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Ditto100

@Ditto100

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Hey Ivy! 😊

Wow. I love how you showed the vulnerable and the fiery, passionate sides with both the characters. Looking forward to see how this will be resolved.

And btw - you have totally changed my opinion of Mr Patil! 😆

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shalini

@wow123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

hey ivy dear

plz update it soon.I'll be waiting................................

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Ivy

@Ivy9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

Thanks guys for all ur lovely comments!

I promise I'll update really soon!

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Khushboo_AN

@Khushboo_AN

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#114

Heyyy that's great work!!! I'm new here and I just read your FF...it ROCKS!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 And the mere idea of Abhi getting on his knees begging Nikki dor a date cracks me up!! 😆 😆 😆

But Patil came and spoiled the cute moment.... 😭

And the pics totally matched with the scenes!! Great work I must say! Do update soon!!!

And by the way, I know Abhi looks hot in whatever he wears (though I have doubts about that thing -can't really call it a shirt, actually- he was wearing on the date) but i personally think he sizzles in his white or his black shirt.....with a glimpse of that locket once in a while...

Ahhh...that white shirt drives me crazy....you know, that one which he wore when Nikki was dreaming of hugging him after the pool incident....the one that's in my avatar...ah yes....I drool over him when he wears that.....HOTTTTTT.....😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Update sooonnnnn......can't wait to see how AN make up!!! 😉

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Ivy

@Ivy9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

Thanks everyone so much for all ur lovely comments!!!
They mean a lot to me!
And don't worry the next part will be up in a few!

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Ivy

@Ivy9

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

~The Next Morning~

Abhi: *calmly, cooly stares Armaan down* A marriage contract? U want me to sign a marriage contract?

Armaan: Well of course! Niki is like my sister and now that u've started dating her I need to be sure that u'll take proper care for her. If you'll just sign here and here then we'll all be satisfied.
Abhi: *glares at Armaan* Ur "sister " is the last girl on Earth I'd ever marry.
Armaan: *shocked* What?!
Abhi: What did u guys think, that u could play me a fool and marry me off to that "girl" *wrinkles his nose in disguest* I'm afraid I have better taste then that, Dr. Armaan.
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Abhi: A word of advice for the future, Dr. Armaan. Its not wise to try to make a fool out of your boss. Not that I don't understand ur plight...having to marry off that that ridiculous, pesky "sister" of yours. The only thing she's got going for her are her looks but I'm afraid thats just not gonna cut it for me. I need a girl with more than just looks. Better luck elsewhere. *coldly* Now get back to work!
Armaan: *walks out in a shocked daze*

Armaan: *confused and upset* He tore the contract...then he-he insulted Niki!
Riddhima: He found out about our involvement, didn't he?
Anjali: Means, Niki must know too....
Atul: Umm...perhaps we should stay clear of Niki for a bit, in that case...

~Later~

Niki: *taps Armaan on the shoulder*
Armaan: *jumps startled* Ni-Niki!
Niki: *glares before growling softly* Start talking, now!

Niki: I can't believe u guys!
Riddhima: Niki-
Niki: How could u?!
Atul: Because-
Niki: And Riddhima! Rahul! Anjali! One of u three didn't think it a good idea to talk some sense into these others!
Rahul: Well, Armaan can be really persuasive-
Niki: And of all the people you chose from, why Modi?!
Anjali: Come now, Niki, he's not so bad-
Niki: Did he brainwash u into helping him chase after me, huh? No doubt, another one of his many ways to upset me!
Muskaan: No! Course not, Niki-
Niki: I thought u guys cared about me! I thought u were my friends, my family!
Armaan: We r ur family, Niki, which is why we did this.
Niki: *glares coldly at Armaan and the rest before storming away*

Armaan: *corners Niki in an empty ward and tries to to talk to her*
Niki: What, found someone else u want to force me with?
Armaan: *glares angrily* Enough! Niki, I did what I did because I love u! Ur as good as my sister, so my responsibility.
Niki: Well u have an excellent way of showing u love me by trying to pair me off with a no good, stubborn, idiot who u know I can't stand!
Armaan: Can't stand. Really, Niki? Then how come you seem to smile more whenever he's around, hmm? Why have u been blushing so much as of late? And who exactly are ur eyes always searching for whenever ur with all of us? Well Niki?
Niki: *stares cooly at Armaan before turning around and walking away* Those were nothing more than the irrational side products of ur misguided mission.

Armaan: Niki thinks that we played with her feelings and that anything she might have felt for Dr. Modi was directly caused by our meddling.
Rahul: Well that sucks...
Atul: But we didn't make her feel anything....we just pushed them together. They did everything else themselves, right?
Rahul: Yeah, well someone better explain that to Dr. Modi and Niki as well...
Armaan: *depressed* She's never going to forgive me.
Atul: She will....just give her a few days....

~A Couple Days Later~

Armaan: still mad at me?
Niki: *stiffens but refuses to reply*
Armaan: *pleadingly* Niki
Niki: *finishes with her patient and moves on to the next*

Armaan: *upset* She won't talk to me.
Riddhima: Give her some time, Armaan. She's got every right to be mad at all of us. We played with both her and Dr. Modi's emotions....we owe them both an apology.

Abhi: *Freezes upon noticing Niki in the hall*
Niki: *also freezes while staring into his eyes longingly*
Abhi: *stares back with just as much longing before realizing what he's doing*
Niki: *hurriedly walks away shoving the longing to the far corners of her mind*

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Riddhima: *sadly upon noticing the way the two stared at each other* Oh Niki....

