may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

amazing part yaar

update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

very very touching...one could feel the pain they were going through...

They love each other but still can't succumb to it...

fab update...!

please lighten up the mood now na....Dia can make them come together..!!

do continue soon...

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#153

very emotional......awesome as usual. loved it. continue soon.

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Bronze.

@Bronze.

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#154

i love the way you bring out their pain..
they are going through so many emotions at the same time.
it was truely great yaar..

Plz update soon

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Yoshita0411

@Yoshita0411

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

heyaa...gr8 update once again...
yaar..tumhe dusron ko rulane mein maza aatah hai kya...???
thode...happy happy cheezein bhi daal do na..plz.....
overall....this update waz really vry god..!
thnks fr the PM..

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

vryyyy vryyyyy emotional n touchin update...........

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: yoshita.mayufan
heyaa...gr8 update once again...
yaar..tumhe dusron ko rulane mein maza aatah hai kya...???
thode...happy happy cheezein bhi daal do na..plz.....
overall....this update waz really vry god..!
thnks fr the PM..

today im so sad so im crying

so this one is sad

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#158

another great updt
u potray their emotions beautifully
they feel their pain that was caused by each other n themselves
n then they feel their love for each other, which is way more than the pain they suffer
i just wish they wud talk to each other n set things straight
n tell each other that they still love them
anyways continue soon