TERA MERA SAATH{RN FIC}PRT11/PG44 - Page 26

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

just superb up

thanks for the pm plz cont soon

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

mindblowing update. loved it. Thanks darling...!!!

kaun iye sab kar raha hain. wahi to pata karna hai na Raj ko...

raj ne accha kya sab ko na bata ke,bekar mein sab pareshan ho jate, good move raj ka.

iye huda kuchgarpa kar rahahain mujhe lag rahahain but kya? Jaldi hi pata chal jayega... but ye to natural hai ... Huda humesha kuch na kuch gadbad karta hi rehta hai..

chalo,asli bartender mil gaya dono ko.

lo blast hogaya,

raj and naina injured.Jaldi hi theek ho jayenge yaar...don't worry...

Iye niar, phir se gaaya, raj ne accha kya naina ka praise karke uss nair ke saamne.Brig. ne bhi raj ka sath dia.

shalini did right thing to give sedative to raj, nehi toh raj toh ussi halat mein jane ko soch raha tha. Raj apne aap ko kuch jyada hi superman jo samajhta hai...😉

lo,raj toh naina ko iss halat mein dekh ke gussa ho gaye,Very natural...

continue soon. Sure darling and thanks for your comments...

Originally posted by: esha143

yaar guglu mujhe na tere iss fic ko padhke bohuth mazaa aatha hai.kabhi lagtha hai ki ye bilkul LRL ki tarah hai aur phir bhi nahi hai.ab yahi dekhlo Huda Rajveer ke raaste mein aagaya ab ye ussne jaan boojhke kiya hai ya nahi kise pata?(sivaay tumhaare)ab sab ko toh yahi lagegaa na ki Huda LRL ki tarah Raj ki dushman hai.ab dekhnaa ye hai ki ye kitna sach hai.Yaar Siri...sach pucho to kabhi kabhi mai bhi confuse ho jaati hun ki iss fic ka mai kya karun, matlab akun si cheez LRL se different karun aur kaun si same... jab shuru kiya tha iss fic ko, agar tabhi pata chalta ki ye itna confusing hai to kabhi nahi shuru karti...par ab band bhi nahi karsakti... AB Huda ko hi le lo... mujhe Huda bilkul bhi nahi pasand isliye uska kya karna hai ye to maine bhi nahi socha abhi tak...

aur ab aathe hai hamaare pyaare couple par.ye dono kisi bhi fic mein argue karna toh chodenge nahi.par phir bhi sahi hi hai agar chod denge toh vo RN kaise lagenge,hai na?aur Naina se toh argue karke bhi koi faidaa hi nahi hai kyun ki usse toh koi nahi jeet saktha,Raj toh bilkul bhi nahi.pataa nahi usse ye baat kyun nahi samajh mein aatha.ab khud usspe chilla rahaa hai aur phir guilty feel kar rahaa hai.Ab Raj aur Naina ki endless arguments to LRL ki hi den hai, fir wo dono argue karna kaise chod denge...??? Haan ye jarur alag baat hai ki Raj Naina se naraaz nahi reh sakta... ussi par gussa nikalta hai aur fir khud ko guilty feel karta hai...aur abhi bhi Raj ke bheje me ye baat nahi ghussi hai ki wo Naina se koi bhi argument nahi jeet sakta...kyunki abhi unki love story ki track shuru nahi hui hai na...isliye...😆😆😆

oh god ....bomb!!!!thanx guglu ki tu ne RN ko bachaliya.Raj aur Naina dono ko chot lagi hai phir bhi vo dono ek doosre ke chot ke baare mein soch rahe hai.now thats what we call LOVE.aur chot lagne ke baawajoodh Raj aur Naina dono apni duty ke liye tayyaar ho gaye aur aag bhujaane ki koshish mein lag gaye.REAL SOLDIERS.ahcha hua Suriji bhi aagaye unki help ke liye.Arey RN ko mai kuch kaise hone de sakti hun...unke bina to kahani hi aage nahi badhegi...Yaar abhi to bas CONCERN hai, ye LOVE kahan se aa gaya...??? Ab KMA me hain to soldiers hi banenge na aur wo bhi REAl waale warna kya faida...???😉😆😆

aur yaar ye BS lagtha hai BC se kaafi alag hai aur achcha bhi.BC ne kabhi MC ke khilaaf kuch nahi kahaa par BS ne Naina aur Raj dono ki tarafdaari ki hai jab MC un dono ko blame kar rahaa tha.that was indeed very nice.I love your BS for this.just keep him that way only.and he made Raj go to the infirmary with Naina.good.warna Raj ko toh bas sabuth dhoondne ki padi hai,khud ki toh usse kuch parwaah hai hi nahi. Actually mujhe na BC par issi baat par gussa aata tha ki wo RN ke liye humesha musibaten khadi karta rehta tha... isliye maine usse change kar diya aur BS ko le aayi...😆 Aur Raj to apne aap ko superman ka vanshdhar samajhta hai issliye to chot lagne ke baad bhi jaane ki zidd kar raha tha...adiyal kahin ka... par shalini bhi kam nahi hai kuch...

