MISTAKE - AR [mini] - PART 01 PG15 - IMP Note PG19 - Page 14

Originally posted by: wow123

thanx for pm lali.I m loving it.

Originally posted by: aish_punk

hey lali..nice part..n congo on completing 1 yr! :D

The bond Shashank and Ridz share was damn sweet..btw this was all flashback ryt?..m Gloria is damn sweet too..i think Ridz really likes her...n the b'day present was really nice..

Ridz drove so harshly..omg..i thot she wud cause an accident!..but then she almost did..n that to to Armaan's car!..lol..

they both were 1st impressed by each other..but then strtn fighting..typical AR! 😆

but their fights were funny and so were the names they called each other..🤣

i wonder what Shashank is hidin 4m Ridz..she deserves 2 noe soon i feel..

n AR were again impressed with each other n den later realized its the person they hate..loved their nok-jhok..n Armaan trying to make Ridz jealous..lol nice!

Anji-Armaan cute fyt was nice..but then Ridz noes Anji?..thats gud actually..

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-aish

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey dear,
The part was nice, I loved it.
Armaan and Ridhima's first meeting was awesome.
Hehe, Armaan's character is quite like the character Aman (SRK) from Kal Ho Na Ho. I am really liking him.
I am eager to know what happened after that.
Continue soon and thanks for the PM.

Luv u<333
Kashish

Originally posted by: star_fan

I need NO info. I know strange but i mean it. (My heart is saying to ask you to PM me all the info right now.) It's Ok, no need of sorry. I can understand.

Yeah KaShtelepathy..Our KaSh Connection.

Yeah ! Almost like everything.

I am sure not like a physico....Just cuteeeeeeeeeeee !

Ok then within one week you clear your traffic jam and write and then update.

Originally posted by: yashimalhotra

congrats lali for completing one year!!!
and thanx for updating....
it was really a good part
nice start
would love to read more
thanx for pm
love ya

Originally posted by: star_fan

Thanks ! Girl i am telling you that you going to get amazing marks in english exam. 👍🏼
I don't need to imagine coz i want it on my TV and know very well that such first episode going to hit the HIGHEST TRP and HIGHEST number of fans glue to the show and that's why I am planing something. *secret*

i did my exam in english now fingers cross i hope will get good marks.. i want at least a B!!!!
well abhi toh wait karo.. i mean i cant just put it on ur tv na.. i need to grow up n will do itu can be the assistant director lolz.. or producer haha 😉.. wohoow i wish..

ok now wat r u planning.. plz bataona.. well lets wish i would be able to make this or any of my ff into a movie or a tv serial... aao wish karein lolz

First you should not answering my any question and nor give any hint which you have done. It has bad affect on me as you aren't ready to update fast. 😒 Glad to know that you don't have problem with length of the comment.

yes boss i didnt just answered the question which u got confused abt.. haha so true must be bad naa lolz i would never have but only when i reply bak dono how to thank u thats it

Wow great done girl ! WHAT ? What you mean, repeat it ? 😲Call me if need any help.
i meant the secret.. i have few ideas but havent figure out wat will be the reason..

Haww you can't share the little piece of cake with me, ME ? I can't believe it.
Hopefully but you know what i forgot to mention that just few time before i posted this reply, i have got my own digital camera as a gift so looks alike such big gifts coming to me started so hopefully one day i will get a car as well.

*baby voice* no no no... i will share it on the 100th episodes.. or sumthing
haha see i told u na.. dont worry not that far away... u will if not i'll give u one.. 😆

Man, who trust your suspense full mind.
yeh i just got a really good scene n a suspense hehehe no no mwaahahaha 😆😆

Firstly i don't say delay in meeting in DKC is a mistake, sorry but i disagree with you becoz every story have it's own way. DKC is good it's own way and going in it's on way greatly.
Why you told me Rahul, Muskaan and Atul will enter in next part as you going to write it soon. :(

aww thanks thats really sweet of u.. i thought it mite be cause its DKC n till now its not romantic either but dont worry it will.. yeh i try to do all the family biusness now i wont have space to do them later on as luv stories meet the space for the family members will be gone n focus only on AR, RM, and AN..
well i will now.. did u saw the pattern..? in the first epi it was the couple AR (main couple) with Anji n the next one gona be RM (second main couple) with atul who is anji's partner.. u get wat im trying to say...?

