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Posted: 15 years ago
#91
woww..just finished reading all parts...donno how did i miss this ff...!!!!
anyways..gr88 story... story is progressing so well...
Huda is such a jerk... n now he is with Dr. Mishra.. 😡
but jab RN saath mein hai to koi unka kya bigaad sakta hai..!!! 😉 😛
liked the concept of RN going to freshers ball together...!!!😳
both understand each other so well.. gr88 chemistry..!!!
Raj ke gusse ko sirf naina hi thandaa kar sakti hai n Naina ke gusse ko Raj as she listens n trusts only rajveer..!!!
waiting for the freshers ball party..!!! 😊 😳
pls do PM me for the next update..!!!
awesome updates..!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#92
awesome!!!
RN dancing was sooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuteeee😳
the way you described it was awesome!
Naina was shy and tried maintaining distance while Raj pulled her closer 😳
Huda and Ritu going together! ( Well...two jerks together!😆)
Naina was expecting Raj to feel sad about Ritu going with Huda, but he had a hearty laugh!😃
Raj was shocked to find Naina believed Ritu and him are seeing each other!
Next days scene were superb!
Raj just know Naina very well! Usske kehne se pehle hi samajh gaya ki woh kya kehna chahti hai! I like him this way....😊
Is Huda aur Ritu ki toh main😡😡😡 Kahin yeh dono mere RN ke liye museebat na ban jaaye😡😡
Coffee scene was supppppeeeerrbbbb!
It was very cute!
Naina having final word in the arguement...as if she was his wife!
Update soon!
Plz update ur other fic too!(TDQ)
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Posted: 15 years ago
#93
Hiiiiiiiiii
i came here too to comment on this wonderful,awesome fic 😊
this fic is really superb 👏
Great work 👍🏼
The starting lines of the fic is so good
i simply loved the way u described raj n nainas feelings
i finished reading all the parts n they are so nice
raj n naina r going to the freshers ball.........haiiii 😍
a big kaaaaaaaaaaaash aise lrl me bhi hum ko dekhne ko milta
The way raj came forward to ask naina for dance n naina ka sharmana.........haii 😳 ,n her thoughts about raj ,uski confusion ,u described it so well
When raj asked to call him by hs name,naina wanted to protest it but she unknowingly agreed..........are kaise nahi agree karthi apne rajveer sir ki baat ko
when raj asked about hudas partner she was hesistant to tell about ritu and when she said she was expecting some sort of explosion..............silly girl 😊
Accha hua raj made it clear that he was least bothered with whom dr.mishra is going
ye ritu ko aur kaam hi kya hai.........sab ko false impressions hi dethi hai 😡
huda aur ritu dono ek saath ja rahe hain for the ball .......... good for them i will say perfect ,...........cunning people ,dono ek number ki stupids hai.............haaaaaaa,😡 i hate them so much
raj kitna perfectly undestands naina ,even before she asked he came to know whats bothering her,😊
ab ye dono jerks kya karnewala hain raj aur naina ke saath
waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Gr8 part. Luved Raj n Naina's dancing session. Naina had the sensational feeling when Raj pulled her for the dance. N Raj also cleared that he didnt want to go wid Ritu Mishra.....his laughters were awesum....(as if I cud hear them...hehe.) And Raj told her to call him by his name n in just one night she has progressed a lot.....came to "Rajveer"....not bad!!!

After jog Raj definitely knew wat Naina had in her mind....he always knew that. So cute yaar!!!

But Ye Huda.....Raj se badla lena chahta hai....dam...n here Ritu wants to kill Naina.....such stupid jerks!!!

Even Raj n Naina's coffee session was wonderful. The part was overall very nice.

Pls continue soon.



