KASU & KAJEN STORY.... the end...last prt - pg 21.

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hw u all are doin....................i hope everyone of u is fine n enjoying.................i m nyonica.....u all can call me noni.......nonu.........nyonica.............. whatever........šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
i m a very big fan of ksg.......kasu........kash............kasu n kash are my favourite couples bt i m a bit more biased towards kasu (bt only a bit otherwise i equally love n adore both couples..............)
at present as neither kasu r there nor are kash , so presently my fav couple is "ABHI-NIKKI "...... i m watching this show for ksg n thm...........
i m writing a story or a short fanfic regarding sukkus reentry in dmg.................though i m nt very good at it (in writing) bt still i m writing..........so plz guys forgive me for my grammatical errors and mistake...............
so do read my story friends n give ur comments on it................ur comments (be it positive or negative)................... will be appreciated alot............press the like button if u all liked my story
secondly................. the pics or the creation tht m using in my story............its credit does nt go to me bt to those who have made the creations or uploaded thm,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,i have just copy n pasted sum of the pics or creations in my story to give it a better look.........m sorry if such thing is nt allowed..............




as i promised i will post 8th part soon.................................


here is the index
part 1-7 == page 1
part 8 == page 4
PART 9 == PAGE 9
part 10 ==== page 11
part 11 === page 14
part 12 ===== page 19
part 13 ===== page 21
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART = 1

HERE WE GO........................
Introduction
arman, ridhima,(jenny), rahul, muskaan,atul,,anjali,,nikki......are interns in sanjeevani.....dr abhimanyu modi is the boss of sanjeevani....nikki is his girlfriend.....same is the case with rahul n muskaan....

The amnesia track which is presently going in is lets say over....armaan n ridhima both love each otheralot...i.e (KARAN N JENNY).......their engagement is donen their marriage is going to take place in coming months.................

nw imagine....

our old ridhimai.e. (SUKIRTI KANDPAL) has reentered DMG once again fr a cameo role of 4,5 months................she cant be the "RIDHIMA"....as jeeny is ridhima nw...................so nw sukirtis character name is "RIDHI"

After finishing hs work armaan is searching fr ridhima(jenny)...to spend sum quality time with her...obviously fr some romance....but .....OMG...OMG...he cant see her anywhere, as she is very busy in her work....n nowhere is to be seen....so he is looking fr her in each n every cornr of the hospital...........ALLLASS....he found her...he took a breadth of relief.......she is in general ward..attending her patients....he is going toward her very happily......whn
P........................L..............................A.............................M.....................................M.............................M...............

he gets collided with the girl coming from the other side................this collision results in armaan leaning towards ....n... holding tht girl with both his hands....from her back..........============OMG............OMG...........OMG.......the girl ws none other thn "RIDHI"(sukirti)

she is looking ultra gorgeous in her pink suit............2,3 strands of her hairs are covering her face........armaan was just continuously looking at her without even blinking his eyes......he ws completely lost in her..................as he ws seeing her his eyes became a bit moist........were filled with emotions....after some time realising...where they r..n everybody is watching thm...he broke their moment......bt he ws still looking at her only....he thought its just his imagination...or a dream....but oops......no it wsnt his imagination.......... bt a reality........a very big reality.............he kept on staring at her n ws still nt believing wht all he is seeing....thn

'"'.......armaan tum yahan ho....mai tumhei kab se dhoond rahi hoo....di ne bataya ki tum mujhe dhoond rahe the....kya hua"

(whn he turned around.................. he saw it was ridhima(jenny)calling her.............)

RIDHI(SUKKU) IS ON LEFT.........

....... ARMAAN(KARAN) IN MIDDLE

. .......... RIDHIMA(JENNY)ON RIGHT

after a while....she came there n took armaan with her to the locker room..........armaan before going.....once again glances at ridhi......n thn he ws gone with ridhima(jenny)

LOCKER ROOM

rma == armaaan kya hua ...tum mujh dhoond rahe the..................kuch kaam tha.................(a still thinking abt his meeting)

armaan tumhe pata hai...aj mai bahut khush hoo....pata nai kyun....bt m very happy today....................(she ws

continuously talking.....whn she looked armaan.....who ws sitting on bench like a statue).arman tum khush

nai ho kya......kuch mahino mei hamari shaadi hone walai hai .....(armaan still thinking)..........ARMAAN........

ARRMANNNN..................armi == huh....hmmn...nai ..nai....hmmn...mera matlab hai haan mai bahut khush hoo(stammering)

rma == arman, tumhe pata hai (whn trin...trinnn. ridhima pagers ring...and she after promising armaan to meet at cafe fr lunch is

gone......nw armi is all alone in locker room...........)

he ws still thinking about his meeting with (ridhi-sukku........) he wasnt believing wht he sw just nw....his heart ws saying...it ws she only.....whereas his brain was saying no it wasnt she....mightbe some other girl...bt nt she......he thought ..it couldnt be she....no....no........bt it ws ahe only whom he just saw n met .....bt hw could it be possible.....hw could she be here..................his eyes cant decive him.....he himself saw her........................while thinking about her...................tears rolled down frm his eyes.


whn thn all these flashback came to hiis mind...............
AS HE WS THINKING ABT THN N THOSE FLASHBACKS....HE GETS A BIT SUFFOCATED N DECIDES TO GO TO TERRACE FOR SOME FRESH AIR....................................


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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART = 2




As he ws thinking abt his moments with "RIDHI-(SUKKU)..................HE gets a bit suffocated n decides to go to terracs fr some fresh air...........................
as he was going to terrace fr some fresh air thn

B........................................A............................................M..................................m

he fr the second time meets "RIDHI"(SUKKU).............................who ws coming frm other side..................they both are standing in the middle of the corridor.........................face to face..............................n are continuously staring at each other ....whn once again.armans eyes get filled with tears....n were moist.....whereas "RIDHI"(SUKKU) gave him a smile..............a very sweet smile...........they both were looking at each other.........................completely lost in one another.....

ridhi is looking really beautiful...totally like a doll......her hairs were blowing.whn all of a sudden both of thm realised tht rose flower petals were falling on thm. nfact raining on them.....their eyes were set on each other only............




(anjali,rahul,muskaan,atul....frm corner)


anj = these flower petals were fr abhi nikki....................no............????????

atul = i wonder.where they are........n y armi is standing there.........

anj = n whos tht girl standing opposite armaan...?????????

muskan = abey rahul...kuttey kaminey...maine tujhe kaha tha na jaise hi abhimanyu or nikki aaye unpar ye flowwer petals girana sirf unpar..........aur dekh tune kya kia............saare plan ko chaupat kr dia................

rahul = haan..toh theek hai na.mujhe laga wohi hongeunke milne ka time tha........pr mujh kya pata tha beech mei arman aa jayega.tumne ishaara kiya...or maine flower petals gira diye......ab isme meri kya galti........

anj = we thought ki abhi nikki honge isliye jaldbaazi mei atul ne ishaara kr dia.......................

muski = bt wht armi doing over there...........n whos tht girl.......??????????

rahul =
bt one thing is sure guys....the girl is really beautiful..........

muski =
.......................wht did u say just nw???????????

rahul = oh.......i ws toh only sayin

.rma(jenny) = he y guys......(r cuts him................join the gang n was asking thn where is abhi n nikki....y arent they here???????? n wht arman is doin there....................they all were discussing.....................................................)

once again armaan realises where they are................................. n break their momemt.................
whn all gang come there whre armi n RIDHI(SUKKU) r standing........WHN)

rma = arey armaan tum yaha kya kr rahe ho?????..........aur nikki kaha hai (armaan was abt to answer whn..)

"RIDHI" = EXCUSEME,,,,,,,,,,,cn anyone of u plz tell me where is dr modis cabin..............(at this armaan saw her with confused look............................)

rma = ya..sure ....y nt.............(she gives her the direction n thn ridhi(sukku) ultimately goes there n enters abhis cabin..............armaan watching all this .................. ws very confused ,...n in confusion n frustration....he goes frm there....)

rma = ARMAANNN...........ARMAAN.... wait......armann (bt he ws gone............she muttering to herself)..........................m sure there is something which is really bothering him......first he was all lost in locker room n nw also he dint respond me,,,,,,,i need to ask him whats the matter..?????????/)

(whn suddenly there ws an call fr ridhima...emergency in ot. she had to go there)


ON TERRACE

armaan ws thinking abt his both meeting with ridhi at sanjeevani....n thn all these flashback came to his mind.............

remembering his moments with ridhi (sukku)
....he started crying...tears were rolling down his eyes....non stop.....he ws crying bitterly..very bitterly...he still wasnt ready to believe he actually met her.....n thn,,,,,,,,,

armi = .....................y......y................................y god y?????????....................y does this always happens to me.....

(he was crying his heart out whn all of a sudden his expression of extreme sadness changes to anguishness........................ extreme anguishness..........................n suddenly in his extreme anger he starts breaking things which were kept there.....................like braekin flower pots..........................furniture........................

he closes his eyes in frustration, sadness, anger, confusion.........................n thn fr a second he imagins ( "RIDHIS*SUKKUS) FACE N THN



B................................A..........................................M................................................M.....................................................


he smashed his hand on to the piece of mirror which ws kept there ...n blood starts coming frm his hand....................

he sits on his knees....n starts crying bitterly...................very bitterly......................he ws crying like hell..............................his pain ws clearly visible in his eyes..............................as he was sitting..........................he heard a voice............................someone ws coming on terrace....he quickly wipes his tears......



