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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Vow,maza hi aa gaya update padh k. Thanks Mahak

Treat hi mil gayi readers ko is update me, pehle to Raj aur Naina ko full marks mil gaye looks me aur us k baad do do perfect dances, awesome dear.Thanks again...

Mujhe to Raj k LRL waale steps yaad aa gaye Gori Gori k, they were just brilliant. Jab Raj ne start kiya tha tab thoda doubt tha but baad me to us ne kamaal hi kar diya tha. Haan, ye toh hai. LRL ka gori gori koi nahi bhul sakta.

Alekh acche se jaanta tha kab kya possibilty hai isliye har jagah un ki bhavishyavaani sach sabit hue na. Huda ko Naina ne accha sabak sikhaya aur us k saath hi Ritu se Raj ko bacha liya. Yeah. Mujhe hamesha laga ki Huda ko thoda sabak shikhana chahiye.

Ab dekho Pooja aur ALi ko bhi acccha engage kar liya saath me Raj aur Naina ne. Raj ne bhi bahut cunningly dono ko stage pe le aaya, superb dance scene again dear. Thanks again.
Ritu aur Huda ka phir se jalan k maare bura haal tha. Pata nahi in dono ki problem kab khatam hogi. Huda ko ab samajh aaya hoga ki Raj ko challenge kar k us ne kitne badi galti ki hai us ne. Samajh me jiske aa jaye wo Huda aur Ritu nahi.😉

update soon.

Hopefully will be doing it by this weekend. And thanks a lot for commenting dear!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

thoda sa BZ hun...isiliye short comments karungi...plz naraz mat hona...No problem Priya

MINDBLOWING... Thanks
yaar...purani yadain taaza ho gayi...
raj ko 10/10 mile hain...milne hi chahiye ....bata aur koi option hai raj k liye... hain na, infinite out of 10 par score meter me wo option hi nahi tha.😉
BS ki baat sahi hai...raj jahan dhamaka vahan toh honi hi chahiye... Jaisa ki Sumi ne kaha Raj to khud ek dhamaka hai.😉
dance scene par raj ka naina ko aise dekhan...jast WOOOOOOOWWWWWW....love u for dis...whole scene...RN sath me romantic bhi lagte the...aur dono ka ek dushre k close hona...un se jyada toh mujhe achha lagta tha...he he he... Aur mujhe bhi.😆
Ritu ka jealous hona samajh me aata hai...bichari kyoun nahi maan leti ki kuch chizain sahi hathon me achhe lagte hain...!!! jaise raj sirf naina k sath...How very true... mai kehne wali thi par tumne keh diya.😆
khair Huda toh Rachi k pagalkhane se bhaga hua praani hai...isilie raj se challenge laga liya... Bilkul hai,
raj ne bhi badhiya jawab diya...sara credit huda ko de kar... Ab raj kabhi kisi se uske kaam ka credit chinta hai kya
arre yaar...bhul gayi...ali-pooja aur alekh-neelu k scenes bhi mast the...!!! bich bich me alekh ki commentry.... maza aa gaya really... Thanks again
ok ab jaldi se cont karo... Sure hopefully will be doing it by this weekend. Thanks for commenting Priya.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09

hiii guglu Hi preet...
dekho mene comment kiya hua tha aur mein khud hi bhool gayi
isliye socha kuch aur addition kar di jaye hope u dnt mind that Arey bilkul nahi, kyun mind karungi. Mujhe toh acha laga.

raj and naina's entry was superb and no point in telling that they must have scored the highest points and naina was too right that agar huda aur naina ki jodi aayi hoti to best to nahin par worst couple ka award zaroor milta Haan, RN ko takkar de sake, aisa koi ho hi nahi sakta.😉 Aur Huda... ufff wo apne aap ko kuch jyada hi oversmart samajhta hai.

loved their plan which make ali and pooja to come on stage nahin to wo dono to pakka vahiin khadhe reh jate aur ball khatam bhi ho jata Arey nahi, Raj Naina ke hote aisa kaise ho jata.😉

Huda pe to bahut gussa aata hai, he is just the limit...but loved the way raj, naina, neelu and aalekh dance. Huda is surely irritating. And thanks for loving RN and AN dance.

now continue soon Sure... will be doing it soon.
luv preet

Luv u too
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: esha143

rock-n-roll update yaar 👏 Thanks Siri...

u described both of the dance sequences wonderfully. Thanks again...

RN ki entry ho aur dhamake na ho aisa toh ho hi nahi saktha na😉aur Ritu aur Huda ka jealous hona bhi sahi hai,aur karte bhi kya bechare😆 😆 So very right... sumi to kehti rehti hai ki Raj khud hi ek dhamaka hai. Aur RN ek saath... double dhamaka. Aur Huda aur Ritu...😆Jal jal ke marenge wo dono par RN ka kuch nahi bigad payenge.

RN scenes were simply beautiful and romantic.they show the bond of pure love between them😳Thanks a lot... They are soul mates after all...

Raj ne Ali-Pooja ko sahi tarah se handle kiya hai.varna apne usool bhai dance ke liye maan jaaye aise to hone se raha nahi😆😆😆Bilkul sahi...Pooja aur Ali toh bechare gaye hote warna aur LRL ki tarah sabse last me dance karte.

