Lapsus Linguae: Ch 7: Pg30: Rejoice (Mayur)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Hello Nij!

Thanks sooo much for dropping by. I especially asked you to visit this since your random verses as you lightly put it is sheer brilliance from my point of view. :-)

Well, each section of poetry in this story is associated with storyline itself and yes, I still haven't gotten a hang of it.

Writing is random and my excuse is that it reflects characters' themselves. Nice way to escape, no? :-)

But I take your feedback, its immensely useful and of course valuable.

Thanks so much again!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
interesting concept.....do pm wen u update pls.....!!

Hello there!

Thank you for dropping by. Will PM you when I update next.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: zoya_me
hey awesome start
plzzzzzz add me to your pm list

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Thanks very much for liking it. Will surely PM you.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Bronze.
hey just read the intro an part 1, i like the way its going... plz pm me when you update.

and unlike most of the replies,

I am a huge mayur fan.. In fact MJHT the only show i watch, and i watch it for mayur.. I find them very realistic and refreshing. am glad you are making an ff on them..

Thanks

Hey!
Thanks very much. I now know that you are a fan of this couple. I will PM you next time I update.
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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: simran1285

You're kidding I do the skipping with Mayur, Nupur is too obnoxious for me and Mayank is the ditto copy of my younger cousin everytime I see him I can't help but think of my brother😕

I will be reading this story solely on the basis of Emily Dickinson and plus I could always go back and change Mayur to AR...things that a "find/replace" tool can do!😉

P.S- will be back with my review once I am done reading

:-) Mayank here is Emily Dickinson quoting guy. There are odd references here and there but this series is not in the lines of "Infinity..." where a poem drives a chapter of the story.

Yeah yeah yeah...go do your find and replace!

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel
Sounds interesting!! Very different from all other FF's I've read so far and of course I myself haven't written anything like such. Too good, add me to your PM list. 😊

Love,
Kanky 🤗

Hey Kanky!

Thanks for like this. I will PM you next time I update which I guess is early weekend.

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Sonia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Hi There Sookie

I'm Sonia
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so i come across this FF and being a MN Fan i click on it... and you have me intrigued.

The theme you've chosen for this FF is different and new and fresh, your style of writing really did capture me in the first couple of paragraphs. The characters of Nupur in this FF is something i guess i can relate to.. loud on the outside, inside she's quiet and just wants to find her place in life.

It's a great start and can't wait til you update

xSonia

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shinz

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

omg
it was beautifully written
different frm others and yet it went well with feeling of being a mayurian
loved it
plz do om me the next time u update

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

hey ya!..sorry again late ..I know...but can't help it. I m too busy these days.

Well about the part. Loved the fact that the Character sketch is somewhat similar to the original characters in MJHT. Enjoyed reading the first part. it's was very tecno-savy...I mean you really use internet wisely in your fics..huh!..first Revenge.... and now this-one. But I do enjoy it you know cauz that is the fruit I too can savour..I hope you get what I mean..if not?.. don't think much..I myself don't get it sometimes.😳

About the poems or verses I m not very good with them so I m almost untrained and fresher with them..so won't be able to say much about them.

Any ways Great part. continue soon.

Thanxx.