FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 89

superb update just awesome waiting 4 the next part desperately

wow lovely update.
just lovedddd it.
at the flashback part the Samrat-nups convo was so nice
like samrat concern about nups.
the best part was -when neeve said nups about ouchie.
And mayanks was really very smart .
hmmm every part going 2 be interesting day by day.
thanx a lot 4 ur nice update.
keep updating.
Faria

wow yaar it was so sweet and awesome.................u express the scenes too good.................i always feel that i am watching a movie or two................thanks..........

againg an awwwwwwwwwwwesome part

oh wow kainath!!!!!! omg...that was really an awesome chapter

its highly appreciated tht u update so soon do cont waiting for next part waitin for 2days update

ok i have read it thrice since yday nte.............and finally i read it with complete concentration................and again i have to say, u r a gr8 writer............how abt writing MJHT story...........atleast we will have more of Mayur............. :)

loved the part..........and Neev...........he alwz has the right things to say "Do you need Daddy to kiss your ouchie?" haha...............i simply adore him.........and i feel so much for Nupur, yes it is not easy to let go of it all...... but wat next? oh i cant wait to read more

Feeling really really bad for Nupur....on one side, she still loves Mayank, is deeply attached to Neev and want to be with them forever, and on the other side, believes that Mayank doesn't love her, and it is her heart that will be broken..and there is the haunting past. Poor girl..take away some of her pain. Let Mayank clear all the misunderstandings of the past.

Well, as everyone has written and rewritten..wonderfully written part 😊.

What's going on in Mayank's mind? We should be given the chance to know that now.

BTW, is RV going to reappear? Please..please..don't let him shake hands with Annie and spoil MN's plan? That will be too filmy, and you have set your bar very high 😉.

hi kainath!when will u update????😳😳

wow!! tht was lovely yaar!! simply amazing!!