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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hehe....main to dono posts ko 'like' kar sakti hu....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....isiliye kiya bhi....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰.... Haan dekha maine...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Lekin Lekin Lekin.....mujhe ye VEER wala kissa samajhna hai....jaldi!!!! Tumhe pata hai na Guglu mujhe mysteries solve hote dekhna kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa achha lagta hai?? Waise agar pata nahi hai to abhi jaanlo....mujhe ye VEER wali mystery janni hai....๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ....lekin itna to mujhe bhi pata hai kismat itni meherbaan nahi hai....๐Ÿคข๐Ÿคข....isiliye tum bas ek kaam karo.....jaldi se parts post karo....isse raaz khulne wala UD nazdik aa jayega....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Arey arey shaant balike shaant... Mujhe pata hai tumhe mysteries pasand nahi... Mana bhi Agatha cristie padhte wakt ending pehle padhti hai aur beginning baad me...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰ Par yahan aisa nahi ho sakta na... mai jaldi hi saari mysteries clear kar dungi... tumhe to pata hai na...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

Achha abhi main part ki baat karu?? Rajveer-Naina BEST COUPLE!!! So realistic yaar!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ...And Huda had seriously no other expression for himself other than anger....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†....but wo kehta hai wo Raj se badla lega??๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก Iski toh....๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก....I hope tum jaldi se isse iski limit yaad dila dogi Guglu.....warna meri koi limit nahi hai....when it concerns Raj....๐Ÿ˜ˆ So cute... ๐Ÿ˜†agar tumhare devilishpan๐Ÿ˜‰ ki koi kami nahi hai where Raj is concerned aur tum aise hi cute chehre banati rahi... to mai Huda se kehti hun ki wo Raj ko aur bhi pareshan kare...๐Ÿ˜‰

I liked RN dance....and usme confusion ki baat to maine pehle hi kar di....and I mostly loved the way Rajveer was concentrating on his work....it surely makes us more proud on him....Naina's words were soooo true....and I liked the convo where she was justifying her accompany here....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Naina ke justifications bhi ajib hai...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

And they got the waiter....hmm....lets c how they stop that guy...Pls continue soon dear.๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Sure... mai next update ki taiyari kar rahi hun... as promised... double update...

P.S. Waise ye IF wali musibat jaldi se tal jaye to behtar hai.....par main hope karungi ki Mana aur Priya wali musibat kabhi na tale....๐Ÿ˜ˆ....Mana & Priya.....tum dono apna kaam jaari rakho....hum sab tumhare saath hai....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Haan haan... tum to hogi hi inn dono ke saath...

@Mana: Thank u for posting the part Doc...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰



Thanks for the lovely comments Sumi... I really enjoyed it... especially jab Raj is concerned... there is no limit to your cuteeeeeeeee face...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part Guglu...!!! Thanks Dhara...

RN ko best couple toh banna hi tha...!!!! So very true... there was no second choice...๐Ÿ˜†

You have described the dancing scenes very well...!!!! Thanks again...

And yeh ' Veer ' ka kya chakkar hai...??? I have too many questions and assumptions but I know that you ll not answer them right now so...!! Yaar... this is not fair... everyone has so many assumptions and realisations... but nobody is voicing them... Kya lagta hai sabko... mai sabke opinions jaankar update change kar dungi kya...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

I just loved the way you described Rajveer's alertness....!!! Thanks again...!!!

Oh the waiter is the bartender now....sounds like trouble...!!! Jaldi se post the next part so that we see more action....!!! Sure... there is going to be a lot of action in the next part...

Mana darling, thanks a lot for posting this part...!!!! Yes... a big thanks to Mana...



Thanks a lot Dhara...๐Ÿ˜Š

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

ver nice p guglu love the part and r n ka dance bhi bohot he romantic tha

plz agle bar mujhe bhi pm kar dena
cont soon



Thanks a lot Ria... Sure... I will inform you... add me to your buddy list so that it will be easier for me to pm you...

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago
Guglu jee....
update kab karne ka irada hain aap ko
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

Hi Guglu Hi Preet...

m so sorry is baar late hun na, Its okay yaar... not a big deal...

par tum bhi janti ho na mein kahan busy rehti hun isliye par ab aage se try karungi ki kabhi aise late na hun, m so so sorry this time. Mujhe pata hai tum busy thi... no problem...

Ab mein part pe aati hun nahin to meri bak bak me hi sara part khatam ho jayega ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† very funny...

The update was awesome, just loved it Thanks a lot...

