FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#861

tht was fab!!!

i startd reading ur FF juss two dayzz bck thanxx to falak for gvng me th link...

itssssssssssss so gud !!

really!!!

keep it up!!!

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#862

well.. oh my god neev is so so what to say.. ouchie ha ha ha..

that whole part was fun.. i could visulaise poor nupur blushing

but best was the end when nupur actually screamed at mayank...

since mrning was waiting with hope u will update today and hurray u did..

i amkind of addicted to ur FF.. I guess many of us..

u r amazing writer

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falak

@falak01

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Posted: 16 years ago

#863

ok so i m done with my reading part n now the analysis....😳😳

wowieee..it started with a flashback...the convo was nice,and it left many questions in my mind regarding mayank-nupur's break-up!!!!well we got to see a flashback,i think in next part,things will get even more clear...😳

so a new dawn has come,with so many confusions...well nupur is fighting with her own self...dats really a difficult one..

both of them r sooo confused ...and their past experiences r making it tougher,,,

but in midst of these emotional drama,u r able to create humour too....

i loved this one:

"I-I'm done, Nupur. You can look now." You can look now? What the hell is that supposed to mean Mayank? Have you lost your grip on sensibility as well now?

😆😆

well sonali is too a confused soul...😆but poor girl,....

soo neev is back with his cuteee talks..and his roseee...

the whole mole thing was lovely...he cudn't resist staring at it..😆😆

well yes sharmas r always winners,and nupur is a sharma too...my cutie neev...u said it darling....👏👏👏

awwww...and the "ouchie" thing on the dining table...😆

ahaaa..luvd uncle Ajay remarks....omg..he thinks like me..the double meanings...😆😆

so finally nupur confessed that they had it last night..gr8....so will shilpa aunty do something to make them realise their love???well a lot of questions r flooding my smalll mind...😆

and hawww...mayank is not over with the "ouchie"..😆😆

but this time nupur retained her desires...well gud for her...its not easy 4 a woman to forget evrything n move on..and she is in a state of dilemma too...well i agree wid her reaction...😃

well in all it was as usual an awesome,super duper fantastic part...i loveeddddddd it...👏

u r an awesome writer,n u proof it all the time...

all their mental state of confusion n dilemma r well mentioned n neev's comeback was rocking..coz he again did it with his charm,without his "ouchie" thing shilpa wudn't hav got to know the reality of the soiree "night"😳😳

my darling neev...love u!!!!😳😳😳

u rockkk kainath!!!!
well after such a hot update,this was really very needed...thanx dear...and thanx a lot for bearing our constant nagging and "faltoo" comments here...😆😆

love u dear...🤗

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Debolina Roy

@Healer.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#864

aww tat flashback part....aww how i thought u were gonna be done with flashback today......but i guess more suspenses rite.....??? uff i wud love a detailed flashback anyway....

ok coming back to present as you too did 😆...aww did mayank really think alls fine when he pulled her back.....sheesh pooor nupur just can't get over the past really.....allthogh she loves him....she admits it too at tyms....has the fear of losing both neev and mayank...but uf the damn past!!

omg neev noticing the rickey part was just omg!! and uncle ajay wat is he???i just fell of my chair when he said "tats wat cause the ouche"🤣🤣🤣 and shilpa ma also shocked...they have already done it🤣🤣🤣

ok back to serious stuff! the nupur shilpa conversation was also heart breaking yaar....i know it pained her to say tat "us" is not possible...again the past.....!!

back to home mayank again getting emotinal...hmm but tis time nupur got a grip....dying to wat happens next....!!

gr8 job yaar as usual!! need i say more....it was just gripping and entertaing and heartbreaking in parts!!

ok so when do we get the flashback?? i wud really look foward to tat part!!

pls keep updating!! i guess i'm addicted now😆 😆

Edited by debolinaroy08 - 16 years ago

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#865

hey kainath oh my gosh you updated yipeeeeeeee, you updated sooo quickly man, thankyou sooo much. I hope my Super loud squeal of delight doesn't wake up my room mate. I am sooo happy.

Coming to the update, kainath you have always lived up your standard but indeed increased it everytime. I don't how to say it but i respect you and your writing skills more and more now man. Your update had so much depth, it highlighted each and every person's feelings and thpughts so well man, it was beyond magic.

So my maestro provides us with another masterpiece. I lovedddd the intense conversation between nupur and samrat early on. You are giving us the taste of the past, bit by bit i am dying to know what happened but then i am very apprehensive and i can't bear to see mayur separated man.

