FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 80

wow and yay!!!!

Lovely update, everything from Neev's makeup to Mayank & Sonali's conversation to Ranvijay to finally M&N together after 5 years. The intensity and passion were understandable because of how much the tension had built up in the 2 months and b4 that in the 5 years! also, they have amazing control and only something this drastic could have brought them together!
I'm looking forward to know what their reactions would be after this? 😊

Divya

omg omg..... s was something not expected soeev qu soon...

hmm.. really liked it but missed neev quite a lot he had a small part only...

I hope they tell their story to us now and hope some issues are resolved between them also...

very nice update...

Originally posted by: noe23

Hey there, never commented before, but have been reading all the parts..and you are fabulous writer. Love this FF. Just checked the FF, before I hit the bed and get ready for Monday..and you have updated. Thanks :) for updating. A perfect way end to this weekend.

More comments after reading the part.

Hi thanks a ton for the review! glad you enjoyed the parts :)

Originally posted by: preethis

Omg Omg you always leave me speechless.. it was just out of the world update...

Thanks for the ahem ahem part given.. loved it...

Oops sorry i come in between and update my comments... lots of disturbance here....

this part was extermely fabously and you have to get this 👏👏👏 and standing ovation for your writing skills... the way you express is wonderful.. i mean i can literally view the scenes in front of my eyes...

RV the lowness... omg.. i would have killed him by god.. mayank calling nupur HIS wife was wonderful....

Want to see the morning scene and i do want to see what is the flashback.. y did mayank have an one night stand.. how come???😕😕😕

Thank god neev was not there tonight...😉 But his Make up part was very realistic.... 😆😆😆

Hey, thanks a bunch for the review! Glad you like the *ahem ahem* bit....lol....Aww...thanks a lot for the ovation ;)

And whereever RV goes, he would undoubtedly exhibit his lowly attitude, so there's no surprise there :) And mayank defending nups was refreshing wasn't it? :D

The morning-after scene is coming up...but hv no idea how soon...lol :)

Lolzzz.. you have already giving us something like seriall i mean to say daily update so we can expect some updates tonight also.... 😉

Wow...wow wow.... what a part...as i ve said before, it just keeps getting better and better...

Neev's facination with make up was so funny.. and mayank's reaction was funnier. neev becoming neela... 😆

sonali is great.. she just lighten up the mood whenever she is around.. she is one hell of a women.

You should be really proud of neev and solanli, as both of them are purely your creations (as in not in mjht) and are so strong as characters. they are two of the most entertaining characters. just love them.👍🏼

Ahh.. Ranvijay.. he is such a rat, a complete jerk, disgusting creep... sorry i just hate him so much.

loved mayank when he said "....touching MY wife" 😍

And coming to the final and best part.. oh god it was sizzling hot.
After 2 months of fight with themselves with after-shower thoughts and the so called forced public kisses....this was so passionate...
loved Mayank's " i really dont care" part. 😳

I somehow ve a feeling they are going to start distancing themselves from each other again.. feeling all embarrassed and confused.

Waiting for the next one.. you ve no idea how badly...

Originally posted by: hgrhr

omg...you UPDATED..!! All of my comments seem to start from this sentence only....!! LOL....but your rock for these quick updates yaar because i cannot go without them now..! hehe

first i need to stop blushing so i can type this out...!! LOL because this chapter was sizzling HOT...!!!😳😳

i had a strong feeling that something like this was going to happen...!!

Just the other day i was thinking that something bad is going to happen at the soiree and then they get home and Neev isn't going to be there and then....ahem...they won't be able to control their urges then. hehe

yeahhh so this was why Neev was sent out or his questions would have been the death of them....LOL

That Ranvijay..!! aaagghhh....he's definitly "his lowness".....you added his character too...! Well even i was wondering HOW the hell did nupur agree to go with him....it was so obvious that he would try something like this....but it went way past what i was expecting...! Though thank god mayank came at the right time....they way you described him glaring at her...furious....it was so realistic...!!

But he really shouldn't have yelled at her....it wasn't her fault...and this conversation was going on between them....tempers all high and the next second he's kissing her.....i was as shocked as Nupur probably...!!

Then no turning back....wow....the way you described their passion....it was hot...! Like all the pent up sexual tension came pouring out at that time....they couldn't control it. ufff....mayur are way too passionate for their own good...!! their first proper kiss and after that they couldn't just stop....!!!!

Brilliant writing yaar....right from the beginning when Neev was curious about make-up...awwww...that was such a sweet scene..!! and it was quite common too na....childern do these things...!! loved reading that hilaarious part!

and mayank's horror at Neev interested in drag...! LOL

AND sonali's comments of course on everything actually...erotic fiction to RV's colougne...she's one great character..!!and you also mentioned that cologne bit when he was forcing Nupur...by god....!!

Loved this chapter....mayank being so possessive, the way he kepg going on and on about how dare that RV touch his WIFE...! he acknowedged Nupur with that status properly this time....!...the way he was beating RV....and the last part when nupur wonders what's going to happen next.....its gonna get complicated....i can't wait to see the morning after scene....and when Neev comes back....

how the hell will they stay off each other now...?!!😆😆😆

your writing is just so gripping and realistic..!! I'm such a big fan of yours..!!!

do continue soon..!

and thanks once again for updating sooo soon..!!

Nidhi! Thank you sooo much for the lovely loong update! And control your blushing girl! You knew this was coming ;) And with their sizzling passion - did you expect anything less? lol.... :)

And if Neev was there....sigh, I'd feel really really sorry for MN...plus creeped out too! Neev getting exposed to such...umm....passionate outbursts of affection could have been hazardous! lol...

And RV, need I say more about that kameena...lol....these are the only sort of characters that he's fit for - glad you liked the Mayank hitting and defending nups parts :)

And Mayank being Mayank yelled at her coz his temper had totally gone astray at that moment - seeing Nups getting treated like that must have made him go right out berserk, I'm just glad I'm not RV...haha....

glad you liked Neev;s short, but cute appearance in this chapter - lol...drag queen, Mayank would totally have a heart attack! aha...

And you are sooo right - MN certainly are way too passionate, not that I'm complaining! :) I swear, after writing that whole scene I had to actually get up and wash my face twice with freezing cold water....hahaha...I can completely understand how you must have felt readin it ;)

Thanks a ton Nidhi dear, once again! Keep reviewing! <3

Hey there, never commented before, but have been reading all the parts..and you are fabulous writer. Love this FF. PLEASE do PM me okay??

ohhh goshhhhh kaintath....