Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur) - Page 5

Sookie.... where is the update??😲

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Hi There Sookie

:D

I'm Sonia
: )

so i come across this FF and being a MN Fan i click on it... and you have me intrigued.

The theme you've chosen for this FF is different and new and fresh, your style of writing really did capture me in the first couple of paragraphs. The characters of Nupur in this FF is something i guess i can relate to.. loud on the outside, inside she's quiet and just wants to find her place in life.

It's a great start and can't wait til you update

(:

xSonia

Originally posted by: shinz

omg
it was beautifully written
different frm others and yet it went well with feeling of being a mayurian
loved it
plz do om me the next time u update

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

hey ya!..sorry again late ..I know...but can't help it. I m too busy these days.

Well about the part. Loved the fact that the Character sketch is somewhat similar to the original characters in MJHT. Enjoyed reading the first part. it's was very tecno-savy...I mean you really use internet wisely in your fics..huh!..first Revenge.... and now this-one. But I do enjoy it you know cauz that is the fruit I too can savour..I hope you get what I mean..if not?.. don't think much..I myself don't get it sometimes.😳

About the poems or verses I m not very good with them so I m almost untrained and fresher with them..so won't be able to say much about them.

Any ways Great part. continue soon.

Thanxx.

Originally posted by: little_dragon

hey sookie..

wonderful description of the character intro and the blogging was also very well scripted... totally portrays mayank n nupur..

i wud love readin te further parts and so please add me to ur PM list....

Originally posted by: hgrhr

Hey Sookie!

I don't think i've read any other FF of yours....since i think you write mostly for AR na...? Now i'm wondering why haven't i already read your other FFs...??😆😆
Hello!
Maybe you should try my other fics too! Most of them are oneshots and there are couple of series as well.

I read this was your first mayur FF....and I am so glad that you decided to write one...! Just reading the character sketch on the first page...i was instantly gripped into the story...!! You write brilliantly and with such details...that one cannot help but be drawn into the story...!!

Thanks

And i cannot keep away from Mayank and Nupur at all....so this was a huge treat to read.

The way you described them....was so accurate and perfect to the T...!

And interacting through blogging....really refereshing to read from the other FFs....!! And to add to that fantastic poetry....i loved reading how they expressed their feeling through a few small likes but so perfectly written those were....!!it just made me feel a bit goosebumpy....the feel of the story is like that....and i totally LOVE it...!!

Thanks so much for liking this. Poetry is something new for me, I am just experimenting here.

Nupur's all hard to understand....half extrovert and half lost in her own world....Mayank never allowing anyone to break in through his wall...I'm eager to see how you make them both start liking and understanding each other...!! I loved the way you wrote mayank....his is one interesting character...I just wait for his scenes on the show...and the way you showed him....i'm even more a fan of him...!!😳

i hope i didn't bore you with this comment...!

I'm as excited for reading this FF as I'm about the show right now....hehe....and that a LOT...!😆

I am glad you liked it. I am banking on my memory to remember right stuff and try to give in a fresh perspective.

Please do continue soon...!! and add me to the PM list..!

I will do that.

Sookie

Nidhi