TERA MERA SAATH{RN FIC}PRT11/PG44 - Page 25

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Superbbbb ud...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks Priya...

sab se pahle yeh Veer koun hai...??? kahin yeh toh nahi jiss k bare main soch rahi hun...!!! Ab mujhe kya pata tum kya soch rahi ho...😉😆😆

matlab....???? chal jane de...pata toh chal hi jayega...vaise mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai is fic ka first page...!!! agar jo main soch rahi hun...voh sahi hai toh jawab mujhe mil gaya...varna confusion dur karne k liye toh tu hai hi...!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 Wah wah...!!! Kya logics hain... bilkul sumi ke Ayaan ke jaise...😉

alekh...mr fresher aur naina...miss fresher...n raj aur naina...best couple...tum ne last me surprise package daal diya hai....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Surprise pack...😆😆😆 Yaar kya karun, raha nahi gaya...

ab Huda ka xpression bhi mujhe saaf saaf dikhai dene laga hai...bichara kitna frustrated dikh raha hoga...aur use vahan company dene k liye Ritu toh hogi hi...!!! dono hi same situation me hain...bole toh dil hi dil me bol rahe honge...Raj aur naina k bare me 'hath ko aaya muh na lagaa' na huda ko kuch mila aur na hi ritu ko...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Kitna sahi kaha tune Priya, itna acha dialogue to mere dimaag me bhi nahi aata...😆 😆 😆

pura dance scene baht hi khubsurat tarike se tum ne likha hai...!!! toh raj ko us bartender par shaq ho hi gaya....!!! par yudi...??? pata nahi yeh kaam banayega ya phir bigadega... Yudi kya kar payega aur kya nahi...isme to mujhe bhi shak hai...

vaise raj ka dr mishra aur huda ko dance k liye kahna achha tha... bichare pahle se hi dukhi the...aur raj unhe aur bhi jyada chidha raha tha...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Raj ko laga ki behti ganga me usse bhi haath dho lena chahiye...😆

Mana ko thanxxx nahi kahungi...kyoun ki hum dono k bich ek deal hui hai...isiliye voh samajh jayegi...!!! lekin maine abhi tak tujh par se gussa thuka nahi hai... Mujhe bhi batao iss deal ke baare me... Mujhe koi kuch batata hi nahi...😭😭😭 Kyun nahi thuka gussa... mai itni buri hun kya...

ab yeh toh hadh hi ho gayi...Sumi kahti hai...ki main aur Mana mushibat hain...aur voh hamara sath degi...!!! arre yaar...hum toh social service karte hain...jiss sab ko faida hota hai...matlab hum sare readers ko...writer k bare meeeeeee..........pata nahi....😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Achha jee.. aap aur aapka social service... To aap par bhi mai apni social service shuru kar deti hun...

ab cont soon nahi kahungi...kyoun ki ab mujhe dhamki dene ki aadat pad gayi hai...sochti hun ek SARKAAR company khol hi dun... dhamkiyaan dene k liye...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Yeah right... aur tujhe dhamkiyan dene ke liye na hum sab mil jaate hain... acha rahega na...😉😆😆

Thanks for your comments Priya...

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

simply amazing part.....

rn had to be d best couple and d in btwn lines during d dancxe wer too good...luved d same....👏

updt soon

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Best couple award toh RN ko milna tha. No other option... u see...😉

The dance scene between naina and raj was too romantic. Both of them are lost in eachother. Well... but that's their USP... kabhi bhi, kahin bhi... they are lost in each other...😉

Par what is this mistery behind Veer. waiting to know about it. Arey yaar no mystery in it...everything is crystal clear...😆😆😆

Huda aur Ritu ko phasane ka bahut acha plan banaya. Ritu is so drunk that she does not even undertand how enbarassing the whole situation is . When did Ritu have the sense to understand anything...😡

Raj is impressed and touched to see Naina's dedeication towards her duty. he has come to respect him even more. You are right... Naina is really dedicated to whatever work she undertakes...

Raj's dedication and alertness are impacable. He notices that the waiter and bar tender is the same person who has collided with him earlier. Raj has always been like that... he cannot compromise with the safety of the cadets and other faculty members...

Even Naina realises the danger....but keep her witts...she suggests that they should send Yudi to check as no one will suspect him But Yudi... I am doubtful about him...