Abhi: Sorry. So ur sorry. And where are the rest of the members of ur insane club? Aren't they also sorry? *rolls his eyes*
Riddhima: We didn't think u'd want to talk to all of us. We know what we did was wrong and we r all truly sorry, Dr. Modi. Honestly.
Abhi: *sighs in resignation* Fine, Dr. Riddhima. It doesn't even matter anymore. U interns and all ur insane games will continue no matter what I say anyways. I'll just deal with this as I've dealt with all ur other crazy antics....by moving on and forgetting about it. Please get back to work, Doctor.
Riddhima: Yes, Sir. But...
Abhi: What is it now, Dr. Riddhima?
Riddhima: A-about Niki...Dr. Modi-
Abhi: *holds up a hand stalling her* I don't want to talk about it.
Riddhima: But, Dr. Modi, please. At least talk to her.
Abhi: I said no, Dr. Riddhima! Unless its something professional I have nothing left to say to that ignorant girl. I could care less about her.
Riddhima: *gives Abhi a disbelieving look* If that's the case then why do ur eyes still follow her every movement?
Abhi: *turns his face refusing to answer*

Niki: *swallows back tears while remembering her moments with Abhi*

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Niki: U miss me too? *stares up at him with wide innocent eyes*
Abhi: *hesitates*...y-yes...I...I miss u too...*smiles teasingly before leaning over and tweaking her nose* the hospital is a bit too quiet without u there.

Abhi: *flirtatiously* Well now who said I didn't want u pouncing on me?
Niki: *blushes and gapes in amused shock at Abhi openly flirting with her*

Abhi: What's wrong, Niki? U've been fidgeting around all day.
Niki: Nothing...I'm just worried about the exams coming up...What if I don't pass? what if I have to repeat my internship?!
Abhi: *smiles reassuringly and slowly raises a hand to brush back Niki's hair and whispers* U'll pass...ur a better doctor then u realize...

Niki: Forget him Niki. There was never anything there...it was just a lie, a spell the others wove around u making u think there was something when there was nothing....*brushes away tears and forces herself to return to work*

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Muskaan: Niki, please stop ignoring us....Armaan especially has been taking ur anger really hard. Besides we all know that the one ur really upset with is Modi, so why r u taking ur anger out on us. Why don't u just go talk to him?
Niki: Muskaan I don't want to talk about it, especially not about him. Now please leave me alone.

Niki/Abhi: *stare at each other heartbrokenly as they pass in the halls*

Atul: See the way they're staring at each other, Muskaan...Niki's not just upset because of what we did...
Muskaan: Atul...what r we going to do? They really are in love with each other...

Atul: Dr. Modi, please. Just talk to her...she's depressed and moping around taking out her anger on Armaan and the rest of us by refusing to talk to us.
Abhi: Well it's hardly my concern what fights and arguements u and ur friends get into, Dr. Atul. And perhaps she's right to refuse to talk with all of u, though, after all that she's done it hardly matters...*sarcastically* Afterall her plan did fail. *starts walking away*
Atul: *sadly* She never knew about the plan, Dr. Modi.
Abhi: *pauses for a second in contemplation before shaking his head and continuing on*

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Atul: Alright guys, its up to us now. Armaan's too upset to do anything anymore and neither Niki nor Dr. Modi will talk with each other so we'll just have to force them to talk things through.
Anjali: We have to make them realize that they really are in love and that their feelings weren't forced by us.
Riddhima: We can't mess up this time.
Muskaan: I think we should just lock the two in a closet...

Rahul: I don't know guys....the last plan blew up in our faces....
Atul: Come on, Yaar. We're not going to do anything but make them see that its not our fault they fell in love and that they should stop moping around and simply confess to each other.
Anjali: We're just going to try to get them to talk....if we can just get them to sort things out then everything will get better. U've seen how depressed Niki and Dr. Modi look and how they're always sneaking glances at each other....And then maybe Niki will forgive all of us as well...I mean Armaan is close to bursting into tears any minute now....
Muskaan: Oy, Rahul, just say yes! It'll be easy. U grab Modi; I'll grab Niki. We'll toss them into that closet near the General Ward and lock the door. Simple!

Atul: Trust me it'll work!
Armaan: I don't know, champ...I"ve already messed up big time.
Rahul: Maybe we should just let them make up on their own....
Atul: They'll never talk to each other if we don't give them a small push...just one small push is all they need!

Muskaan: But my idea is brilliant! Why can't we use it?!
Atul: Because after this is all over we do want Niki to forgive us, u know! And she's not likely to do that if we toss her into a closet with Dr. Modi! Besides, don't worry Muskaan. *looks determined* My plan will work!

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Edited by Erutan99 - 15 years ago

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Sheena

@AbhiNikiLuver

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#117

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*EDIT*
okay, here goes:
amazing, fabulous, fantastic, brilliant, genius,outstanding, astounding, stupefying,incredible, marvelous, beautiful,stunning, wonderful, fascinating, unbelievable, marvellous, glorious, extraoridanary, great, astonishing, and havei said COMPLETELY FANTABULOUS???????
( and if u no any other gud ones, tell me and i'll add em to the list)
⭐️
I LUV YOU IVY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
even if you updated after like a month, it was...(see the above vocabulary list for details 😆 )

Update soon,
Sheena

Edited by AbhiNikiLuver - 15 years ago