Shalini was too smart for Raj.ussne Raj ko tranquiliser de di.very good doc.warna ye aadmi toh bas kaam,kaam aur kaam.ufff.......ab thoda toh aaram karega.n she kept Naina in the infirmary too.and Naina ,usse toh pata nahi ki Raj aur Shalini usske baare mein sab kuch jaanthe hai.Maina kaha na Shalini kuch kam nahi hai...usse pata hai ki captain shekhawat ko kaise handle karna chahiye...

the early morning infirmary scene was very nice.Naina taking care of Raj,Raj cursing Shalini for giving him the injection,Naina scolding him for pressurising his injured arm everything was so funny n a bit intimate too.RN are seemingly coming closer to each other.and yaar what is this past of her that she is remembering in bits?she is damn confusing us as well with these thoughts.jaldi clear karo ki RN kaise jaanthe the ek doosre ko pehle se.Ab Naina agar Raj ka khayal nahi rakhegi to kaun rakhega? After all wo uski protegee jo hai...😉 and relax, jaldi hi tere saath saath sabko patra chal jayega ki ye thoughts kya hain... par yaar ye confusing nahi hai...its crystal clear...😆😆😆

the convo of Raj-Shalini was hilarious.Shalini's asking"Doctor mai hun ya aap?" and Raj's counter-questioning "mariz mai hun ya aap?"-that was damn good yaar🤣Wo to maine bas aise hi likh diya tha...itne dhamakon ke bich thoda sa relief to chahiye na...chal tujhe hasi to aayi...

so Naina became incharge of his medication.good.ab vo bachke nahi jaa saktha Naina jo itni ziddi hai.aur ye Naina bhi nahi bach paayi Shalini se.aur oopar se ab Raj bhi usse gussa ho gaya uski haalath dekh kar.well ye toh hona hi tha.ab pata nahi Naina ka kya hoga jab vo Raj se akele mein milegi?chalo dekhthe hai aage aage kya hotha hai..............waise tu hume dikha kab rahi hai ki aage kya hogaa...................update soon yaar.............................. Isliye to Naina ko medication ki zimmedari di hai taaki humare SUPERMAN bach na sake...warna wo to infirmary aur hospital se bhagne me expert hain...😉😉😆😆😉😉 Par uski khud ki haalat ka wo kya karegi ye to mai bhi nahi jaanti...😆😆😆 Haan yaar, mai jaldi hi bata dungi ki aage kya hoga...par Naina ki kya haalat hogi wo to Raj hi jaane...Mai bas update karne hi jaa rahi hun... Thanks for your comments Siri...

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: khushi909

lovely ud deba

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

lovely update.... Thanks shona...

So naina found the real bartender but he ws unconscious....Yes...poor guy, he was chloroformed...

Raj tried to go after that fake bartender..but stopped by huda.. 😡 ..n he escaped...!!! Huda is an irritating pest...😡

Raj asked angrily naina to leave from there...naina felt bad for his behaviour..raj realised his mistake.. so there that unknown peron hd fixed a bomb behind the bar... raj n naina both escaped but got hurt...!!! They were within the range of that bomb and hence got hurt

gud that brig. gave nair a hard time by answering on behalf of Raj...
Raj n naina both were asked to go to infirmary..shalini gave seditive to raj becoz he wanted to go there again...I have already said a couple of times before... Raj thinks he is a superman...😆😆😆
so naina also slept in the infirmary..Raj is shocked to see naina there...Yes poor guy...!!! He was in for so many shocks...

so finally Raj got discharged after many times pleading to shalini..heheheh... but as shalini asked naina to stay in the infirmary, Raj realised that naina also hurted so much... he got angry but didnt say a word n left from there... !!!!!
lovely update.... naina is trying to recall her memory...!!! ?? Yes...lets see what happens when she fully recalls her memory...😉

waiting for the next update.... M updating right away... Thanks a ton for the comment...

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiiii guglu..... Hi Yogitha...

Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 fabulous part 👏 👏 👏 👏dear Thanks darling...

what this stupid huda is doing there..aur usne raj se kyun takraya.....us stupid ki wajah se raj missed that bartender...kahi ye sab huda jaan bhooch ke to nahin kiya ..kya huda bhi unlogon se mila hua hain yaar Huda to hai hi stupid... aur wo mila hua hai ki nahi abhi tak mai bhi ye baat nahi jaanti...Hope agle update me pata chal jayega...

raj naina ko jaane ke liye kaha ,but she dont want to leave ....naina bhi sahi hain ..raj ko aise akele chodhkar kaisa jaa sakthi hain wo...first raj shouted at her for not listening to him but later he felt guilty for shouting at her...n said sorry to her...ab raj ka bhi galthi nahin ..raj is worried about nainas safety na thats why thoda sternly baat ki naina se usne Yaar yahi to problem hai na...dono me se koi bhi galat nahi hai...apne apne point of view se dono hi sahi hain... Koi ab kya kare...

Thank God ya thanks to u kahun.. thanks to u hi kehthi hun...ab is fic main jo bhi hota hain tumhari marzi se hi hota hai na ...raj aur naina bachgaye.. lekin donon ko kitna chote lag gayi Dono bomb ki range me jo the...isliye choten lag gayi...ab caaualty to nahi thi par chot na lage aisa thode i na ho sakta hai...

