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Posted: 15 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry for being much late.

Liked that part.😳 😳 😳
Raj Naina me obviously normal se jyada interest dikha raha hai n i think Aditi is right at her place whereas Prem maana nahi chahta hai is baat ko. Raj ka yu fir se milna Naina se aur us ko girte hue thaam lena all was so cute.
Lagta hai Raj ko Naina kaafi pasand aa rahi hai tabhi janab aaj kal bus us k baare me hi soch rahe hain. Lunch ka idea bhi kamaal tha, Aditi ne to dekhte hi itne question pooch liye i hope jitna kabhi nahi pooche rahe honge.
Ab dinner bhi Raj Naina k saath karne jaa raha hai obviously Aditi ka sochna kaafi had tak sahi jo tha na. Prem na maane to na sahi ye to hona hi hai tabhi to Naina bhi itne easily Raj k saath involve ho gayi hai.

Thanks for liking the part Mahak. Well, RN ka ek dusre me interest normal se kuch jyada hi hai, aur Rahi baat Aditi ki toh sawaal na kare wo reh hi nahi sakti. Ab dinner ek saath hua aur Aditi sahi saabit ho rahi hai aur Prem galat.
Loved your comments. Have updated the next part. Do chk it out.
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Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Guglu dear....

How r u?

Update was really awesome....mind blowing part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Is update main kitne saare mysteries hain yaar

its so nice to see alekh also in this fic ,abhi also there n kuch naye characters ka intro bhi hu hain but u didn't mentioned the names of the actors playing these characters ,sab se pehle mujhe ritika ke bare main jaana hain,kahin ye hamari naina ki competition dene ke chakkar main to nahin..first I liked her when she said that raj can take care of himself but the next moment i changed my opinion when ashank asked her that why r u so possesive about raj n is that u have fallen in love... ye ritika raj ko kaise jaanti hain n kya raj bhi isko jaantha hain...so much of confusion....phir bhi maine apne aap ko tasali di ki when guglu is there mujhe tense hone ki koi jaroorat nahi,i know u wont allow any one between raj n naina right
naina ne kya dekha aditi ke room main that she was so tensed n she is thinking that raj is in danger n she is also thinking that her doubts were not base less
raj n naina scene is so cute
alekh abhi ,ritika ,sneha ashank r here for some mission n and ye mission kya hain? n who is the chief?? ye chief mujhe kuch samjdhar lag raha hain kyunki he thought spying on raj is a sheer stupidity
why the gang want to keep watch on aditi ,prem n that stupid ashank want to keep watch on raj
When raj asked naina is she a crime reporter she didnt answered properly n she is thinking what more lies were in store for her...n what truth she want to know from raj , from the expressions she gave when she heard naveens name i think she know him,now raj also got a doubt on her whether she is a crime reporter or criminal
guglu jee hum sab par thoda taras kha n post the next part soon,n clear the confusions
ek baat aur for your kind info is baar bhi aap bahuttttttttttt late ud ki ,lekin tumne itna wonderful part post kiya ....isiliye i am not saying any thing but this time plz plz plz ud fast

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: guglu088

Bas kar rahi hun, par ye batao kya mai tumhari nahi hun???😭 😭 😭

Very bad Dhara!!! Aisa kaise keh sakti ho tum???



Arey yaar mere kehne ka woh matlab nahi tha....of course tum meri bhi ho....!!! But I was laughing so much on Mana's reply that I cudn't resist from writing ' Mana ki Guglu '...😉😉😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
U kn wat....I am very bz right now....having xams.....but seeing ur PM I cudnt stop myslef from starting to read....and when I started to read I juts cudnt stop....it is dammmmmmmmmm mysterious!!! Every1 is suspecting every1.....donno who is who?? Sab kehte hai nazar rakhna hoga....pata lagana hoga....arre yaar jaldi pata lagao....main yaha pagal ho jaungi!!!

Bas mujhe laga shayad Raj n Ritika r related....may be bro sis......or may be sumthing else....isse zyada wild guess main nahi kar payi....kya UD diya yaar Guglu.....fantastic!!! Loved it.....lekin mujhe jaldi se mysteries solved chahiye.........I mean I am being desperate yaar....hope this can make u understand how wonderful the part was n how even more wonderfully....u hav managed to put it up!!!