You are most welcome yaar. Yeah you are now. Love you too and you are also so sweet.

awww ditto i have the same thing to say to u.. maybe ur bit extra sugery lolz

Yeah yeah of course my and mine only. I love blue colour lol. Well you just killed me with this red shirt guy with blue eyes. Oh ok i was thinking why to hide as you mentioned hide without reason. I love tattoos and this the reason for what i have fallen in love with Karan's arms due to tattoo a very long time back, years before DMG. I love his and RK sleeves style, even i used to copied it a lot, still now. lol I have shirt in which this style looks awesome. [Underlined] Hahaha ! Trinziee would love to read this. 😉 HOTNESS Personified.

hey dont get naughty hun.. u'll have a army of Armaan's fans after u.. lolz
lol red for the hotness n blue for coolness it describes perfectly about armaan.. hot but cool dude..
i dono i mean like in DMG they didnt really said it so yeh.. lolz.. oh i see ur a tatoo girl.. (dotn ask me i dono wat im saying) RK means ranbir kapoor..? or.. WAT ur girl right lol..
so RIGHT! wish there is more n real boy like armaan who would fall for a bholy bhali girl (ME!!) like riddhima

You welcome. Remember whatever i am saying and said is what according to me you truly deserved.
Don't worry, i am your friend so won't let you faint. Anyways i will send Karan ro Mayank to hold you from falling.

yeh thats wat i like just say it to the face.. n if ur good friends the other would always understand... i mean if it tellign abt a mistake n then when u hear the person saying sumthign good u should know s/he really meant it like i do cause ur straight forward attitude.. u can be my derved meter lolz.
shoo u go away i want sum1 like armaan to hold me n if u hold me where he will come to hold me.. shooo shoo shoo.. aaaahhhh seee now thats call friendship.. hehe n i would really faint then.. cant u send both then i will double faint... n dont let them go till i wake up.. seen them again at my bedsite i will faint again lolz..

Yeah....Nothing is weird when you deserve it and i can't do as i am far away from you so you have to do it on my behalf. 😉

yeh n if sum1 ask me WTH are u doing i'll say or i just got a hug frm a friend who is miles away.. lolz..

I say you should add some of original KaSh lines from DMG, ever you get few from SBS segments as I believe KaSh dialogues in DMG was amazing and unique, even mostly of us use some of them in real life, like Network problem and so. Nope that won't be like copying as it's KaSh FF and you putting their original lines.

yeh u think so..? yeh there so amazing n just soo KASHIAN lol. hey i havent seen much of KaSh sbs segements cause im a late entry fan na.. do u have vids of it.. would love too see it if u dont mind sharing 😳.. yeh i know my english friends sumtimes give wired looks to me as it dosnet make reall meaning n some burst out laughing saying the same thing.. see im spreading KaShian illness... yeh i should do sum checking.. oh btw do u have or can find vids of KaSh scene is i tell u wat i want..? cause u been a HUGE kash fan i want sum scenes of them so i can make a vm for the sad/happy song of mistake..

I wish but now i want it on my TV with KaSh anyhow and am thinking for ways. Well if i consider myself then i need long time but if you take this FF longer (in show can be make) and complete it fast then i can try for it.
only like aao wish karein... yeh this a mini.. but in show we can put all my ffs together n make it lol.. n of course sumthign that make sense haha.. n if shona didnt wanna do it i dont mind playing ridz character.. haha or maybe the secound role.. but i soo wanna act too ok..? btw we r not seriouse right just fooling around..

LOL love that about him....Well Typical Riddhima with Armaan in DMG during KaSh time was just like the one you have in your FF so i can imagine truly KaSh here. 😍 *Miss golden old days* But your AR scenes really remind me of them. I can even imagine their expressions in real.

yay glad i capture that of them i know i just love KaSh times too all those nok joks really made me feel these luv stories have a possibility to be real for some1.. if u know wat i mean... for me AR means this luv at first sight didnt understand it they fight like kids n a seriouse love start.. its so realistic. i mean luv at first sight never happens but still happens without u knowing.. n u need to build up with all trust n etc which AR did step by step

Hint means through Anjali he knows or how ? What you mean good guess but not quiet ?

yep through anji he knows abt her.. n by that i meant its a good thinking but its not EXACTLY like that

Nope, you didn't. Oh ok am waiting but won't keep me waiting for ages. Yeah right and logical lol. 😉
Why and how he KNOWS them so well ???

good.. see logics n me is like armaan n riddhima lolz 😆 well hint is like if anji knows ridz y not armaan.. but y ridz dono abt armaan well u wait for that

Yeah sure ! I want her to wear red. lol Why you told me she going to wear white ? Everything should be hidden from me till i don't that on the part. Now i can imagine *BANG* Dhan Te Nan...😉

LOL.. well deal with it lol.. she is wearing white n thats it.. armaan's second fev yaar i told u that so u will be jumping to know wat will happen.. lol urgh y dont i have a magic typewriter.. i would have written 20 parts already then... lolz

Yeah it worked greatly. I know and that's why i must need to appreciate it the most.
thank u hunny bunny my sweetcorn lol 🤣

Twins....Armaan delay baby...Hahahaha 🤣 You SHOULD without thinking. It will be hilarious.
just imagine armaan's face lol i will so do it...