Raj Naina ko best couple ka award to milna hi tha na, as we all know they r just the best They sure are... dusra koi option hi nahi tha...๐Ÿ˜‰

Par yeh Huda kabhi nahin sudhrega, I just hate him. Me too...๐Ÿ˜ก

Par ab yeh Veer kaun hai, Kahiin Raj ka Naina se koi bachpan ka rishta to nahin na, Maloom hai thodha bakwas guess hai, Par ab mein itna hi kar sakti hun na Guess karo tabhi to mazaa aayega na... don't worry mai jaldi hi bata dungi ki Veer kaun hai...

But I just loved the whole part Thanks again...

Luv Preet Luv u too... Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago


Thanks a lot Khushi...!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Guglu dear.... Hi Yogitha...

sooooooo sorry ,maine is baar bahut bahut late ki apni comment karne main..... Koi baat nahi... ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi...

Awesome... ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ Fabulous part ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ loved the whole update Thanks a lot...

Alekh is Mr.fresher n naina is Ms.fresher....alekh got the title n ye stupid huda ko ye baat se jalan horahi hain....ab is huda ko har baat pe jalne ke alawa aur koi kaam hain kya.....isko raj se problem alekh se problem ..sab se problem hain...main kehthi hun wo khudh hi ek problem hain Very well said darling...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Huda khud sabse badi problem hai...

The best couple of the evening is our dear raj n naina...........ab is main koi shak hain kya....our cute couple truly deserves the title.....i am so happy ........dekha phirse ye idiot huda jal raha hain..the moment he entered in to the party sirf uska ek hi kaam hain jalna aur kuch nahin..aur wo kya kehraha tha..captain ko main chodunga nahin..lagtha hain bhoolgaya jo kuch dher pehle kya hua jab usne raj ko challenge kiya Huda ko bhulne ki bimari hai... kahin ye baat tu bhul gayi hai...??? Ab bechare ke paas jalne ke alawa aur koi option bhi to nahi choda na ...

Guglu u have written the dancing sequence so beautifully...raj n naina donon saath main aise dance karthe hue kitne pyare lagthe hain na...ab ye veer mystery kya hain...waise kuch kuch samajh main aara hain...but wo kaha tak tikh hain wo main bhi nahin jaanthi ......isiliye main kuch nahin kehrahi uske bare main...tum plzzzz jaldi wo mystery ko reveal kardo Thanks for liking the dance sequence Yogi...๐Ÿ˜Š Aur Veer ki koi mystery nahi hai yaar... ek do updates me sabko pata chal jayega... not a big deal...

I really loved it when raj mentioned about huda n ritus dance Hee heee heee๐Ÿ˜‰ couldn't resist pulling HR's leg...

mujhe wo scenebahut pasand aaya jaha raj amidst of the celebrations he is still alert n how focused he is on his mission...aur mujhe naina ki enthusisiam bahut accha laga...i liked her convo with raj where she is justifying her stay with raj Thanks a lot again...

totally enjoyed the whole update guglu Thanks again...๐Ÿ˜Š



Thanks a lot for such detailed comments Yogitha...

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

superb update.loved it.Thanks Rakhi...

First alekh is Mr Fresher , ms fresher is naina,lovely. but mujhe jada pasand aaya best coupl raj,naina , wow.love it ๐Ÿ‘and love u for this, Thanks again...
and the reaction of huda, wow , but mujhe uss dr.mishra ka reaction dekhna bhi hain,jalke laal hojati... Koi shak...๐Ÿ˜‰ Usse jalne ke alawa aata hi kya hai...?
the dance scene , kia kahu it' s too too good,loved it.and iye veer wali partmein kuch guess kia aur kuchnehi , but mein bolungi nehi tujhe ke meine kia guess kia, dekhti hoon mere guess milte hain iya nehi.... Har koi sadhu bankar muh band karke baitha hai... sab kuch guess kar rahen hain...koi kuch batata hi nahi...huh...!!!
loved the conversation between raj and naina , Thanks...
hope they caught that bartender..... Even I am hoping the same...
continue soon dear. Sure darling and thanks for the comments...

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Guglu Hi Suhana...

How r u?? M fine...what abt u???
I read this fiction in 1 go...really loved the concept. Thanks a lot darling...
U have done a gud job.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ Thanks again...
Last update was really gud... Thanks a lot...
Naina n Alekh were declared n Miss n Mr fresher respectively..But the best part was RN getting the award for best couple..
They indeed r made for each other..๐Ÿ˜› They sure are...
Their dance was too romantic...But they were remebering certain things from the past during their dance.. Lets see what they were remembering...
Continue soon Sure...
Bye Byyeeee
pls pm me when u update next Sure...I will suhana...

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinkorblack

RN rock together.....yay.....happy for aalekh too.....



Thanks a lot Sneh...๐Ÿ˜Š...!!!

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