Thanks Sumi, I'm glad you liked it. It feels really nice to see so much of appreciation. It boosts me up to write better.
Raj doesn't like Dr. Mishra at all, so no question of going to the ball with her. Also, he is more comfortable with Naina than any other girl. And thirdly, we RN fans always want to see them together, so there is no other option left for him other than Naina.😉

Huda and Ritu have always been a pair of jerks. Isliye toh maine dono ko ek saath bheja hai, do idiots ek saath, kya jodi hai aur kya nazaraa hota agar LRL me aisa hota.😉

Thanks again for liking this part.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Guglu!

wc back! gr8 ud! rn scenes were 2 gud 2 b described... i wish serial me bhi aise sweet moments hote
i m sorry k i never commented bfore but hua ye k i read ur fic, had no tyme 2 comment nd den forgot d title...so i found it out aftr a long tyme
gud work
cont asap
love
sur



Hi Sur,

Thanks. It feels great to be back. Thanks for liking the scenes yaar. Well, RN dance sequence ka inspiration toh LRL se hi mila hai, but then the description is my imagination. I'm glad you liked it. I also wished something of this sort had happened in the serial.
Tumne pehle comment nahi kiya, no problem. Ab toh kar diya na.😆. Aisa mere saath bhi hota hai, ek fic padhti hun and then naam bhul jaati hun. Fir dhundte raho. I wish the good old search boxes were there. It was a lot easier then.
I'll continue, dont worry.

Love
Guglu


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Posted: 15 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

woww..just finished reading all parts...donno how did i miss this ff...!!!!
anyways..gr88 story... story is progressing so well...
Huda is such a jerk... n now he is with Dr. Mishra.. 😡
but jab RN saath mein hai to koi unka kya bigaad sakta hai..!!! 😉 😛
liked the concept of RN going to freshers ball together...!!!😳
both understand each other so well.. gr88 chemistry..!!!
Raj ke gusse ko sirf naina hi thandaa kar sakti hai n Naina ke gusse ko Raj as she listens n trusts only rajveer..!!!
waiting for the freshers ball party..!!! 😊 😳
pls do PM me for the next update..!!!
awesome updates..!!! 👏 👏 👏



Hi Shona,

How are you? I'm glad you liked the story. No problem yaar, pehle miss kar diya toh koi baat nahi, ab toh padh liya na.😊
Mujhe humesha se lagta tha ki RN ko ball me ek saath jaana chahiye. Isliye bhej diya. Thoda dimaag lagana pada, but finally they are going together.
And don't worry, I;ll send you a pm when i update this next time.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: manatated

awesome!!! Thanks dear.

RN dancing was sooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuteeee😳 I'm glad you liked it.
the way you described it was awesome! Thanks.
Naina was shy and tried maintaining distance while Raj pulled her closer 😳
Huda and Ritu going together! ( Well...two jerks together!😆) Isse acho koi dusra option tha hi nahi.
Naina was expecting Raj to feel sad about Ritu going with Huda, but he had a hearty laugh!😃 Well, Naina and her ideas!!! Koi bhi hasega.
Raj was shocked to find Naina believed Ritu and him are seeing each other!
Next days scene were superb! Thanks.
Raj just know Naina very well! Usske kehne se pehle hi samajh gaya ki woh kya kehna chahti hai! I like him this way....😊 Me too!!!😊
Is Huda aur Ritu ki toh main😡😡😡 Kahin yeh dono mere RN ke liye museebat na ban jaaye😡😡 Nahi banenge, mai hoon na!!!😆 😆 😆
Coffee scene was supppppeeeerrbbbb!
It was very cute! Thanks.😊
Naina having final word in the arguement...as if she was his wife! Aaj nahi toh kal ban jayegi. Isliye abhi se practice kar rahi hai.😆 😆 😆
Update soon!
Plz update ur other fic too!(TDQ) Haan, ek do din me kar dungi. Type kar chuki hun, bas thodi si checking baaki hai.



