FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 18

wow.. beautifully written.. The hottie convo was hilarious. kids can b so difficult at times... poor mayank

Flashbacks were really nice.. i cud visualize..
Loved the part when he thought abt her pinkish cheeks and her eyes.. awww

When are you updating next? eagerly waiting...

Awwww... you made poor Nupur cry herself to sleep 😭😭😭

And how could Mayank call her plain and boring??? Makes me think that whatever happened was his fault. That and the fact that he moved on - dated she-zilla (whoever she was), married her, had Neev - whereas poor Nupur is still in the same place in a manner of speaking. She hasn't gotten over the hurt, or him... Makes me want to kick Mayank in the butt (and he's one of my fav TV characters)....

Loved the update Kainath - and Sonali is a wonderful friend...

OHH i seriously can not wait for the next part......mayank is officially the worlds best father....i cnt wait for them both to get bck together.....the last bit was soooo touching....poor nupur!!

neways brilliant as always...cant wait for the next part..update soon again...n i loved the length!!

Originally posted by: bronze12

wow.. beautifully written.. The hottie convo was hilarious. kids can b so difficult at times... poor mayank

Flashbacks were really nice.. i cud visualize..
Loved the part when he thought abt her pinkish cheeks and her eyes.. awww

When are you updating next? eagerly waiting...

Thank you sooo much! :) I'll try to update by tmr!

Originally posted by: just4coll

Awwww... you made poor Nupur cry herself to sleep 😭😭😭

And how could Mayank call her plain and boring??? Makes me think that whatever happened was his fault. That and the fact that he moved on - dated she-zilla (whoever she was), married her, had Neev - whereas poor Nupur is still in the same place in a manner of speaking. She hasn't gotten over the hurt, or him... Makes me want to kick Mayank in the butt (and he's one of my fav TV characters)....

Loved the update Kainath - and Sonali is a wonderful friend...

Hahah....actually the she-zilla is a reference to Nupur....lol....and I know, i feel bad too that i had to make nups cry - but she is hurt, i mean she saw Mayank after so many years - and your right, she definitely hasnt gotten over him ;) hahah.....kicking him in the butt would be a good wake up call for mayank

Thanks you soo much for the review!

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

that was such an emotional n funny part
loved the father-son hottie convo🤣
what r the kids learning these days?😆
n i feel so bad for mayank n nupur😭
both of them r so hurt i really can't help wonder what happened b/w them
anyways continue soon
i still wanna whose neev's mom n mayur's past

Thanks a ton! I feel bad for them too....lol...and it's me whoz manipulating them...sad....you'll find out everything....but in snippets :)

Originally posted by: xOxMwahxOx

OHH i seriously can not wait for the next part......mayank is officially the worlds best father....i cnt wait for them both to get bck together.....the last bit was soooo touching....poor nupur!!

neways brilliant as always...cant wait for the next part..update soon again...n i loved the length!!

Thank you!! Haha....glad you feel the same as Neev, that Mayank isthe world's best dad :) My next update shld be hopefully out by tmr...so please read and review!

Originally posted by: zoya_me

when are you updating....i'm getting restless i visited the forum god knows how many times just to read your update please update soon.

Hi, I will try to update as soon as possible, I'm just trying to frame up the chapter....should come out by Sunday :)