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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART = 3


after crying his heart out, armaan sat on his knees staring at sky, whn he hears some noise coming from stairs.....he realised someone is coming upstairs, he quickly wipe his tears))

''armaan....wht r u doin over her"""------(nikki making her entry)


a------------- o nikki ...................i was just sitiing


n------------- arman , ridhima is searching fr you in hospital n u r sittin over here...did u forget tht u promised her tht both of u would do lunch together in cafetaria....she is waitin fr u...come(nikki shouting from stairs only)


a---------------oh......................i ws just abt to go....(whn niki saw his bleeding hand...concerned nikki asks him)


n-------------wht happened armaan...r u alright


a--------------nothing


n--------------armaan(staring him)


a--------------arey yr, by mistake i lose mybalance n incidentally i smashed my hand to tht mirror piece


n---------------r u ok,,nw


a----------------m absolutely fine my best friend...dont worry yr


a--------------tell mewht u r doin here????u had a date with abhimanyu na(nikki blushin)


n-------------armaan(blushingly)


a---------------nikki(teasingly very cutely)


n--------------arey date toh tha pr abhi ka last moment pr kuch meeting nikal ayi,,,,koi "RIDHI" ke saath ( armaan again taken aback)


chalo ab chalein(thn they both went down.........................as whn both were walking towards cafe,, then again he saw a glimpse of 'ridhi"(sukku)in abhis cabin


CAFETERIA



R-----------where were u armaan???


a----------------- i told u na tht i ws going to terrace for some fresh air


as they were talking whole gang arrives there.......then ridhima saw his bandaged hand ----(actually nikki before coming to cafe bandaged his hand thinking of ridhimas worries)---- , ridhima quickly asked him wht was all tht to which arman replied in the same manner to ridhima,he replied to nikita..............all r having discussion)


atul---------------toh aj pucca we all r meeting at hillview(aa,rm,ridhima replied in yes...whn)


a----------------hey guys...u all go i dont fell like going


rahul---------------aerey yr tu kb se parties ke liye mana karna laga?????????????


atul--------------aur vaise b tu nai ayega toh mazaa nai ayega???????????


r-----------------arey armaan,,,,y u dont want to come...dont u want to hang out with us....is our company tht bad..(teasingly....armaan a bit angrily)


a-----------------i told u all na i dont want to come...cant u ll understand


(all were shocked to see armaan like tht)


a-----(realising)...look m sorry guys...i really dont wanna come.....ridhima plz understand na i m nt felling welll,,,,,a bit tired


r--------------should i give u some medicines


a-----------------(amilingly)no yr...i will b fine....i just need some rest///u all go n enjoy....tomorrow we will meet

(saying this armaan is gone.....ridhima abit concerned)-



AT NIGHT (ARMAANS HOUSE)



at night, armaan in his house thinking about his meeting with "ridhii"(sukku) in hospital.........................................n then he starting to have flashbacks of her, him,,, their love,,,their moments...their life.......


(FLASHBACK)



armaan and ridhi in their college

it ws the time whn both "arman" n "ridhi" were in college, in their 2nd year


armaan was all armaan "flirty", "naughty'', "childish", "haindsomest"' yet good at heart whereas "ridhi'' was all shy,, sweet like sugar, innocent, bt bold against armaan coz of his naughty behaviour


soon armaan fell in love with "ridhi". ...........becoz she was different from other girls........all the girls used to flat over him bt she never gave him tht attention....so his curiousity rose for her nd soon which turnde to his feeling n allas he fell in love with her


sooner ridhi also fell in love with him......whn she realised whn he used to b around her, her heart heartbeat gets very fas


finally one day armaan confessed his love for her n she reciprocated in the same maneer.


armaan loved her so much tht,,,,,he could even die for hr.....his emotions n feelings were as pure as ganges river/


they were a couple made in heaven....they were truly,,,,madly,,,,,passionatly,,,,,intesely...in love with each other.all was going nice btween them...


until flate played its dangerous game..................................



ON one sunny morning..........armaan was really happy.........getting ready to go to college for his biggest day..................it ws ridhis bday tht day...........n arman wanted to spend each n every hour, .,,,.....minute,,,,n even seconds with his lady love


he wanted to be with only ridhi tht day........making her day very special fr her...he had purchase a diamond ring fr her on which "AR" ws carved on it


he reached college n ws searching fr her whn on being told by some friends he went to see her ......

..

HE COULD NT BELIEVE WHT HE SAW................HIS HEART STARTED BEATING VERY FAST LIKE THT OF THE SPEED OF A JET PLANE...................HIS BRAIN WAS ACCEPTING BT HIS HEART WASNT WILLING TO ACCEPT..................CLOUDS OF THUNDER WERE HOUVERING OVER HIS HEAD..............


he thought it ws just cheap n disgusted hallucination of his bt.........o no .......it wasnt his imagination..............it was reality..............very harsh reality



he SAW HIS LADY LOVE,,,,HIS OWN GIRL,,,,HIS OWN SWEET,,,INNOCENT,,,,SWEETHEART.... HIS "RIDHII"

with some other person (lets say its "x") making love to each other..........his brain was accepting this harsh reality ,bt his heart wasnt................still keeping his heart n brain control he reached to thm n shouted-----

"RIDHIIIIIII"""

(whn she turned back........it ws armaan.....her heart came to his mouth.........she stammered )

RIDHI--------- 'ar....arm......armaaannnnnnnnnnn, whn did u came................."


ARMAAN---------------whn u were busy with him


(ARMAAN CAME CLOSE TO HER N CONFRONTED HER..........ANGRILY.......VERY ANGRILY...................HIS PAIN WAS CLEARLY VISIBLE IN HIS EYES...........................HE WAS TURNRED WHITE .................HE WAS COMPLETELY NUMB N SHOCKED)

(armaan comes to her n)


asked her----"""-wht was all tht......""


to which she replied----------"" it was nathin they were just talking with each other..................


armaan said ------------""she cant lie to him as he hinself saw both of them in such close proximity.........


(after sometime finally ridhi accepted tht it was she only with him)....


she asked--------""wht thte big deal in tht n y was he making a huge fuss over tht,,,,,,,,,,,,if he wants she can do it with him also infact alot more thtn tht,,...............""


,,(armaann disgusted with wht she said gave her a tight slap on her face...)


ridhi asked him angryily---------'''how dared he slapped her .......???????????


to which he replied--------------"""" tht if she could do all tht ............thn he also had the right to slap her on her face................................""

(,armaan in a state of shoc )


asked---------""was it a cheap joke ,....................................,his disgusted imagination ..........................or a harsh reality..................................""


to which ridhi replied-------------""it ws all reality...........................she was with him........................""


arman whn asked her ---------""y she did all tht to him ????????????"""


..she replied -------""tht it was because she was getting suffocated with his love ........................infact the truth was......................she never loved him..........................it wass only he who was deeply in love with her.........................she never ever loved him .........................she just had a amaall crush on him ..........................it was him who fell in love with her so madely n it was because of her crush tht she accepted his love........................n now her crush is also over for her....................n she nw hates him dont want to see his face also.""


she also replied-------"" his love....................feelings had bacame a nightmare for her....................whenevr she sees him she gets suffocated to the hell..................... n nw shw wants him to b out form her life forever.................she hates him


he asked her------------wht happened all of a sudden tht she has starting hating him....?????


to which ridhi replied-----"""""she wanted to tell him earlier bt couldnt tell him ............cz everytime he used to keep blabbering....ilu...ilu...ilu........so thts y she waited for sometime n nw as he saw himself with her new bay,,,,finally she is relieved


(armaan couldnt believe wht all he was haring from the girl whom he loved unconditionally................. madly................................armaan almost crying )


whn ridhi asked him -------""nt to cry........o...poor.......boy............""""


..armaan said ----------""he is nt crying coz of her bt because of the biggest mistake he commited by falling in love with such kind of girl..............................armaan said --------------""he never believed in love it was only coz of her y he fell in love n came to know the meaning of love ............................the love he could die for bt................................it was again her only coz of which his faith fas broken from love.................................""""""