And that Raj Naina hand squeezing scene was all the more confusing for me!!! These all new entrants....and this stupid Ashank trying to spy on my beloved Raj.....gosh....so many happenings!! Then Naina talking to Aditi abt Prem....Naina joining brows regarding Navin....and Raj-Lalit....being so sweet frndly....and then Raj-Naina trying to stop their laughter.....ohh....see....main pagal ho rahi hu....plsjaldi se next part likhna shuru karo....aur jitni jaldi ho sake UD karo.....I'm really very much eager to read further....hehe.


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Posted: 15 years ago
#85

Hi !!!

Mind blowing Update !!!
Actually exams ke karan busy hoon...but I couldnt stop myself from reading...
Detail mein comment karna possible nahi, but bada hi zabardast Update tha...
mera toh dimaag ghum gaya! sab ek dusre ke peeche pade hai, ek dusre par nazar rakhna chahte hai...
Yeh Aditi ki kya gadbad hai, NAina ne kya padha?
Ritika Raj ki kaun hai?
Abhi, Aalekh, ashank exactly kaun hai?
Aur Raj, Prem aur Aditi exactly kaun hai?
Aur to aur Raj ab Naina par nazar rakhne ki soch raha hai!😲
Hey bhagwaan, isse pehle ki main bacha kucha dimaag kho du, jaldi mystery solve karo!😆
Update soon!😊
Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86

hey Guglu kya ud tha yaar...suspence aur romance ka perfect mixture...

kitne sare naye charachters ki entry ho gayi...koun koun play kar raha hai voh toh batayo...!!! do charc ko toh main pahchan gayi ek hai apna sona munda alekh aur dushra gunda Abhi...😆 😆 😆...par bakiyon ko bhi toh clear karo yaar...!!! aur ritika koun hai...pahle toh laga ki sayad Raj ki frnd hai aur us ki care karti hai...par us k posissiveness k bare me padh kar laga ki kahin yeh RN k bich kabab me haddi toh bann ne nahi aayi hai na...!!! phir maine apne 440 volt par Dimag ko garam kiya toh pata chala ki 'arre yeh toh Guglu ki fic hai...toh voh dil se kaam legi...Ekta k dimag se nahi...aur kabhi bhi Rn ko alag nahi karegi'...
by d way yeh Aditi k room me aisa kya dekha naina ne jo use laga ki raj k jaan ko khatara ho sakta hai...??? RN ka voh...hath pakdne ka scene...fab tha...
okkkkkkkkk...toh sabhi ek mission par hain...lekin yeh sayaana Chief koun hai...??? jo bhi hai sach me sayaana hai...!!! aur sabhi kyoun aditi aur prem par nazar rakh rahe hain aur Ashank...raj par...KYOUN....??? yaar baht confusion hai...jaldi clear karo...!!!
aur yeh naina kya chupa rahi hai yaar...naveen ka namm sunte hi us ka facial xpression jo bhi tha...use dekh kar dil me baht sare khayal aa rahe hain...phir bhi maine socha...kyoun apne ek laute dimag par pressure dalun...tum ho na...clear karne k liye sab kuch...!!!
aur haan thoda BZ thi in dino isiliye late comments kiya aur is baar dhamki bhi nahi de payi...!!! lekin mujh par bharosha bilkul bhi mat karna...main aage tumhe dhamki nahi dungi is ki koi guarantee nahi de sakti ...okkk...!!!
ab jaldi se cont karo.........
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
nice update..gr8 going .
it's getting really more interesting...waiting for next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazingggg.....!!!!!!!!! 👏


Loved the way the story is taking its form...!!!! ⭐️


Update soon....!!! Suspense ki aisi taisi ho jaati hai after a long gap...!!!!😉😉😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Guglu dear.... Hi Yogita!!!

How r u? M fine darling. How are you???

Update was really awesome....mind blowing part 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a lot dear.

Is update main kitne saare mysteries hain yaar Really!!! Mujhe toh pata hi nahi chala.😆

