Tujhpe Dil Qurbaan(RN fic) PT7/PG25 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Welcome back Guglu....!!! 😃 Thanks Dhara. Wakai me welcome hona chahiye mera.

So ab dono ke dil me kuch kuch hota hai...!!!!😳Yessss!!!! kuch kuch hota hai!!!😉

Aditi is sucha prankster...!!!! 😉

Why is Naina not liking Solanki...???😕 To know that, stay tuned to TDQ!!!😉

All RN scenes were cute...😳Thanks.

The last line is creating suspense....!!! Update soon.... ⭐️Sure dear.

Originally posted by: manatated

Hi guglu!!

Hi Mana!!!

bahot intezaar karwaya tumne! very very bad!

Ab agar aise gayab huyi naa??? toh deklena!!😡

Sorry darling. Ab ki baar pakka intezaar nahi karwaungi. Jaldi update kar dungi. Pakka wada.

UD was Superb !!

I liked every part of it!

Thanks!!!

But most importantly what i felt nice and different was the scene in Raj's room...U didnt make it awkward! And I liked it!👏
Thanks again. I never wanted it to be akward. In fact mai toh ye bhi nahi chahti thi ki Naina sharmaye.

So Naina is a crime reporter...hmmm..may be shez here for some objective other than what she is making obvious....

And may be Raj too is somehow not the one who he is showing...😉
Lets see what happens.😆

And the peak wasssssss.............19:00 hrs!!!

Great UD !!! 👏👏
Thanks.

Update soon!😊
Sure.

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

hi guglu'.

Hi Yogita!!!

how r u?

M fine dear. How are you?

its so nice to see this fic updated ....... n i am sorry for commenting late

No problem dear. Atleast tumne comment to kiya.

now coming to the update it's a lovely n sweet one''..raj raat bar naina ka dreams dektha raha and he woke up late'.good going...there r new entries in this part''navin is also there n it seems raj n naveen r good friends'..n they r very much concerned about each other'. why raj is feeling uneasy''i really don't want anything bad happens to him' aditi is a naughty girl'.jaise hi usne notice kiya naina n raj didn't turned up to breakfast'..pehle innocently she told navin about raj getting delayed'..itnahi nahin naina ko phone karke usko convince kiya to check on raj''ek bhi mouka nahi chodh rahi hain to bring raj n naina together

Mujhe to lagta hai ki Aditi tang khinchne ka mauka nahi chodti.

the towel scene is so sweet n cute'. naina is blushing so much n raj is enjoying her discomfort....

I'm glad you liked it. I had tried to make it a bit diferent.

naina is not feeling comfortable when she is with rajesh solanki'.i enjoyed the cute fight between prem n aditi about rajesh solanki'..prem is so jealous n he is asking her to stay away from lalit because he don't like him

Prem ko jalan ho rahi hai. Koi kya kare!!!

so naina is a crime reporter '..she is thinking a word or a phrase which some one had said was not right'.i think its about 19:00 hrs

Lets see ki kya hota hai.

the whole part is awesome n plz update soon
Thanks again dear.

Thanks for commenting Yogita.

Originally posted by: bharathi aram

i gezzz raj n nav n prem n aditi r army ppl??i had doubt since beginning...bt tat 19 hrs proved it!!

Originally posted by: vvdn

Nice fic....i haven't yet read it fully but plzzzzz continue sooon.

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Oh lovely....so Raj says its 19:00 hours....hehe. How cute....I was just abt to say....if Naina is a crime reporter Raj must be in Crime brunch or sumthing like that....hehe. Raj n Navin's convo was enough for me to think that way.....n then I also think both Raj n Naina r here for Mr. Solanki....but then I cant be so sure right?? Its ur fic...pata nahi kab kya kar jao....but am eagerly w8ing for the confirmation from ur side.

Oho!!! Confirmation. Par kya confirm karun? Sab kuch toh tumhi log bol rahe ho. Mai kya bolun. The only thing that I can say is that keep reading to know more.

And yes....I loved the scene in Raj's room....I'm glad u didnt make it look awkward or sumthing like that....in fact Naina was flushing n Raj was enjoying it cutely.....it was a very sweet scene....n thanks to Aditi for that.

Aditi has to be thanked. Warna RN ek saath nahi hote.😆 😉 😆

Pls continue soon dear. Sure Dear.