FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Preethi

@preethis

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#941

wow you update... yipees.. wonderful.. this part was simply superb yaar....

I just cant wait to see when they going to talk abt the past and sort out the matter... i think for that also they will have a big fight... waiting for next part.... all the best in the new place dear...

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#942

hey!!!

really nice part. your updates never fail to excite me.

so, finally they both accepted the fact that they r still in love with each other.

the part when nupur was recalling the incident 5 years back when he refused mayank,-was really awesoe. I felt really bad.

and when mayank thought that he did not need nupur, he had his son-that part was also amazing.

mayank has been drinking from last five yrs, and even now he was drunk. why didn't nupur say anything to him??

the best part was when mayank asked nupur why she was crying. I wonder what nupur will answer.

fabulous update. continue soon,when u have time.

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zoe

@cute mayur

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#943

yay!!!!! you finally updated:) :) you have no idea how long i have been waiting:]]]]

ok so have to say this ... you awesomely portrayed the feelings!!! great job:) aww... i hate to see nupur so miserable..... mayank's state is heart breaking too... why dont you guys sort out your differences already?!?! lol.... but i know there is some sort of misunderstanding,... which i hope gets cleared out soon.....

nupur needs to listen and idk..understand? but i'll have to know more from their past if i wanna blame her...lol... but yea mayank's at fault too if he didnt clear the misunderstandings earlier...

and mayank's drunk! aww..... but whoa... hahah i loved the question he put up.....it is quite straight forward and right to the point....lets see what nupur has to say to it after cleaning up the tea cup mess she made...lol... and right when i wanted to know more the update ended.... :(

oh well..... hope you write soon (and by soon i mean SOON.. you dont know how hard it is to find no update every single day when i get on ..... lol)

so take care.. hope you have a great time at whatever place you flew to :)

cant wait to see what happens next!

<3 zoe

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Ananya

@ananya_s

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#944

Thanks a ton for updating Kainath!!!

I know you are very busy and all that but you still wrote this update......thank you!!!!!!

though it was short...... I loved every bit of it!!!

I loved the part where they were both leaning /sitting on either side of the door......it sorta showed their present situation.....

i loved the way you went through the whole process of Nupur crying and hallucinating and all that........everything was all very.......real....

Mayank has been drinking?........one question here though......has he been drinking for all those five years? or was it just the post break-up days?

Anyway I'm glad he finally admitted that hes still in love with her........of course things won't be that easy but it helps to know that you're in love with the other person........

Whats gonna be Nupur's answer? Is she going to avoid the question ? or will she answer him?......what will she say?

Kainath you ended so ubruptly......so many questions unanswered..........please update as soon as you can Kainath..........would you understand if I say I'm biting my nails in anticipation?......lol

Loads of love,
Ananya

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#945

special reserve

Thanks a ton for updating Kainath!!!

waise toh mere paas thanx ke siva koiaur shabd hi nahi hai I amspeechless

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Unknown

@-SMay31-

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#946

wow u updated...gr8 part...plz cont soon

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#947

grt update..........it was awesome.........mayank is drunk.........nupur cried..........why doesnt she accepts him?????? why doesn't he tells her to patch up??????? oh i wish they cud...........keep updating..........

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Yoshita0411

@Yoshita0411

Navigator

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Posted: 16 years ago

#948

awesome update..!!
loved it thoroughly..!!
waitin for ur nxt update..!!
but u didnt PM me yaar..!
Plz do this tym..!

Love,
Yoshita

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#949

Mayu was drunken very bad

Lagta hai Nups dream is coming Truee

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#950

hey kainath please don't ever say that you will haven't abondaned this ff as yet, i will never let you. You are doing an amaxing job, everyone just loves it, you should be proud of your work like we are man. I am certainly ready to wait.

Oh my you are shifting locations gosh how i miss shifting and my erratic packing at the last minute but things have kind of settled down for now for me. Hope thats the case with you as well if thats what you feel more comfortable with.

Coming to the update, it was just simply outstanding as usual. I loved the way how you expressed whats going on in mayank and nupur's mind. Whenever you bring the past or just give us a taste of the past, i get so scared and apprehensive man. I know it must be so hurtful. But we can't have a secure and strong future by simply ignoring the past as experiences are there to teach us something and so are mistakes. They are not to be simply forgotten right?

I loveddddddddd how mayank felt sooo bad when he heard nupur cry and how he thought so many times of breaking the door. I loved how they both were leaning against the door with only a door between them but still they were so distant from eachother.

Aww nupur's dream seemed so real to me man. I felt like crying too and that also real bad. I particularly loved the neev part with mayank and nupur later. I lovedddddd how nupur rushed to neev to give him food.

Oh my gosh mayank and that also drunk, this will be fun hehe.

I really can't believe it but mayank is a human too after all. I understand.

I am eagerly waiting for the next part but i will wait man. I am so happy that at least mayank accepted that he has always lovedddddddddd nupur even now man. Hugs for writing such a wonderful update amidst your busy schedule. Double hugs for that.

Edited by Senny - 16 years ago