Tujhpe Dil Qurbaan(RN fic) PT7/PG25 - Page 10

Originally posted by: manatated

Hi !!! Hi Mana...

Mind blowing Update !!! Thanks dear

Actually exams ke karan busy hoon...but I couldnt stop myself from reading...

Detail mein comment karna possible nahi, but bada hi zabardast Update tha...

mera toh dimaag ghum gaya! sab ek dusre ke peeche pade hai, ek dusre par nazar rakhna chahte hai... Thanks again. Mujhe yakin nahi aa raha ki ye update tumhe exam ke busy schedule me bhi nazar aaya.😆 😆 😆

Yeh Aditi ki kya gadbad hai, NAina ne kya padha?have some patience dear. Jaldi hi pata chal jayega.

Ritika Raj ki kaun hai?

Abhi, Aalekh, ashank exactly kaun hai?

Aur Raj, Prem aur Aditi exactly kaun hai?

Aur to aur Raj ab Naina par nazar rakhne ki soch raha hai!😲 Raj ka toh dimag hi ulta hai.😆 😆 😆

Hey bhagwaan, isse pehle ki main bacha kucha dimaag kho du, jaldi mystery solve karo!😆 Arey Arey dimag sambhalo doctor. Tum toh sab ka ilaz karti ho, tumne dimag kho diya to tumhara ilaz kaun karega???😉

Update soon!😊 Sure dear.

Originally posted by: vvdn

nice update..gr8 going .
it's getting really more interesting...waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Amazingggg.....!!!!!!!!! 👏


Loved the way the story is taking its form...!!!! ⭐️


Update soon....!!! Suspense ki aisi taisi ho jaati hai after a long gap...!!!!😉😉😉

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

hey Guglu kya ud tha yaar...suspence aur romance ka perfect mixture... Hello Priya!!! Thanks ki ye mixture thik tha, warna mujhe toh darr tha ki kahin kisi ek ka overdose na ho jaye.😆

kitne sare naye charachters ki entry ho gayi...koun koun play kar raha hai voh toh batayo...!!! do charc ko toh main pahchan gayi ek hai apna sona munda alekh aur dushra gunda Abhi...😆 😆 😆 Sorry to disappoint you par ye abhi wo abhi nahi hai. Mai uski shakal TDQ me dekhna bhi nahi chahti.Wo LRL me hai, TMS me hai kaafi hai....par bakiyon ko bhi toh clear karo yaar...!!! Jaldi hi kar dungi. Character sketch bas hone hi wala hai. Ek do updates aur lagenge. aur ritika koun hai...pahle toh laga ki sayad Raj ki frnd hai aur us ki care karti hai...par us k posissiveness k bare me padh kar laga ki kahin yeh RN k bich kabab me haddi toh bann ne nahi aayi hai na...!!! Interesting!!! Tumhe aisa lagta hai!!! Chalo dekhte hain ki kya hota hai.😆 phir maine apne 440 volt par Dimag ko garam kiya toh pata chala ki 'arre yeh toh Guglu ki fic hai...toh voh dil se kaam legi...Ekta k dimag se nahi...aur kabhi bhi Rn ko alag nahi karegi'...Arey arey 440 volt par dimag ko garam mat kar. Thoda shant reh aur mujhse jyada Naina par bharosa rakh. Agar uska mood hua toh wo kisi ko bhi Raj par kabja nahi karne degi. Aur agar uska mood nahi hua toh raj kahin bhi jaye usse koi fark nahi padega.

by d way yeh Aditi k room me aisa kya dekha naina ne jo use laga ki raj k jaan ko khatara ho sakta hai...??? RN ka voh...hath pakdne ka scene...fab tha...Naina ne kya dekha wo jaldi hi pata chal jayega. Tab tak apna guess work chalu rakh. And thanks for liking the hand squeezing scene. But my personal favourite was when she is held up in his arms.😆

okkkkkkkkk...toh sabhi ek mission par hain...lekin yeh sayaana Chief koun hai...??? jo bhi hai sach me sayaana hai...!!! aur sabhi kyoun aditi aur prem par nazar rakh rahe hain aur Ashank...raj par...KYOUN....??? yaar baht confusion hai...jaldi clear karo...!!! Prem aur aditi junior hai, toh jisko jo bhi pata karna hai wo unse hi pata chalega. Waise bhi Raj apni dekhbhaal khud kar sakta hai aur uss par nazar rakhi jaye toh usse pata chal jayega. Par inn dono ko nahi.😆

aur yeh naina kya chupa rahi hai yaar...naveen ka namm sunte hi us ka facial xpression jo bhi tha...use dekh kar dil me baht sare khayal aa rahe hain...phir bhi maine socha...kyoun apne ek laute dimag par pressure dalun...tum ho na...clear karne k liye sab kuch...!!! Navin ka naam sunkar Naina ne aisa chehra kyun banaya ye bhi jaldi hi bata dungi.😆

aur haan thoda BZ thi in dino isiliye late comments kiya aur is baar dhamki bhi nahi de payi...!!! lekin mujh par bharosha bilkul bhi mat karna...main aage tumhe dhamki nahi dungi is ki koi guarantee nahi de sakti ...okkk...!!! Chalo iss baar tumhari dhamkiyon ke bagair hi kaam chala liya maine. Waiting for your dhamkis.😆

ab jaldi se cont karo......... Jaldi hi karungi.

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very interesting.... 👏 Thanks Nisha!!!

You have created so many mysteries in one update. Have I??? Even I'm not aware of it.😆

Naina is shocked😲 to see that Neha is actually working against raj...but what is that naina has see on neha's computer. I guess you have got the name wrong, its Aditi here. But I'll be revealing in the next few updates about what did she see.

Prem and Raj are trying to find out the miss-doings that are being committed in their office...both of them are worried about the others safety😲. Well, it was very natural. Misdoings are a part of professional life.

Who are Alekh, Abhi Ritika, Sneha and Ashank and what is their mission. Who is their boss?

How does Ritika know raj so well😕.... Stay tuned to TDQ and you will know soon.

But in between all of this confusion and tension it was good to see that raj and naina undertand each other😊 I'm glad you liked it Nisha!!!

please update soon so that we can have the answers to all the interesting questions that you have raised.

please continue soon Don't worry. The next part is ready. It just needs a little bit of editing. I'll be doing it soon.

Originally posted by: esha143

i just finished reading this fic and i must say it's a really good one.a perfect mixture of suspense and romance always brings an exitement with it.i can just say,AWESOME.waiting eagerly 4 the next part.........

Originally posted by: pinkorblack

grt fic.....ud soon