MISTAKE - AR [mini] - PART 01 PG15 - IMP Note PG19

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M I S T A K E
:.. YOU NEVER KNOW WHEN YOU DO THE RIGHT THING OR WHEN YOU NOT..:


It's always a dream to find the true love. Love is a four letter word which means a lot than its length, it is something which can change a life forever, for good or for bad. Love is beautiful but at the same time it got another side. A side which can lead it way to the misunderstandings, a side that always steal one away from another. Some are fortunate to face these and still be together and some are unfortunate to get a partner who won't be with them. But every love story has an ending and only leaves behind the memories. The ending can be happy, wanting to always bring back those memories or sad, with a huge pain cause of that Mistake...

:..Characters..:

Armaan Mallik

Riddhima Gupta

Rahul Garewal

Muskaan Chadda

Atul Joshi

Anjali Gupta

Abhimanyu Modi

Nikita Malhotra

:..
Introduction..:

The bird flew across the sky thrashing against the light wind. The sound of their twitter was filling everywhere but also mixing with the populated pollution town. A girl was seating on the couch hugging her legs, flicking through the channel with no interest at all. She had one hand on her head as she held her forehead. Her eyes started to watering up as she just pressed the buttons on the remote control aimlessly, she was paying no attention but was lost in her own world staring into space she continues to press the buttons.

Her smooth milky skin was turned to a pale weak body. She let her free hand run quickly through her silk, straight long hair. Her almond eyes, which were compared to diamonds, which made many people to loose their sense now hiding from everyone. Scared and loneliness was clearly visible on her eyes. Tear drops on to her rosy cheeks which lost their glow. She slowly brought her feet down and stood up. Straighten the wrinkled sari which was hugging her beautiful tall body. The tears haven't disappeared but endlessly fall down

Boy - Riddhima

As soon as she heard the husky voice of the boy, her body react quickly, wiping away the tears and becoming the strong woman which she tries to fool everyone with

As her hair fly to the wind she turned around to find the person who she sees as the angel for her life standing in front of her, he had concern written all over his face. His grey eye has turned moisture with a hint of guilt hidden. He tried to bring up a smile on his face but it didn't reach much far

Boy - Riddhima he said again walking toward her until when... until when would you lie to yourself and the rest of the world? He questioned sternly. Embraces Riddhima look down unable to make eye contact Riddhima look at me dame it he shook her holding on to her arm Riddhima!! just because of you I have a meaning of my life... you and Chahat are the world to me... the promise I made few years ago..

Riddhima - RAHUL! She shouts furiously pulling away his hand which held her securely promise, promise, promise! Its all because of this bloody promise she shriek if you haven't made that promise to my dad then I wont be here would I!? Rahul tried to calm her down but she didn't stopped and cried her heart out, slowly dragging herself on to the ground why can't you just let me die?! She said choking on her own tears then I wont see this day.. when I try to suicide why did you stopped me!!

Rahul - Riddhima!! His arm rose to slap her but immediately stopped when he noticed the watery eyes looking back at him innocently. He falls on his knees next to Riddhima and hold her face in his hand just think about Chahat, that girl needs you Riddhima.. She needs her mother; you are the world to her... Would you just leave her in this cruel world? Answer me he asked gently as he wiped the tears away which were on her cheek

Girl (Kid) - Mama!!

They turned around to find a 7 year old girl dressed in white frock with matching headband standing in front of them holding onto a news paper which was crumpling under her small hands and flicking in the air to get Riddhima's attention

Riddhima immediately wiped the tears away while a huge smile appeared on Rahul's face which reached from one side to another. He held his arms wide; the girl at once took the advantage and ran toward him crashing on to a tight hug

Girl - Rahul Chachu!!

Riddhima - Chahat... tum itni subha suba she asked confusedly

Chahat - mama!! she showed the crumpled news paper mama yeh dekho Armaan uncle or Muskaan chachi ki engagement...

Riddhima instantly snatched the paper away from Chahat and looked at the front cover, trying to stop the flood of tears which were in an urged to burst out.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey friends, how you all doing. Well guess what I think I am on FanFic posting spree or something… I am getting so many ideas for concepts and I can't stop my self from posting them. So I really want to say very sorry for not continue my other FFs but I will try to take some time out from my busy schedule. But however I hope you liked the new concept idea. Because I always did the good side of love with a bit of drama (or maybe a lot loll) why not try something different, so here I chose the betrayal I don't know how the story will progress and will it be a real and good betrayal but we will see, I never let you down (I think) so this time I wont either hopefully..

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Ahh finally here, Sorry I know I am very late. The person who was acting like a kid for not being first one to comment on your previous ff thread and now when the person got the chance so now replying after 11 pages, Oh my ! This limit of being late, i was so busy and when at night i get so feel to tired for it. Even today i am more than twice time tired then whole week. :( I hope you haven't mind it.

Ok now let's get on main issue.


So what you type of comment you are expecting huh ?

Uff seriously girl, what a scary intro.

I like the title and intro part you have written regarding love and mistake is just amazing, Brilliant done.

Now tell me what's going on huh ? Thank God Rahul is Chachu but what's in the newspaper ? And why Riddhima was crying and saying all that ? Who daughter is the little girl ? So many questions and suspense and what not, Ms. Suspense Mind. Girl, you need to update this one on weekly so i can't take so much. I want to read it fully right now so can be in peace. [Uff Thanks GOD i get to remember to say this before posting "Kindly avoid to answer my chain of questions."]

But i wanna say that it is written greatly. The conversation between Rahul and Riddhima is written very very nicely and when Chahat came and tells what written in the newspaper. I am glad you opened such big suspense in preview part but holds another big one.

And wish you and your FF a great luck. Reach great height of success !


I want to tell you that i can't wait to read it next so I want an update soon, means very very very soon.
Will be waiting for the next part in coming days.


PS: How are you now ?
Edited by star_fan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Seems interesting.



Continue soon please!

Edited by reya. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Great intro!!
Continue soon!!
Please PM me when you continue!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hope you will like it...
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Originally posted by: reya.

Seems interesting.



Continue soon please!


hey reya thank u soo much!
lolwat a coincident well let me know when u post ur FF
thanks will try to...

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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Great intro!!

Continue soon!!
Please PM me when you continue!!


Hi Radz.. thank u soo much
will try to continue..
and yep sure if i have a pm list will surely let u know...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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you are on a roll girl :0 everday a new FF :D concept sounds great... as usual would like to know whats the deal for AN 😆
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LaLi definitely your right on you beeing on a FF spree! lols 😆 im getting the same feeling too! 😆

BUT

I am loving your energy!
this new concept is just awesome! 👏 👏👏

honestly i was a bit sad to read Rahul's name and not Armaan's before with Riddhima's but then when Chahat (the one on IF? 😃) came and she goes Armaan uncles and Muscaan aunties engagement..i just clicked back up! 😆....it really sounds interesting! 😃

i feel like we are living the KASH times in March 2007!
😃

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