Yeah right ! Arghh you need to update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
i will update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon

Girl, i can't wait. Nope i will be more happy with khataa pale. 😉 But please update soon.
wow i cant believe this dont get so attached yaar this make me nervouse.. i fell like im going through a script writing for a film or a drama.. where ppl have lots of expectations.. btw do keep attached i like it...

Yeah well suited. Definitely !
see i know everything lolz

I love the combination becoz of KaSh but imagining the such room would be amazing looking. Sweet and Sexy i love it most and going to chor it. 😉 Madam, he is sweet and sexy for everyone, not only for you.
Btw you aren't suppose to tell me that she going to win over him. *angry expressions*
dont worry we will share him with i dono thousands fans(?).. lolz i went to this house for m architecturing.. it was heaven but sadly it was green n white.. but exactly like i wanted my ammy's bedroom to be like lols... its alrite we all know that only ridz who can beat armaan n that will never change its like the core imp thing in dmg only ridz been able to win against armaan u know why na.. cause his body goes weak when he sees her.. 😆

Of course I am fida over this whole part, don't you see this from my comments ?
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo NO, you update quickly as i so wanna watch them eating each other. Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !
i know i see it but just think this become a hit show n all n there is a forum for it n all i wonder u'll be like active 24/7 on it like ur currently on KaSh topics..
hey yaar why u wanna get ar ti fight soo quick yaar... bad girl bad girl.. let them stay in peace for few more days shall we..?

You know you just picked the same Riddhima of starting days or you can say from KaSh times. She used to be friendly and sweet with everyone but fights with Armaan all the time for very reason or no reason. Yeah you did it girl.
yeh thats right thats the girl i like.. sweet but hot... hot to armaan sweet to rest.. mayb hot to armaan because u know na.. not in hot angry way but hot in hot way lol.. i like mostly the fights betwent he couples more like bickering nok jokes... dont like when they get too lovey dovey lolz need to have a balance

C'mon he is Armaan...He can NEVER let go of such chances. LOL
Now i know i know she will wear white in the party, right ? Don't change it now. Hmm interesting and enjoyable will be coming.
What you said some interaction before the party, right ? I am eagerly waiting to read. Now you HAVE TO UPDATE very soon. Please !

yeh he just have a mind which works all the time like a taxi's car engine never stops..
yeh it wot be changed she'll look like a pari n enter as if she is the pari of armaan's life.. there is also a twist coming so beware...!
yeh i was think of sum lovey dovey but dono how it will goes like..
will try best to update VERY soon

I am waiting, WAITINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG !

ok ok i know ur WAITING dont need to rub it in

For me it is the perfect and best one. Girl i warn you my expectation. You welcome overall. lol
Why people want me to pinch my cheeks as don't they know it hurts 😵. You know few days before on IF someone told me to pinch my cheeks and i told her that No, sorry i can't pinch my cheeks as i have tried that few hours before and that hurts. 😆😆 So no pinching cheeks but what you think about a hug ?

thanks.. but yaar dont forget my other ffs ok..
no no no hug dosent have the same effect like pinching does lols.. aww poor u.. but ur lucky cause im not near u or i will really pich u cheeks.. i got told of by my mommy many time frm pinching her cheeks.. lolz see everyone want to pinch ur cheeks cause ur such a sweet heart...

LOL..You have to do that in library. I have welcome you overall on above part. 😛
errrm yeh... in library fornt of everyone in school smiling like an idiot n hugging my self.. 😆
i love it when u say these stuff so funny n sweet 😃

Oh no i have to wait for one week now 😔. Aww i won't force as you are so busy. Ok i will be waiting but you have to be on time.
yep dont worry its this week n i will try to update soon..
i will try to be on time but wat is the time...? 😆 any time will do na...

I wanna ask can you update this FF weekly or 2 - 3 days up and down ?
i would luv to stick to one day or two n update it regulary.. i want mind abt the other work cause when i have a deadline i try to caught up with it but the thing is i dono how many ppl will read it n i dont want to waste my hard work if ppl dont reply or like the ff.. so i wait till i reach a certain page number itmsotly go in 10s then i update...

Before always i forget to mention that the FF siggy is just amazing. Love it !
aww thanks but u already said that so dont need to yaar.. THANKS!!!!!!

Originally posted by: kOmAl_luves_KSG

nice beginning! do continue soon! and thnkz for the pm!