FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 21

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: bronze12

hey i hope you are fine now... take care

Thank you so much for such a long update.. it was beautifully written..

Loved the description of mayank's routine.
Ok , neev is my fave character now, pee pee colour dress.

i feel really bad for nups... she seems so hurt, and mayu was clearly over reacting on the thumb-sucking part...

But why annie !!! yuck.. really want to know what happened..
even admist all the tension and fights, it had its fun moments..

Is this custody battle gona bring nm close?
nice to see CJ... Hope we will meet sam soon.. may be he will lighten up nups mood a little bit.

its going really awesome yaar.. looking forward for the next update



Thank you soooo much!! I know, Neev is adorable right? lol....and yes, Mayank was indeed overreacting, just not taking Nups advice into consideration was silly :)

and why annie i'm afraid you'll find out only in later chapters :( but dun worry, u'll see how mayur are affected by this news veryyy soon :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome yaar
fabulassssssssss
d fight was amazing
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d longest part yaar wonderful job
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesome yaar

fabulassssssssss
d fight was amazing
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d longest part yaar wonderful job
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 d pm



Ur welcome! and thank you so much for the review! i'll try to update by wed :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

OMG you left a cliff hanger Kainat, now i just can't wait to read the next chapter!

So Mayank blamed the cereal and that one miute's sleep he missed for his whole day!!! LOL!😆😆
So glad Neev is really fond of Miss Noopurrr...,😆 and Myank just ignored the advice just because it came from her!
Shilpa going to Neev's school, that would definetly be interesting!
Annie is Neev's mum? Annie as in Dia's friend!? So she wants Neev's custody,.... hmm maybe to prevent that Mayank will have to get married or something? 😉
Anyway great chapter, cant wait to read the next one, pleeeeeeeeeeease update soon...😳
Anjali
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: archieeps


Aww...thanks a lot! And yes your right...Mayank and Nupur really do share terrific chemistry - which is most visible when they fight, unfortunately...lol...and yes, it is Annie indeed but sadly you won't be finding out exactly why soon, sorry! And about Sonali and Vikram Raina..... :) u'll just have to wait and see what happens...the letter is just the start...more shockers along the way :)

I'll update the next chapter soon....probably by wed...meanwhile pls continue reading and churning out amazing reviews! :)



@bold: Well, I am willing to wait for that one - I am sure u'll have a convincing enough reason or Mayank will really hear it from me. 😃
Waiting for ur next update eagerly. :)

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: debby



@bold: Well, I am willing to wait for that one - I am sure u'll have a convincing enough reason or Mayank will really hear it from me. 😃
Waiting for ur next update eagerly. :)



Haha...thanks for the review! Please read and review once I update. And pls update ur FF too! :)
Posted: 16 years ago
great updt
annie is neev's mom? wow
anyways continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: *angel94*

OMG you left a cliff hanger Kainat, now i just can't wait to read the next chapter!

So Mayank blamed the cereal and that one miute's sleep he missed for his whole day!!! LOL!😆😆
So glad Neev is really fond of Miss Noopurrr...,😆 and Myank just ignored the advice just because it came from her!
Shilpa going to Neev's school, that would definetly be interesting!
Annie is Neev's mum? Annie as in Dia's friend!? So she wants Neev's custody,.... hmm maybe to prevent that Mayank will have to get married or something? 😉
Anyway great chapter, cant wait to read the next one, pleeeeeeeeeeease update soon...😳
Anjali



Thanks a lot for the review! i know i know the cliffhanger was cruel...lol....but wait for the next chapter :) haha....yes he did blame the one minute and sugar puffs - in actuality, there's way too much affection for Nupur... :)

About the Annie affair....u'll find out...in sum time :)

I'll try to update by wed, please r & r!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

great updt
annie is neev's mom? wow
anyways continue soon



:) Thanks for the review...i'll try to update by wed!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: archieeps



Thank you sooo much for the lovely review :) 😳 The cliffhanger was cruel, yes, but you'll just have to wait and see what happens next :) And u'll soon discover the Annie mystery too....but not toooo soon i'm afraid :) I'll most probably update by wed, so meanwhile R&R!

and Sonali...for that too, i'm afraid ur gonna have to wait :)



I can't wait! Please update soon. And desperately want to know about Annie too. I hope she doesn't cause too much chaos!

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