Please continue soon...waiting to know what happens next.. Sure... don't worry, everything will be fine... And thanks for your comments Nisha...

Originally posted by: danish1

it was a great episode.

raj and naina's chemistry was superb.

naina's confusion is beautifully matched with the steps of her dance ,

you are a wonderful writer.👏

please continue👍🏼

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

hiii fantastic
mindblowing
rocking
kya dance tha wow
my fav. song
plz ud soon

love
deepa

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Sorry again for being so late lateef, now a days it has become my habbit i think. Its okay yaar... ye hum sab ki habit banti ja rahi hai... including me...

G8 part. 👏 👏 👏 Thanks dear...

I knew that Alekh would win the prize of Mr. Fresher and Naina will be Ms. Fresher. It was absurdly simple... wasn't it...😉

But this time u gave really a superb surprise to me by announcing couple of the evening award n i knew that very well only our RN deserve this award. We don't have any other choice...😉😆😆

Raj is busy in finding anything suspicious and so as Bunty but i know it's not that easy to find in this crowd. After the announcement of awards Huda again got jealous with Raj. He has so much hatred against Raj now. Well... Huda was always a bit too sure of himself and hence he gets jealous when somebody betters him... but he is helpless and so m I... because Raj is the best...isn't he...

I think now he must accept that he can never get Phoolan. Superb idea of dance again. I think in fb u showed that Naina knows any Veer and he is the Rajveer, may be they r telephone friends and never met before that. Lets see... I will unravel that bit soon..

So the Bartender is the suspicious guy. Keen observation by Rajveer and i like Naina's spirit of facing the danger with Rajveer. Akhir Raj ki portgue hai tabhi to best ban k dikhayegi na. You are so absolutely right... I couldn't have said it any better...

I think Yudi can do the task , let's see. Yes... let's see...

continue soon. Sure darling... And thanks for your comments...

Originally posted by: esha143

wonderful update Guglu Thanks Siri...

Fresher Awards ka part dekhke LRL ki yaad phir se taaja hogayi.aur tum ne toh iss mein 'extra colours' add kar di hai 'Best Couple' Award se.aahir RN ki baath hai toh ye honi hi chaahiye na.love you for this.🤗 Thanks again... yaar kya karun...jab RN ka jikr aata hai to mai humesha ki kuch extra karne ki koshish karti hun...aadat se majbur hun na...

Huda ka toh double band bajh gaya.........pehle Mr.Fresher ki title chali gayi aur ab RN ko Best Couple of the Evening Award mila.mai toh soch soch ke hi paagal ho rahi hu(hasi rokne ke liye)ki Huda ka chehra kaise dikh raha hoga iss ke baadh.🤣 🤣 🤣aur Ritu ji toh kuch kehne ki haalath main bhi nahi hai.good for her.😆 Wo kya hai na...Huda ke sitare gardish me hai na...😉 isliye band baj gayi uski... aur Ritu hosh me rehkar kaun sa teer maar leti... isliye maine uske hosh o hawas chinn liye....

yaar tumhe kaise pata chalaa ki hum bohuth 'laallchi' type ke fans hai😉?jitni bhi baar RN ke dance sequences aathi hai uthni baar hume accha lagtha hai.issiliye tumne ek aur RN dance daal diya hai na iss ud main.thanx so much yaar. superb dance sequence.👏👏. Arey khud RN fan hun na... isliye pata hai...😉 And thanks for liking the scens Siri... M glad I could present it in an understandable form...

aur isi bahaane kuch puraane raaz saamne aagaye.toh RN pehle se hi ek doosre ko jaanthe the.lagtha hai har baar phone par hi baath ki hai.par jab Naina ko ye sab yaad hai toh Rajveer ko yaad nahi hai kya?ab toh vo bhi jaantha hai ki Naina wahi hai jisse vo baath kartha tha? Arey arey shaant.. Kisko kya pata hai aur kise kya yaad hai ye agle update me pata chal jayega... tab tak karo thoda sa intezaar...

par yaar jis tarah se tumne unki baathe sunaayi,i mean dance ke beech main,its really amazing.👏👏👏 aur dance toh hai hi mast. Thanks again... yaar ye pura comment thanks kehte kehte hi nikal jayega...

