FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 94

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Posted: 16 years ago
wowowo... amazing.. kooool...lol.. I cant believe Mayank is still thinking about his ego - lol.. Man, I wanna c Mayu court Nups aggressively !! that will be amazIng...
never the less, this part was amazing... do continue sooon - and thanks for sending a PM.. thanks!! n do continue sooon!! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow..kainath..am glad u updated! :) as much as I dint want to pressurise u given the circumstances, I was eagerly waiting for the update. Thank u for giving us this part 😊
I'm soooo glad Mr Mayank Sharma has finally admitted to himself that he is still in love with Nupur Bhushan ...that is such a relief!!!
Everything else he did was absolute denial!! 😆 😆 ...but thats alright, they'll come around..loved this part1 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks a lot kainath for updating..!!😃

You must be so busy with all this but still you wrote out an update..!!😳
Even though it was shorter than before...i still completly loved it..!!
They admitted it....! that they still love each other..!!!😃 Thank god..! but i have a feeling its not gonna be that easy....LOL
Nupur was crying so much...!! That dream/hallucination she had was my favourite part....!
I loved how you described the way they were sitting...both on either side of the door leaning against the barrier....😳
Neev was alseep throughout this....well good for him...i don't want to know how mayank would have handled it if he had heard his dad yelling like that..!
5 years mayu's been drinking and today as well..!! Nupur didn't say anything to him...? Why he drank so much...?
You left at such a cliffhanger..! What is she going to answer...?😕😲
Do continue soon...whenever you can...!!
can't wait for the next part..!
Edited by hgrhr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwww
ok this u NEED TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!
like NOW!!!!
omfg mayank and nupur finally admitted it! to themselves... buts a step closer! yea!
missing neev but still loveeeeeeeeeeee mayur!
continue soon!!!!!!!!!
Posted: 16 years ago
i've been waiting for ur updt, im glad u did but plz don't pressure urself moving is really hard, get settled first.
coming to the part i loved it!
it was so sad seeing them both miserable like that
mayank finally admitted he loves nupur! n he asked her why she was crying. n he also got drunk
i missed neev today, love him soo much!
anyways try n continue soon no pressure tho!

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Posted: 16 years ago
i ws terribly terribly missin ur updates........evn kal maine nidhi se phone pe baat kar rahi thi...toh i had asked her abt this....so she only told me as u r movin out of station....thoda time lagega......bt d moment i saw ur pm in d mornin....i ws like yipeeeeeeeee.............n when i read d note 1st...by god kaitz.....thts sooooooo soo sweet of u.........jaate waqt bhi hume ek rockin update di.........i can onli say plzz come back as soon as possible....
n dnt worry v r alwz alwz there w8in for ur rockin heavenly updates...And none of us wil nt think evn in our worst dreams abt quit readin this ff just bcoz u r nt updatin regularly......na..........nevr...bas itna hi viswaas the kya hum pe????????????........so plzzz remove all kinda thoughts frm ur heart n head...ok?v r vry much in love...deeply madly...in love...so obsessed abt this ff.....jiska andaaza shayad tumhe khud na ho..oops..bahut ho gaya na 'lecture'....😆😉.....kya karu.......i really wanted to reply 2ur note b4 update.....


ok comin to d update......as usual it ws a rockin...bt vry emotional update......dono bahut bahuuuuuuut aage bad chuke apne aap se ladte ladte....nw its high time they just speak it out to each other.....plzzzzz.......plzzzzzz...5 yrs n 2months!!!!.......its really high high time........plzzzzz kaitz plzz make them speak to each other abt their feelings....abt their thougts tht hv been in their heart since 5yrs n 2months...plzzzzzz kaitz.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh finally finally finally you updated... thank you thank you thank you so much...

Just loved the updated.. mayank finally accepted... hopelessly, desperately, ever so in love with her! -Ahhhhh

If only they could talk things out, if only nupur was not to stubborn and mayank was not so damm high on ego..
I feel so terrible for them. i dont know, for whom i feel worst. both are soo miserable without each other. And even when they are going through such hell, all they could think abt was neev.. they are surley gona make a great family and great parents.

BTW, missed him

Mayank is drunk? i hope nupur listens to him this time.
Waiting for the next one.


Edited*
Didnt see yout earlier post... Update from airport.. man you rock👏
Moving can be hectic.. dont worry abt the updates.. take your time to settle down.. we will stay tuned
Edited by Bronze. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Kainath!! YAY for updating.. haha.. where u off to tho??
have a safe flight.. and just to think about it.. u would be in singpore airport.with free internet = ❤️.. hahaha
This part was so essential to the whole FF.. the way you wrote about Nupurs struggles her emotions.. and Mayank, finally admitting he loved her.. but the fact that he wouldn't force her to do anything.. was..
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i can't wait fr u to continue..
Thanks for the PM
xxSonia
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Posted: 16 years ago
Typed a whole response and accidentally hit the back button - and erased all I'd written... 😔

I loved it... And I love the way you are revealing the past, like peeling it layer by layer, hinting at just enough to leave us begging for more... It's impossible to pick sides now between Mayank and Nupur, because both are hurting. I love the way you showed Mayank's admission to himself, how he felt unburdened, free... I wish both of them would let go of their egos - what they have is sooo much beyond that!!!

And I though I have no idea where ur heading - you've got to update soon!!! Can't hardly wait to know what happens next....
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Posted: 16 years ago
finally u updated.. hope u had a great trip

It was as always what say amazing part but I guess the not usual and u stooped at crucial point(not fair)

Loved the way u potrayed both of them have battle of thoughts but no use as both are ruled by ego.. but what what an end.. mayank did talk to her why she cried?

I hope some thing gud comes with it, if not fully but partly their relation improves...

craving for more update next part soon
Edited by aati1429 - 16 years ago

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