"

to which she replied ----------""thank you """"""


......he said to her--------""" she should nt worry fr his tears................... tht as he would never cry fr such a girl who threw him out of her life in just a blink...........................he would never cry fr such a girl who never ever understood his love.........................for the girl who played with his emotions.............................


armaan asked her ---------------""to just leave him foerever n nw he never want to see her again in his life.......................he would go from this college..............this city ..........................so tht her memories never haunt him....................................


to which she replied ----------------""he doesnt required to do tht coz she herself is going grom this college to some other place with "x" as she too dont want to see armaan again ......................as she gets suffocated with his presence................................n she also hates him.................................


before going armaan says--------""it was ridhi n her love fr which he could die also n nw if there would be anyone whom he hate to the core n whom he would never wants to see again in his life is also her........................................


she also replied in thw sane way-------------""she too doesnt want to see him again


before going armaan thanked her fr whatever she had given him on her bday(pain..hatred,,,distrust fron lovr)...he looks deeply into her eyes n took out the ring which he bought fr her on her bday n threw it on her face


n said-----------------""he bought tht ring for her ....as her bday gift................. as a token of their love nw he doesnt want to giv tht ring from his own hands to her coz if he did tht thn he would fell frm his own eyes.........................


atlast after looking deep into her eyes n making2 minutes eye contact


armaan finally says ----------------"""""""I HATE YOU...........I HATE U............... I HATE YOU TO THE CORE.........................never ever return to my life AGAIN...................................... (saying this he was gone)



soon in front of ridhi---armaan went awy....slowly n slowly his figue faded as he was gone................ridhi with moist eyes picked up tht Ring n kissed tht ring



n muttered to herself--------------------"""fr the last time armaan had given her something on her bday tht she would never forget............................... n she also had given him something tht he would also rememner n never forget.................................


sayin this she sat on her knees cried bitterly................................ n very bittery......................... very very bitterly.......................whn x reached her................... she thankked him fr whatever he had done fr her)

n says he would always remain her best best friend.....................


whn confused x asked ridhi --------------------"""""y she did all tht to him............ to armaan??????"""""


n thn ridhi replied to him---------------- """""""coz...........................I REALLY LOVE HIM

I LOVE HIM VERY MUCH...........................ARMAAN IS MY LIFE N WILL ALWAYS

REMAIN FOREVER............................I LOVE HIM LOADS


the next day of her birthday only ridhi left the college.............n went from armans life fore ever,....in this way the love of arman n ridhi ended on her brithday on avery bitter note................




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PART = 4
whn she was gone...........thn armain remained heartbroken for months n thn he finally made his mind tht he would never fall in love again..........................he would never cry for such a girl who used him as a tissue paper n thn after using him flushed him out of her life................he would never cry or remain heartbroken fr tht girL.................who dint deserv him..................never................love is nothing bt the biggest mistake of ones life..........................

..he decided tht he would b the old armaan again .....................he would eradicate all her memories from his heart, who gave nothing to him except pain..................after sometime whn ridhi(sukku) went away, ridhis memory began to fade........and armaan became old armaan..................thn nikki came to their college..........he became best frns with her n after nikki left rahul jioind the college.............. n thn rest of the college was finished in........... flirting,......... dating ..........racing........Infact.......enjoying life


after finishing college in 2007.............. he joined sanjeevani as an intern.........nd as we all know tht there he fell again in love with our very own "ridhima"..........................2 years have been passed in sanjeevani n aeman- ridhima(jenny) engagement is also done..................nw armaan truly loves ridhima..........they both really love each other ALOT ..................they are both madly in love with each other....................


as armaan promised himself tht he would forget ridhi(sukku) n would never ever remember her in his life........... to some extent he remained fulfill to his promise.................he had totally forgotten ridhi(ridhi)................her memories had faded from his heart,,,, becoz he hated her to the core........................as nw ridhima is only in his heart.....his love...his everything........

bt

as we say "'promises are meant to be broken""

ao after whn he saw ridhi(SUKKU) at sanjeevani today,,.............. all his memories regarding her came to his mind instantly.........this showed tht still "RIDHI(SUKKU)" always remained in his heart.....might b in the small cornr,,,,,,,bt she remained in his heart...............as his worst dream...................biggest mistake.....................of his life


AT PRESENT(at night armaans house)


armaan was thinking abt the time he spent with ridhi(SUKKU) nd also his meeting with ridhi(SUKKU) at sanjeevani..................as he ws thinking OF her.............he starting sweating very badly............(whn extreme anger, pain, hatred came across his face n thn he shouts.......................)

armaan---------why u have come nw??? ? y???y ??????? why god y,,,,,,,,,,,,,she has come again..................i love ridhima...........i only love her...........only she is in my heart.......................there is no plce fr u (ridhi) in my heart ..............i just hope...................as i saw U today at sanjeevani.-----------...i just dont get to see u tomorrow............dont want to see u............................ther is no place fr u in my heart...............understood.....go away frm my life..........................go away...........

(AT LAST HE DECIDED, ND MADE HIS MIND THT HE WOULD NT AFFECT HIS PRESENT ND FUTURE COZ OF HIS PAST...............HE WOULD NT LET HIS PAST MEMORIES HAUNT HIS PRESENT N FUTURE..................AND NW HE WOULD NT AGAIN CRY FR THT GIRl.........................AS HE DID TODAY AT SANJEEVANI.............................WHO FLUSHED HIM OUT OF Her LIFE IN A BLINK........



NEXT DAY (SANJEEVANI)(locker room)

a------yesterday...................i behaved very bad with ridhima(jenny)....i really need to opologise her (thn ridhima came n armaan went to her n hugged her)

r--------------o hooooo, aaj toh janab ko bahut pyar aa raha hai.....kl toh theek se baat tk nai ki (ridhima teasingly..................armaan feeling very bad)

a---------------i m really very sorry ridhima....really very sorry....plz forgive me....i will never ever do this thing again.....plz...plz...plz...forgive me.

r-----------------its ok armaan,,i was just kidding

a------------------1st u tell me have u forgiven me??????????(a cuts her off)

r------------------ofcourse armaan...how can i b angry with u

a--------------------i really love u................love u very much

r-----------------i luv u 2 armaan

(they were hugging whn rest of the gang came .................teased both of thm ..................thn whn after the announcement was made all finally went straightaway fr their duties.)

AFTERNOON

armaan ws searching fr ridhima...whn sudden his eyes gt popped up seeing the scene.............he ws totally clueless abt wht is happening..............."RIDHI'(SUKIRTI) n "RIDHIMA"(JENNY) were talking to each other very sweetly........agitated armaan goes to call ridhima............

rma-------------hey...armaan where were u (asking armaan as he comes)

a-------------rma...............i wanna talk to u(trying to avoid ridhi)

rma--------------no,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ist of all meet her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, she is.................

a---------------i wanna talk to u rma..................come with me (a cuts her off)

ama----------------armaan,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,ist of all meet her.................she is............

RIDHI----------"RIDHI"................"RIDHI SHARMA".................. armaan dint want to look at her bt finally she caught his attention............................she ws looking very beautiful tht fr a moment................armaan eyes were set on her only...............they were looking at each other)

rma----------armaan reply toh karo............

arman------------------- hello i m ARMAAN ...... DR .ARMAAN MALIK......(RIDHI-SUKKU) takes her hand out to shake hands with armaan n says)

ridhi---------pleasure to meet u (he dint wanted to shake hands with her but being forcd by rma exchanged hello ........as soon as they both shook hands a very weird kind of sensational felling went down the spine of armaan ............he just nodded his head in his reply to her-------pleasure to meet u)

ridhi----remember, we met yesterday (he nodded his head in yes)

rma--------oh armaan i forgot to tell u she is dr modis.......

arman-----rma did u tell ridhi abt us (cuts her in bween)..............(ridhima puzzled) ok let me tell her myself...............i was sure u would forget.............hey ridhi (armaan giving very confident look) ....she is ridhima.............ridhima gupta......................

rma----she knew this armaan (cuts him)

arman-------let me complete ridhima.....ok......she is ridhima gupta.....and soon to be "mrs ridhima armaan malik" (hearing this ridhima blushes n arma (arman-ridhima) both look at each othr.............)

RIDHI---o many many congratulations to both of u

rma----thankyou very much

(whn trin ...trinnn...ridhima pagers ring n she goes away.....nw both ari (arman-ridhi) are standing together.......face to face.....arman turned other side ...n ws abt to go ...whn)
ridhi------hey armaan................kaise ho????????....pehchana mujhe..

armi-----tumse matlab....aur vaise tum hoti kaun ho mujhse yeh poochne waali

ridi-----well i was ur.....

armi------dnt u dare say nythin further (cuts her in between).

ridhi-----bt is this nt the truth armann ???????????????/

armi----to hell with ur truth (arman ws trying to go away whn)

ridhi-----toh yeh hai tumhari girlfriend..........oops...............imean..................tumhari honewali wife....(armi nt giving any reply......trying to go .....to avoid her.......whn she suddenly says) ....pr mujhse zaada sundar nai hai......(hearing this armi gets angry n thn)

armi----faaltoo bakwaas karne ki koi zaroorat nai hai....agar tum kuch aur boli na toh i swear mujhse bura koi nai hoga.....mai tumhari jaan le llonga....aur rma se dur raho samjhi........

ridhi----chalo is bahane touch toh karoge (armi disgusted with her answer)

armi------tum bilkul nai badli...tum wahi cheap ki cheap ho ho.....

ridi---chalo atleast mai tumhe yaad toh hoon........

armi-----yeh tumhari bahut bari misunderstanding hai...i never ever remembered u......i love ridhima....only her.....

ridhi---did u tell her abt us armi (cuts her)

armi-----shut up....just keep ur bloody mouth shut....n let me clear u this thing miss"RIDHI SHARMA" i love ridhima very much...if u tried to say anything bad to her or even make her cru...not just cru....bt even tried to make her a pinch sad thn i swear....mujhse boora koi nahi hoga (sayin this armaan went away frm there)

RIDHI------(muttering to herself).......u know what armaan??? ... i m really very happy fr you........nd very glad to see tht such beautiful n sweet girl like ridhima has come to ur life....i hope u both just keep loving each othar like this....n i will pray to gad...tht noone shall come in betwwn both of u......................bt at first i need to talk to abhimanyu..........

