an AR experiment [DMG] - Page 6

Originally posted by: *Huma*

Aruuu.. I hope I can call u that. This was absolutely beautiful, I loved the opening lines. Those lines set the mood for the progress of the whole story. I have no idea how you do it, but the pain and anxiety is so well depicted, that one can't help but get drawn in to the story willingly or unwillingly. I read this on sat, I wanted to write on it then, but something held me back. I think coz this entry or moment seems like a day out of my book, well at least of my current status. lol.😆 The anxiety and getting so immersed within yourself and thoughts, that you completely ignore the surroundings..Search; a search for yourself, within yourself, or a search for the need of a certain someone in your life. doesnt everyone get to that point at some point in life? or may be we are two of a kind..There are so many interpretations of this enrty, and I absolutely loved that about it. One can envisage it any way they want; the feel of it depends on that individual. It is simply absorbing..hugs humzY😆 i hope i can call you that too

Can I say the dream and language analogy; absolutely brilliant. That was an ace of spades within the story. Does it really matter whether our search ends in finding the destination or not, as long as we keep trying.. i don't know to that answer..but yes does it matter..or does that search ever end? i dont know...because i think i'm still searching on..myself. the four lines were part of a poem i had writtn some time back and strangely, it makes sense even today.so ya its very personal at that level. and therefore the hug at the start- because you are the first one thats interpretted it that way and gets closest to the idea behind..

Btw, my comment might not make an ounce of sense to you, as its just me talking gibberish. But its just something I felt, might be totally opposite from your interpretation..then again I do tend to over analyse things..can't help it, been programmed that way. Hehe..reading your post, i'm thinking we may be programmed in the same way😆 loved reading your interpretation. keep them coming😊

Love
Humz

Originally posted by: spln

site... this one first, i don't have a reason... or i do, but its trivial! :)

two things: away from the maddening crowd reminded me of the obvious ernest hemingway, only slight change eh? have you read his works? i hvnt for the longest time, which means its too vague to recall. but suddenly these posts are leaving me feeling very happy..shakespear, hemingway..and i know there is mention of something else in your other post, do I feel super elevated😃

what language you dream in... i smiled so wide, and believe me *surprised mate* :P thats a task at this moment i haven't slept a wink in the past 41 hours... don't even ask whats keeping me up, (other than coffee of course) but i cant crash for another 7 hours i think... sigh... maybe 8...hope you got that much awaited sleep that day :)

anyways... so it made me smile, cause! i tell people all the time that my engin undergrad was alot more of everything except engin, beyond what was mandatory... one of the tasks was evening extra language classes.. my french teacher in the first year told me something i could never forget... u can learn a range of languages and even become adept with time, more importantly exercising the skill... but there is always, only one language u own... even if there are others where you may possible even excel beyond this one... its the language you think in... it uncanny how her statement returns to me in odd moments ever since, when i catch myself thinking in a language that isn't usual... i wonder if that changes her rule... but technically i believe, she was right :) this qs comes out of a personal experience, i was stumped when i was faced with this qs once- i had to think hard. and usually i wud have said the language i used growing up, but a few days prior to this happening, i had actually dreamt in a diff languge and that had surprised me. so may be your french teacher's rule doesnt apply in reality..but it was one of those random things plunked out of life and weaved into this one moment..

great piece, i enjoy reading the random freshness in these shots/parts/... whatever u name them! thanks nj

cheers,
nj

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the credit for this goes to nj! yes you.

thank you for helping me recover my sanity

your one qs on pablo's regarding armaan's reaction-had my delirious mind be a captive to a passing thought and i'm posting this at three in the morning.

but i shall sleep peacefully now.

:)

no pms on this tongiht atleast. 😛

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

reserved :D

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Aria! so the search ended here😳.

I must say that was a lovely read. You just took me a different land of realization... absolutely loved her answer!!

Originally posted by: spln

even stranger are those innocuous things we come up with- and how they conspire with the higher forces to bring out hidden truths..truths once spilled that change the course of our lives forever...😃 this one holds true at weird moments.😃


i know this was in context of the update, mostly... but i read too much into this line... and related it with even more aria :) i think, it goes down into one of those lines u recall long long after at a completely different moment, no occasion similar but u do... as i remembered my french teacher's statement yesterday in ur update :)

if we're better on the enigma of our calls, i shall tell u, when i think of this line next time in my life...and believe me, that wont be in a hurry! i dont think i got you entirely here.😕 being a lil more dramatic😲 err...your not thinking about part 2 are you?😆

guess a significant thinking part of my brain was in the simultaneous process of working this one line as i read the entire part... which was a pleasant read, without doubt, but i wish i could have paid greater heed to ur words, they usually dwell in beautiful coordination :) thank you for the credit. personally, i'm surprised this thing even made sense considering the time and frame of mind it was written in- but it certainily served its purpose in having the desired calming effect😊

cheers, and thanks for the unexpected credit, one qs indeed!! one qs indeed, isnt is strange how
these innocuous things we come up with- and how they conspire with the higher forces to bring out ...lol almost used it here thanks for commenting.

~nj