MISTAKE - AR [mini] - PART 01 PG15 - IMP Note PG19 - Page 15

Originally posted by: angelina_2005

hey nice intro.......its ok... continue whenevrer u r nt busy...tc

Originally posted by: LaLi17

i did my exam in english now fingers cross i hope will get good marks.. i want at least a B!!!!
well abhi toh wait karo.. i mean i cant just put it on ur tv na.. i need to grow up n will do itu can be the assistant director lolz.. or producer haha 😉.. wohoow i wish..
I am sure you going to get A in english... :)
Hello...Excuse me...I don't think so Bio student can't be making movies or shows after growing up.
Nah not assistant director..Must be Video Editor or something else. 😉 You wish but I WANT.

ok now wat r u planning.. plz bataona.. well lets wish i would be able to make this or any of my ff into a movie or a tv serial... aao wish karein lolz
Well i can't tell you what am planning here. But for my plans two most important things are first you complete the story very fast and to make KaSh work on it which not big problem but need a good production. I so want it on my TV screen. Aao wish karein...LOL Wish such things really happen in real. *sigh*

i meant the secret.. i have few ideas but havent figure out wat will be the reason..
*Banging my head on wall* Why on earth I joke with her who have no brain to understand a joke. I have got what you meant but my 'What' reaction was kind of a joke.


*baby voice* no no no... i will share it on the 100th episodes.. or sumthing
haha see i told u na.. dont worry not that far away... u will if not i'll give u one.. 😆
You said no to me..🥺....Before 100th episodes party cake...I will give you Launch party cake.
Aww so sweet of you...Am waiting...😉

aww thanks thats really sweet of u.. i thought it mite be cause its DKC n till now its not romantic either but dont worry it will.. yeh i try to do all the family biusness now i wont have space to do them later on as luv stories meet the space for the family members will be gone n focus only on AR, RM, and AN..
well i will now.. did u saw the pattern..? in the first epi it was the couple AR (main couple) with Anji n the next one gona be RM (second main couple) with atul who is anji's partner.. u get wat im trying to say...?
I said what is true and i felt. Nope not at all as i said every story have different concept and it's up to the writer how he will write in it's way and you doing great job as both of them different and at this point you will be proving your talent, I am sure you will. You have to write both of them in different way as the requirement but with your style touch and still maintaining the differences, not like people say oh she write all in same style or it is feel like reading your other one. And by your start I know you will do i mean to say. :)

I know and for now DKC requires focus on family members and C'mon i know DKC gonna be unlimited romantic one as when the love stories will start, I can say this by 100 pages special update. 😉

Listen don't compare your one FF with other one in aspect but just write with heart and people will love them. 😊

Oh so next part, I am going to see the encounter between RM, that's cool. Excited to know how they in this story. I got it what you mean. I am waiting to read the next part.

hey dont get naughty hun.. u'll have a army of Armaan's fans after u.. lolz
lol red for the hotness n blue for coolness it describes perfectly about armaan.. hot but cool dude..
i dono i mean like in DMG they didnt really said it so yeh.. lolz.. oh i see ur a tatoo girl.. (dotn ask me i dono wat im saying) RK means ranbir kapoor..? or.. WAT ur girl right lol..
so RIGHT! wish there is more n real boy like armaan who would fall for a bholy bhali girl (ME!!) like riddhima
Excuse me, I am not scared of anyone.
Yeah right ! Both Red and Blue describe his personality.
Yeah RK means Ranbir Kapoor. 😉
What do you mean ' WAT ur girl right' ? Of course I am a girl.
Oooooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhh...Someone wants a boy like Armaan fall in love with her. 😉 But on serious note I wish you will get a boy like Armaan in real who will fall in love with you deeply, purely and madly.

yeh thats wat i like just say it to the face.. n if ur good friends the other would always understand... i mean if it tellign abt a mistake n then when u hear the person saying sumthign good u should know s/he really meant it like i do cause ur straight forward attitude.. u can be my derved meter lolz.
shoo u go away i want sum1 like armaan to hold me n if u hold me where he will come to hold me.. shooo shoo shoo.. aaaahhhh seee now thats call friendship.. hehe n i would really faint then.. cant u send both then i will double faint... n dont let them go till i wake up.. seen them again at my bedsite i will faint again lolz..
I understand what you mean. LOL Deserved meter. 😆
Ooooh my my someone day dreaming about her Prince Charming. 😉 Oh if your one Armaan will come to hold you then i will make him hold you.
Hahahahaha...Double faint 😲 Do you know that will really cause a serious trouble but for you i will send them both to hold you on one condition that you won't get faint in real for double times. lol 😉
If i won't let them go till you wake up then i need to stop them for a lifetime as who you will get in sense when you see them together beside you.