LOCKER ROOM


(armi in locker room thinking abt his meeting with ridhi(sukku).....n whn he sees his hand n wonders y he

felt like tht very weird........(sesational feeling)....whn "ridhi(sukku)" shook her hand with him............n thn

suddenly he realises tht some frangrance ws coming out of his hand.........he realised tht its the same

perfume fragrance which ridhi used to wear in college tht time also...............whn sudden taken aback......................)


ARMI--------y the hell i m even thinking like this........i hate u ......i hate u.......i hate u like anything.......dont u dare come near to me or ridhima.....otherwise.........(armaan muttering to homself.....) i really need to tell ridhima abt "ridhi(sukku)"' before she does.....coz m sure she would do some thing like tht......................

IN EVENING (AT CAFE)

(all interns, rm,,,aa,,,nikki...ridhima...armaan..were having leisure time....n were really enjoying .....armaan as usual...was sad (uski toh raaton ki neend he udd gayi thi) ....n thn suddenlu..ridhima informed the rest of the gang about ridhi(sukku).........

rma-------hey frns..........ridhi is really very nice girl.....she is very sweet n jovial..... u all should meet her.......(armi again angry n sad with wht ridhima said)

atul----------arey rma abt whom u r talking?????????

muski--------------abey dhakkan............remember the girl who came yesterday who was asking for modis cabin.......

atul-------arey...let me think.....let me think....ya.............

muski--------ab samaj mei aaya...

atul------only tht girl na on whom were rose petals were falling..................

muski---------ya remeber........armi ws also there......

.atul--------haa............they both were continuously staring each other.............(atul teasing ridhima.....winked at muski to tease ridhima)

muski---------ya,,,,truly armi n tht girl were staring each other (rma --jenny) gets a bit uncomfortable whn armi says....)

armi------arey...guys....bakwaas band karo naa..........

muski-----(still teasing)......actually i thouhght the girl ws looking at armi

atul--------even i feel so.....vaise b arman ke charm se kaun bach sakta hai....

rm---------stop it guys..............tum kaisi baat kr rahe ho.............

musk-------chiill ridhima......we were just kidding...................

atul----------------ya were pulling ur legs...............

rahul------------bt one thing is sure guys.....

all------- W...H...A...T.....?????????????

rahul----------the girl ws really very beautiful......(teasing muskaan)

muski--------abey kuttey kaminey.....ullu ke patthee.....jb dekho usi ki hi taarif karta rehta hai....itni pasand hai toh usi ke paas jaa na ....mere paas kya kr raha hai......(armaan a bit uncomfortable)

anjali--------vaise...nikii....how ws ur date with "abhi"

nikki-----------hey abhi mat kho..............abhi sirf mai keh sakti hoo.....uspe sirf mera copyright hai (blushingly)

rma-----------o ho......................(n then all teasing her asked her abt the date).......

nikki----------hey frnssss....chill.............date cancel ho gaya................last moment pr abhi ki meeting nikal aayi....rma ki new friend "RIDHI"(SUKKU) ke saath. (armi again gets angry hearing tht)

armi----------beware of tht girl nikki........mujhe vo kuch theek nai lagi (hearing this....rma gets reallu pissed of with armaan....n tells him...he shouldnt have said like tht as he barely knows her.............he should questioned abt her character n dignity...................armi realising tht again he made ridhima sad n angry opologises to her for whwtvev he said...............n finally rma agreed.............)

armi--------------(muttering to himself)............o god plz send riddhi(sukku) from my life,,,,just becoz of her....ridhima fighted with me..............i dont want to get hurt again coz of ridhi.......as i love ridhima veru much......................n once again i couldnt undergo with the pain of separation nd hurtness

ABHI'S CABIN

(ridhi ws in abhis cabin..............they were talking with each other................abhi told her abt his feelings for nikki n also told her tht ....he really loves nikki alot...........n couldnt bear to see nikki in tears.................infact...she is his..............life....................his soul...........................his love......................his every thing..............

ridhi hearing all this said to abhi tht she is really very happy fr him...............after realising something abhi said to ridhi )

abhi----------xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

ridhi------------xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

(this is their mute discussion.................................)

abhi--------------------really.is tht so..........???????????

ridhi---------------ya......................

abhi--------------how come xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

ridhi----------------xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx(their discussion)

(finally abhi couldnt believe this............................they both share a huggggg............at tht point........................armi comes to abhis cabin n sees thm both..........................)

armi------------m sorry........i should come after sometime...

abhi=------no armi......its ok...........plz have a seat....................

ridhi------------------ok............abhimanyu......bye......goodnight.....sd.....tc (abhi replied in the same way.................armi n ridhi...look at each other once again n thn she goes.....)

armi------------is everything alright???????????????

abhi---------------ya.......y so???????????????

armi------------i just wanna tell u tht plz never deceve nikita.............coz she loves u veru mush n wont be able to bear tht..................

abhi--------------i understand very well arman....wht u r tryin to say........n abt whom.....................

relax i love nikki n only nikki........................i and "ridhi(sukku)" are just friends..................

(aftersome talks....armi went from there)

abhi------------i wonder.....whn u will understand armi ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n how..........................bt i just hope...........u gt to know everything very soon........................i really hope so....................

AT NIGHT (ARMAANS HOUSE)

arman was trying to sleep whn he remembers abhi-ridhi........hug..............

armi-----------(muttering to himself)...y i m thinking abt thm.....i have full faith on abhi........................he would never do anything with nikki................

(bt armi wasnt understanding WHAT WAS REALLY BOTHERING HIM................................

1) ..................RIDHI(SUKKU) HUGGING ABHI

2) .................ABHI-RIDHI HUG ????????????????

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hey frns,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, here is the 5th part.............
enjoy..........
PART = 5

NEXT DAY (SANJEEVANI.....MORNING)


armaan reached sanjeevani early today so he was waiting for every body in the locker room..................as he ws waiting , he sees ridhima(jenny) coming only tht side...................he quickly hides somewhere...................as soon as she comes to the locker room ...............he hugs her from behind n whispers in her ear................... "I LOVE YOU" ............n thn after hugging her n giving her a kiss on her forehead.................. took her to the fire escape...............they both enjoy their romantic moment there.......................n after sometime ..........................


armaan asked ridhima ------------- ".............to give him a kiss............

to which she tells him -------- "..................to shut his eyes first................"

(as he shut his eyes............. ridhima (jenny ) secretly goes frm there....................n as she reached the door of fire escape....................she finally )

says armaann-----------"..............to open his eyes................."


(realising ridhima(jenny) is doing masti with him..........he follows her..............she is running in front n he is following her------------------------------song in the background---------------------------)


'""''' kaisa hai yeh khumar...........kaisa nasha...............

duniya lagey nai ...............naya samma.................

sapna hai mera........"TU HE ARMAAN."...............

........... saanso ne dhun chedi pucha ...............

............ mujhse bata yeh kaise......................

.......................DIIL MILL GAYEE.............................

........................DIIL MILL GAYEE.............................""

this song playing in the background.................... as he ws running behind her in the corridor....................as he ws following her thn................................


B.........................................A.................................................M.............................................M.........................................

(do i need to tell this again ??????????????????)


he gets collided once again with "RIDHI"(SUKIRTI).....................

who ws again coming from the other side to visit dr modi's cabin ...................as they both get collided once again with each other ............ .this results in armaan leaning towards n holding "RIDHI(sukku ) from waist with both his hands from falling................. she ws looking very beautiful in tht suit.................just as an angel.........some strands of her hair were across her face..........her hair were blowing..............armaan gets completely lost in her for a while...................he finds himself weakening for "RIDHI(sukku)"...................


they both were staring n looking at each other quite lovingly ...................... he himself dint knew y he always get melts seeing ridhi(sukku) everytime............their eyes were filled with emotions seeing each other ..........they fr a minute get completely lost in one another.........................song in the background.......................


"""""asmaani rang hoo.................pyar ki boond hoo.......

roshni ka ang hoo....................mai teri gunj ho............

tujhse he hai meri bandagi.......tujhse meri jaan hai.......

saaya tera mera ashra.........."TU MERA ARMAAN HAI".....

..................... LA LA LA........................yu zindagi........................

.................mera izhaar tu.........mera ikraar tu.......................

..............pyar he pyar tu...........tu zindagi hai.......................

.................. ta ra ra ra ta ri rai..........tu zindagi hai.................."""""""


ridhima was seeing all this from distant............ ...arman holding ridhi(sukku) in his arms............. n she was feeling very uncomfortable..................or we can say jealous...........remembering armaans words which he said previous day "yeh ladki mujhe theek nai lagi"......................she ws feeling very weird........


after their intense eyelock of some minutes (arman-ridhi)................. this time ridhi(sukku) break their moment realising where they are,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, wht they r doin,,,,,,,,,,,,,, n everybody watching thm..............

she turns around to go where she wanted to go (abhis cabin)...........................armaan ws feeling very hard in his heart whn


..........................B......................................A.......................................M...............................................M.....................................



suddenly ridhi gets a bit dizzy n finally faints........................ whn armi catches her in his arms once again....................



abhi was watching all this.....................thn a little smile comes on his face n

he says ------------------...............finally..........finally....................."......................(ridhima comes there running n says

rma === ................. ridhi..............ridhi...............wake up.....r u ok.. .(ridhi in armis arms..........rma(jenny) asks armi to bring ridhi(sukku) for her treatment in a ward ........finally abhi comes n says.....)


abhi = ...............ridhi is my friend............my responsibility.........my patient............i will treat her n no one else... (thn abhi alongwith ridhima-jenny,, armaan,,, ridhi-sukku........ goes to the special ward to treat her.....)