BS is so nice yaar...us ne kitne taarif ki raj n naina ka..i loved that scene.. aur nair ki bolthi bandh karadi usne Isn't BS adorable...???😆😆😆

Shalini ne tikh ki sedative dekar ..nahin to captain saab to rest lene ka naam hi nahin le raha hain Usse humesha se hi infirmary se bhagne ka mauka chahiye bass...😆😆😆

yaar jaldi se naina ka true identity reveal karo ...aur uske past ke bare main bhi ...jaldi ...plzzz Reveal kya karun... everything is crstal clear...

T he early morning scene is so nice ..shalini n rajs convo is hillarious well, we do need a relief after an action packed series...don't we...😉..??

raj was annoyed seeing nainas condition.....ab dekhna ye hain ki raj naina ka class kaisa lega Sabko issi ka intezaar hai ki Raj naina ki kaisi class lega...😆😆😆 Yaar Raj se hi pooch lo..mujhe sach me nahi pata ki uske dimag me kya chal raha hai...😆😆😆

plzz continue soon aur wo bhi long part Kar rahi hun baba..aur waise bhi maine long update ka wada bhi kiya hai na... so u can rest assured about the size of the update...And thanks for commenting...

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Chalo....maine bhi 'like' button press kar diya....ab silent ban jau kya?? Lolz....ye possible nahi....mujhe Raj k bare me kitniiiiiiiiii baatein karni hoti hai pata hai na.....hehe. Arey nahi nahi...tu silent ho gayi to bolega kaun...??? Tu toh bak bak karti hui hi achi lagti hai...

Raj was trying to follow that fake bartender....but this Huda....gadha kahin ka....aa gaya bich me....I doubt if that was purposeful!!! Raj was superbly in his Captain mode...ordering every1 and all....too gud!! And I liked the way Brigadier Sareen backed him in front of Nair....and also Raj praised Naina for everything....he is soooooooo sweet yaar!! Raj to humesha se hi sweet tha, hai aur rahega,.. hai na...???😉 Can he be anything else...??? Ab Huda ka to mujhe nahi pata...shayad agle update me pata chal jaye...but yes, Raj was in his full captain mode... wo waisa hi acha lagta hai...

Ab ye Naina ki identity kya hai?? Is she a trained army personnel or wat?? U c....her way of interrogating also surprised Shalini!!! And of course....last part k wo mysterious flashbaks!!! Uff....Gugly....tum bhi itne mysteries bich me chhor kar Hyadrabad jaa rahi ho.....gosh!! Yaar mystery kahan hai...everything is crystal clear...chashma laaga tui...tor chokh kharap hoye gache...😉 Ache khaase clear scenes me tujhe mystery nazar aati hai...😆😆😆

Thnx to Mana....jiski wajah se tumne at least isse pehle ek UD to kar di....aur haan....dont think u r ever gonna be this lucky that we al turn silent n u dont hav to reply to our comments....we will always trouble u in that regard....hehe. I will be ever grateful to you and all those who keep me troubling with their comments...because I too enjoy reading and replying to them...just like I love reading your and other's fics...

Now me w8ing for the next part......mostly bcoz u said....u'll be putting up two together.....ahh....sounds so tempting yaar!! The prospect of double update is always tempting...isn't it...???😆😆😆 Fine, the next part will have double update especially for you...

Btw....I liked the slight emotions described in this part....though there were not many....but I luved the few scenes!!! Thanks darling...the emotions will increase but it will take time...

Now bye....take care....and hav a safe journey....and cum bak soon. Thanks for your wishes Sumi...and yes, m back safe and sound...And thanks a lot for such lovely comments...

Luv,
Sumi.

Love u too
Guglu

Originally posted by: danish1

hi, Hi Afreen...

update bahut hi pyara tha.mThanks darling...!!!

rajveer ka sach mein koi jawab nahin.he prevented any sort of casualty risking his own life.as fr naina is concerned she is noless she goes hand in hand with him.and she is relly a superwomen in making. I dont about superwoman...😆 but Raj will surely groom her to be a true soldier u see...

ye baat galat thi ke naina ne bhale raj ko daanta a,par apna khayal bilkul nahin kiya.

looks lke ke agle update naina ka bura haal hone wala hai....... Har kisi ko isi baat ka intezaar hai...ab to mujhe bhi sochna pad raha hai ki Raj kya karega agle update me...😆😆😆 Thanks for commenting Afreen...

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

simply amazing updt.....luved d wau d thrilling part was drafted and
den d after effect of naina and raj in infirmary.....tooo good....👏👏👏 Thank you so much for liking it Lipi...

also d dialogues wer awesome der.....👏👏👏 Thanks again...

last part wer raj surverys naina was very nice.....😊 Chalo tumhe achha to laga...

kindly keep updting.... Sure dear... Thanks a ton for the comment...

Originally posted by: vvdn

simply Gr8888...nice part.Raj n Naina they r as always make it owsome.waiting for next part.