its so nice to see alekh also in this fic ,abhi also there n kuch naye characters ka intro bhi hu hain but u didn't mentioned the names of the actors playing these characters Don't worry, the character sketch will be coming in a couple of updates.
,sab se pehle mujhe ritika ke bare main jaana hain,kahin ye hamari naina ki competition dene ke chakkar main to nahin..first I liked her when she said that raj can take care of himself but the next moment i changed my opinion when ashank asked her that why r u so possesive about raj n is that u have fallen in love... ye ritika raj ko kaise jaanti hain n kya raj bhi isko jaantha hain...so much of confusion....phir bhi maine apne aap ko tasali di ki when guglu is there mujhe tense hone ki koi jaroorat nahi,i know u wont allow any one between raj n naina right Thanks for having this faith in me yogitha. Ab Ritika ke dimaag me kya chal raha hai ye to mujhe nahi pata par haan, mujhe nahi lagta ki Raj Naina ke alawa aur kisi ki taraf aankh uthakar bhi dekhega.
naina ne kya dekha aditi ke room main that she was so tensed n she is thinking that raj is in danger n she is also thinking that her doubts were not base less Ek do updates me wo bhi pata chal jayega.
raj n naina scene is so cute Thanks dear. Glad u found it to be cute.
alekh abhi ,ritika ,sneha ashank r here for some mission n and ye mission kya hain? n who is the chief?? ye chief mujhe kuch samjdhar lag raha hain kyunki he thought spying on raj is a sheer stupidity After all chief hai, samajhdar to hoga hi!!!😆
why the gang want to keep watch on aditi ,prem n that stupid ashank want to keep watch on raj Ashank is not stupid yaar. Wo toh sirf ek practical baat kar raha tha. Ritika toh over react kar gayi na.
When raj asked naina is she a crime reporter she didnt answered properly n she is thinking what more lies were in store for her...n what truth she want to know from raj , from the expressions she gave when she heard naveens name i think she know him,now raj also got a doubt on her whether she is a crime reporter or criminal Ab Raj ka dimag unpredictable hai, par Naina toh Naina hai, usse do kadam aage hi rahegi.😆 😆 😆
guglu jee hum sab par thoda taras kha n post the next part soon,n clear the confusions
ek baat aur for your kind info is baar bhi aap bahuttttttttttt late ud ki ,lekin tumne itna wonderful part post kiya ....isiliye i am not saying any thing but this time plz plz plz ud fast Kya karun Yogitha, ye update kab se taiyar tha, par mai thoda satisfied nahi thi,isliye edit karne ke chakkar me late ho gayi. Next ud jaldi hi karungi, dont worry.

Thanks for such lovely comments Yogitha. I really enjoyed reading them.

Love
Guglu


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

U kn wat....I am very bz right now....having xams.....but seeing ur PM I cudnt stop myslef from starting to read....and when I started to read I juts cudnt stop....it is dammmmmmmmmm mysterious!!! Every1 is suspecting every1.....donno who is who?? Sab kehte hai nazar rakhna hoga....pata lagana hoga....arre yaar jaldi pata lagao....main yaha pagal ho jaungi!!!

Arey arey sambhal khud ko Sumi. Teri fic ne mujhe pagal kar diya tha, tu toh sabko pagal banati hai, tu kaise pagal ho jayegi!!! 😆 😆 😆Thoda dhiraj rakh, jaldi hi saare raaz fash ho jayenge yaar.


Bas mujhe laga shayad Raj n Ritika r related....may be bro sis......or may be sumthing else....isse zyada wild guess main nahi kar payi....kya UD diya yaar Guglu.....fantastic!!! Loved it.....lekin mujhe jaldi se mysteries solved chahiye.........I mean I am being desperate yaar....hope this can make u understand how wonderful the part was n how even more wonderfully....u hav managed to put it up!!!

Maine kaha na mysteries jaldi hi solve ho jayengi. And thanks for the appreciation darling. I'm very happy that you liked it so much.

And that Raj Naina hand squeezing scene was all the more confusing for me!!!

It was nothing confusing dear. he simply did it to comfort her and set her mind at rest. Ab sabke saamne to Raj Naina ka hath nahi pakad sakta na. Aur phir saamne Aditi aur Prem bhi the.

These all new entrants....and this stupid Ashank trying to spy on my beloved Raj.....gosh....so many happenings!! Then Naina talking to Aditi abt Prem....Naina joining brows regarding Navin....and Raj-Lalit....being so sweet frndly....and then Raj-Naina trying to stop their laughter.....ohh....see....main pagal ho rahi hu....plsjaldi se next part likhna shuru karo....aur jitni jaldi ho sake UD karo.....I'm really very much eager to read further....hehe.

Relax Relax darling. Take a deep breath. it wil help you to control yourself. Dimag sambhal kar rakh apna, warna next part kuch bhi nahi samajh payegi.😆 😆 😆 I'll try to update as soon as possible.




thanks for commenting Sumi. Mujhe yakin nahi ho raha ki tu pagal ho gayi hai. Tune toh apni fic me sabko pagal kar diya tha. Anyways I'm glad ki tera dimag ghum gaya hai. Mere likhne ka kuch matlab nikla. Will let you know when I update the next time. Till then, take care.

Love
Guglu

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