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after sometime abhi comes n tells armaan n ridhima(jenny)..............tht she is fine...............it was a mild diziness n tiredness due to which she fainted..................after sometime rest of the gang comes to meet her n see her.....................one by one all meet her..................n thn they all go...................finally armaan is left alone in the room...........................whn she questions him....???????


ridhi(sukku) =............... wht u r doing here ???????????.......is this nt ur feeling towards me..........which brought u here with me .................bt still................i dont bother a bit abt ur feelings..........coz i dont have any such feelings fr u............u know y??????.............. .....coz ..............i hate u.............. (armaan replies angrily)


armaan = i did nt wanted to see u or even wished to see u................it ws coz of ridhima(jenny) i came to see u............n there ws one thing more y i came................????????


ridhi(sukku) =..................... WHAT............................??????????????


ARMAAN =.................. fr some time (a day or two) i m going from sanjeevani for some official work


ridhi = .......thn y the hell u r telling me abt this .....go n tell this to ridhima(jenny)................. damn,,,,,i dont care a bit where u go (she cuts him....he replied angrily....)


armaan = i ws telling u coz................. i dont want or wish to see u again in sanjeevani whn i return back from work ..................so its better u stay away frm ridhima(jenny)....................n dont tell her anything abt our "haunted n detestable past"..........coz i will tell her the truth myself................


ridhi = .................ok..................let me do this much favour to u..................i wont tell anything to ridhima....(once again he says....)


arman == i dont want to see any tears in ridhimas(jenny) eyes...............n if after returning i came to know tht ridhima cried or even felt a pinch sad coz of u thn i swear...............


ridhi = i wont tell her anything .................( she cuts him in between)


after saying this armaan was going out............as he ws going out................he ws feeling very hard in his heart.................. like feeling nt to go frm there...............far from ridhi(sukku)..............he dint know y he ws feeling like tht .....bt still he ws feeling tht he shouldnt go frm there..........away from ridhi(sukku)................. as he reached the door he turned around to see her..........she also sees him..........they both saw each other..............n after making eye contact for few seconds...............armaan went frm there....................


ridhi (sukku) = (mutterng to herself).... i really wish tht armans wish comes true as soon as possible....he didnt get to see me as he returns.....(thinking abt arman going.....she thanked abhimanyu.....)



armaan has gone fr new bombay sanjeevani project


NEXT DAY( in morning)


all interns come to see n meet ridhi(sukku) all the interns along with ridhi (sukku) were talking n enjoying..................n were having fun...................

whn muski tells nikki---------------".............ridhi is such a nice,wonderful,sweet,innocent n jovial girl....."

to which ridhima listened n replied - ".......see i told u all .................. tht she is a lovely girl............" (all the interns take their leave after their announcement ws made except ridhima(jenny).......thn ridhima tells her....)


rma = i have found a wonderfful human being n a lovely friend in you.........(ridhi asked her...........)


ridhi(sukku) = .................rahul muskaan.,,.............,.atul anjali.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,abimanyu nikita,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,n u n armaan really love each other alot na................... (to which ridhima (jenny) nodded her head in yes...)


ridhi (sukirti) =................. u know wht ridhima....................this hospital doesnt look like a hospital.......????


ridhima(jenny) =.......................... thn wht it looks like..???????


ridhi (sukku) = it looks like a love hub or love park more..................(hearing this statement...both new friends giggle..........after taking some pause.................ridhima(jenny) ....asked her.....)


ridhima (jeny) = did u ever fell in love with anyone (ridhi-sukku... remained quite fr some time n thn says....)


ridhi(sukku) = no...i never fell in love with anyone..................as everyone is nt lucky to have this feeling................to cherish for long..................(hearing this ridz-jeny gets confused with wht she said....thn ridhi(sukku)says.....


ridhi(sukku) = both of u.................... arman n ridhima-jenny look great n wonderful with each other..........truly a couple made in heaven.........(these words of ridhi (sukku) made ridhima(jenny) really very happy n she blushes hearing this........)


ridhima(jenny) = ............... i cant believe tht such wonderful n sweet,,,,,,,, lovely girl like u never fell in love with anyone ...................(...hearing ridhi gets sad.....n ask her to change the topic.......)


AT NIGHT


Ridz ws doing her rounds whn instantly she notices tht ridhi is breathing very hard n is sweating like hell...................ridz quickly goes to abhimanyu n tells him about her condition.......................thn abhimanyu quickly goes to ridhi.................treats her....................gives all the medication needed..................after sometime ridz also comes there ....................after taking medicines ridhi(sukku) went to sleep.....................confused regarding her condition, ridz decides to ask modi abt tht.....................she ws going towards modis cabin...................whn on her way she meets nikki who in hurry told her tht she is going to meet modi (blushingly)....................ridz decides nt to disturb the love birds nw ................n she will ask abhi abt ridhi (sukku) next day......................


NEXT DAY (noon)


ridz comes to meet ridhi(sukku)..................... both had a little discussion over her health...............thn finally ridz goes fr her rounds.................after sometime................ridz goes to modis cabin...............as he had asked her to come.............ridhima goes inside modis cabin...................bt he wasnt there........................she finally decides to wait for him...................she sits on the chair n was waiting fr dr modi , whn she glanced at the file tht ws kept on the table........................out of boredom she decides to study/read the file..................................


P.................................L.................................A......................................M........................................M...............................





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hey friends....................i m done with my 5th part...................................
plz tell me wheethr u all liked it or nt............................?????????????????????
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PART = 6




NEXT DAY (noon)

Ridz comes to meet ridhi(SUKKU)........ both had a little discussion over her health................after meeting her, ridz goes fr her rounds........after sometime....ridz goes to modis cabin........as he had asked her to come......ridhima(JENNY) enters modis cabin.....bt he wasnt there..... so she decides to wait for him........she sits on the chair n was waiting fr dr modi ....... whn she glanced at the file tht ws kept on the table......out of boredom she decides to study/read the file............


P.................................L.................................A......................................M........................................M...............................


SHE COULDNT BELIEVE WHT SHE READ JUST NW......?????????????

bt hw could it be possible....dr modi was saying it was just tht......bt wht the hell is written on this file......to her utter shock.......drops of tears start flowing from her eyes......."

"...........it cant be possible...hw could it be......"---(she muttered to herself)..............ridz thought tht might be she has read sum other file ......but no........it was correct file only......the name was written on the file........


dr modi comes to the cabin


abhi === .....................its good u r here only....... as i wanted to tell u something..........(seeing ridz wattery eyes.......he tells her....)......ur wait is over my friend.......armaan is coming today........he will be here in the evening itself ..........nw u really dont need to cry ( as he was talking to her,,,,ridz in between show him the file...abhi very confused n very angry asked her......)................... wht the hell u r doing with this file .............???????............... (he quickly snatched the file from her...... n asked her to leave immediately out of sheer confusion .........ridz asked him......)

ridz (jenny) === ..............on tht day after checking ....... u told tht it ws just a mild n slight fever........bt wht the hell is written in this file............???????....... y did u tell lie to everyone of us.......nt only us bt also her.......(she ws accusing abhi........after taking a pause....she says....)........u have done really bad thing as doctor.........dr modi...........really bad........nt telling others the real problem bt showing the papers n telling lie of other problem ........ (she ws shouting at abhi..........)
abhi ===== (she was shouting at abhi whn finally abhi shouted back at her.....saying....).......i told lie to others....bt i dint lie to her......infact she knows the truth...... nt from nw but from along time back ....before u n even i get to know.......i hate saying this bt yes.......... yes........ i know...........

ridhi(suku) is suffering from "LEUKEMIA--BLOOD CANCER....."...n she is at her last stage..........n has barely 1-2 months of her life to live

very soon my friend......my buddy..... will leave me forever.......(saying this his eyes became moist) .......hearing this ridhima(jenny) cries.........she cries really very hardly.....as she had found a lovely friend in her.................bt ridhi(sukku) is suffering from cancer n is at last stage......... n very soon she is going to d..............i..............(she asked him.....)

ridhima (jenny) === ............if it ws so thn y u tell lie to us......coz it is nt the doctors obligation to tell lie of the disease of some patient to other doctors......atleast u could have tell about this to nikki , if u dint want to tell us.....me, arman,,,,di,,,,atul ............u could have tell to ur love nikki regarding this.........


abhi ==== ..........i did all this coz of ridhi(sukku)'s request........ she told me nt to tell abt her ailment to any one of u.......so i did wht my friend told me to do.......(after taking a pause.....) ......i couldnt tell u further thn this.. as i m bound by her swear........n promise nt to tell anything to anyone........


ridhima ===== ...................bt y ridhi(sukku) dont want anyone of us to know abt this thing.......as nw we all r her friends too.....me,armaan,nikki,all... n as doctors we all can help her n treat he....thn y ????????


abhi ===== (cuts her in bween) .....if u want the answers to all ur questions thn u should ask this frm ridhi (sukku) as i cant tell u anythin further thn tht...m bound by her promise..........


ridz (jenny) muttering to herself ..........''''''''''".......y she dint want anyone of us to know abt this truth.......... we have become so good friends thn y she........could it be possible.......... tht she dint want to hurt or disturb us by telling us the truth of her ailment......................or she dont want to discuss abt her ailment to us........bt thn y she told abhimanyu nt to tell us anything.........she even gave him her swear nt to tell anything........ y ridhi(sukku)...... y u dont want us to know.......... '''''""(muttering to herself n crying she thn she goes to ridhi (sukkus) cabin .............


there she saw tht ridhi(sukku) ws sleeping................


ridhima ===== (muttering to herself) ........hw beautiful she is looking while sleeping......totally an angel......y god does this to good people ......... ....y...??????.


