit how they really feel / maybe they will not understand that they do like each other because they will think that their feelings have been manufactured.... Not to worry - they can't stay away from each other....
Looking forward to more....😊
Posted: 15 years ago
#77
lol ivy that was hilarious

Guppo:
I think they're flirting....
Wardboy: *turns to Umar Bhai and whispers* they're flirting...
Umar Bhai: Huh? They're firting???
Nurse: *turns to wardboy behind her* Errr? They're firting?
Wardboy: *puzzled whispers to patient behind him* They're hurting!
Patient: *confused* Hurling? No, no u must have misunderstood...*turns to Rahul* They're twirling!
Rahul: *blinks in confusion* Twirling?! What do u mean they're twirling?

lol this is like telephone,
the answer changes soo much lol


Abhi: I know this may sound odd but have u been feeling watched lately?

this one made me crack up
loved it
continue soon


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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
@Komzie-yes i m very happy now that u've physically fallen on the floor laughing!😉 makes me feel good that I've accomplished something that would put u there!!!!!

@Ditto-thanks so much!!! I always look forward to ur comments!! lolz I love scooby doo too!!! And at the last lines...hmm...thats an interesting idea and we'll see what i finally decide to do....

@Mishu-thanks so much!!! I'm glad u liked that scene...I was also thinking of the telephone game when i wrote it!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
Hi Ivy,
This is too good. You have fitted the scenes so well with the scenes. You can become a great cantoon wirter!!! Your imagination is amazing. You have created beautiful story around the existing pictures, which is completely different than what happened in the serial. Beautiful!!!
I love the way the gang is matchmaking andthrowing them together. It is great to see AN are flirting with each other, wish we could have this in the serial also.
Enjoyed thoroughly. please continue. It really is going to be interesting ......when they find out how they have been set up.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Ivy!! Totally loved it - it was hilarious! Brings back the old magic of AN. Thanks!! *Hugz* 😃

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