I lovedd the dialogues of nupz and samrat, they emanated deep pain, sense, genuine care, love and friendship. I loved how nupz broke down in samrat's arms and he started feeling gulty. The thing with nupz being that she acts as a very strong girl from inside and doesn't want to show her vulnerable side which she keeps hidden, but at times it just comes out and she can't help it. All the emotions were soo beautifully captured man.

Coming back to the present, aww i loveddddd the way you described nupz's inner battle and how she tried to free herself of mayank's hold. I could literally feel what she must be feeling, aww mayank snores hehe.

I lovedddddddd how he won't let her go. But all of a sudden reality struck and mayank lets nupz go. It must be just as hard and confusing for poor mayank as nupz. I loved how awkward she felt when he was changing.

I am soo happy neev is back, i missed him too. aww i was soo sure he would have loads of stories to tell. He is such a gem and the smaty pants also knows that nupz is a sharma and a part of their family man.

i lovedddd how they both are feeling awkward with one another, that was inevitable na. I loveddddddd how mayank kept on staring at her mole and having crazy thoughts and even nupz. I know it must be hard for them to keep their hands off eachother man.

The part where mayur visit shilpa and ajay together with neev was all so beautifully told. aww neev again hit the bullls eye with catching the ouchie or hickey hehe.

Shilpa wow thinking and asking nupz about the extra marital affair, wow she is one damn impressive lady. I am soo glad to see nupz clearly told her about mayank and herself.

Shilpa so rightly understood the complications in their relationship. I lovedddddddd how mayank and nupz came home. Oh my my i knew mayank wouldn't be able to keep his hands off nupur. I lovedddddddd the last scene, it was damn romantic, i still have weird feelings in my tummy and my hand is trembling with excitement.

please update soon, i know i am getting soo greedy. amazing work kainath.

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

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Posted: 16 years ago

#866

omg neev is awesome!! i love him to bits! he called nupur a sharma!
loved the ouchie part, n shilpa aunty ne to mauka dekh kar chauka mar diya!!
also i liked the awkwardness b/w mayur
i feel awful for nupur she is so confused, well not really she knows wat she wants n needs but doesn't think its good for her
n mayank has lost almost all his control
they really need to tell each other how they feel
n i just loved the sanu scene it was so sad n touching
also i feel bad for sonali, poor her
anyways continue soon

Edited by ~*mishu*~ - 16 years ago

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hasiii

@hasiii

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#867

Wow! What can I say? awesome, Fantastic, Fabulous....etc etc. I love your FF. Its not that I could love it more than I already was is love with your FF, but I still missed the details of Mayank's point of view. Please please ... I am eager to know what Mayank feels at this point. I love your ff very much :) thanks for the pm

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XAiShBaBy08X

@XAiShBaBy08X

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#868

Hi! So I was really nervous about this part, and I'm glad it didn't turn out too bad. But now I'm really nervous about the next part. I really really hope they don't get into an argument and start hating each other and start back up to square one.

I'm really glad to see Neev back! The ouchie part was HILLARIOUS! I thought the Nupur and Shilpa confrontation was a little to upfront. I didn't think they would be so blunt about it.

Great update! but now I'm wondering what Nupur will say. I hope they don't fight.....lol Sorry for the randomness in this message!

Update soon! OH and thank you for updating today....that really made my day! Update soon!

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@flowers4u

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#869

great update wounder wt happens next cant w8

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#870

OMG. i am at school right now, i'll comment once i get home.

i think im not going to be able to concentrate at all now..

:P

*EDIT*

Okay, so i guess having the school net unblocked was a bad thing, and then especially in english too.. i was sitting reading my laptop screen for an unnormal ammount of time.. haha

anyways to the part..

the starting with the flashback was great... the whole decription was gr8.. i was taken back and it felt like i was just watching sammy and nupz..

the whole morning after thing was sooo
soooo
sooo
sooo adorable..
well at first.. how she tried to leave and mayank held her back... *dreamy sigh*
but i was dissapointed when he let go of her hand.... but it was kind of right.. i mean.. un-intentionally did they get in bed with each other.. the sexual-tension was talking..

i couldn't stop but *silently* giggle at the awkwardness when nupur walked out of the bathroom to see mayank changing.. *insert awkward turtle*

Neev is sooo sooo soo cute i think i've said that soo many times before.. hhaa.. but the whole lunch thing with the ouchie was soo embarassing.. and i can't belive nupz just said we had sex to Shilpa
: O

i am super super super excited for the next part coz i wanna see wat happens..

sorry for a short comment.. i have a legal SAC to finish
:(

thanks for the PM

xSonia

Edited by Bollywood_chic - 16 years ago