FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago
By the way, is this twist going to be good, or bad for MN? Please don't make the situation more complicated than it already is!
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Posted: 16 years ago
the more i read, the more im falling in love wid this ff...............u r a gr8 writer...........plz update soon...........waiting for feelings to rekindle
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Posted: 16 years ago

you have no idea how long i waited for this part..

u must be soooo annoyed at me always asking for u to updte and u neve fail at giving us an amazing part.
the dialogues .... i swear at times i couldn't stop laughing, the sarcastic grown up mayank seems so much hotter than the mayank we know now.. and i just love how nupur and mayanks blood boil at each others names..
neev was hilarious too.. in the thumb sucking bit..
cliff hanger!!
aahhh this is not good as im trying to confiscate my laptop from me so i can study..
do cont soon...
u have me caught on
xxSonia
ps Where do u live??
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cheenukoul

By the way, is this twist going to be good, or bad for MN? Please don't make the situation more complicated than it already is!



Haha, I'm sorry dear, but I can't reveal anything yet! Pls read and review my nxt chapter which should be cmg up on wed :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: annie07

the more i read, the more im falling in love wid this ff...............u r a gr8 writer...........plz update soon...........waiting for feelings to rekindle



Thks a lot! I'll update on wed :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

you have no idea how long i waited for this part..

u must be soooo annoyed at me always asking for u to updte and u neve fail at giving us an amazing part.
the dialogues .... i swear at times i couldn't stop laughing, the sarcastic grown up mayank seems so much hotter than the mayank we know now.. and i just love how nupur and mayanks blood boil at each others names..
neev was hilarious too.. in the thumb sucking bit..
cliff hanger!!
aahhh this is not good as im trying to confiscate my laptop from me so i can study..
do cont soon...
u have me caught on
xxSonia
ps Where do u live??



Hi Sonia,

Thank you soo much for the amazing review! I'm glad I could make you laugh, but not so glad I'm keeping you from your studies :( oops! but the fact that you can't keep ur laptop away from u coz of this FF, really flatters me! aww....thanks a ton! I'll update by wed!

I live in S'pore now but London before...is it because of the lingo used in this part? lol...I use way too many English expressions.... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: archieeps



Hi Sonia,

Thank you soo much for the amazing review! I'm glad I could make you laugh, but not so glad I'm keeping you from your studies :( oops! but the fact that you can't keep ur laptop away from u coz of this FF, really flatters me! aww....thanks a ton! I'll update by wed!

I live in S'pore now but London before...is it because of the lingo used in this part? lol...I use way too many English expressions.... :)

oohhhhh Singapore!! ur only 2 hrs behind me.. hehe i live in Melb. i guess i knda did think it was someone living out of India especially with the terms Sonali used 😆😆😆.. and i reckon it just gave it that hint of reality.. hehe.. n u lived in London b4?? oohh good old pommies.. haha
on other stuff abut singapore. i LOVE ur airport and sinagpore airlines.. hehe. i could live there. 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

oohhhhh Singapore!! ur only 2 hrs behind me.. hehe i live in Melb. i guess i knda did think it was someone living out of India especially with the terms Sonali used 😆😆😆.. and i reckon it just gave it that hint of reality.. hehe.. n u lived in London b4?? oohh good old pommies.. haha
on other stuff abut singapore. i LOVE ur airport and sinagpore airlines.. hehe. i could live there. 😛



Ur from Aussie Land! that too my fav place in aussie land! i absolutely adoooore melbourne....if I wasnt going to london, my 2nd choice was uni melb :) and pommies! gawd, i havent heard that word in a loooong time...i remember my aussie friends used to call me a pommie...lol....whereas I'm a full fledged Indian.. :)

and i had to include those terms - especially for Sonali, coz it fit her personality - as you rightly said, it reflects reality....particularly in our generation... :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
i think he will marry nupur .... because of this custody case.....and neev is fond of misssss nopurrrrr.....i mean miss nupur😆..so court will settle for neev 's comfort......ok this a guess!!😆..awesome part yaar...........it was the longest part.....i had fun........please update soon.pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
what a cliff hanger....i seriously can not wait for the next update...
this was such an brilliant part aswell....and it was nice and longggggg....lol

hope your feeling better now hun.

x

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