yeh n if sum1 ask me WTH are u doing i'll say or i just got a hug frm a friend who is miles away.. lolz..
🤣...That will cool ! Can you try this in real ? But remember when you do that so a mental asylum must be near.

yeh u think so..? yeh there so amazing n just soo KASHIAN lol. hey i havent seen much of KaSh sbs segements cause im a late entry fan na.. do u have vids of it.. would love too see it if u dont mind sharing 😳.. yeh i know my english friends sumtimes give wired looks to me as it dosnet make reall meaning n some burst out laughing saying the same thing.. see im spreading KaShian illness... yeh i should do sum checking.. oh btw do u have or can find vids of KaSh scene is i tell u wat i want..? cause u been a HUGE kash fan i want sum scenes of them so i can make a vm for the sad/happy song of mistake..
Right ! Just so KaShian. 'if u dont mind sharing' Never use such words again. I would love to share them.
I will PM you all SBS segments YT links.
LOL....Great job girl spreading KaShness.
Yeah sure you just tell me, i will find you whatever you want. Feel free to PM me.

only like aao wish karein... yeh this a mini.. but in show we can put all my ffs together n make it lol.. n of course sumthign that make sense haha.. n if shona didnt wanna do it i dont mind playing ridz character.. haha or maybe the secound role.. but i soo wanna act too ok..? btw we r not seriouse right just fooling around..
Yeah right ! Oh ok...LOL I am not making an Ekta serial where i put a mixture of you all your FFs but we can make all the story.
Haha don't worry Shilpa won't say No at any cost. 😉 So sorry you can't play Ridz. 😛 Hmm well we will see then if we need any character which you can play then will ask you but how comes a Bio student in acting ?
Who said am not serious and fooling around ? I am damn serious. 😳

yay glad i capture that of them i know i just love KaSh times too all those nok joks really made me feel these luv stories have a possibility to be real for some1.. if u know wat i mean... for me AR means this luv at first sight didnt understand it they fight like kids n a seriouse love start.. its so realistic. i mean luv at first sight never happens but still happens without u knowing.. n u need to build up with all trust n etc which AR did step by step
Yeah ! Their nok jhoks were Classic. You so right. I agree with your words regarding AR story.

Why we both are so similar ? I mean what you said about Love at first sight, i have same opinion. As love at first sight can't be happening in real as at first sight it can be attraction by looks coz you can't love a person her/him good looks and if you do then that's not at all true love. Love happens only when you start knowing a person nature and you start liking it and then step by step you start loving that nature as you get to know more and more and then at point you start trusting the person when you know the person enough to trust, to believe.

good.. see logics n me is like armaan n riddhima lolz 😆 well hint is like if anji knows ridz y not armaan.. but y ridz dono abt armaan well u wait for that
LOL true...is this hint or a plan to make me more confuse ? Why why why ???

LOL.. well deal with it lol.. she is wearing white n thats it.. armaan's second fev yaar i told u that so u will be jumping to know wat will happen.. lol urgh y dont i have a magic typewriter.. i would have written 20 parts already then... lolz
Btw what Armaan going to wear ? Make him wear white as well but very little of red.
I wish you have magical typewriter then at least i must be able to read the whole story.

i will update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
Why i find different meaning of this 'soon' from my meaning of 'soon' ?

wow i cant believe this dont get so attached yaar this make me nervouse.. i fell like im going through a script writing for a film or a drama.. where ppl have lots of expectations.. btw do keep attached i like it...
I can't help it. Don't be nervous. Feel it that way, maybe it will become such thing in future. I do have lots of expectations but i know you will on them completely. LOLz

dont worry we will share him with i dono thousands fans(?).. lolz i went to this house for m architecturing.. it was heaven but sadly it was green n white.. but exactly like i wanted my ammy's bedroom to be like lols... its alrite we all know that only ridz who can beat armaan n that will never change its like the core imp thing in dmg only ridz been able to win against armaan u know why na.. cause his body goes weak when he sees her.. 😆
Not thousands fans..C'mon just you and me. 😉
Wow you have seen something like that.
Lol yeah she is the only one you win against him as he lost his focus when her hairs touch his face and when the roll on BB court and when he completely lost in her beauty.

