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Oh gosh kainath, i am soo damn serious i needed to drink three huge glasses of water to breathe properly and comment man.
I am noticing my comments are getting way too lenghty hai na kainth. I don't know i just can't resist but give a longggg review man.Coming to the update. Kainath maestro i bow down to your writing abilities, man man man, i deem myself to be totally and blindly in love with your writing skills and power like mad and never before. I have literally felt each and every emotion of each and every character, like neev, sonali, mayank and nupur soooo vividly, because of which i am still panting man.Kainath i first of all loveddddddddddd neev's always inquisite mind thinking about makeup and it was soo adorable when neev asked and nupz even put up the pink makeup man. out of all the colours nupz had to put on pink makeup oh no hehe. I now how mayank must have felt and nupz idea in relation to neev's fascination for makeup to call him neela was sooo damn witty and hilarious man, totally totally loveddddddddddd it man.I was soooo sure that nupz would be looking sooo hot man. I loveddddddddd the brief interaction between mum and mayur, that was soo sweet. Wow sonali is coming over and her being a member of a book club is the cherry on the top. Sonali is a very talkative girl and this would give her the extra element which is sure to even entertain the king or queen of boredom hehe.I lovedddddddd the way mayank was admiring nupz for her wiittiness and for ahem ahen, well i agree mayank you sure have a very hot wife. The best part being that sonali caught mayank checking out on nupz.I lovedddddddd the way mayank and sonali talked about nupz, old aunts and about erotic and romantic fiction hehe. I loved how mayank told him about their guys and why mayank couldn't get along with them.I can't even tell you how glad i am to see that sonali turned down that ba****** Ranvijay Rathore. I just want to go and literally kill him, mayank should have hit him hard really hard, though i am sure he did man, but i am still so furious at Ranvijay, how dare he even touch or think of doing this to nupzzzz man.The Ranvijay and Nupz interaction before the horrendous tour to the library was very well narrated and even later, nupz was thinking fine early on about something being wrong and mayank never introduced him. Ranvijay loser called mayank a roguee.As soon as they entered the library, my heart started beating fast and when he trapped her and kissed her, i was sooo upset, i was jumping up and down with horror, disgust and anger man. How dare dare dare Ranvijay do that.Thankgoodness mayank came man.i can't even tell you how mad i was for mayank leaving nupz alone and for nupz going alone with that sucker Ranvijay.I lovedddddd the way nupz reacted after the terrible incident, sonali is a gem and mayank's anger was greatly well justified, but as usual he was really harsh, thankfully he accepted that man that also on his own.i loveddddd the way you expressed mayur's emotions, mayank being of fear, anger, concern even loads of love and care which has always been there deep within his heart.I lovedddddd nupz's mixed emotions as well man. I lovedddddddd how you showed that amidst the argument and fight, mayank kissed her and kissed her hard emanating deep love and uncontrollable passion and nupur reciprocated it.i loveddddddd how you said that they both knew he was going to take her and take her hard man. I lovedddddddddd how you narrated their feelings and thoughts throughout man. I lovedddddd how she kept saying mayank and this was the music of the paradise for him man.I have gotten carried away kainath, yet again. I loveddddddd the update, i am more than ever eager to read what happens next. So nupz is not ready to forgive him, i know man but its not only her, even he has suffered alot. I am sooo eagerly waiting for the next part. oh and neev would be back, what would they do.One more thing i loveddddddd the part mayank bumped thrice while he was carrying nupz like that i, before finding the bedroom. The way they slept in eachother's arms in the end was alll sooo damn beautifully portrayed. Amaxing work kainath, please please please update soon man.
Hi dear! I looove reading your comments too! they never bore me :) And me a maestro? awww...i;m immensely flattered :D
Girl, you need to calm yourself down! breathing in and out would help! hahha....I totally understand what you must be feeling dude, I was heaving like crazy after writing it! LOL... :)
Glad you liked the Neev, Nups and Mayu bit - those three make such a beautiful family, it's hardly fair :( llol...
And Sonali? She's an amazing woman indeed - brightens up anything and everything :) but, like you said, is indeed a sweetheart, she cares about ppl she loves sooo much! :)
Ranvijay should just go hang himself, no one else has to get their hands dirty...lol....but whether he's done for good? hehe....not sure about that ;)
Glad you liked the MN scenes after that - they both have such fantabulous chemistry, it's easy to get carried away.... ;) I'll try to update, but I've got absolutely noo idea how soon though :)
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