TERA MERA SAATH{RN FIC}PRT11/PG44 - Page 16

Fabulous update......superb n fantastic part yaar

Finally hamara fav couple ka entry hogayi aur wo bhi aisa waisa nahi dhamekedar entry hui,ye huda stupid kuch bhi bolta rehtha hain,raj aur naina ka entry dekhthe hi uski bolti band hogayi hogi,n they scored 10 points ,the cadets all r praising them n naina is blushing,even BS also praised them n i loved the way how raj hold nainas hand n led her to the dance floor ,wo donon ek dusre se nazar nahi hata parahe hain

usool bhai to pooja ki baaten sun kar hi khush hora hain n dance floor par jaane ka naam hi nahi le raha hain,its good raj ne undonon ko baton baton main dance floor tak lekar aaya,n ali ko pata nahi chala n atlast ali led pooja to the dance floor

Totally I enjoyed very much reading this awesome part

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love you for this....main last se shuru karu ya first se?? Gosh....all is tooooooooooooo well...hehe. Raj n Naina's grand entry....scoring 10 on 10.....reminded me of LRL....though that was Ritu....even then....abhi to Naina hai na....hehe. And BS k saath convo bhi mujhe bahut achha laga....like the one that said....dhamako k saath entry karne ki adat nahi gayi.....Raj to hai hi ek anokha dhamaka!!! Rightly said Sumi! I agree Raj toh hai hi ek dhamaka. Well. I'm glad you liked this part so much. Tum to puri beh gayi ho iss flow me.😆

And the way Ritu n Huda were behing Raj n Naina....it was too much....but they successfully got out...n I enjoyed Aalekh n Neelu's comments....hehe. And then, Ali-Pooja....the way u described their following Rajveer out of habit....it was sooooooooo awesum.......bikul wo Rajveer Sir wala feeling aa gaya....of which I feel really proud!!! And then they danced very sweetly.....gr8!! But wo identity wali baat......hmm.....I hope it all goes okay. Well, aaj tum itni khush ho iss update se toh mai bhi kkhush hun.And dont worry, identity waali baat jaldi hi khul jayegi.

And this Huda....always baaton ka ulta matlab samjahta hai......firstly usse pata nahi apna Raj kitna DARING hai....and secondly....pasand nahi ka matlab ata nahi kab se ho gaya?? Anyways, end me Raj ne bilkul sahi kaha....credit to Cadet Huda ko hi jata hai....but all these reminded me of LRL ball.....it was simply awesum Guglu. Thanks Sumi!!! Aur Huda hai hi ek idiot. Wo mujhe kabhi bhi pasand nahi aaya. Bewakuf kahin ka.

Pls continue soon. sure dear.

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

wonderful part.purane din iyaad aagye.loved the conversation between bs and rajveer.loved the conversation between raj,naina,alekh and neelu.

iye huda change nehi hoga.

continue soon dear.

thanks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: manatated

WooooooooooooooooooooooWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!

Fabuloussssssssssssss!!!

Wonderful Update dear!

Thanks a lotMana!!! Thank you so much iss response ke liye.

This reminded me of LRL ball with with much nicer additions ofcourse!!!

RN ki grand entry and scoring full 10 and Raj's dial ki dhamake mera peecha nahi chodte was nice!! 😃 Thanks again...😊

Then formal dance ke waqt Raj ka Naina ko stare karna...haaiiii😳

Aalekh Neelu and RN convo was nice...

and So was Naina ka Raj ko Ritu se door lejana 👏 👏 Woh is fic mein kaafi matured hai!! 👏 Ab maine jaan bhujkar Naina ka character thoda change kiya hai. I'm glad it is going down well with the readeers.

Pooja and Ali following Raj to the dance floor was funny as well as sweet! 😊 Aadat jo hai Raj ko follow karne ki...😊

The song was awesome!!!

Raj didnt want to look away from Naina!! 😳

Aur firse Huda ne Raj ko challenge kiya! Kuch logon ka dimag hi ulta hai, toh abmai kya kar sakti hun.😆

The way you described dance was awesome! Thanks darling...

Update soon! Surre.

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Very nice Guglu...!!!!👏👏
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The last part reminded me of the LRL Ball...!!!!⭐️⭐️
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This Huda is sucha jerk....!!!!😡😡
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Originally posted by: preet09

Originally posted by: preet09

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hi

Rocking update👏 Thanks Nisha

Naina and Raj make their grand entrance and as expected score a perfect 10. Ab evening ka best couple perfect score nahi kare ga to kon karega.😉 Sahi kaha. 😉

Raj enjoys formal dancing and loves it even more when his partner is Naina. He is proud of how well she has learned dancing from him. All he wants to do is hold her in his arms and get lost in her big eyes.😍 Arey akele sapne dekhogi kya? Ruk jao mai bhi join karne aa rahi hun.😍

Alekh and Neelu have unique style....they compliment each other perfectly. Neelu knows when and how she can convince alekh to do what she wants. Alekh also surprises her with his awesome dancing skills.😉 Hehehe, ye dono bhi ek dusre ke liye bane hain na, isliye.😉

Ritu and Huda are both irritating Raj and Naina. Raj is too polite for Ritu and so Naina comes to his rescue. ..which he appreciates completely.😆 Raj is a perfect gentleman so he cannot say anything. Isliye Naina ko madad karni padi uski.

Ali is as shy as ever and so RN decide to help him and pooja. Raj's trick to bring pooja and ali to the dance floor was brilliant. You are right...his cadets would follow Rajveer anywhere.

Ali finally asks Pooja for a dance and then curses him self for not doing it earlier.😃 Raj knew that Ali's shyness would vanish when he would come to the dance floor.

Huda's plan to embarass Raj in front of everyone blows up in his face. Seeing Raj dancing on a bollywood song...he has won even more fans and appreciation. Hehehe. Tumhe bhi Raj ko join karna hai kya Nisha???😉

Waiting to know what happens next. please continue soon. Hopefully will be updating by this weekend.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Rocking update....! wonderful 😃