Thanks for such lovely comments.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiiiiiiiiii Hello!!!!!

i came here too to comment on this wonderful,awesome fic 😊
this fic is really superb 👏Thanks!!!
Great work 👍🏼 Thanks again!!!
The starting lines of the fic is so good
i simply loved the way u described raj n nainas feelings Thanks again!!!
i finished reading all the parts n they are so nice
raj n naina r going to the freshers ball.........haiiii 😍 Mera bhi yahi haal hai.
a big kaaaaaaaaaaaash aise lrl me bhi hum ko dekhne ko milta Haan yaar. Kaaaaaaaaaash!!!
The way raj came forward to ask naina for dance n naina ka sharmana.........haii 😳 ,n her thoughts about raj ,uski confusion ,u described it so well
When raj asked to call him by hs name,naina wanted to protest it but she unknowingly agreed..........are kaise nahi agree karthi apne rajveer sir ki baat ko Bilkul, shahrukh ka kaha kaise taal sakti hai.
when raj asked about hudas partner she was hesistant to tell about ritu and when she said she was expecting some sort of explosion..............silly girl 😊 Thodi bahut silly toh hai.😊
Accha hua raj made it clear that he was least bothered with whom dr.mishra is going
ye ritu ko aur kaam hi kya hai.........sab ko false impressions hi dethi hai 😡 Very true.
huda aur ritu dono ek saath ja rahe hain for the ball .......... good for them i will say perfect ,...........cunning people ,dono ek number ki stupids hai.............haaaaaaa,😡 i hate them so much Me too!!!😡
raj kitna perfectly undestands naina ,even before she asked he came to know whats bothering her,😊
ab ye dono jerks kya karnewala hain raj aur naina ke saath Kuch bhi nahi kar payenge, don't worry!!! Main hoon na.!!!
waiting for the next part eagerly



Thanks for such detailed and lovely comments Sanskruthi!!!

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
#99

hey guglu...sorry yaar late rply k liye. par main thoda busy thi.

beautiful ud dear...👏 👏👏 👏

raj n naina ka dance scene...!!! tum ne purani yadain taaza kar di...par thoda sa change kiya tha...tum ne un dono ka convo. vaise bhi yeh fic dj's ka thode hi hai...yeh toh tumhara fic hai na.par un dono k bich hui sari batain baht hi achhi thi...aisa klaga jaise voh dono ek dushre ko aur bhi gahrai se jaan na chahte hain.😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
toh raj ne jab naina ko kareeb se dance sikha raha tha...naina k jahan me utha rahe har ek feeling...har ek sawal aur sath hi me un sawalon k confusion se bhare hue jawab jo naina k dil me aa rahe the...un sab ko tum ne baht hi achhe se describe kiya hai...just beautiful n awesome...👏 👏 👏
us k baad raj ka hairan hona ali aur pooja ko le kar. yaar sach kahun toh main bhi hairan hun...main toh yeh sch rahi hun ki pucha kis ne hoga...ali ne ya phir pooja ne...??? obviously pooja ne hi pucha hoga...ali agar puchne ki koshish karta toh use bas apna gala thik karne me FB khatam ho jata.😆 😆 😆
naina yeh soch rahi thi ki raj reetu ko date kar raha hai...??? tabhi voh FB k liye interested nahin thi. par jab raj ne us se kaha toh voh thodi si hairan bhi hui aur maan bhi gayi. us ka dil kahin na kahin yehi chahta bhi toh tha na.😉 😉 😉
aur raj n reetu ko le kar us k dil me jo kuch bhi ull-jalul khayal the...voh sab bhi dur ho gaya finally. par raj kya main bhi hairan hun huda aur reetu ko le kar. sahi kahte hain raam milaye jodi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
reetu naina ko maarna chati hai...??? is ka dimag kharab ho gaya hai. voh bhul rahi hai ki voh vamp hai is fic ki toh voh kabhi nahin maar payegi naina ko, balki rajveer use jhadu se peet peet kar us ka haal behal kar dega.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
aur huda raj se badla lena chahta hai...is ki sach me khishak gayi hai...!!! bichare ko muh k bal girna padega...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛
ab intezar hai FB night ka. chal ab jaldi se cont kar.😃
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey very nice update !ni just remember the old days...keep updating.

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