FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 20

Originally posted by: just4coll

No..... That was an awful place to stop!!!

And Annie??? Is that Dia's friend Annie??? What happened???? What was wrong with Mayank??? And he is just so unreasonable not to take perfectly good advice on child care just because it came from Nupur... And I love Neev's Miss Noopurrr, am so glad he's getting fond of her... Really looking forward to whatever comes next...

Cheers,
Kirti

LOL.....i know....mauahahha....i love keeping ppl in suspense.. :) and u'll soon find out what the hell happened to mayank :)

Originally posted by: utfracks

omg kainath..y did u leave me in suspense yaar? lol....but amazing part...loved the mayank nupur arguement.. and i really enjoy reading the way mayank keeps forgetting sonali's name..lol..n neev is such a cutie..but whats with this annie...y does she suddenly want her son back??? y did she leave in the first place??lol...cant wait to see how everything unfolds...u're doing a fantastic job...pleaaaseeee update sooonn...pleaaase...amazing part yaar...loved it!

ps- cud u please show us somee past moments of mayur...????? i relly wanna read some cute moments b/w them..😳

:) what can i say i love keeping ppl in suspense! and i'll try to incorporate some moments between them....havent given that a thought but i'll try including it somewhere along the way :)

Originally posted by: shinella

aweeeeeeeeesome kainath
lovely
update moreeeeeeeeeee
i hope things between mayur r fine soon

thks a lot! u'll see what happens to them soon :)

hey gr8 update

Originally posted by: zoya_me

hey gr8 update

that really was awesome

annie- neevs mother, i was like [ 😲 ] infinity times

continue soon

lololololol....... thanks a lot! i'll update soon :)

Originally posted by: debby

Annie? A-N-N-I-E? What was with Mayank? I am in shock. Help me!

*coming back to earth from the depths of despair*

Nupur and Mayank have chemistry in everything they do. LOL. The fight was fiery indeed. I loved how Nupur tired to help him out with Neev - clearly a result of the past night spent crying over old memories. Mayank was abominably rude though... oh well, they are both trying their best to disguise affection with hatred. Gunjan is still her saintly self.. kudos to her! Sonali is such a livewire; I hope you somehow get her her Vikram Raina.

I smiled at the mention of CJ. I have always loved the bond she shared with Mayank. But that letter was a shocker....Man! Update soon. Real soon.

Brilliant work, as always. :)

Aww...thanks a lot! And yes your right...Mayank and Nupur really do share terrific chemistry - which is most visible when they fight, unfortunately...lol...and yes, it is Annie indeed but sadly you won't be finding out exactly why soon, sorry! And about Sonali and Vikram Raina..... :) u'll just have to wait and see what happens...the letter is just the start...more shockers along the way :)

I'll update the next chapter soon....probably by wed...meanwhile pls continue reading and churning out amazing reviews! :)

Fantastic update. I loved the humour in this chapter. And the fight between Mayank and Nupur was indeed explosive! I loved every bit of this nice, long, amazing chapter. Great work, Kainath. And the relationship portrayed in your fic - ALL of them are absolutely accurate and captivate the reader like no other fanfic. I must have said this a billion times now, but you are indeed a commendable writer!

The cliffhanger you left us at the end was nasty! And Annie?! I read it, and my jaw literally dropped. All this time I thought it was Sheena, but Annie? Real shock you gave me there. I'm dying to see what happens next. Poor Mayank!

P.S. More than any character, I love Sonali's persona. Please, please, please let her have her Vicky.

Originally posted by: cheenukoul

Fantastic update. I loved the humour in this chapter. And the fight between Mayank and Nupur was indeed explosive! I loved every bit of this nice, long, amazing chapter. Great work, Kainath. And the relationship portrayed in your fic - ALL of them are absolutely accurate and captivate the reader like no other fanfic. I must have said this a billion times now, but you are indeed a commendable writer!

The cliffhanger you left us at the end was nasty! And Annie?! I read it, and my jaw literally dropped. All this time I thought it was Sheena, but Annie? Real shock you gave me there. I'm dying to see what happens next. Poor Mayank!

P.S. More than any character, I love Sonali's persona. Please, please, please let her have her Vicky.

Thank you sooo much for the lovely review :) 😳 The cliffhanger was cruel, yes, but you'll just have to wait and see what happens next :) And u'll soon discover the Annie mystery too....but not toooo soon i'm afraid :) I'll most probably update by wed, so meanwhile R&R!

and Sonali...for that too, i'm afraid ur gonna have to wait :)

hey i hope you are fine now... take care

Thank you so much for such a long update.. it was beautifully written..

Loved the description of mayank's routine.
Ok , neev is my fave character now, pee pee colour dress.

i feel really bad for nups... she seems so hurt, and mayu was clearly over reacting on the thumb-sucking part...

But why annie !!! yuck.. really want to know what happened..
even admist all the tension and fights, it had its fun moments..

Is this custody battle gona bring nm close?
nice to see CJ... Hope we will meet sam soon.. may be he will lighten up nups mood a little bit.

its going really awesome yaar.. looking forward for the next update