(she enters her room n sat on the chair by side of her........ridz ws crying n couldnt believe tht it was all happening to her....suffering from cancer......n has just some more days to live.....as ..........ridhi (sukku) was sleeping...... her diary was kept over her.....she might fall asleep reading her diary......on seeing this......ridz tries to make her sleep properly ........put the blanket over her n tries to keep the diary on the table which was placed on side of her bed.....as she take out the diary from her hands softly to keep it on table......then


B..........................................A.................................................M...................................................M..................................


SOME photographs fell from the diary on to the floor .....ridz(jenny) bends down to pickup the photos to keep it in its place(in diary)....as she ws picking up the photos to keep in diary..... whn for a second she gets freeze seeing one of the photograph ......she gets another biggest n bitterest shock of her life.......she glanced at photographs...... they were the snaps of (..........armaan n sukku.......)......the snaps showing their (arman - sukku) close proximity.....their close moments.....their love....their naughtyness .............their everything ........ one by one she starts seeing the photographs......n with each passing photograph her eyes became moist .......... further moist n finally drops of tears start flowing frm her eyes...............

PICS.........WHICH SHE IS SEEING

....as she was seeing the snaps..................with her eyes wide opened.................thn all of a sudden she glanced at the diary............ with her wattery eyes which she kept on table..........the diary wasnt close.... ...bt infact it was open......in which on one page it ws written :-


"''''''''"...................I LOVE U ARMAAN..........U WERE MY LIFE........U R MY LIFE..........N U WILL ALWAYS MY

LIFE........I WILL REMAIN ONLY UR FOREVER..................U R MY LOVE ..............I REALLY LOVE U VERY
MUCH.........N WILL KEEP LOVING U........ ONLY U ........TILL THE LAST BREADTH OF MY LIFE............
THIS WAS THE EXTREME OR WE CAN SAY THE LIMIT.............ridz(jenny) after seeing photographs n reading all tht ....... quietly goes from there to fire escape........ without making ridhi(sukku) awake .......... she cries n cries............very hardly........she was crying nonstop..................she came to know abt three biggest truth of her life....................

1) armaan had a past............armaan n ridhi(sukku) both used to love each other .....they had an affair.....

2) ridhi(sukku) still loves armaan very much .......it is written in her diary.........

3) ridhi( sukku)........is suffering from blood cancer n barely has some more days of her life to live.......


........all these truths were so bitter tht ridhima(jenny) wasnt getting wht she should do n wht nt............she ws totally addle headed seeing tht.........she wasnt getting wht to believe n wht nt.......whom to believe or whm nt to believe............. her love her armaan never told her abt ridhi(sukku)...................n still after seeing ridhi(sukku) in hospital............ he didnt tell her anything abt thm (arman -ridhi(suku)............

SAME DAY (EVENING) (4:00 - 6:00 pm)


in fire escape, after crying her heart out.....ridz(jenny) finally decides to know wht is the truth......... after wiping her tears off......... she goes to ridhis(sukkus) room..........bt their she find ridhi(sukku) sleeping thn ultimately she decides to come after sometime....... thn she goes frm there to locker room..............ridz(jenny) was quietly sitting in the locker room...........whn armaan came from behind.....................n hugs her tight ......very tight........she instantly felt the touch of armaan........she reciprocated his touch by holdin him tight.......very tight ........thn armi says---

arman ====== ................o gosh...............i missed u so much basket...........so much...............as u were away frm me..................it was very difficult fr me to live...........i love u so much basket..............so much

(ridz-(jenny)....... ws also enjoyiing his moment with arman whn suddenly -----ridhis(sukku) disease. .......... arman--ridhis photographs........tht diary note ....... popped in her mind........n thn she looses her grip on arman ,........which was very well realised by armaan.........n thn she turned her face other way n asked armaan-----)


ridhima (jeny) =====...................armaan, is there anything which u r hiding from me..........is there anything which u wanted to tell me bt didnt tell me or might be couldnt tell me.....or is there any past of urs........which u still dint tell me about......?????????????????????????

(............ after hearing all that from ridhima(jenny) armaanthought tht ridhi (sukku) had definitely told ridhima(jenny) everything abt their past...........tht past which make him feel very ashamed,,,,,detestable, ,,,,,disgusted,,,,,,,,..... tht past which he thinks --- is the worst nightmare of his life or the biggest mistake of his life...........extreme anger comes across armaans face thinking about this.......ridz was crying n thn says..............)

ridima (jenny)===== stammering)...........a....r...m...a...a..n...armaan............ri...dhi..........rid...hi.......ri...dhi.........(she was facing the wall tht moment.........nt seeing armaan)

(she wanted to tell him abt ridhis(sukkus) ailment to armaan tht she is suffering from blood cancer.......... whn after a while she realised armaan wasnt there.......he had already gone from there ........ after hearing just "RIDHI"( sukku) from ridz mouth....... )

(armaan straightway went to where ridhi(sukku) was.........extreme anger had come across his face.......he was so angry tht all his anger was clearly palpable on his face.................................)

armaan ===== (muttered to himself) ---------""'''''''''''''"" tht he had already told nt only told but instead requested ridhi(sukku) nt to tell ridhima(jenny) anything abt their so called past...............coz he himself would tell ridhima(jenny) everything ............. n also he warned her nt to make ridhima(jenny) a pinch sad.............. bt still she told ridhima(jenny) everything............n nw today coz of her.................. ridhima(jenny) is crying.............n is very sad n depressed............this time he is nt going to forgive ridhi(sukku) at any cost.............bt instead he will teach her a lesson......... for whatever she has done to ridhima(jennyy)


armaan =====.................. wake up...............u................wake up..................ridhi...................u cant sleep in peace by disturbing my sleep n ruining my life...............i said ..........wake up ....otherwise............(ridhi gets up hearing his voice.........she gets a bit scared seeing armaan bursting in anger.......she had never seen arman like this before......nt even on their breakup day..........armaan comes to her n forcefully hold her from her arms n is moving her back n forth ...................shouting at her.....................very angrily................)


armaan =====...................... i wont forgive u this time..........earlier i dint say anything to u n went away frm ur life quietly.........bt this time i will show u who is "armaan malik"........i wont frgive u......................i wont let u go quietly..........n sleep peacefully........i commited biggest mistake of my life by falling in love with u............... i still regret........ y the heck i fell in love with u.......???..................i still regret.............. tht once i loved u...........u.............. a girl like u more thn my life...................bt u.................??????.......u dont deserve me............u cheap girl..........u know what..........ur memories haunt me like anything.........i loved u so unconditionally ........ bt wht u did to me ???????????? u flushed me out of ur life in a blink n never looked behind...................u moved on............... fr sometime after u went away............ i remained heart broken fr u ..........bt ultimately i decided y the heck i m ruining my life fr a girl like u................y i m sobbing for u.....u toh never ever loved me............. from tht day only i promised myself nt to remember u ....even for a second.......n i did....,,,,,.i never ever remembered u.....i had totally forgotten u................. i hate u ..........i just hate u like anything...........i moved o......bt nw wht the hell u r doin here??????........go back where u came from ............y u r upto my life............. i told u ..................even requested u before going nt to tell ridhima(jenny) anything..................becoz she wont be able to bear tht...............me myself wold tell her anything.....bt still u .......u....told her everything......its coz of u she is crying there.....................how dare u.....????????????? she is feeeling sad......................


(ridhi -- sukku was very confused y armi is confronting her like this,.................she dint tell the truth abt thm to ridhima or anyone thn y....................)


arman === (in extreme anger).................u r so cheap..................u have no character......u r a characterless girl.........u r a big spot on girls................on womanhood.............u know wht ....................if i really want something from god thn wht i will wish...............??? ????????? (ridhii is listening to his each n every word .............. her eyes are all wet, moist bt still controlling herself nt to cry in front of armaan................)


arman ====== ..................i will really wish tht god plz take ur life back ......... take u back...........make u die.............. yes make u die.................give u the death as soon as possible................or punish u ..............n tht too so badly tht other girls take lesson from u so tht they can never think of deceiving other people.................or make others life hell fr their fun ............

