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first i need to stop blushing so i can type this out...!! LOL because this chapter was sizzling HOT...!!!😳😳
i had a strong feeling that something like this was going to happen...!!
Just the other day i was thinking that something bad is going to happen at the soiree and then they get home and Neev isn't going to be there and then....ahem...they won't be able to control their urges then. hehe
yeahhh so this was why Neev was sent out or his questions would have been the death of them....LOL
That Ranvijay..!! aaagghhh....he's definitly "his lowness".....you added his character too...! Well even i was wondering HOW the hell did nupur agree to go with him....it was so obvious that he would try something like this....but it went way past what i was expecting...! Though thank god mayank came at the right time....they way you described him glaring at her...furious....it was so realistic...!!
But he really shouldn't have yelled at her....it wasn't her fault...and this conversation was going on between them....tempers all high and the next second he's kissing her.....i was as shocked as Nupur probably...!!
Then no turning back....wow....the way you described their passion....it was hot...! Like all the pent up sexual tension came pouring out at that time....they couldn't control it. ufff....mayur are way too passionate for their own good...!! their first proper kiss and after that they couldn't just stop....!!!!
Brilliant writing yaar....right from the beginningwhen Neev was curious about make-up...awwww...that wassuch a sweet scene..!! and it was quite common too na....childern do these things...!! loved reading that hilaarious part!
and mayank's horror at Neev interested in drag...! LOL
AND sonali's comments of course on everything actually...erotic fiction to RV's colougne...she's one great character..!!andyou also mentioned that cologne bit when he was forcing Nupur...by god....!!
Loved this chapter....mayank being so possessive, the way he kepg going on and on about how dare that RV touch his WIFE...! he acknowedged Nupur with that status properly this time....!...the way he was beating RV....and the last part when nupur wonders what's going to happen next.....its gonna get complicated....i can't wait to see the morning after scene....and when Neevcomes back....
how the hell will they stay off each other now...?!!😆😆😆
your writing is just so gripping and realistic..!! I'm such a big fan of yours..!!!
do continue soon..!
and thanks once again for updating sooo soon..!!
that's exactly what i wanna wanted to say.....but he said it before i could say......but anyways i loved the part.........i am writing my own ff too plz give me too suggestions................i loved all of your parts..............mayank was soooooooo possessive and then their kissssess...................what to say??????????
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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