FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 83

this part totally blasted all my expectations...it was beyond all the levels f awesomeness!..and it was sizzling HOT...i could feel the electricity in the air...and i really was blushing :P

by god...........wht an update dear.............i'm hell speechless n blushin to d core.....................srsly nw this is d hottest update i'm evr readin in any mayur ff yaar............each n evry minute details.....each n every minute reaction of both mayu n nups....god............u r such a heavenly romantic writer yaar...........i'm also a big big biggggggg fan of u...........i really really praise tht moment i decided to read ur ff.........kamaal ki update...rite frm d beginnin.....our jaanuable neev......hes truly d cutesssssssssst boy in d world.....mayu-sonali interaction....
then tht f*** Ranvijay.....uff...by god hw dare he touch nups............mera mann kar raha tha ki che ki che goliyan seeeedhe uske dil par nishana kardu.........taaki vo kisi bhi birth mein rape karne ke liye sochega bhi nahi.....

then comes d mosttttttttttt hottest update...........uff...........😳............
hw did u type yaar??????????????????????read karte samay jab hum itnaaaaaaa.........had se zyaaaaaaaaada blush kar rahe the....toh tum?????????god...u r just out of d world yaar.....terrific...superb.......fabulous..........romanticccccccc..........sizzlinnnnnnnnn hottyyyyyyy hottessssssst part tha..........tht one liner sayin nw she cant cal her bed nymore...wht a timin yaar..........srsly.....i've fallen short of words...........it looookd sooooo realistic yet soooooo passionate n romantic n wht not..........
duniya ke saaaaaaaaaare thnxxxxxxxxxxxx 2u for this update dear...........plzzzzzzzzz i really cant bear both sayin ki wht they did ws a 'Galti'..........its truly insultin to their deep passionate love........n it cant b a 'Bloody Mistake'.......plzz make them understand na they r in love......no...i mean they vr alwzzzzzzzzz in love.........

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooon dear..........

okay i dont need to say this but awesome part....with awesome as big as infinity...okay now i sound like my kid sister.

Hi Kainath
again a brilliant update.
u know what -basically i want to give a ZILION of thanx to RV.
bcoz 4 that stupid guy finally Mayur become close 2 each other.
and their romantic moments- Oh my GOD it totally kill me.
Hai how much romantic they are, but alwz pretended 2 b hate 2 each other.
now i m eagerly waiting 2 know whats happened 2 next.
Cant say update soon, bcoz u already did enough for us, beyond our expectation.
with lotsssss of loveeeeeeee
Faria

ohh amzin part again...hw cn write so well yr...

OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved this chapter......it was so full of LOVE.....ok lame line sry.......anyway i really liked d way mayank reacted and how he felt about wat Rv did to nupur..........hopefully now theyll know that its love.......really waitin fr ur nxt update quite desperately actually......so please do update quickly...k?...

Loads of Love
Ananya

this update is beyond any words. I am speechless. it was wonderful.