(this ws extreme........atlast ridhi(sukku) couldnt control anymore n couldnt bear anymore ........... hearing armaans such affronting words..................drops of tear rolling down from her eyes)

armaan ===== ..................stop it......................just stop this nonsense...................stop ur crocodile tears.......... grls like u make others cry ..............they dont cry themselves coz they dont have any selfrespect or any heart ............... u dont have tht dignity or shame tht u could also cry.................so its better just stop it.......just stop this drama of urs...................i told u tht i love ridhima(jenny) so much love tht i cant see her a bit sad............bt there she is crying just becoz of u .............i love her so much tht i can even take the life of urs fr her............ bt u know wht..........i dont want to...............dont want to malign my hands with ur bad blood..................or dirty blood..................
(ridhii was crying very hardly n finally she says..................)

ridhi (sukku) =.............armaan............. i dint tell anything to ridhima(jenny)................armaan...............believe me i dint tell her anything........................plz believe me why i would tell her .................(armaan thinking tht first telling ridz(jenny) all n everything ..........n nw she is telling lie................one after the another...................ridhi was trying to make him understand tht she dint tell anything to ridhima(jenny) thn


B............................................A..............................................M.......................................................M....................................


(armaan gave a tight slap on her face.....................n says...........)


arman ===== ...................u cheap girl if u have some ...............not some................bt a pinch of character also ...............then just go away frm my life .................n just die.....................this would make other people happy.................if nt others thn it would atleast make me happy ............. i dont want to see u ......ur face torture me like anything.........................just go frm here.............today only.................otherwise........................


(saying all tht armaan went from there in anger....................smashed the door ......... "BAMMMMM' .......................ridhi(sukku) thinking wht armaan all said to her..............started crying.......she ws crying bitterly..........very bitterly.............................very very bitterly......................)

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RIDHI (SUKKU) == (saying to herself n crying,,,,,,) ....................very soon armaan ...............very soon i will be out frm ur life forever...............very soon..........................n thn u will nt have to suffer becoz of me...................ur wish will soon come true....................bt plz bear me just fr some time ....just fr sometime................................... i love u very much armaan................very much....................... i really wish god make everywish of ur true............ tht god plz make ur wish true as soon as possible.......................plz take my life god.............plz early as possible..................... bt u know what armaan .....................wherever i would be i will always pray fr ur happines..........fr ur ridhima (jenny)...................thht none shall come in between both of u..........................she was crying.....crying..........crying...........crying.....................crying.....................crying........

all this time..........ridhima was seeing this..............their confrontation from a window..........ridhima couldnt belive wht she all saw n heard frm both-..............-arman n ridhi (sukku)...............ridhi(sukku) who loved armaan so much.....................n still loves her.....................is on her death bed bt still hearing such affronting words from her lover...............who wishes of her death..................

she aws thinking all tht n was goes to locker room ............................in l.c room she ws sitting quietly thinking whtever happened just nw...................whn armaan acme from behind put his hand on her shoulder............n says..................

armaan ==== .......................i want to tell u something ridhima(jenny)...................

ridhima(jenny) ======= ..............abt ridhi(sukku) ............ na.................?????????????????

armaan ====== ........................yes abt ridhi(sukku)..................i wanted to tell u earlier bt couldnt tell u i ws waiting fr the right time to come......................... yes this is true.........before u came to my life...........a long time back.........ridhi(sukku)....came to my life...................i loved her unconditionally......................bt ............. bt..... she never ever loved me...................infact.....................

ridhima ======= ..................(cuts him) ..hw could this be possible armaan................???????.......(thinking abt diary note.............snaps....................ridhis(sukku) wish after their confrontation.......................tht ridhi stills loves armaan....................very much........)...................armaan......... there are lot of questions in my mind which are coming one after the another...................i know .............only ridhi(sukku) is the one who can answer all my question................i want to know the truth from her...................

armaan ======= ...................bt ridhima..................i m telling u the truth ............today,,,, if there is anyone whom i love more thn ny life is u......................n whom i hate to the core is none other thn ridhi(sukku)......i hate her.............hate hr like anything.............i would never ever forgive her,,,,never...............
ridhima = .............plz armaan............plz ..... i need to ask her something.....................plz let me go armaan.....plz.......
(she wanted to ask her regarding arman ridhi love affair ...... n her disease....)
(saying this ridhima(jenny) goes from there................to ridhi(sukku)............................. in anger armaan punches wall........)
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hey.........hi friends..........a very big hello to all of you..................šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
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i have written my seventh part...............
seventh part had been a bit long thts why i had to divide seventh part into two............
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PART = 7


RECAP : - ridhima couldnt belive wht she all saw n heard frm both-------arman n ridhi ....ridhi(sukku) who loved armaan so much.........n still loves her......is on her death bed bt still hearing such harsh words from her lover...............who wishes of her death.............thn armaan comes to ridhima-(jenny) n tells her he wanna tell her something.....................whn ridhima tells him tht at first she need to ask something from ridhi(suku)..........n then she goes frm there.............in anger arman punches wall........................



(Ridhima comes to Ridhis-SUKKUS room bt sukku was crying tht moment)


ridhima (jenny) =====...... r u fine................i mean r u alright........????????????????


(ridhi quickly wiped her tears....n nodded her head in yes.....)


ridz(jenny) ===== .....cn i ask u something......ridhi.....if u dont have any problem.....or if u dont mind telling me..

ridhi(sukku) ===== ......ya sure ridhima....is this the thing to ask......(asked her questioningly.


ridz(jen) === .............u dont consider me ur friend ......right....????????????


ridhi(sukku) ===== ......wht u r saying ridhima........(asked her confusingly.....)


ridz(jenny) =====....( ridhima cuts her...) ....if u would have considered me ur friend thn u wouldnt have hide this from me.......


(ridhi-sukku thought tht ridhima was talking abt arman n ridhi relationship.........thnnnnn)


ridhi(sukku) ==== ....(stammering....) ......... no ridhima.....i was....i was.......

ridz(jenny) ====== .(again cuts her.....) ...y dint u tell us the truth ??????.......nt even me.....m i nt ur friend????? .....if u would have considered me as ur friend thn u would have told me..........if u dint wanted to tell others..........u atleast could have tell me......ridhiiii.........y did u tell dr modi nt to tell anyone abt this....................u know wht.........i thought we have become very good friends....................

ridhi(sukku) ===== ...(...again very confused...)........ wht u r talking abt...???????????


ridhima(jenny) ===
......y.... ridhi........y u dint tell anyone of us abt ur ailment............?????.........


(..........ridhi was shocked to hear tht..... she thought ........hw ridhima came to know about this truth.....did abhimanyu told her.....bt he cant do tht......ridhi was very very shocked hearing that from jenny............)


ridhi(sukku) ===== ...which ailment n wht crap u r talking abt ...... (trying to hide the truth......)


ridhima =====
...tht u r suffering from ''' LEUKEMIA ""....... "'blood cancer"" ..........."'n u r on its final stage""" ......n very soon...... U GONNA......(.....ridhima immediately stopped.....)


ridhi(sukku) === ....(still trying to cover up...) .........r u gone mad ?????? ..... y u r making stories of ur own......dint u know tht on tht day abhimanyu told everyone...... tht i m having just a slight fever....dont u remember...... so y u r telling lie .....stop it ridhima....stop.......plz stop it.......n plz leave me alone....(....ridhi trying very hard to hide the truth..)

ridhima (jenny) === .....(a bit frustrated she shouted).......i have read in ur file tht was kept in abhimanyus office.....i came to know abt ur ailment there.....i came to know abt this truth there....so its better u stop hiding the truth from me..........as i know everything........


(...............hearing this ridhi-sukku .......cries.... n thn after crying her heart out she says............)


ridhi (sukku) ====== .........y...u r right ridhima.....u r absolutely right......ya ........m...... deying........very soon........i will ....die......just sum more days n thn i will ...... begone.......


(she cries hardly.....very hardly........whn ridhima comes close to her n hugs her trying to pacify her.....ridhima also cries with her..........)


ridhima(jenny) ==== .............i m sorry ridhi..................i m really.....................sorry...........................

ridhi(sukku) ===== .........its ok ridhima......u dont need to feel sorry........as this is only the truth na................ u know what......ridhima...?????..........very soon someones wish will come true .............. very soon.......... bt i m nt very sad for this.........really..........infact i m very happy....... tht atleast he wished something......... n i know his wish is coming true........... i m really very happy fr him as well as fr me........ atleast he wished something from me n i m fulfilling his wish........ i m really very happy............really...............

ridhima(jenny) == ..(.......a bit hesitatingly...).....u r talking about ....... A.......R....M....A.....A......N ............ na............


(..... ridhi was shocked hearing tht .........she couldnt believe wht she heard from ridhima...just nw......she remained frozen fr some seconds.......her heart was beating very fast like tht of a jet plane...........)


ridhi (sukku) === .......(TRYING TO HIDE WHT RIDHIMA SAID JUST NW.......CONFOUNDLY....)......... wht R U saying ridhima............did u even realise wht u said just nw ??????.............y.....Y....I MEAN....Y.... i would even...... think abt armaan ...... i even dont know him....... thn y i would.........


