Ives 🤗....its been long overdue.....I love this FF but I guess my comments are always the shortest....thogh sweetest😛😛.....so here I go....a big comment for one of my fav FF's but more so for the FF writer!!
I love this idea of a caption story....has a comic book feel to it and you know what, it reminds me of Archies!! Seriously not kidding....dunno if u read those or not ....those were my absolute favorites!!
Riverdale High is sanjeevani as all the characters seriously are like teenagers!!!😆😆😆
First and foremost ARMAAN is looking for a rishta for Nikki and Nikki the crazy one also intends 2 help....what an idea!!! Scary to think but is executing beautifully!!
Nikki asking Ridzi's Rishta is hilarious!!!🤣 and Armaan's flashback....that dude's expressions were always 100% ....and then Atul n Rahul ask her to do their rishta thing too....it was so beautifully done...I can totally imagine this happening!! especially Atul. The way he was talking to Shanky for Armi's Rishta was so much fun!!Then of course Nikki messes it up...Padma Aunty's hand n getting Rahul kicked out!!this was pure gold!! am telling u Ivy......the way u dealt with this was hilarious and the caps are excellent!!
Ok each n every Abhimaan scene is my fav....can't pick a single one coz these dudes r way 2 good!! n u have given the best dialouges to Armaan in this one!!!😛...I love the fact that there is no silly misunderstanding between the two inspite Armaan n Modi being a lil caustic to the other....they are the same person but one is a matured version!!!🤗
Dr. Shubhankar is funny.....damn the way he gulps so much!!!😆....I loved how u made all the characters observe AN and go...awwww they look so good together and stuff!!! these frds really are gr8 in setting them up....I love them!!!
Abhi: *whispers softly* U alright....
Niki: *just as softly* yeah....
*Slowly reluctantly the two pull apart and let go of each other*
This has got to be THE dialouges for me.....simple words but a wealth of emotions behind them....just one word...perfect!!👏
SMN....I loved this abbreviation!!! u shud rename the FF to that its that good!!
Sending Abhi over with the flowers n him stuttering.....OMG....that was so so funny and Nikki thinks hez cute.....girl...look again...hez a heart throb!!😃
Niki: Will u stay with me...so the monsters don't come out and get me...
Abhi: *chuckles in amusement* I promise u that there aren't any monsters here...except for this one thats lying on the couch...and she's too tired at the moment to scare anyone.
Here the emotions came out beautifully.....all Nikki's insecurities and Abhi's tenderness.....you did justice to the HOLI scene....I loved it!!👏👏
Ok NO PLAN and then the camp plan was beautifully executed!! Using the truth and dare sequence was genius....it's my fav game...but I seriously believe...just LIE!!!😆....whio knows anyways!! But Armaan knows that Nikki will always jump for a dare and he uses it perfectly!!! Sexy dance....OMG...Modi's mouth hung open!!😆
Abhi: *flirtatiously* Well now who said I didn't want u pouncing on me?
Niki: *blushes and gapes in amused shock at Abhi openly flirting with her*
Abhimanyu Modi is fully capable of saying this one!!!
The little flirting and the interns throwing them together was awesome....I loved each and every trick u came up with!! JUST a thot....have u ever set up any of ur frds....coz I think in ur group u will be a mastermind to many an idea!!!correct me if I am wrong!!😆😆
Everyone getting on Abhi's case to send them on a date!!! OMG...the whole hospital and these two are clueless....you know its actually so true...that ppl in love are blind...everyone else comes to know before they do that those 2 mahaan hastis are in love!! You have portrayed it beautifully!!
Atul explaing to Modi how to ask Nikki on a date...n beg if u hae to is priceless!!!
U used patil to stir up a hornet's nest....that man was always the bane of AN but we got the best scenes after that and I am sure we will here too!!
Sorry for the essay....all the above comments are not strewn together beautifully coz I wanted to talk about each part. The story is beautiful and each and every person is true to their character and I love the underlying tone of lightness!! I look forward to each and every update coz its so much fun...its like going on their journey of love......wonderful idea and even better execution!!
I bet she enjoyed this part the most :P
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