n true Rajveer even in the middle of all the celebrations remains a focused and dedicated soldier.👏 Wo to wo humesha se hi tha... That's what makes him so different from others,... u see...

so we can expect some action part soon and so waiting for the next update.pls yaar dont take so much time.pichli baar tumne bohuth time lagaa di ud karne main.continue soooooooooooon..................................................................................... Ohhkk Siri... I will update soon......Pakka wada...Love, Guglu

Originally posted by: preet09

mene bhi reserrve kar liya......par isbaar jaldi edit bhi kar dungi..................pakka


promise

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hieeee Guglu !!! Hii Mana...itna bada Hiii...kuch jyada hi khush lag rahi ho...

first of all thanks a lottttttttt !! 😃 Ab thanks kisliye...😉

Meri request pe tumne isse UD kiya ! Woh kya hai na....VEER ki mystery bahot entice kar rahi hai ki isse jaldi jaldi aage padhu ! 😃 Ha ha ha... TDQ padhne ke baad tujhe Veer ki mystery entice kar rahi hai...!!!😲 Tu to gayi kaam se...

Aur dekhle ! Maine " LIKE" button bhi press kiya hai ! 😛 Haan haan...dekh liya hai...

Toh aate hai Update par ... Okay...abhi tak were u beating round the bush...???😉

what do you think how the Update was ???? How am I to know...that's for you to tell me na... *anxious look*

Arey it was FANTABULOUSSSSSSSSSSS !!! 😃 👏👏 👏 👏 Thanks a tonn...*sigh of relief*

Raj was right...there was no point in letting others know, coz it would have created chaos... Yes, because most of them were cadets, they wouldn't know how to deal with the situation...

He himself went following that bartender, but that DONKEY came in between ! 😡 DONKEY...😆 😆 😆 Sahi naamkaran kiya hai tune...

Kahin LRL ki tarah yaha bhi HUDA misled toh nahi hai na? 😕

Aur aisa karne ki uske paas ek aur wajah bhi hogi phir ! Naina ki nazron mein HERO ban na ! Wo to hai hi waisa... gadha hi rahega...

Shit ! that bartender slipped....But good that Naina found original bartender... Well, kuch khoya hai to kuch milega bhi na...

Raj asked everyone to leave, but as usual Naina questioned him 😛

True...Raj shouldnt have said it sternly, but it was an emergency and along with that it was Raj's concern for her ...( hum hamesha Raj ki hi side par rahenge ! 😉) Wo to mai bhi dekh rahi hun... Raj humesha hi sahi hota hai... hai na...😉

Oh god ! A blast !! 😲 Ab muh band kar, warna makhhi ghus jayegi...😉

And like always....this time too Naina saved him....and both were concerned about each other...😊 Wo to normal baat hai na... dono ko ek dusre ki fikr hai...apni nahi...

Good that Brig answered on behalf of Raj and shut that Nair up ! Uparse Raj was all praises for Naina ! 😃 Wo to humesha hi Naina ko praise karta rehta hai...

Shalini did a right thing sedating Raj ! 😛 Chalo, doctor ne bhi certificate de diya hai...ab mujhe koi tension nahi hai...

And now Naina too is admitted in infirmary. aur kya karti... *innocent look*

Subah hote hi Captain saab ne cheekhna shuru kiya ! 😆 Ha ha ha... wo to hum sabko pata hai ki Raj ko hospitals aur infirmary se kitni nafrat hai...

Again Naina got hint about similarities in some of her memories of past... Hope you reveal them soooooooooooooooooooooon ! 😛 Arey baba haaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnn... I will be doing it real sooooooooooooooooonnnn!!! Ab khush...???

Raj was annoyed seeing Naina's condition...

Ab EXACTLY Rajveer sir iss baat keliye Cadet Singh ki kaise class lete hai....iska intezaar rahega ! 😃 Yaar har kisi ko issi baat ka intezaar hai ki Raj Naina ki kaisi class lega...😆😆😆 Kya lagta hai tum sab ko... raj kabhi Naina se naaraz ho sakta hai kya...???

Guglu jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiise waapas aao and update karo ! Kiya na update...

Aur haan ! hamare comment ko reply bhi ! 😛 Wo bhi kiya hai...dekh le...😛 Thanks for your detailed comments Mana...