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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

m nt able to clickk d likee button!!

i clickk it it goess bakk to the topp./...

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naina

@naina0123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

hi rachna!!

amazing is d word!

luvd d way u expressd their thoughts..

mayank is totally out of control..hai na?? but whu can blame him 4 huggin..aftr all its beautiful nupur in beautiful white dress v r talkin about😉

am glad dt nupur is rude 2 him...dnt wnt her 2 fforget n forgive very soon...i lik nupurs rnds here..nisha n aishwarya...

d best part was khuda jaane...PERFECT!!!!!

gr8 work rachna!!

thnx 4 d pm..

hugs

-naina

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430105

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: cool.sindhya
as alwayss it wuzz amazingg!!!
i cudd juss imagine itall rachhh!!!

ur an amazingg writeerr!!

loooveeee u!!

=D

aww cindy....thnks soooooo mucy yaar..

love yaa!🤗

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430105

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: naina_mayur
hi rachna!!
amazing is d word!

luvd d way u expressd their thoughts..

mayank is totally out of control..hai na?? but whu can blame him 4 huggin..aftr all its beautiful nupur in beautiful white dress v r talkin about😉

am glad dt nupur is rude 2 him...dnt wnt her 2 fforget n forgive very soon...i lik nupurs rnds here..nisha n aishwarya...

d best part was khuda jaane...PERFECT!!!!!

gr8 work rachna!!

thnx 4 d pm..

hugs

-naina

thank u sooo sooo much naina🤗
im glad u liked the way i've expressed their thoughts...actually..nupur is a lot like me..so it all came out naturally....well...nupur will deffo be rude..and im sure u'll sympathise with her once you come to know what happened...aww..im glad you liked nisha and aishwarya...
lol..yeah...KJ was the best i could come up with..im really glad u liked it...

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#165

amazing, absolutely out of the world

loved it totally

mayank was adorable, toooooooooooo goooooooooooood

nups confusion was so well portrayed.

what exactly did mayank do?

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update sooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#166

gr8 update rachna..I like this Gunjan as well....n yeah..whts with mayank 😊 being impulsive!!
loved it though😊

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Rida

@Mysterygirl_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#167

hey rachna i just read ur FF i've read the first three parts and read the half of the 4th chapter and i must say ur truly brilliant i could imagine the story in my head all the while i was reading it ur amazing simply loved it plz continue soon will be looking forward to it😃 and plz include me in the pm list too

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Armaan

@-Armaan-

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#168

Hey..! Such an amazing part yaar... I'm stunningly spell-bounded...!! You always leave me speechless...!! To be honest and brief... I would only say : Awesome...!! Completely amazing part... :)) Thanks for the PM..Hope I'll receive another one too... :D

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#169

Rach!!

Great part.. the thing that attracts me to the FF is the scene you've created.. the characters the surroundings.. so real.. at times it feels as if im seeing me and my friends there... haha

This part was great.. the meeting with Mayank, and he apologised

YAY

i dunno wat else to say... it was really a gr8 part..

: D

loved it.

xxSoni