i know i see it but just think this become a hit show n all n there is a forum for it n all i wonder u'll be like active 24/7 on it like ur currently on KaSh topics..
hey yaar why u wanna get ar ti fight soo quick yaar... bad girl bad girl.. let them stay in peace for few more days shall we..?
Definitely, I will have to promote the show and what else being on my mind except KaSh.
When they fight then they are in peace. They can't be at peace without eating each other, believe me. So update soon.

yeh thats right thats the girl i like.. sweet but hot... hot to armaan sweet to rest.. mayb hot to armaan because u know na.. not in hot angry way but hot in hot way lol.. i like mostly the fights betwent he couples more like bickering nok jokes... dont like when they get too lovey dovey lolz need to have a balance
Sweet and hot...Yeah i get it...Right !

yeh he just have a mind which works all the time like a taxi's car engine never stops..
yeh it wot be changed she'll look like a pari n enter as if she is the pari of armaan's life.. there is also a twist coming so beware...!
yeh i was think of sum lovey dovey but dono how it will goes like..
will try best to update VERY soon
LOL taxi car engine.
They both really look Angels in white. Twist 😲 So when you updating ? I am waiting !

thanks.. but yaar dont forget my other ffs ok..
no no no hug dosent have the same effect like pinching does lols.. aww poor u.. but ur lucky cause im not near u or i will really pich u cheeks.. i got told of by my mommy many time frm pinching her cheeks.. lolz see everyone want to pinch ur cheeks cause ur such a sweet heart...
Remember, i like all your FF in different ways as they different, get what i mean ? I can't forget any of your FF as i like them as much i do like it. Do i need to tell your FF list of those i am waiting of you to write them ? I remember all the concepts you have posted and waiting that one day you will write them as well.
Ok especially for you i did pinch my cheeks in real. LOL lucky me.

yep dont worry its this week n i will try to update soon..
i will try to be on time but wat is the time...? 😆 any time will do na...
Do i tell you time ? *Dangerous* 😡

i would luv to stick to one day or two n update it regulary.. i want mind abt the other work cause when i have a deadline i try to caught up with it but the thing is i dono how many ppl will read it n i dont want to waste my hard work if ppl dont reply or like the ff.. so i wait till i reach a certain page number itmsotly go in 10s then i update...
I understand what you mean and you should follow that but with limit of pages, do keep limit of days. And just write with heart, people will love it. Remember hard work never go waste. People will tell they love it, even you have a done with FF and many months will be passed. 😊

aww thanks but u already said that so dont need to yaar.. THANKS!!!!!!
I did ? Oops i thought i didn't and should told you.

Originally posted by: LaLi17

Thank u soo much aish thanks! ur welcome

aww glad u liked it.. well no im not writing it in flashback but if u want u can imagine it to be.. well i will be writing that scene again in future when the right place comes... so its ur choice ..
lol i guess everyone in that family is sweet lolz.. yeh she is been like a mother to her.. cause she cant remember her mom.. haha thanks ur not writing in flashback?..but then it seemed like that..bcuz in present she aldready has a kid and all right?..well okay ..

yeh she almost did.. she is not our bholy bhaly riddhima in dmg lolz.. hehe yep.. just imagine if she hit the car then he would have gone mental... lol yeah..thats nice..

yep see AR r like magnetics to each other u see lolz.. AR n no bickering..? NEVER lolz
thanks lol its all thanks to remix haha lol yeah

well ur right she deserves to everything she is not a kid anymore she is 21 yrs old.. but u'll have to wait to find out hmm yeah..

THANK U VERY MUCH! yep thats typical Armaan u know the naughty one haha ur welcome..lol i noe..i love that Armaan!

well is it good or bad u'll have to wait.. u mite not say it at the end of the story... ok ok no suspense alrte.. lolz hehe..yeah please!..n i think it will be good..😉

thanks will do try to update soon.. take care

Originally posted by: _Monu_

HI MY GREATEST FRIEND!!!....

1ST OFALL CONGRATZ 4 U BEING HERE 1 YEAR!!

VERY HAPPY 4 U!!

HOW R UR EXAMS?...EVERYTHING OK?

AND READ THIS FF!!

AWESOME PART!!

YAAR ARMAAN MAKHIJA...LOL!!

THIS CRAPPED ME!!

ITS A CLASSIC..LOL!!

WOW NICE TO SEE ARMI & ANJI

2GETHER LIKE BRO-SIS!!

REALLY NICE!!

LOVED IT!

SEE U SOOON

KEEP SMILING!!

LOVE UUU A LOTTT LIKE ALWAYS!!!!

Originally posted by: Robin_M

nice ff, continue soon!

Originally posted by: star_fan