FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Posted: 16 years ago

#641

@kainath- oh yeah..benji uday did remind me of fred and george...what with their weird stuff..lol...and yeah..kiran yaadav was completely like umbridge...ohh so u writing now...hoping to get a quick update then😉

p.s- wow..great to know you're an HP fan..me too crazzy for those books..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#642

hey!!!

awesome!!!!!!!!!!! I am laughing really hard. ouchie!!!!

amazing update.

continue soon.

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#643

@Rachna: Hopefully by tmr :)

@ Nishi: Thanks a ton for the review! Glad you like that 'ouchie' bit....Neev can be a bit of an embarrassment at times...lol ;)

I'll try to update by tmr :)

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parisbynight

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Posted: 16 years ago

#644

hey...im back to comment...
gosh u have no idea how restless i was for you to update!

i am having a big crush on this little neev...junior mayank! he inherited a lot from his dad character.

oh god why cant they forget and forgive what happened in the past,although just the idea of mayank sleeping with annie makes me want to murder him..i still want mayur to hit off together !

i mean who are they kidding! they love each other...and they are falling in love all over again...

i really liked todays kitchen scene...finally nupur had a good laugh!
and yeahhhhhhhhh benji had a cameo too..i dnt knw why but these days i really like his presense,be it in the show or in FFs...

the bed question had to come up!i knew need would ask mayank only and mayu would have no answer to give..nupur is better with these types of replies!

i loved it when u showed neev looking weirdly at mayur when they were hugging in the restaurant! aww he find them silly! imagine if he sees them passionatly kissing(a scene that i am eargerly waiting for)

it must be hard for both of them to keep their control over their feeling when its bedroom time! lol...

please update tomorow!

s/a small advice ,always save all ur work on hotmail!this way u wont loose evrythg even if computer breaks down..that what i do for my ff!

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archieeps

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Posted: 16 years ago

#645

Originally posted by: parisbynight
hey...im back to comment...
gosh u have no idea how restless i was for you to update!

i am having a big crush on this little neev...junior mayank! he inherited a lot from his dad character.

oh god why cant they forget and forgive what happened in the past,although just the idea of mayank sleeping with annie makes me want to murder him..i still want mayur to hit off together !

i mean who are they kidding! they love each other...and they are falling in love all over again...

i really liked todays kitchen scene...finally nupur had a good laugh!
and yeahhhhhhhhh benji had a cameo too..i dnt knw why but these days i really like his presense,be it in the show or in FFs...

the bed question had to come up!i knew need would ask mayank only and mayu would have no answer to give..nupur is better with these types of replies!

i loved it when u showed neev looking weirdly at mayur when they were hugging in the restaurant! aww he find them silly! imagine if he sees them passionatly kissing(a scene that i am eargerly waiting for)

it must be hard for both of them to keep their control over their feeling when its bedroom time! lol...

please update tomorow!

s/a small advice ,always save all ur work on hotmail!this way u wont loose evrythg even if computer breaks down..that what i do for my ff!

Thanks a ton for the long and lovely review! :) U've got a crush on Neev.....how cute! lol....who wouldnt love that little darling :)

And yes, sigh...both love each other....still keep on denying it...well at least Nups understood :) And the passionate kiss....haha....you'll see what happens anyway :))))))

And your right - all the underlying feelings and their passion and searingly obvious attraction between each other - very very hard for both Mayu and Nups....

I'm writing the chapter...editing bits...more or less done :) Will update tmr, definitely!

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Annie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#646

oh my god...........now i m running out of words..........u must seriously think of writing a novel...........or maybe we can make this into 1.......... :)

yet another amazing update...............now if Miss yadav was prof umbridge..........this Walia reminds me of the other teacher from harry porter..........who was freak.............. :)

and i love Neev...........he asks the most appropriate qs :)

ah so they love each other, and wanna suppress but for how long?

plz update soon............

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Divya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#647

Kainath, I write an FF myself...(ok, its nothing like urs..😊) ...but I just cudnt get myself to update it cos I was waiting for urs to get updated. Its strange, I kept checking for this update in office, and that's so odd for me..! Ok so Why am I writing all this? Just to let you know that ur FF is fantastic and I love it and I really appreciate ur writing it (so well) and updating it so soon...
(wow..thats a lotta things)

Now to ur update, I absolutely loved it..
Neev is turning out so marvelously that its unbelievable..
This new DMP..is sooo prof trelawney 😊 (hey pls dont mind my saying that I m a HUGE Harry potter fan n I absolutely love the characters..!!) But ofcourse, she has a character n quirks of her own very different from Prof T.. I love her cos ..because of her, M & N are going to flirt with each other n things r gonna get sooo difficult for them 😊 after 6 months 😊
They most definitely are not at dislike right now (even thou they claim that...) ...Its a lot like love (and am dancing...😊...!! Neev needs to speak more n get that bed together 🤣 ..now am getting my brain muddled..focus Divya Focus🤣
I loved that bit about Mayank losing ..hmmmm...u know his control n kissing her ..ok..u get it 🤣
I m looking fwd to ur next update now...thats how greedy i'm..sorry!!

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Senny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#648

hey Kainath you won't believe this that my squeal of delight was soooo loud when i saw that you had updated that my room mate woke up and scolded me man. I wrote such a huge review but my stupid internet got disconnected, oh no man this sucks. well i have written another one for you but i might be shorter, sowie.

Wow what an outstanding update as usual, it was in no way disorganised. On the contrary i feel it was the most organised and as usual wonderfully written chapter man.

I just want to run and give a big hug to neev, he is the rockstar of this ff and i loveeeeeeee him sooo much. I had always wanted to say this that it is quite difficult for a reader to start liking and relate with a new character who is not even there in the show but i salute you and your writing skills which have made us all not just accept and relate neev but we adore him like anything, at least i do. I just loveeeeeeee neev and i now how can nupur help but call neev her like mayank and her son hehe.

I just loveeeeeeee how neev was admiring the bike and had important plans which couldn't be materialised and the way mayank tried to make up for neev's dissappointment by talking about the dessert was excellent. I lovedddddddd how mayank warned neev. Even more adorable was nupur's concern and scolding mayank. just like a perfect wife and mum.

How dare annie the whore say stuff about nupz like that. I loveeeee how nupz was all angry but more angry and worried about losing neev than herself being degraded and insulted.

i loveeeeeeee how neev was jumping on the bed and later made excuses, aww sooo cute. I loveddddddd how he talks about soo many interesting things and the question about two beds and one bed in samrat and gunjan's home was hilarious man. neev surely is a damn smart child, this makes me love all the more man.

I lovedddddddd how nupz was slaughtering the vegetables and how mayank was scared. hehe. neil!!!! i was thinking the same thing that who is this neil man. annie doesn't even know her own child's name. this shows what a horrendous mum she had been, if at all.

i lovedddddddd how mayank appreciated nups in a subtle way. Wow that was dangerously subtle mayank. Amazingly put. Kainath you never ever fail to impress me man.

i loveddddddd the brief time mayur and neev spent with benji, i also want that magical crystal ball hehe.

I lovedddddddd how neev talked about rosie eating up kiran and then pooping it. Oh great so they have got their permanent DMP. Hey i lovedddddddddd how neev again asked the right question at the perfect time hehe. I lovedddddddd that ouchie bit, more better was the medicine for it, Wow nupur giving a seductive look hehe.

That kiss not only made ms walia uncomfortable but even mayank. I lovedddddddddd how they laughed together and i am sooo glad that nupz accepted that she still lovesssssssssss him. I am sooo sure that even mayank does.

Overall out of the world update as usual. thankyou sooo much. please update soon na.