(..............she was saying this in confounded manner n was stammering a bit............ trying to hide.........)


ridhima(jenny) ==== ......(cuts her in between...)......oh really.......tht means u r trying to say.......... tht u dont know armaaan.......??????........right......????? ...(questioningly) .......


ridhi(sukku) ==== .......(turned her face other side....n said).....ya......i.......i........ i dont know armaan..........y i evn would think abt him......... u n him both love each other alot.......... i dont love him..........i dont have any feelings fr him .......i dont understand y u r putting the questions to me regarding armaan............( she was trying very hard to hide the truth bt ws quite scared n was a bit trembling ......... in order to hide the truth...)

ridhima(jenny) ==== .....bt ...........ridhi....... i........i ......dint said..........u love him...........or u have any feelings fr him.............u said it just nw urself...............(....ridhima knew tht she is hiding the truth from hr....)

ridhi(sukku) ==== ....(stammering....)........... ya i mean .......... i dont know him.......(still trying very hard to hide this truth....)

ridhima(jenny) ====.......oh stop it ridhi.........if u cant tell lie thn its better u shouldnt lie.......as u can say lie frm ur mouth bt wht abt ur eyes ?????.............which are saying something else..........ur eyes r expressing something else.....which are filled with so much pain.........

ridhi(sukku) ====....(turned her face other way to avoid her contact....).... i m nt getting wht u r saying......

ridhima(jenny) ===..../////..ok let me ask u directly.........just swear on urself n say tht u dont love A......R....M....A....A....N........ u dont have any feeelings fr him.............. u dont care a bit fr him............ u r nt at all bothered for him......................

.ridhi(sukku) ===== ....(gt a bit puzzled...........wht ridhima is asking her..........thn aftersometime........ she gathered sum courage...........n said confidently...).........i dont love armaan.......i swear on myself...........i dont have any feelins fr him.................

ridhima (jenny) === ...... r u sure.........u dont love him..........n.................ur telling the truth????????


ridhi (sukku) ===== ................ya..................m sure..........i dont love him infact ......... i.............


ridhima (jenny) ====== .........(cuts her in between).......ok thn ........swear on ARMAAN n say tht u dont love him..........u dont have any feelings fr him.....................

(hearing this ridhi keeps mum fr some seconds.....remained quite..........n thn)

ridhi(sukku) === ...........i .....i.........dont ..........love...............i...........i................(saying this she started crying........n ws crying ........ coz she couldnt tell more lie to hide the truth....n couldnt take armans swear for this.............)

ridz-jenny === ...... i have gt my answer...........u love armaan........... u only love armaan............u loved armaan.............. n u still love him loads...........(she said while her eyes also became moist............)

ridhi(sukku) ===== ......(ultimately she couldnt control anymore.....n broke down.........crying n saying...) ......ya i love armaan.........i loved him..........only him.......n still i love him alot......n i will always love him.......he is my life.... i love him very much...........(crying while saying...)

(after sometime.......ridhi controlled her tears n thn asked jenny............)

ridhi (sukku) = .......bt hw u come to know abt this.......as neither i told u........nr armaan had told u.............thn hw u get to know abt this truth...............

(at this ridhima tells her tht ........hw she came to know abt the truth..........hw in the afternoon she went to drmodis cabin..........hw she came to know abt her ailment there reading the file.............hw dr modi told her to know abt the truth from ridhi itself as he ws bound by her promise................. th hw she came to see her in her roon................ n thn ...........hw she was trying to make ridhi sleep n in betwwn this she found all those snaps of her n armaan n tht diary note.......thn hw armaan confronted her.............n this way she gt to know abt the truth.................)


ridhima (jenny) ====......bt one thing is really bothering me ridi........n i need to know this frm u....... i know tht u loved armaan n u still love him very much......bt ...............arman..........he..... he...... hates u so much tht he wish to have ur................(at this ridhima stops......ridhii cries.........n says)


ridhi (sukku) ====== ........... tht he wishes of my death,,,,,,,,,,,,,hai..na........(...her eyes became moist...)


ridhima(jenny) ==== ..... i m sorry ridhi.......i dint mean to hurt you..............(after taking a pause....)....... i want to know the whole truth ridhi............whole truth........i want to know each n every thing.............tumhe armaan ki kasam mujhe sab sach batao..........plz ridhi mujhe sach batao.......y armaan hates u this much..........n y u hide the truth abt ur ailment frm us ........??????.....while confronting u..............y armaan said tht u played with his feelings n emotions.......?????????..........y he said tht ............????.....he loved u so much bt u deceieved him.......y he said tht while confronting you...??????........as far as i know u i dont think u can do this to anyone..........???????.......tumhe armaan ki kasam mujhe......... sach batao plz....ridhi....plz...........


ridhi (sukku) ===== ....i will tell u the whole truth ridhima.......bt u have to promise me ................. promise me tht u wont tell anything about this truth to armaan.............


ridhima (jenny) ==== ......(...she asked her confusingly....).......i cant do tht...... as...........armaan also needs to know....wht is the truth.........??????????


ridhi(sukku) ==== ........plz ridhima.........i would tell u everything if u promise me tht u wont tell anything to armaan regarding this........


( sukku takes promise frm ridhima--jenny tht ........she will never tell about this truth to armaan never ......ever....which she is going to tell ridhima nw.......... by making her swear on armaan...........jenny relunctantly agrees.............)



RIDHI TELLS RIDHIMA ABT THEIR LOVE

ridhi (sukku)

...... it was in 2nd year of our college,,,,,,,,,,,,where i met armaan fr the very first time..........he was very popular in college......................he was """""MR SUPERCOOl of the college..............he ws very naughty ........... flirtatious...................used to flirt with every single girl.........a bit childish............yet very good at heart .......... ........ whereas i ws completely opposite to him............... u know ridhima--(jenny)............ armaan used to call me "bahenji"................coz i was only the one who wore suits in the college...........so just becoz of tht......... he used to irritate me alot.............bt see we never knew ..........neither i nor he...........tht someday he would fall in love for this behenji only................(remembering this a slight smile comes to her face..........)


she informed ridz hw armaan confessed his love to her :-

............he sat on his knees........n proposed her in front of whole college.........on tht day he gifted her 1000s of bouquet of flowers one after the another...........""''''''


she further informed ridz about their confession night :-

......... on their night of confession................ armaan came to my house midnight (the house where she was living with one of her friend as pg......)....n gave me a grandsurprise...............he had decorated whole of the place (the terrace) fully with lovely flowers n candles........very......... sweet .....sweet.... fragrance was coming from each n every corner of the terrace........... he had placed my cutouts everywhre on the terrace ..............n thn crackers were bursted which displayed ..............

"'''''''''''''I LOVE U SUKKU VERY MUCH...................VERY VERY MUCH.......................ARMAAN.................""""

Armaan had done all this by himself on their confession day to make their day special............very special.......fr me,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, fr him,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,fr both of us.................. n thn rest of the night was spent................. dancing ................. conversin ..........n looking deep into each other eyes................under the stars........''''''''''''

(...............as ridhi was telling all this to ridhima............thn ridhima noticed hw happy she is looking telling abt their confession day........ridhima thanked god....... tht .atleast she smiled........fr a moment...................)

ridhi(sukku) also told ridz tht :-

''''''''i can never forget our day of confession..... i still gets tht sensational, tickling,, n alacrious feeling remembering our confession day.......""""""

(............ridz-jenny smiled at her............seeiing her smiling.............after taking a pause..........)


ridhi(sukku)
............bt our happiness ws fr short time only.......whn we both ........were madly in love with each other nd sum 7-8 months had passed ...... thn one day........ i get to know abt...............this harsh reality.........of my life......... i went fr my medical check up ..........n it was only 2...3 days before my birthday tht dr finally informed me of my ailment..............tht i am suffering from "LEUKEMIA--BLOOD CANCER--"...... n i was IN 1ST STAGE............N I HAD SOME MORE YEARS TO LIVE MY LIFE..............................(thinking this ridhi --sukku-- cries.........so as ridz--jenny-.............after taking some rest......)


ridhima(jenny) ==== .....did u tell about ur ailment to armaan...??????/.....(she asked ridhi--sukku--questioningly....)


ridhi (sukku) == ........ no, i din tell ARMAAN abt my ailment.......... N U KNOW WHT.............. still he doesnt know tht i m suffering from blood cancer.........


ridhima (jenny) =====.......(ridhima was completely dumbhead tht moment whn ridhi told tht to her......she asked ridhi....confusingly............)..........does this mean tht armaan still doesnt know wht is the truth.....???????........tht u r suffering from blood cancer.......??????.......oh....no...............bt y.... .........?????? .ridhi.....y........????????????...............u dint u tell abt ur disease to armaan y.......?????............y.?????? dint u feel like telling him the truth ???............. hmmn....tell me..............(ridz asked her questioningly) .......dint u just feel like telling him once just once ................... ??????????


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Posted: 16 years ago
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ROCKIIIIIIIINNNGGGG nyonica, im really glad u opened this fanfic again, i told u it will get closed. I was afraid u wudn't continue.
I loooooooooove this fanfic and also the pics u ad makes the story evn better.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nyinoka wow yaar welcom hre yaar i jst readed out once again nd jst like before it ws mindblowing brilliant story yaar ab plz nxt prt bhi post kardo waiting fr it
cont soooon
luv yachna

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Posted by: Saumya96 Ā· 2 years ago

Hello everyone ā˜ŗļø This is Saumya ā¤ļø I have completed the five long threads of my FF "Hum Sath Sath Hain.!" A modern time story Following are the...

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