Aalekh aur Neelu ke dialouges bohut mast the.bilkul unhi ki tarah😛I'm glad you liked it.😊

yaar yeh Ritu saade captain se kitna chipathi hai,nahi?chipkali kahi ki😡Oh my god. Kya dialogue tha siri...😆.aur ye kya kam hai ki ab Huda bhi aagaya ise company dene aur Naina se chipane😡,kabhi bhi nahi sudhrega ye ladka...... Bilkul, par jo sudhar jaye wo Huda nahi hai.

Huda ka Raj ko challenge karna aur Raj-Naina,Aalekh-Neelu ki dance toh mere hisaab se actual LRL Ball se bhi badiyaa tha.sach me mazaa aagaya dear😃😃thanx a lot for the rocking ud. My pleasure Siri... ye dance tumhe LRL ke dance se jyada acha laga, ye sabse bada compliment hai mere liye.

plz continue soon.................... Sure... jaldi hi update karungi. And thanks for commenting Siri.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Fabulous update......superb n fantastic part yaar Thanks Yogitha.

Finally hamara fav couple ka entry hogayi aur wo bhi aisa waisa nahi dhamekedar entry hui,ye huda stupid kuch bhi bolta rehtha hain,raj aur naina ka entry dekhthe hi uski bolti band hogayi hogi,n they scored 10 points ,the cadets all r praising them n naina is blushing,even BS also praised them n i loved the way how raj hold nainas hand n led her to the dance floor ,wo donon ek dusre se nazar nahi hata parahe hain Ab RN kab ek dusre se nazar hata paate hain kya??? 😉And thanks for liking this entire sequence.😊

Huda aur ritu kitne besharam hain raj aur naina ka picha hi nahi chodh rahe hain,ye dono kitne chipku hain,koi baat nahin naina ne huda ke saath accha kiya n utna hi nahin raj ko bhi us chudail ritu se bacha liya alekh ne ritu ke liye bilkul sahi naam chuna saali nautanki Hehehe. Chalo Aalekh ka diya hua naam tumhe pasand aaya. Warna Esha ne to Ritu ko chipkali naam de rakha hai.😆😆😆

usool bhai to pooja ki baaten sun kar hi khush hora hain n dance floor par jaane ka naam hi nahi le raha hain,its good raj ne undonon ko baton baton main dance floor tak lekar aaya,n ali ko pata nahi chala n atlast ali led pooja to the dance floor yes... mai nahi chahti thi ki yahan bhi LRL ki tarah ye dono last me dance kare. Isliye maine saari plannning Raj ke khurafati dimag pe chod diya tha.😆😆😆

the song is so nice,n i really loved the way how raj ,naina ,ali n pooja danced Thanks again...
Jara dekho to is huda ki himmat raj ko challenge kar raha tha accha hain raj ne bahut acchi tarah jawab diya , raj ,naina alekh neelu danced very well for the gore gore song n not to forget ritu ki jalan when she saw raj pulled naina on to the dance floor..oh I love to watch that Huda ke challenge ki wajah se hi toh RN ka itna saara dnace mila hai hum sabko. Usko toh thanks kehna chahiye yaar.😉 Ritu jale to ab mai kya karun.😆

Totally I enjoyed very much reading this awesome part Thanks a lot Yogitha.

thank u so much guglu for giving us such a long n lovely part My pleasure Yogitha.
Plz continue soon Sure... will be doing soon. And thanks for such detailed comments Yogitha.

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Posted: 15 years ago


Beautiful banner Preet... Arey baap re... tum ne toh ekdam alag tarike se update maanga hai. Kar dungi, jaldi hi kar dungi... Kitne utwale ho rahe sab ke sab update ko lekar...😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

lovely creation preet.
I agre with u preet.
pls ud kar do guglu. miss Rn too much,



Rakhi... tu bhi shuru ho gayi???😆 Karti hun yaaron, thoda dhiraj rakho.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Really Nice creation preet..loved it

plz guglu give us the update..waiting from long time



Oh God!!! Yogitha tu bhi...😆. Aur koi hai iss group me join karne wala???
Kar dungi... jaldi hi kar dungi. Thoda dhiraj rakh.

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Posted: 15 years ago
HIIII GUGLU HOW R U ?
I HAVE JUST READ UR FF
AND I MUST SAY ITS AWESOOOOOOOOME
SUPERBBBBBBBB
MINDBLOWING
OUT OF THIS WORLD
MUJE SAARE PARTS PASAND AAYE
U EXPLAINED EACH AND EVERY SCENE BEAUTIFULLY
BUT MAIN DER SAARE RN SCENES DEKNA CHAHATI HOON
AACHA HUA MAINE YE FF PAD LIYE WARNA EK ITNA AACHA FF
MUJSE MISS HO JAATA I REALLY LOVED IT
AND I M EAGARLY EAGARLY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART
PLZ PLZ DO SOOOOOON.

LOVE
DEEPA


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

very sweet up plz cont soon



Thanks Ria... M continuing.

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