FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 88

hey awesome part

OMFG!!!!!!!!!! haha i printed it out to read it and i was reading it in the gym... lol i kept getting like all these expressions on my face and like i was laughing....i got so many weird luks!
haha this was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!
i cant wait to see where mayur is headed!!!!

god i wished neev comin to kitchen wen mayu was abt to kiss her on her lips. And te kiddi tellin daddy u need to kiss on te ouchie n not lips. Gosh tat would hav been terrible.

hey kaitz..........(can i call u like tht?😉......i hope u wont mind...)

once again rockin awesome fab fantabulous update...........flashback thing?god u r creatin now tons n tons of more suspenses related to tht flashback........so is ur plan to show flashback to us like this in bits by bits...leavin ur curiosity level increase each time,huh???????😲😉........oh god.....onli kaitz wht d hell had happnd b/w MN in d past ki in dono ko Present mein jo past ka pyar wapas aaya hai usiko accept karne mein yeh ek baadha bankar khadi hai!!!!!!........😭

it ws soooooooooooooo gud to our jaanuable neev back........hey bhagvan iski aankhon se kuch nahi bachta kya??????????by god.....it ws d weirdest moment for mayur........n tht too just bcoz their son had askd his doubt in public.........😆😉

by god Shilpa aunty is truly a sweetheart....i kknw she'll b d happiest aftr knwin abt last nite of Mayur....aakhir unki plan ab jaake work out hui hai......finally ....aftr tht looooooooong two months........plzzz kaitz....make aunty as cupid.....n make MN realise tht they cant live without each other n tht 'us' factor is still b/w them....plzzz.....

nw d endin part....my...my....mayu fir carried away ho gaya??????control mayu...control......ab toh pooora life bacha hai........😆😉.......bt seems his Dil maange moreeeeeeeeeee,huh?😉.........bt nupsi's reaction ws obvious.......shes really in a huge turmoil of feelings........confused to d core........bt then iski is tarah chale jaane se.......i'm feelin lik....tht Sadu mayu wilb back.....n he in his anger wil say somethin tht wil ruin evrything.......plzzzzzz kaitz plzzzzzzzzzz prove me wrong this time yaar...plzzzzzz.........

nywz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updateeeeeeeeee sooooooooooon...........ab toh i'm addicted to ur ff......i really dnt knw wht will happen to ur obsessed ff lovers lik us when this ff ends....soo plzzzzz........continue it for a longgggggggg time...........neev ki shaadi tak....😆😉..........

amazingly written...loved it....

Kainath you are just amazing dear.. i read it yesterday itself but couldn comment,,,

Brilliant part kainath!! ahh that ouchie 😆....... i just love Neev and Shilpa aunty lolz.

it was beyond awesome
simply superb
just get things happy again

thanks for the update.. as usual awesome..

Oh the flashbacks ve started to come up.. loved how it started, just like our thoughts.. a little ramdon... it took some time to realise whats going on..

Your way of presenting flashbacks, dream is very natural and realistic.. love it 👏

Sonali entry was perfect. poor girl, hope she gets someone soon.😍

OMG neev and his ouchi.. he puts them in such situations.. Loved ajay's comment : thats what you kids are calling it these days? 😉

I felt shilpa's confrontation a little blunt.

Mayank is totally out of control, cant blame him.
Dying to know how they react. actually a little nervous. 😲

Hope we'll get to know the the past completely soon...

Plz update soon :)

heyy