FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 72

Originally posted by: falak01

hi kainath,i m commenting on ur ff for the first time,coz i read all the parts yesterday only and when i came today to comment one more part was up....😊

i m not much interested in reading but in last few days,i have changed a lot,and the credit goes to nidhi...

she suggested me to read this ff,and i gained my courage ,coz i had to read 19 long chapters...😆

but when i started reading,i started feeling some sort of bond with this story and i decided to read all the parts in one day...😆

its really a great story and the way u describe every scene is just awesome...i m in love with "NEEV"..he is such a cutie pie,i got soo much involved in the story that i dreamt abt it only...😳😳

i m loving this ff and this has become one of my favourites...😳😳

thanku soo much for updating it soo frequently,coz i think it wud be difficult for me to pass my day without any update...😃😃

FALAK😊

Originally posted by: preethis

fantastic dear.. i read all the parts now.. please add me in your pm list..... loving it...

Originally posted by: annie07

oh my godly gods.................wat an update................once again..............it seemed like i m watching it all, and not just reading..........u r one hell of a writer....................Mayank was so cute wen he said " i dnt wanna go 2 school" :)

and poor Nupur, the more she tries to keep away, the more she is falling for him, and now he is realising the same.............

plz update soon.................esp. the soiree.............cant wait

Originally posted by: archieeps

Yes, my username is inspired from that...lol...and my update - i just proof read it and it isnt even complete yet...really sorry dear, but I will try my utmost best to update by tmr... :)

Originally posted by: Cutie_tajju

Heyy Kainath...
I am just in the middle of reading your FF, and i thought of posting a comment after I finished all of it so far, but i couldn't resist and here i am, posting a comment.. :P Okay, enough of my babbling..
When i read the first part, i was like WOAH, Nupur had a past with Mayank??? And whenever Nupur or Mayank kept mentioning the pain they both gave each other.. i was curious, like "Would someone pleeeeeeeeease tell me what happened??" :P
Oh Man, Neev is shooo cute, and the "hottie"conversation was soooo hilarious i was laughing like a crazy person... especially when Mayank's thoughts are like "I wanted to cry.. this was the strangest conversation i had with someone.. :P'
I was like Mayank's son... takes after him... :P
And Sonali and Rohan's conversation is pretty hilarious too.. :P
Shilpa aunty as rocking as always, trying to get Mayank with Nupur back... and i must say from what i have read so far... WAY TO GO !!!!!!!!!!! I am with you on that one, aunty... :D:D:D:D
And Mayank married ANNIEE????????????????? WOAH WOAH !!!!!!!!!
That was like a major shocker for moi... but still, i am soo glad that he divorced her... :D ... And i was cheering like crazy when Shilpa Aunty said, "This would definitely hopefully work... It would get them together, I would have my grandson, and my idiotic son would get some sense and his life wold be amazing.. :P"
Well , that's all I have read so far, and i will comment again after I am upto date with all the parts the whole FF.. :D I am into this story now... I will read it right until the end.. :D:D And be an ardent reader too.. Promise.. :)
Cheers, continue soon.. :)

Originally posted by: archieeps

Hello dear, Thanks a ton! Aww...and Nidhi's a sweetheart for recommending this to you :) I really really appreciate you readin this FF! Means a lot! :D

And of course, I've said this countless times and I love repeating - who wouldnt fall in love with Neev...he's such a adorable pie! haha.....

I'm afraid I wont be able to update by today, very very busy - I've just got enough time to respond to ur reviews - but if I try my best then tmr it'll be up :) but if it isnt - pleeease dun kill me!

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

that was such an awesome cute sweet rocking part!!
i loved the way nupur took care of mayank
n mayank was too sweet n cute in this part
the fever did effect him bad "i don't want to go to skool" ??
n neev is sooo sweet he made nupur promise to take care of mayank
cant wait for the the soiree
continue soon

Originally posted by: yeh_ada_143

HI,

I accidently clicked on your fanfic last night, but boy am I glad I did. This is one of the best FFs I've read on here! It has a little bit of everything drama, comedy, romance, etc all in a very well written package. To be honest with you, I didn't even know who "mayur" and "nupur" were before I started reading, but that hardly mattered once I did...And thanks to your FF, i've become a MayUr fan, and have been watching all the epis from the beginning on youtube :) great work! keep it up, looking fwd to reading more!

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

@bold- uhh no one can resist him? hahaha

another thing.. like i said i went to sleep after reading ur update and i dreamt about neev and nupz...

in a weird way.. haha... i woke up and i was like... ohhkays... that was weird.. haha.. see ur making me even have dreams about this ff to see how obsessed i am

;P

Originally posted by: nikki028

hiii kainath...........i'm nikhila a.k.a nikki.......well.......i hv heard abt ur ff...many of my frnz had told me tht i must read this....bt i nevr got time........bt luckily as i ws free 2day........i read all the 20 parts in a go.......
pata hai i read almost all mayur ffs here.........n ur ff has bcome one among my top 5 mayur ffs.......
srsly agar aaj bhi main yeh nahi padti....toh i wud hv missd such a heavenly rockin ff.....u truly hv amazin rockin writin skills....d way u portray emotions....state of mind...monologues....sab sab perfect hai yaar......
i'm really in vry much loooooooooooove wid ur FF.........ab mein galti se bhi i wud nevr miss ur further updates...plzzzzzzz plzzzz add me in ur pm list...hv already send u frnd req...do accept it....
once again rockin fab superb updates the dear....plzzzzzzzzz continue soooooon.......😃